Swaron SS : U Can't Run From Love Ch 6 Pg 36 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
than-x for pm
this dev seem bad for swaron in this stage of their relationship
good to see swayam being jealous
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... awsm update... plz plz plz jaldi update krna... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
The part in mehroon red is written by Tan.vish.K.

Chapter 4

As they heard the music Dev and Sharon walked from opposite side with the right posture need for jiving and with sharp steps.. They walked first looking at each other and then walked in a circle as if waiting for the other to start.. with the beats Dev asked Sharon for her hand.. Maintaining the right distance Dev lead Sharon with a few basic jive steps..

Ishq shava, mushq shava
Khushamdeed e Marhaba

Dev left Sharon's one hand and both walked side-by-side with the front basic walk and waving their bodies forward..

Ishq shava.. haay
mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. haay e Marhaba

both with a swift turn face each other.. he with her jerk pushed her back into their previous position.. Both repeated the step 2-3 time

Dev caught Sharon's hand above their head and turned her.. Sharon took quick half turns one both sides.. he took both her palms in his and guided her a step to the right and then the left..
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed e Marhaba


Sharon took a side turn and both did some swift foot work playing with the beats of the song.. They repeated the front walk and waving their bodies along with it..
Ishq shava.. mushq shava..
Ishq shava.. haay
mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. haay e Marhaba


Both Dev and Sharon moved into jiving along with the music.. A dance form with minimum body contact but swift and crisp moves.. Dev lead Sharon all around the place with a few complicated moves which looked smooth.. Sharon was following his leads and making sure to match his foot work..

Dev had left Sharon and was standing at the side with his shoulder erect and feet together whereas she was busy doing some elegant solo moves with the hips..
Shauq hai shauq sulagne ka
Saans me saans uljha toh zara

Sharon was moving backwards on the beats moving her hips along as Dev came forward without holding her doing the same footwear like her..
Aaj ki raatein kiski hai
Kal ki raat teri na meri

Dev took her hand and turned her standing behind her at a bit of distance and both waved backwards together..
Chaand utha chal toss kare
Chehra tera aur chaal meri


He turned her and took a step forward as she moved backwards.. He turned her yet hold her side ways and both walked side by side..
Ishq shava, mushq shava
Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed e Marhaba


He turned her again and Sharon did the half turns as swiftly as before.. he took both her palms in his and guided her a step to the right and then the left..
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa..
Khushamdeed e Marhaba

Ishq shava.. haay.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay

He held her hand and again guided for continuous spins and followed her steps.. He stops her by hold her palm and they shuffled placed twice yet jiving..

Sharon moved and stood at the side with the perfect posture and Dev continued with a solo moving smoothly with the music..
Dil dariya hai rukta nahi
Paani pe chal ke dekh zara


Sharon moved and caught Dev's hands as he offered them.. Both of them jived forward and then backwards..
Baadalon pe paanv rakho kabhi
Unme zameen nahi hoti

The walked two steps to the right and then the left..
Dil ki had behad hogi
Koi laqeer nahi hoti hai


Both waved backwards while Sharon did a few quick sexy hip movements..
Ishq shava.. haay.. uh uh haay
Mushq shava.. uh uh


Dev walked towards Sharon with a forward step while she moved backwards..
Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. e Marhaba


Both turned sideways with Sharon infront of him and they crossed others paths with one hand moving above her head.. Dev turned Sharon to face him.. Sharon crossed her legs a few times in her place
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed e Marhaba

They continued with slow steps forward and perfectly waving the bodies and crisp footwork.. He pulled her in and again turned her sideways facing the back and repeated the same while turning her towards the front..

Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay haay...

Dev swiftly took Sharon for a spin and stopped facing in the front.. Sharon's arm on his side was straight up and parallel to it was Dev's and their other hand held in front of them

Sharon all along the song was just thinking about Swayam and her dances. She wanted to dance in the arms of Swayam and Swayam only. Though she was grateful , that dev was dancing with her maintaining the distance with which she was comfortable. Her eyes searched for him when the whole gang was coming forward to congratulate them for an awesome dance. She saw him standing as if someone had set him on fire..His eyes were burning with the jealousy feeling. He stood there still showing no emotion on his face yet his eyes said all the things to her. He suddenly left from there without turning back.

"You only said Swayam that I cud dance with anyone"...but still it affects you even if I am standing with someone else.. You get jealous if someone else dances with me ...why r u running away from your true feelings? I am simply waiting for you to ask give one chance...plz come back to me Swayam...plz.I cant bear this distance between us anymore" Sharon thought.

Swayam and Dev come back from College .Swayam's Dad was waiting for them on the dining table.

"How was the college bacho?" Rishi Shekhawat asked .

Swayam without uttering a single word , directly went to his room.

"Dev, what happened to him?" surprised by Swayam's behavior his dad asked.

"Dunno uncle, I think he must be tired since he and his team are organizing the Annual fest" dev replied with a smirk.

(Dev in his thoughts: I guess I really touched the nerves of my dear bro...hahahaha its just the beginning though...)

Swayam sat on his bed with his hands on his forehead.

Why, why, why , that dance of Sharon and Dev is making me feel like this"...

Its like Dj-Vu of the same feeling when I saw Sharon dancing with Shivam...Oh !god why why why ...

In his imagination and background the song starts ...

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya
Ho..
(Swayam thinks about all his cherished moments. in the past ...Their dates, hugs, Sharon s confession, kisses, Secret time spent together...)

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya
Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
( his feelings developing deeper and deeper for Sharon ,how they were together , even though they weren't exactly together ...moments when they got lost in each other's eyes as if all the words ever lies but the feelings conveyed through the eyes all true...all those moments when only their eyes did the talking )

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa
Main janu naa o..o..
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
(He remembers what all developments Sharon and his relationship through in these 3 years , from their first meeting till now. their fights , disagreements , angry moments , their paths going apart, yet in those moments their micro seconds eye locks as if they wanted to forget all their differences and get lost in each other's eyes forever.)

Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra
shayad yahin dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata...

(He remembers how he went to her house to make sure , he make his sorry special after their first fight as a couple (trial relationship..how then he sneaked into her house to take care of her when she was having high fever...and when Sharon stayed in his house to take care of him for the whole night and even cooking for him with utmost love and affection which he saw in her eyes,.)


Kya hai yeh silsala
Janu naa, Main janu naa
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
(But then he remembers how she broke his trust by signing Aditya's contract ...how she never said a word to rey when Rey said all those things on his face in front of her..how she never stopped Rey from slapping him...how she in front of everyone made a mockery of his love ...she declined him yet again in front of everyone ...she didn't take few seconds to falsify his love for her in front of others...)

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaha ki de, tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa...
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janu naa
Main janu naa
( He was thinking about all this ,when he felt a hand on his shoulder , turning back he saw Sharon there...not saying a single word but her eyes asking for a dance. He starts dancing with her , lost in her eyes trying to understand the feeling of bliss and happiness and more importantly the feeling of love his heart felt when he remember how Sharon was trying to apologize to him and making him feel that she really loves him without any restraint..How special and happy he felt when Sharon was initiating the steps to sort out the differences in b/w them..Trying to be a girl of his dreams... how elated he felt when he and Sharon danced on phela Nasha...how her sadness still effected him internally when he was being rude to her..How her doing small small things for him giving him the happiness beyond this world...)

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

(he looks at Sharon and decides to let his eyes do the talking fearing that his words would fail him ,saying "why Sharon why? When I ended our relationship coz of the hurt you gave me why it feels all those emotions when you send across, why I am regretting the decision I made for your own happiness, why I still feel like the happiest man alive when you make me feel special or loved...why my hearts still skips a beat when I look at you ...why I come on the verge of breaking this barrier I made , every time you look me in my eyes...why I can't see you with anyone except me...why all my self control breaks..when my emotions are directly related to you...

He put forward his hands trying to touch Sharon's face,and she suddenly vanishes into thin air, making Swayam realize that he was imagining the dance with Sharon...he feels a deep pain in his heart).

Does that mean my heart has already forgiven Sharon? Should I give another chance to us? Will she keep my trust this time? Will she not hurt me again? all these questions make Swayam more confused...and in frustration he just sits again with his hands on his forehead...

Dev was busy arranging his stuff n Swayam was trying to relax but wasn't able to.
Tring Tring
Dev picked n listenting to call he got excited.
"Hey dude wassup? Long time"
"Even I wanted to meet u all"
"Right now, sure will be there in half n hour"
He got ready n entered Swayam's room to find him little low. One idea stuck in his mind.


"Hey bro, looking tired. I'm going to meet my friends. Why dont u join?" Dev said very well knowing why was Swayam like this.
"Seriously no mood. U enjoy. I wanna be alone." Swayam denied him.
"Arre come na. U'll enjoy for sure n would feel good." Dev said persuading Swayam to which Swayam agreed to come n went to get ready.


Dev n Swayam entered a high class famous club of Mumbai. For Dev it was casual habit but Swayam was little uncomfortable. Soon Dev's friends surrounded them.
Swayam was trying to mingle with them but their nature was complete opposite to his. The dance started n all the people started swaying to the music. Dev whispered something in one of his friend's ears while Swayam was watching the dance.
She approached Swayam for a dance n after some pushes from Dev he agreed.
They started dancing. Swayam was missing Sharon.


"Hey I'm Pari. It looks like u aren't comfortable. Any problem?" She initiated the convo.
"Nothing like that. It is just I'm not used to this environment."
"Oh okk. U wanna drink something?"
" No I'm fine."
"U are too stubborn." saying this Pari ordered two soft drinks n forced Swayam to drink it.
They were still dancing n Swayam started feeling dizzy.
Dev smirked n showed a thumbs up to Pari.

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Edited by SanskritiS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all readers for ur fabulous support ...Without you our motivation would have lagged a lot seeing the present SwaRon these days on D3. Please continue showering us with your valuable likes and comments so that we wud take up the challenge and deliver you with better updates each time.

Also thank you Tan.vish.K for helping us penning down the dance sequence .(the maroon colour part) 😊

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Edited by ikki215 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES

UNRES

ME FIRST!!!! 🥳

Firstly You'll are most Welcome 🤗

Coming to the Update
Loved the dream sequence.. Swayam kab realise karega?!!
Bichari Sharon ko bhi confuse karke rakha hai 🤔
Dev.. Kya bolu abhi.. His evil smiles are 😡
But toward the end there is something very very fishy going on in Dev's mind 😡

Awesome Update Guys 👏
Very well planed and penned 👍🏼
Please update soon 😃


Edited by Tan.vish.K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d update. .
Starting with d dance tanvish u wrote it beautifully every dance step ever move was so perfectly defined. .
Dat was really very well written. .
Swayam.s ka jealous hona obvious tha cos during d dance Wen i was reading dev n sharon ka name together i was feeling odd too. .
Anyways i loved loved d flashback. .
D background song is my favourite very well described n swayam dreaming about sharon wow Der dance was done beautifully. .
Well d ending for me was a shock. .
I don't know how to react on it so i better wait for next update. .
Great work guys. . Keep it up. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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i have a complain..
you guy know this SS is so damn amazing. the why the hell do you update it in pieces.. i just crave for more and more.

superb update
i am so so eager to know more about dev.
pehli baar villain main interested hun. 😆😛
the thinking part and the feelings were really well penned 👍🏼
i simply loved them

thanks for the PM
update soon
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazng 1 as usual..i luvd it..u knw wht whnevr i read ds m nt satisfied wid jst 1 part..i feel kash ye ek book hota nd i wud jst keep on readng..kavi khatam na ho..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...
update soon/!
want to knw wat dev has planned
hope swarn get back together fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow guys just wow simply awesome I loved the sequence which you'll picturised in Swayam's room.. The dance on phir mohabbat and in the end Swayam reaching out to touch Sharon but only being disappointed on not touching her.. Then the monologue which you'll gave it was awesome I loved it..❤️.
Though I would'nt wanna say dis but I liked Sharon and Dev's dance and even more then the dance what I liked even more was Swayam's reaction his anger and jealousy which was being reflected in his eye seeing Dev hold his world in his arms..😃.
I loved Sharon's monologue too..😊.
Plzzz plzzz continue this SS soon guys plzzz a request to you'll..😔.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗
Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

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