~RaBir: Beginning of an Unknown Feeling SS~UpdatedPG6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: MahimaSingh

Awesome 👏

Here Kabir is far more different from the show. He is feeling shy is something i'll love to see on screen. Lovely scenes. Keep writing.

PM me for the next update 😉

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Thanks alot for the PM 🤗

Awesome update as usual...my gosh Kabir is such a cutie...getting emberassed infront of Dadi 😆
Well now it's getting interesting...wish for office romance 😉

Hi All, I am thankful for all the nice comments you all have posted, I am glad you all liking the scenes. As I keep writing more, I will make the scenes more intense, I know the first few were slow as I needed to focus on their reactions more before their love begins and all... hehe... anyway here is the update enjoy...😊

Recap: RaBir come face to face...

Scene 6:

Kabir and Rachna shocked to meet each other again after the Diwali fanatic meeting. Rachna says, "You are KT and Kabir" while Kabir says with a slight smile, "Yes, I am Kabir known as KT." Hearing this Rachna is kind of in shock that the person she really wants to learn about fashion is the person she really cannot stand. But she thinks to herself that "he is such a great man who has made many designs, it would be an honor to learn under him," so cause of her passion to become a fashion designer, she decides to put her differences aside and work with him to learn more. Kabir calls out to Rachna as she is lost in her thoughts and then she suddenly snaps out. He tells her that you have to get a mannequin ready for tomorrow's presentation you have all day today to do it and he tells her that Nitya will tell you where the room is and what you have to prepare. He gives Nitya the signal to take Rachna to the room next door where the mannequin is, so that she can start her work. Nitya tells Rachna let's go, Rachna follows her to the room next to Kabir's office and Nitya tells her here is the mannequin and the materials you need to make the design if you need anything just ask me ok. Rachna nods her in agreement and Nitya leaves Rachna to work on the mannequin. Now she has been working on the mannequin for hours as she is working Kabir walks by her room and sees from the door how she is working while she is struggling with one of her hair strands that is getting in the way of her work as she keeps moving it back to her ear it keeps coming in front of her face. So Kabir notices her struggle and is mesmerized by it, seeing how she is slightly trying to move her one piece of strand from her face, he smiles at her while Rachna has no idea Kabir is watching her. Nitya notices Kabir looking at Rachna and thinks to herself "how cute seeing Kabir smile like that, I don't want to ruin that smile, but have to ask him about the project," so Nitya calls out to Kabir which makes him snap out of being mesmerized. After he snaps out, he leaves with Nitya to work and as they leave Rachna finally finishes up, so she decides to take some rest before she does her final touches to the mannequin. She sits in the chair and puts her head down on the table unknowingly Rachna falls as sleep like that while she is sleeping like that Kabir walks by and sees her.

End of Scene 6 now Scene 7:

Kabir walks into the room and goes to where Rachna is sleeping, he looks at the mannequin says, "The silly girl has quite a talent in such a short time she made a credible design." After he thinks that to himself, he looks at Rachna's sleeping face and notices her strand of hair that is on her face again that bothered her throughout her designing. He could not resist, but move it with, so he slowly with his index finger moves the hair strand back to her ear and gets mesmerized by seeing her sleeping face. As he looks at her out of the blue suddenly, he slightly kisses her on the cheek giving her a warm, sweet, and sincere kiss while he does that, he quickly backs up, stands up straight, and his heart skips a beat making him realize he should not have done that, yet something in his heart made him. He thinks to himself, "what is this unknown feeling that is occurring in my heart and that to cause of this girl even when I met her on Diwali our hands slightly touching made me feel this unknown feeling." Suddenly, Kabir's phone rings he snaps out of that thought and leaves the room to answer it, so it doesn't bother Rachna as she is soundly asleep. However, Kabir's phone ringing did make her slightly twitch, so she slowly starts waking up while waking up, she touches her cheek where Kabir had kissed her earlier, she says to herself "why is my cheek soo warm, I'm not sick or anything" than she is like "wait a sec if im sick or something then my forehead would be hot not my cheek, yet my cheek feels hot hmm." While thinking of her cheek she looks at her wrist watch to see what time it is and she is like "itni der ho cuki hai" and she snaps out of her thought of her cheek and she starts to make her final touches to the mannequin. She finishes her final touches and grabs her bag while leaving her cell phone behind without realizing she left it behind as she rushes out of the room to go home. In this hurriedly, Rachna bumps into Kabir and is about to fall when one of Kabir's hands goes around her waist grabbing her from falling while one of her hands grabs on to his coat. Right around this time, these two have an eye lock scene in which Kabir is totally lost in Rachna's eyes and his file papers are falling on them without them being aware of it as both are lost in each other. (During this eye lock scene, wind is blowing and a musical instrument plays in the BG of the song Baarish from the new upcoming movie Yaariyan. Here is the link to that musical instrument sound:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5v2BcqgLjB8)

End of Scene 7 now Scene 8:

RaBir are lost in each other's eyes, suddenly Nitya walks by them and stops to look at both as she thinks to herself "how cute these two look such a sweet and loving pair they make, I wish they become one for real." (Your wish is my command LOL.) After Nitya thinks that Kabir's cell phone rings again which makes Rachna snap out of the eye lock while Kabir is still mesmerized by Rachna's beauty, he is still lost in her while she is starting to notice she is in an awkward position whereas Kabir doesn't mind her being in his arm. However, Rachna minds being in his arms as she doesn't feel the way he is starting to feel that unknown feeling is taking over him while she doesn't feel anything, yet. Rachna calls out to Kabir saying, "KT sir, KT sir, and KT sir" and Nitya is watching all of this from a far now she moved away from them as she didn't want to ruin the moment. Finally, Kabir snaps out of the eye lock too and slowly helps Rachna stand up straight as she is standing up straight he slowly starts removing his hand from her waist while making her heart skip a beat, yet she ignores it. She also lets go of his coat and tells Kabir that "I have finished the mannequin, so I am leaving to go home now ok," he is like "Fine," so as she is about to go suddenly her dupatta felt like was choking her around her neck. Then she turned around to see why her dupatta is choking her, so she sees that her dupatta's end is stuck on Kabir's wrist watch and Kabir turns around to as he notices the dupatta's end is stuck on his wrist watch. He takes it out slowly for Rachna while looking into her eyes while her eyes are looking down as she is avoiding to meet his eyes. He slowly goes toward Rachna holding the dupatta's end suddenly Rachna turns the other way as her heart skips another beat. Now she reacts to it, yet she doesn't know why her heart did that while Kabir gives a slight smile as he notices Rachna turn away from him while he is walking toward her. He finally lets go of her dupatta's end while she has her eyes closed for no apparent reason and she doesn't even notice that Kabir already let her dupatta go. When she opens her eyes she sees Kabir is in front of her talking to Nitya at the front desk where the receptionist is sitting, she feels flushed and blushes. She thinks to herself "What was I waiting for, why do I feel disappointed, and why is my heart beating so fast, what is wrong with me."

P.S.

Hope you all enjoyed the RaBir short scenes and will try to make more intense scenes later on. Plzzz do leave ur comments n do push the like button to show your appreciation. However, if u feel like something is missing in these scenes plzzz feel free to write it in ur comments, I won't mind cause I would like to know wat u all thought or think about my RaBir scenes okkies guys. So thank u all for reading if u want me to PM u plzzz state that in ur comments, so I would know who to PM and will send out buddy requests if needed or if possible add me as ur buddy okkies. This way it will be easy for me to send out PMs to everyone at ones. Thanks All!

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~Pari~

OMG PARI 🤗You made my dream come true!! First office romance and then the song Baarish! That song fits them perfectly specially after Kabir's gonna fall for her! Again perfect scene! I like howkabir is so bold here and Rachna has no idea what's going on 😳

omg u made kabir kiss her ..the fall ..the eyelock..the hair ..where r u yaar ek baar gale laagan lu tumko..u made the day fr me...wt shud i call u pari??

That Was So Cute Pari.
Continue Soon.

Oh that was a cute update, i love how u describe their feelings. Kabir is falling for rachna and she is starting to be affected by him aswell. Really interesting and i cant wait for next part now. Update more scenes please i wish this happens in the serial aswell.

Awesome update as usual...love it !!!
I am so loving this Kabir to the core and I hope we get to see this Kabir in the show too
And I am so in love with the song Baarish...gosh ❤️
One of the most appropiate songs for RaBir

i am like☺️😳 cv's better show something like this ...thnks for pm