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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok i wrote a random poem.
i knw its stupid n might be funny but still comment and tell me how it is
. please
How does it feel?
How does it feel if you waited all your life for it How does it feel if you worked hard for it?
How does it feel if you were in her shoes How does it feel?

She begged for it
She strived for it
She waited for it
And then she earned it.

But it was taken away,
Snatched,
Betrayed,
Lied too,
Somebody very near was backstabbing too.


She cried and yelled,
Dwelled with tears.
No one cared No one turned around to look,
No one realized how it would feel to be in her shoes.


In the end she was blamed,
To be irresponsible and to not see it came.
They said we feel ya'
But she said ya can't till ya be me.


Life isn't a Disney movie,
Life isn't groovy
Bad always wins
And good always losses
Wasn't life better when it was all pocket full of possess?



But I still ask how does it feel?
How does it feel if that was you?
It could have been you.
Wouldn't you be all blue?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Thanks for pm
good work...
Like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i dont read much poems. but urs is heart wrenching. beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm poem dear...
Its reality...in real world bad always win and good always loose...
Its hurting and painful...
Amezing wrk...
Keep it up...
Thanks for pm dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow superb a deep thought.
its true to understand ones pain we have to enter their shoes but in reality no one does care


loved it and and very much true in todays world😊👏

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