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Posted: 11 years ago
wow interesting ... next part sikiram update panunga ..
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CHAPTER THIRTY TWO

Karthi and Jaya @ corridor :

Karthi : yen Jaya ippadi pannaa ?

Jaya : edha solra ?

Karthi : naan kuduthadha thiruppi kuduthitta.. adhuvum enna ezhudhirukka adhula ?

Jaya : sariyaa dhaan ezhudhirukken..

Nee un life la proceed pannu Karthik... enakkaaga edhuvum maathikka vendaam..

Naandhaan thappaa nenachitten.. neeyum innamum enna LOVE pannittu iruke nu.. adhanaala dhaan propose panne nu nenachen..

aanaa.. ippo dhaan theriyudhu.. unakku enna nadandhadhu nu theriniji dhaan.. paridhaaba pattu.. Raji ya vittutu en kooda seralaam nu mudivu pannirukka..

Karthi : appadi illa Jaya..

Jaya : indha 6 maasa gap la... unakku innoru kaadhal vandhirukku.. idha naan edhir paakkala... unna eppadi naan namba mudiyum Karthik.. ?

Karthi : adhu... unna.. un anba miss pannadhaala vandhirukkalaam.. adhe maadhiri feeling Raji kitta vandhadhukkum unna deep ah love pannadhu kooda karanam ah irukkalaam..

Jaya : ok fine... adhu unmai na.. nee pinvaangi irukka koodaadhu..

Karthi : Jaya.. nee illaama naan eppadi irukka mudiyum nu enakku theriyala ..

Jaya : irundhirukkiye Karthik.. indha 6 maasam eppadi irundhiyo.. appadidhaan..

Ippavum enakku marriage aayiduchinu nenachikko..

Karthi : enna purinjikko Jaya..

Jaya : puriyudhu Karthik.. unakku onnu theriyumaa ? Chandru vum enga ammaa vum challenge pannaanga.. inneram vera ponnu kooda love la iruppen nu.. aanaa naandhaan.. appadi laam irukkaadhu nu naan romba confident ah sonnen..

aanaa .. adhu thappu nu nee puriya vachitta.. naan romba disappointment aayitten..

adhaan naan solren.. nee enakku vendaam karthik..

Karthi : (laughs)

Jaya : enna sirikkira ?

Karthi : enakku theriyum Jaya.. unnaala enna verukka mudiyaadhu.. yen.. en mela kovam irukkura maadhiri nadikkira ?

Jaya : edho onnu..

Now she changes her tone and speaks calmly.

Jaya : konjam kelu karthik.. Raji unakkaaga uyir ah kudukka thuninjaa nu therinjadhu ku apparam.. naan yen current situation therinjukkaama unna thedi vandheno nu thonudhu.. adhu ennoda thappu dhaan...

Karthi : yen ippadi ellaam pesura ?

Jaya : enakku idhu munnaadiye therinjirundhaa.. kandippa naan vandhirukka maatten daa.

Karthi : jayaa..

Jaya : poru daa.. naan mulusaa solli mudichiduren..

atleast .. Raji yaavadhu unga LOVE matter ah sollirukkalaam.. Susan kettappa.. appa therinjirundhaa kooda.. naan thirumba poiyiruppen..

enakku therinju..adhu mattum dhaan Raji senja thappu..



Lakshmi who started to leave for the day, tends to hear this speech.



Jaya : un mela paithiyamaa irukkura vera oru ponna nee kalyanam panradhula.. enakku sondhosham irukkaadhu nu nenachiyaa Karthi ?

Karthi : Jayaa..

Jaya : ofcourse.. naan hurt aagala.. disappoint aagala nu laam solla maatten.. kandippaa irukku..

But.. I feel happy for u daa..

Naan nallaa yosichu.. idhu dhaan unakku sari nu thonuchu..

Neeyum nallaa yosichu.. un mudiva maathikko daa.. ellaam sari aagidum..

Karthi : (silent)

Jaya : apparam.. innoru vishayam.. nee ippa Raji ya paadhiyila ye vittu tu vandhaa.. adhu.. unna vittu naan chandru kooda pona maadhiri dhaane.. ? unakku andha pain enna nu theriyum dhaane ?

Karthi : so.. idhu dhaan un mudivu. ?

Jaya : hmmm..

Karthi : sari OK.. nee kelambu..

Jaya : nee edhuvum innum sollaliye.. ?

Karthi : (angry) adhu ennoda problem.. thanks for ur time.. (leaves)

Jaya too leaves. Lakshmi had heard their conversation and goes to thinking mode.



Saturday :

Lakshmi calls Vishnu and asks if they can go out somewhere..

She asks about Karthi-Jaya love. Vishnu tells her as what happened in their life till now, even when she was in US.

Lakshmi also feels for Jaya's situation and recollects what she heard the previous day. Now she like Jaya more mainly because she is ready to move away for Karthik to be happy with Raji.

They are back home in the evening. Lakshmi gets a call from Jaya.

Jaya : Hello Lakshmi..

Laksh : haan.. sollunga Angel.. oh sorry..sorry.. Jaya..

Jaya : accommodation pathi sollirundhene.. edhavadhu therinjadhaa ?

Laksh : hmm.. en friend kitta check pannittu.. thirumbavum call pannattumaa ?

Jaya : hmmm.. no problem.. thanks..




Laksh : (thinks) Jaya inga thanguradhula endha thappum illa.. adhuvum.. Vishnu sonnadhu ku apparam.. ivlo panna Jaya vukku.. indha help kooda pannalanaa eppadi..

She decides and calls her back.


Laksh : Jaya.. ennoda room-mate Kavya naalaikku morning vacate panraa.. adhaan confirm pannen.. neenga venumnaa naalaikku evening eh kooda varalaam..

Jaya : oh Super.. naan ivlo seekkiram kedaikkum nu nenaikkala.. illanaa marubadiyum.. naalaikku vera engayaavadhu poi thedavendiyadhaa irundhirukkum.. thanks Lakshmi..

Laksh : idhukku edhukku thanks.. room free aachu.. sonnen.. apparam.. naalai ku vandhu paathuttu.. pidichirundhudhunaa.. neenga decide pannikkonga..

Jaya : adhellaam thevai illa.. pidikka enna irukku.. thanga edam kidachadhe perusu.. adhuvum neenga stay panren nu vera solreenga.. nallaa dhaan irukkum.. naan direct ah vandhiduren..

Laksh : hmmm.. OK.. naan exact address and landmark.. message pannuren..

Jaya : OK Lakshmi.. naan naalaikku evening 6'o clock munnaadi vandhiduren.. velakku vaikkira nerathukku munnaala.. by 5 o clock..

Laksh : ok.. welcome.. bye..



Sunday Evening :

Jaya comes to Lakshmi's house and waits outside the door. On hearing the calling bell.. Karthik comes to open the door.

Karthik did not expect Jaya. Even Jaya thinks .. 'what is he doing here ?'

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Posted: 11 years ago
mmm...Karthik Lakshmi veetle irukkaradhu jaya vukku theriyaadha?

ivanga rendu perum decide panradhukulle... oorukku pona raji wedding invitation oda varuvalo?😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks, Ramya for the update.
Pochida. Rendu perekum spark pennike pogethu. Hmmm...enaku ennemo KR serre mattangge nu thaan tonnuthe. Kadisile...KJ thaan serre poranghe thaneh?

Hmmm pavam Raji ku thaan kudepenne ellai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
laksh wanted ah thaan karthik kooda irukradha pathi jaya kita sollalayo...
ivangala serthu veika try panra madhiri iruke...but I like this twist...

Nice update ramya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Appo Raji-Karthi sera maataangala ramya???????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Ramya..
im worried abt Raji...eppadi thirumba vara poralonu..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting... Jaya's decision expected. Think Karthik wont change his decision. Dint expect Lakshmi to understand Jaya but will she help in uniting KJ - Lets c.. KJL staying together now its more interesting. Can expect lots of cute moments . Raji pathi onnume therila neriaya suspense vaikringa😉
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CHAPTER THIRTY THREE

Karthi opens the door and sees Jaya.

Jaya : Lakshmi ??

Karthi : ulla vaa... Lakshmi... ungala paakka vandhirukkaanga.. (moves aside)

Laksh : welcome home... eppadi irukku veedu.. ? pidichirukkaa ? idho.. indha room dhaan free.. neenga irukka poradhu.. poi paarunga..

Jaya : Vishnu vandhirukkaaraa ippo ?

Laksh : illaye... yen ?

Jaya : Karthik irukkaanla... adhaan ketten... ivan mattum dhaan vandhaanaa ?

Laksh : avan andha portion la irukkaan... ungalukku theriyaadhaa ?

Jaya : illa theriyaadhu... sari..appo naan kelamburen.. poi vera veedu paakkanum..

Laksh : yen... ennaachu ?

Jaya : illa... idhu sariyaa varaadhu..

Now Karthi comes to the hall..

Karthi : naan inga irukken la... adhaan.. avanga dhaan rendu perukkum naduvula onnum illa nu sonnavanga.. apparam inga thanguradhu la enna problem... ?

enakku ennamo... innum naan manasula irukken .. adhaan indha thayakkam nu thonudhu..

Jaya : Lakshmi... inga stay panradhu la enakku endha problem um illa.. but temporary dhaan.. vera idam kedacha udane.. move panniruven..

Laksh : sari.. unga wish.. ippa vaanga...

Lakshmi take her inside.

Monday morning : Karthi-Vishnu @ their seats...

Vish : apparam ennadaa machaan.. ? Jaya kitta pesuniyaa ?

Karthi : hmm... aamaa..

Vish : ennadaa sonnaaa ?

Karthi : chance eh illa nu sollittaa.. naan Raji kooda sandhosham ah irukkanum nu solraa..

Vish : oh... apparam..Lakshmi sonnaanga.. Jaya unga veetla stay panna vandhuttaa nu..

Karthi : aamaa daa.. aanaa.. naan anga irukken nu theriyaama vandhirukkaa..

Vish : oh... nee sollalayaa munnadiye ?

Karthi : enga daa solradhu ? annaikku oru naal dhaan free ah pesunom.. annaikku night eh hospital vandhu.. suicide issue.. adhu idhu nu poiduchu..

Vish : vidu machaan... All is Well... Unna pathi enakku nallaa theriyum.. Jaya ippa pakkathula ye irukkaa.. kandippaa unna purinjippaa..

Raji comes to her place..

Vish : Good morning Raji..

Raji : Good morning..

Vish : apparam.. enna special indha dhadava... oorukku poiyirundheengale..

Raji : eppavum poladhaan...

Vish : ada.. summaa sollunga Raji..

Raji : adhe kalyana pechu dhaan..

Vish : adhu OLD news Raji..

Raji : aamaa... aanaa vishayam pudhusu..

Vish : enna Raji adhu ?

Karthi : dei.. chummaa irukka maatta...? Moodittu velaiya paarudaa..


Later : Laksmi and Raji @ corridor.

Raji : indha Karthi ya paaru lakshmi.. sariyaa ve pesa maattenguraan.. ellaam andha Jaya naala dhaan..

adhaan.. sari varaadhu nu pirinjittaanga la.. apparam yen marubadiyum varanum ?

Laksh : yen Jaya mela ivlo kovamaa irukka ?

Raji : yen nu unakke theriyum... apparamum en kitta kekkura Lakshmi..

Laksh : (mind voice) avangala pathi unakku ippa theriyala Raji.. adhaan ippadi pesura..

Even after 2 days, Raji is continuing scolding Jaya and polambifies to lakshmi.

Laksh : konjam amaidhiyaa iru Raji..

Raji : enga veetla enna nadandhadhu nu theriyumaa Lakshmi ?

Naane idha edhirpaarkkala.. enga appa ippadi ketpaaru nu..

Laksh : puriyira maadhiri sollu di..

Raji : pona vaaram oorukku poiyirundhen la.. naan yaaraiyaavadhu virumburen naa nu appa kettaaru..

Laksh : appadiyaa... yen dhideernu ?

Raji : athai dhaan solliruppaanga nu nenakkiren.. konja naala ah naan normal ah illaadhadha vachi edhaavadhu solliruppaanga..

Laksh : nee enna di sonna appa kitta..

Raji : naan edhuvum sollala..

Laksh : loose ah di nee... ? Karthi ya pathi sollirukkalaam la ?

Raji : ennadi solla solra ? avandhaan Jaya va dhaan LOVE panren nu thelivaa solraan la..

appave ippadi ketkkum bodhu... ennalaa solla mudiyaadha nelama vandhiduchu..

ippo puriyudhaa en.. kovathukkaana kaaranam..

Laksh : hey... adhu periya vishayam eh illa..

Raji : enna ?

Laksh : neenga rendu perum serndhiduveenga... Jaya Karthi kitta.. unkooda avan sandhosham ah irukkuradha dhaan aasappaduraa..

She tells what she heard on that day and also what she got to know from Vishnu about KJ's past.

Raji : (feels)

Laksh : ennadi yosikkura ? ippadi sodhappittiye ?

Raji : adhu oru problem illa.. naan appakitta.. konjam time kudunga solren nu dhaan sollirukken..

adhutha time pogum bodhu sollitta pochu..

Both Raji and Lakshmi leave happily..


Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the quick and short update ramya
Cant wait for next😉😉

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