Hamaari Prem Kahaani......#5 Part 64/ Pg 139 Dt 24/05 - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maan looking 4 Geet! Wt a slap! Dev reflects! Geet is being strong! update soon, well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHAT A CONFRONTATION BETWEEN AYESHA AND APARNA
APARNA TOLD HER HOME TRUTHS BUT AYESHA IS TOO ROTTEN A PERSON TO EVEN SEE THE TRUTH
SHE FELS HERSLF A VICTIM AND PUTS ALL THE BLAME ON KHUARANAS

BUT DEV KNOWS THE TRUTH ABOUT HIS MOTHER AND HER MORALS
AND HIS PARVARISH BY AMAN WILL WIN IN THE END
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dev heared everything
n feeling ashamed of himself
maaan...wats running in his mind
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A/N : Its a sincere request to all to please read the update along with this song. I know most of you haven't heard this song but its an awesome song and the wordings and feel matches perfectly to the update. I have colour coordinated the parts of Maan, Geet and Dev accordingly.
I just hope I have done justice to this update
A big Sorry to those who can't access Youtube.
And please do let me know did you like the update?




Part 56



KHURANA MANSION


[Rajiv's POV]

The dense clouds of fear, pain and anxiety looming over the whole family. Just yesterday the whole mansion was bubbling with happiness and today, cutting through this deafening silence are the chants of Maha-yagna (sacred puja) which Maa has organized for the well being and safety of our whole family. All the men anxiously trying to find the best possible solution of this misery and all the women settled in the puja room with just one plea that all of them return home safe and sound.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qef-BnL0T0[/YOUTUBE]





Waqt ka saaya
kisne daala hain...
[Maan's POV]


I halt my car at a cross road one way directs me towards the basti ( settlement) and another takes me towards my Geet. I get down from my car and march towards the hill top and stare into the wilderness, the forest spread into thousands of acres and somewhere in this forest my Maa, my Geet and our baby is trapped!


{Please ignore the buildings}


Never in my whole life have I felt so helpless, for a second I make up my mind not to waste any time and plunge into this forest to rescue my family but the sane part of me cautions against doing it reminding me of Commissioner Uncle's (CU) words.
Waqt ka saaya
kisne daala hain...
Since morning I have tried to keep a check on my emotions, not giving out my state of mind, masking my fears, restlessness, anger, pain and guilt to have failed to protect my loved ones! Not able to hold myself anymore, loosing control over myself I cry out loud in the wilds.



"GEET..." My voice echoes in the open space and bounces back alone this time, making me aware of the distance that has been created between us! She is there, somewhere in that forest far away from me!
[Geet's POV]


There wasn't an ounce of sleep in my eyes but still on Maa's request and for my baby I rested against the wall closing my eyes with a hope that tomorrow morning, I open my eyes and see myself in my Maan's protective arms. But suddenly I jerk out of my thoughts calling out loud.


"MAAN..."


Waqt ka saaya
kisne daala hain...

I have feeling that Maan called out to me...His pain I can feel it here...He needs me...I need him. I want to go to him...I have to go to him!


[Dev's POV]



Waqt ka saaya
kisne daala hain...


It feels like ages I am sitting near the river, the chilling cold air has no effect on my numb self, the darkness in the atmosphere merging to the darkness within me. This darkness is my future which my own Mom chose for me and I accepted it shattering my Dad's dream, his trust, his teachings, his upbringing!


[Maan's POV]



Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Ho rahega jo honewala hain
Jo honewala hain


I gather myself and drive off towards the basti and stop my car at a side noticing a big crowd. I get off my car and move in the direction only to find myself at the entrance of a dargah.



[Geet's POV]



Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain...

Seeing me getting restless and unsettled Maa tries to comfort and control me but...
[Dev's POV]


Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain...


Hours seemed to have passed and finally I look around to find an axe and some logs of wood around. I walk towards them picking up the axe I start venting out all my frustration on the logs.
[Maan's POV]


MUSIC
I walk in the dargah and earnestly pray to the Almighty for the safety of my family and some way out that I can rescue them soon. I overhear some people talking that if you sincerely walk over the burning coals here in the durgah all your wishes are fulfilled. And not wasting a moment more I walk up to the place and start walking over the burning coals.
Din toh yeh bhi guzar jaayega
Par yeh lamha guzarta nahin



I flinch as I put my feet on the burning path but this pain and blaze is nothing compared to the fire within me which is ignited within me. I am dying every moment waiting for the first ray of light to hit the earth so I can rush in search of my Geet!
[Geet's POV]




Aag hi aag hi aag hain
Phir kyun suraj peeghalta nahin

For sometime there is a calm settled around me like signalling me that Maan is at peace but then a sudden bout of agitation grips me making me aware that Maan is in pain. I feel myself on fire...My Maan is in trouble!


[Dev's POV]
Daag dhone se jaate nahin
Dard rone se ghatta nahin...
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain



I am randomly cutting the logs and hurt my hand, the dirty blood running in my nerves gushes out. I stare at my hand in amuse, feeling satisfied that finally I will get rid of this impure and filthy being...Finally this is the end! I tell myself as slowly darkness engulfs me into it...


[Maan's POV]
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain

I am continuously walking on the coals ignoring the people around, who are urging me to walk out but when I pay no heed to them, few of them forcibly pull me out. They support me to the nearest bench and start giving me some first aid as my feet are badly burnt.


[Geet's POV]
Ayesha had left the den immediately post the showdown with Maa. Every passing moment my restlessness was increasing, there was a nagging feeling that Maan is in pain!

MUSIC




I move towards the door and windows trying to open them but all were sealed! Maa forcibly pulls me out of my repeated failing attempts to escape from here and lovingly rests my head in her lap patting me to sleep.


Neend mein saans lete toh hain
Khwaab jaage toh mar jaate hain


Maa's comforting warmth and my tired self gives in to sleep. I'm trying hard to distract my mind but even in my sleep a series of nightmares scare me and I jolt out of my sleep.


Bebasi hain badi bebasi
Apne saaye se darr jaate hain
I hug Maa crying my heart out. I glance towards the window seeing faint traces of light but will this light bring any hope in our troubled times.


[Dev's POV]

Kaun kisse shikayat kare
Jo likha hain woh mitta nahin


Life has always betrayed me I was happy that death had accepted me with open arms but...
The morning dew and light spray from the swiftly gushing river awaken me. I look at my wounded hand which must have submerged in the water when I fainted. The chilled water had stopped the bleeding thereby bringing me back to my worthless life. Maybe I still had to endure more pain...No I still had to pay for my henious deeds! I closed my eyes in remorse.



Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
"GEET..." Her face just flashed in front of my eyes hinting me I have an important task ahead! I stand up with determination knowing exactly what I have to do.



[Geet's POV]

Ho rahega jo honewala hain
Jo honewala hain

Maa wipes my tears, calms me down and assuring me that a new day brings a new hope and Maan is safe and very soon he will rescue us.


[Maan's POV]

Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain

I continuously gaze out from the window of the room, the Maulvi (priest) of this durgah had requested me to rest here for sometime. The sun is all set to rise informing me that the time has come. I kiss the photo of Geet, promising her that very soon I will be there by her side.


Waqt ka saaya kisne daala hain
Ho rahega jo honewala hain...



{Please check out this VM too! It is specially made by my dear friend Urme Rehman for this update. Thank you so much Urme 🤗}




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QR3aS8fEX34[/YOUTUBE]




I turn around to walk out the room only to come face to face with the Maulvi who forwards me a paper. I looked at him quizzically to which he smiles and says.



"Yeh tumhari manzil tak pohuchne mein, tumhe bahot kaam aayega."

I had confided in him last night the reason for my being here. He had silently heard me out and requested me to rest, assuring me the God will surely make a way for me to accomplish my duty and rescue my loved ones. And here he is handing me a map of the forest with signs and clues of major entry and exit points, short cuts of the forest. I fall down in his feet thanking him respectfully.

"Jaa bacche...Allah tujhe kamyaabi de." He blesses me.
I slowly limp out of the basti. Today no pain, no wound, nothing can stop me. I had to search and rescue my family. With a deep resolve I get in my car and drive towards the forest when I get a call from a private number. I take the call immediately.

"Maan..."

"Dev?" I muttered baffled.

"Haan Dev...Main tumse milna chahta hoon aur mujhe andaaza (fair idea) hain ke tum yahin kahin aas-paas ho Pari ke call se ab tak tumne mera location trace kar hi liya hoga ." He spoke out.


"Geet kahan hain?"

"Mere paas." He affirmed.

"Kahan aana hain?" I accept.


"#$%&&*&((())))(^%$$##%^^8##$# ke aage jo raasta hain wahan se left leke jungle ke andar aa jaana woh raasta tumhe seedha ek clearing tak le aayega wahan mera wait karna...Aur...akele aana!" He stated.


I call home and update them the details ofcourse excluding that of Dev's call. He had challenged me and I will fight him alone. I inform them to forward this message to everybody to immediately arrive at XYZ point and wait for my next call. Before they could query any further I cut the call and headed towards the direction Dev had mentioned.

Dev had clearly mentioned that I come alone and I know that he wouldn't be alone but he had Maan Singh Khurana and I am not a coward! But I'm not a fool too. I very well know CU's men in civil dress are already on an alert and they will be here in no time but will keep a safe distance so it doesn't risk Maa and Geet's life. Scrutinizing the map closely and figuring out a safe location nearest to, where Dev has called me I scheme a quick plan and call everybody there.

They will be here soon and incase of any emergency we all can attack together catch them all off guard!



"Dev you will have to pay for this! Peechli baar (last time) Maa ne tumhe bacha liya tha lekin, iss baar main tumhe aisi sazaa doonga ke tum dobara kuch aur karne ke qaabil (capable) nahi rahoge. Yeh Maan Singh Khurana ka vaada hain apne aap se!"


[Dev's POV]


Since the time Mom had disclosed her plan to me I had a feeling that she can't plan all this single-handedly. There is someone who is actively involved in this plan but isn't coming out in open. Mom's weird behavior from past few days flash in front of my eyes. The goons who had kidnapped Mrs Khurana and Geet also weren't trust worthy. I felt they had ulterior motives and I had to get to the root of the whole plan.


When I left the den post my argument with Mrs Khurana to meet Maa, I had kept a close watch on the nearby areas and something had caught my attention then. I had let it go for time being because all my focus was to dig out the truth of the past.


But now before I implement my plan I had to tie up loose ends, so I arrive at the place where I had do a little damage control.




This was the secret hideout of the goons to spy on us. I slowly sneaked in and looked around their were few sleeping gas spray cans lying on the floor. I assume they must have used them on Maan's security guards. I picked up one can and tip toed further inside only to see all of them had passed out due to excessive drinking. Taking this as an opportunity I covered my nose with my handkerchief and sprayed the entire content in the room so they are out of my way for a couple of hours.


I get in to their jeep and head towards the den finally to put in action my plan. Mom is pacing outside the den and rushes to me as soon as she notices me. I keep my calm not giving away my state of mind or my hatred for her. I behave normally and asked her to go back to her cottage as I will handle everything here. She readily agrees and leaves, in her haste to move out of here she doesn't even notice my wounded hand. I laugh at myself to even have thought about her concern towards me, her son whom she didn't even want in her life. If it was in her hands I wouldn't have seen this world.



My eyes burn as I remember each word of their confrontation but realizing the situation and lack of time I quickly gather myself and walk in the den. The sight that braces me tears me apart, Mrs Khurana trying to pacify Geet whose incessant crying piercing my soul. I have always been a reason of her pain. I have always ruined her happiness, turned her dreams in nightmares, used her as a pawn in my revenge game. But not anymore.

"Geet main tumhe sahi salamat tumhaare pyaar ke paas le jaaunga, chahe iske liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pade. Yeh mera vaada hain tumse aur apne aap se." I promise myself.


Not wasting anymore time I pick up some food packets from the store room and advance towards them. I forward the packets which Geet immediately pushes away and yells.



"Marti mar jaaungi lekin tumhaare haath se kuch nahi khaungi." Her words filled with hatred stabs my heart deep but I smile ruefully as I deserve every bit of this disgust. I mask myself again and order them.



"Fine agar nahi khana hain toh mat khao, like I care. Tumhare yeh drama ka mujh par koi asar nahi hoga. Ab chalo hum yahan zyaada der nahi ruk sakte." They look at me confused as I continue.


"Khud chalogi yah main utha ke le jau." To which she just walks out followed by Mrs Khurana who glances at my face but I avert my face not meeting her gaze. They settle in the jeep and I tie their hands to the bar of the jeep, knowing Geet and her impulsive acts, I don't want to take any chances. Geet and her baby's safety is my prime concern. I drive off towards the place where Maan will be waiting for us.


I halt the jeep seeing Maan already standing there. Mrs Khurana and Geet haven't still noticed him. He as usual had masked his face not giving out anything but I know he was seething within. I get down and untie the ropes freeing them and signalling them to look in the direction Maan is waiting for them.




They follow my view and gape from him to me not believing their eyes. Mrs Khurana somewhere expecting this change but Geet...



I finally voice out my intention.


"Geet jao tumhara Maan tumhe lene aaya hain." Hearing my statement she just runs towards Maan hugging him tight,crying her heart out, complaining to him...typical Geet!





I could clearly decipher the intensity of the hug as I saw Maan stumbling behind with the force. This is the second time post the party I see glimpse of emotions on Maan's face. His happiness, relief and satisfaction evident on his face for fraction of a second.

I blink my eyes trying to not loose control over my emotions but my attempt was not missed by Mrs Khurana who was looking at me with great admiration. I turned towards her and spoke.

"Maine wohi kiya jo sahi tha. Ab aap dono azaad hain."




While talking to Mrs Khurana I hadn't noticed Maan had advanced towards me but before he could hit me Mrs Khurana mediated between us blocking his hand midway.



"Ruko Maan. Dev gunehgaar nahi hain balki issi ne hume azaad karwaya hain aur khud yahan laaya hain, tumhare paas." She stated and turned towards me.


"Dev beta tum..." But I raise my hand not letting her finish.


"Aap ne sach bata kar mujhpe ek ehsaan kiya aur maine woh ehsaan uttaar diya. Baat khatam. Aap log jaayiye yahan se isse pehle ke koi aa jaaye." I concluded.
"Itni bhi kya jaldi hain Boss, hume bhi toh mauka milna chahiye apne mehmaano (guest) ki khatirdaari (hospitality) karne ka." George uttered sarcastically.







PRECAP - Face off





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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved itMaan finds a way to vent out his pain. The scenes were very well done. When you are already in so much pain, more pain does not hurt.It was sad how Geet kept feeling all his hurt and pain. She had already endured enough. I loved the last part when she started her complaining to him😆Aparna recognizes that Dev is not evil but Dev is punishing himself now.I always missed that about GHSP. They never showed Dev's redemption properly. If they had we would perhaps forgiven him; it would have made sense.I really think this was perhaps the most intense update you gave Heytal. Pain all around and then finally a ray of hope which is squashed by George.Though him and what army can beat Maan, who knows..😆 Let them have it. Looking forward to the dhulaai..Thanks for updating🤗 Keep it coming😉
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz devko kuch nehi hona chahiye...feeling bad fr him...he is a weapon fr fulfilling his mother's greediness...plz b safe dev...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
dev saving geet and taking her to maan and please not let anyone hurt him
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Awesome update.

So now atleast Maan knows that Dev has helped them. Please Dev should not die in this battle. Woh to bus ek mohra tha. Give him a chance to live with his Aman dad's values.
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally dev reformed completely. hope maan saves him from those goons. want to see ayesha and gang beaten to death.
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Finally Maneet are togather..


loved the update avi..

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