Blast from the Past Thread #21 !!Holi ki Dhadkane!! pg114, epi 218 - Page 89

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 207
 

❀️  πŸ‘πŸΌ
Holi Part 1 - Aaj Holi Hai
 
 
Pyaar ne pighlaaye kayi kayi chote bade pahad
Tabhi to Gulabo Nani bhi zor se naachi aaj
Amma aur Buaji ne bhi pyaar ki baahen kholi hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ...
 
Nanad ne Bhabhi se, Biwi ne shauhar se, ramanchi hai kardiπŸ˜†
Thandai bhaang wali dhoke se pila di
Kisi par bhi bharosa karna khatre se nahin khali hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ...
 
Apni pehli Holi manaye pyaar bhari ek jodi😳
Lagta hai bhaang ka asar hai, sharmana bhi hai chodi
Mami ki ghurraahat se bhi inki gaadi nahin ruki haiπŸ˜†
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ... 
 
Indradhanushi Mami ne kiya sabko takhliya
Jahanpanah ki hukumat mein Mamaji bane behrupiya
Kaneez bani Gupta sisters, talwar bani pichkari hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ...
🀣  πŸ€£ πŸ€£
 
 Bhai ke deewanepan se behen ki aankh bhar aayi
Bhai behen ko palbhar mein bachpan ki yaad aayi
Hokar mast magan ab naach rahi ye toli hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ... 
 
 
Translation and pm's later ... 😊
 

Lovely poem Durga. My favorite part of the poem is about Rainbow Mami. πŸ€£
The holi truly brought the happiness for everyone especially for Anjali, her dream to see his brother married and then taking part in celebration enthusiastically was now really. I love their cute hug, they are best sibling among all I ever saw on tv.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Episode 209 - 210
 
After a long time, I have written a gazal type poem. Khushi's lines are in mustard colour and Arnav's in red.
 
 
 
Holi Part 2 - Hamari Dhadkanein
 
 
Aaj zuban par dil ki baat utar aane do
Dil mein dabi gehre raaz nikal aane do
 
Pati jo hoon, meri biwi, labz ye lage anmol
Jaante hain, in baton mein nahin hai koi jhol
Kabhi rokona, yun khudko,
Haq ye dohrane do
Aaj zubaan par ...
 
Pooche hain kayi, magar ye sawaal kabhi nahin poocha
Baukhlaye dil ki halat ka jawaab nahin soojha
Aankh ki dhool ke saath saath
Iss baat se bhi parda hatne do
Dil mein dabi ...
 
Aapki nazdeekiyaan kyun daudaye hamari dhadkan ko?
Saanson se bhi tez kyun ho jati hai raftaar, kaho
Aisa kyun hota hai?
Kuch to khulasa karo
Aaj zubaan par ...
 
Vajah iss halat ki, chupa rakha hai maine man mein
Dil humare dhadakte hain ek hi lai mein
Ek hojati hai hamari dhadkanein, dekho
Ek hi tarannum mein gaate hain dil do
 
Taras gaye they ye sunne ke liye kitne din
Ek muddat ke baad aaya hai ye suhana din
Ab na hona zara bhi door meri aankhon se
Pyaar ke palon ko aur thodi der rehne do
 
 
Translation:
 
Let the matter of the heart alight on the tongue
Let the hidden secrets of the heart come out
 
I am the husband, my wife, these words felt precious  
I know these things are not fake
Never stop yourself like this
Let the right get repeated
Let the matter of the heart alight on the tongue
 
I have asked many, but never asked this question  
Never occurred the answer for the state of the wacky heart  
Along with the dust of the eye
Let the veil be removed on this matter  
Let the hidden secrets of the heart come out
 
Why does your closeness make my heartbeat run?
Tell me why the speed is more than that of my breath?
Why does it happen?
Do explain
Let the matter of the heart alight on the tongue
 
The reason for this state, I have hidden in my heart  
Our hearts beat in one rhythm  
See our heartbeats become one  
The two hearts sing in the same tune  
 
For so many days I was yearning to hear this  
Finally this bright day has come  
Now don't go away from my eyes for even a bit
Let the moments of love stay for some more time  
 
Edited by DurgaS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all for the lovely comments on Holi 1. Will be back soon to reply all and complete the translations.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.
Episode 209 - 210
 
After a long time, I have written a gazal type poem. Khushi's lines are in mustard colour and Arnav's in red.
 
 
 
Holi Part 2 - Hamari Dhadkanein β€οΈ
 
 
Aaj zuban par dil ki baat utar aane do
Dil mein dabi gehre raaz nikal aane do
 
Pati jo hoon, meri biwi, labz ye lage anmol πŸ˜³
Jaante hain, in baton mein nahin hai koi jhol
Kabhi rokona, yun khudko,
Haq ye dohrane do
Aaj zubaan par ...
 
Pooche hain kayi, magar ye sawaal kabhi nahin poocha
Baukhlaye dil ki halat ka jawaab nahin soojha
Aankh ki dhool ke saath saath
Iss baat se bhi parda hatne do
Dil mein dabi ...
 
Aapki nazdeekiyaan kyun daudaye hamari dhadkan ko
Saanson se bhi tez kyun ho jati hai raftaar, kaho
Aisa kyun hota hai
Kuch to khulasa karo
Aaj zubaan par ...
 
Vajah iss halat ki, chupa rakha hai maine man mein
Dil humare dhadakte hain ek hi lai mein
Ek hojati hai hamari dhadkanein, dekho
Ek hi tarannum mein gaate hain dil do
 
Taras gaye they ye sunne ke liye kitne din
Ek muddat ke baad aaya hai ye suhana din
Ab na hona zara bhi door meri aankhon se
Pyaar ke palon ko aur thodi der rehne do 
 
 
 
I will write the translations and pm's for both poems by tonight.
 

πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ I can't find enough words to describe this awesome, fantabolous poem. β€οΈ
 
Uufff!!!!!!!!!! I love it, I love it, I love it. β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ
The whole poem beautifully show the whole poolside confession scene. πŸ˜³
I wish this confession wasn't said in drunken state, I wish these lovely moments never have ended. 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



cynthia,

you know you are tougher... and i am sure these two will both shine and some day we shall see them together. maybe we should get in touch with people in hollywood to cast this dhamaka jodi that cuts across and touches people across the world. any connections, my dear friend?


Indi, none in Hollywood but New York possibly.  Most of the directors John works with now do television series.  He use to do movies earlier in his career even worked for Martin Scorcese!
It was fun back then when he worked with the likes of Costner, Ford, Pacino, Goodman and recently the kid who was in Man on a Ledge, can't remember his name but he was in Avatar too, and I am sure there were others but I am getting old and the brain is fogged.  John worked on the new Teenage Mutant Turtles movie, this year with Meghan Fox, when mom passed and he had to come home.  He hasn't been back since.  He was sad leaving her!!! LOL  the movie will be out soon, spring I think.

I certainly think our couple should do a movie together.  
I am not feeling Sanaya and this new guy in RR.  Just look at the stance...not feeling it.
Edited by cinthiann1758 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Durga, Thanks for the support.  I obviously felt like I needed support from my Blaster sisters who were with me during this time, thereby the post.  Lovely poem, I think, as always hurry with english subs.


I am sorry that you do not have your parents next to you when you want them. But as someone says they are stars. However I think stars are way too far, Those whom we love are nearer to us then stars far away. Their souls are looking at us and then when we pray for them and remember them they are happy. I is said when a near one remembers you you get hiccups- now do you think those who passed away get hiccups when they are fed when we remember them?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.
Episode 209 - 210
 
After a long time, I have written a gazal type poem. Khushi's lines are in mustard colour and Arnav's in red.
 
 
 
Holi Part 2 - Hamari Dhadkanein
 
 
Aaj zuban par dil ki baat utar aane do
Dil mein dabi gehre raaz nikal aane do πŸ˜ƒ
 
Pati jo hoon, meri biwi, labz ye lage anmol πŸ‘
Jaante hain, in baton mein nahin hai koi jhol πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Kabhi rokona, yun khudko, πŸ˜‰
Haq ye dohrane do πŸ‘πŸΌ
Aaj zubaan par ...
 
Pooche hain kayi, magar ye sawaal kabhi nahin poocha πŸ˜”
Baukhlaye dil ki halat ka jawaab nahin soojha
Aankh ki dhool ke saath saath
Iss baat se bhi parda hatne do
Dil mein dabi ... 😳
 
Aapki nazdeekiyaan kyun daudaye hamari dhadkan ko πŸ˜•
Saanson se bhi tez kyun ho jati hai raftaar, kaho πŸ˜•
Aisa kyun hota hai
Kuch to khulasa karo
Aaj zubaan par ... ⭐️
 
Vajah iss halat ki, chupa rakha hai maine man mein πŸ˜•
Dil humare dhadakte hain ek hi lai mein πŸ˜†
Ek hojati hai hamari dhadkanein, dekho πŸ˜ƒ
Ek hi tarannum mein gaate hain dil do πŸ˜³πŸ‘
 
Taras gaye they ye sunne ke liye kitne din πŸ˜•
Ek muddat ke baad aaya hai ye suhana din
Ab na hona zara bhi door meri aankhon se ❀️
Pyaar ke palon ko aur thodi der rehne do πŸ‘
 
 
 
I will write the translations and pm's for both poems by tonight.
 


Nice one Durga. I am moving to ARSHi sleepless night land
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wiwy,
 
Love the edit and poem Durgey! These lines had me ROFLING🀣
Indradhanushi Mami ne kiya sabko takhliya
Jahanpanah ki hukumat mein Mamaji bane behrupiya
Kaneez bani Gupta sisters, talwar bani pichkari hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ...

And the very next para had me CRYING😭
 Bhai ke deewanepan se behen ki aankh bhar aayi
Bhai behen ko palbhar mein bachpan ki yaad aayi
Hokar mast magan ab naach rahi ye toli hai
Kyunki aaj Holi hai ... 

Wah! Kya colourful poem hai! Kudos to you my friend for displaying all the colours of this rangeen festival at RM!!




Thanks for loving Holi 1. Laughing and crying at the same time, dhoop and barish together. That's why the rainbow is there. πŸ˜† 
 
Also, thanks for sharing your personal story Wiwy. That was lovely. You are a Lakshmi for our thread too. Our only source of access to the boy. πŸ˜‰ 
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Indi,
 
ooo nice holi poem. loved indradhanush mami stanza most, me in lub with the rainbow's takhliya... and biwi and shauhar? awww i liiike shauhar for the angry besotted husband, and biwi for his crazy wife.

i am missing these two really badly somehow.


Aww thanks Indi. Happy you loved the Mami stanza. After all, you are our jahanpanah, I meant the Mami of our thread.  πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arshi,
 
wonderful Durga...In blue my tummy got hurt  by giggling and those two lines are way deep brings out pain from mu heart.Thnx for this beautiful poem
 
Thank you so much. πŸ˜ƒ Holi was filled with so many moments, joyful, laughable, emotional and of course romantic. It was so heartfelt to see them all dancing together.