OS:The Undefined Love...... Part 1 Updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A girl is shown in the kitchen...she is keeping the plates on the shelf she is struggling cause she have to wear heels and work in the kitchen then suddenly she felt a hand gripping on her waist and he held her very tight!!!!
Guess who???.
Yes.
It is none other than our Antara and Raghu whose Love is Undefined...

Character Sketch:

Antara Raghunath Naik: A happy go lucky girl who is married to her love of her life RaghušŸ‘. She loves him very much and lives in Paris.They both work for an Institute named " THE PARIS UNIVERSITY" and Antara is the Cultural main head their.

Raghunath Naik : The "Bhai" of the UniversityšŸ˜†...hahaha joking guys!!!! He is one of the trusty of the College and is married to our Miss Kaul...He loves her very much and always removes time to spend with herā˜ŗļø.

MachMach: Married to our dear Ruksana.He loves her very much. He has his own company in which Ruksana is also his Business Partner.

Ruksana: Wife of MachMach and his Business Partner.

Noor Appa: She is not yet married and is in Paris with Antara and Raghu.

Satya: He works with MachMach and Ruksana.

How is it???? Comment and say should I continue it or no???

Edited by FatemaMazahir17 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes ofcourse continue . That will be very nice 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls continue dear nice concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No doubt it sounds interesting
Do continue... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1 - I LOVE U AND ONLY U


Antara is in the kitchen (same as given in character sketch)...Raghu gripped her waist from back and held it tightly!!!!😳

Raghu: gud morning jaan..(kissing on her neck)
Antara: yah,jaan gud morning...neend puri hui??
Raghu: kaha???puri raat tum mere sapne main aa rahi thi...
Antara: aacha par main toh tumhare saath hi thi...phir kya hua??
Raghu: ha...par still na...i love uuu soo muchhh!!!
Antara: love u tooo...chalo nahne jao..
Raghu: nahi..mujhe nahi jana hai
Antara: kyun??? Raghu agar tum nanhne nahi jaogey to hum institute kaisey jaengey...aur institute nahi jayengey toh play ke reharsal's kaun dekhega???
Raghu: aacha...main ek sharat par nahne jaunga...😊
Antara: kaunsi???
Raghu: tum bhi mere saath chalogi!!!!😳
Antara: Raghu...pagal ho gayye ho kyašŸ˜†...subah-subah kya baat kar rahey ho...
Raghu: kyun...ab toh main tumhara pati hoo...aur pati parmeshwar jo bhi kehta hai woh karna padega...
Antara: aacha...tohhh phiiirr (she run's away)

Raghu start's following her and goes back of her and they get into their bedroom...and they landed on their bed!!!

Antara: Raghu pls na...mujhe jana hai...bohot kaam hai
Raghu: ssshhh (keep's his hand on her lips)...jao lekin mujhe kuch chahiye
Antara: ab kya chahiye???
Raghu: ek choti si puppy
Antara: oh!!! woh toh assan hai na...
Raghu: toh do...
Antara: ha par uske liye toh phone no. chahiye na...!!!
Raghu: kyun?? why phone no.???😲
Antara: ab puppy chahiye toh pet shop ko phone karna padega na!!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Raghu: tujhse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai...
Antara: arrey par mainey kya kiya...tumne hi toh kaha na ki puppy chahiye isley phone no...
Raghu: nahi meri ma...kuch nahi chahiye (angry tone)😔

Antara start's crying😭😭
Raghu sees that

Raghu: nahi...Miss Kaul mere kehne ka matlab yeh nahi tha!!!...mere
Antara: mere kya??? tum hamesha yahi kartey ho...cutty jao main tumse baat nahi kartiii...
Raghu: aab isko manana padega!!!!😃

ab kaisey manayega Raghu Antara ko...????

Precap:

Raghu: sorry jaan...plss
Antara: nahi..bilkul nahi tum kuch bhi karoo par main nahi manne wali...
Raghu (in his mind) : lagta hai MachMach ki 101 wooing tareke aapnane hi padengey!!!😳



howz it???????comment guys...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update yr...lovely and also funny...antara..phone...puppy...omg!! Poor raghu!hahaha..i liked it!
Thanks
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute n romantic ...loved it ..cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so this is soo good yaar pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey amazing concept.. liked it.,
Raghu has to woo her nw.. hmm interesting..:)
Keep writing update soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow lovely ...
Liked it
Update soon... :)

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