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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello my dearies!
Just now a new idea came to me and I think I should write an OS on it for of course Yuvreen!
But before I write I think I have written a lot before on his Forum so if you guys are not bored of my OSs then I'll surely write the main part up.Just now I am only giving a teaser to give you an idea of the plot.

~Teaser~

"Yuvraj mere baat samajhne ki koshish karo...socho jo maine kaha...jo rishta ka koi matlab nahi hota usko tod dena chahiye...jab tum kissi aur se pyaar karte ho tum kabhi mere saath khush nahi reh sakte..."Suvreen said pleading to him.
Yuvraj stays silent and remembers the times he had spent with her-Shilpa,his best friend.Next he remembers the times he spent together with Suvreen.
"Yuvraj main jaanti hoon ki hum dono ek saath kayi samay tak rahe hue hain par dekho tum mere saath bas kuch hi saalon se rahe ho...par Shilpa ke saath...tumhara bachpan bhi uss se juda hai...maine kayi baar dekha hai,tum jitna care tumhare mann mein uske liye hai utna tum mere liye nahi rakh sakte kyunki mein sirf tumhara girlfriend hoon,par woh tumhara pyaar hai Yuvraj...tum mere saath khush nahi reh sakte"
When Yuvraj stood there with no reaction Suvreen turned to the girl next to her Shilpa and started saying to her-"Tum toh iss laddoo ke tarah buddhu nahi ho na Shilpi...tum toh apne pyaar ko samajh sakte ho na"
Shilpa's eyes were full with tears and she silently nodded in a 'yes'
Yuvraj then finally accepted that he cared for Shilpa more than Suvreen and so he also accepted Suvreen's words.
"Tu theek keh rahi hai topper"
Suvreen smiled through her tears and Yuvraj suddenly turned hugged Shilpa and murmured a 'sorry' to her for not accepting his feelings before but still he was confused whether he loved Shilpa or not. (Idiot!!! :P)
Then they broke apart and turned to Suvreen.
"Sor...sorry topper...mai...main tumh.."
Suvreen-"Its ok Yuvraj...main khush hoon ki ab tum dono saath ho..." she said smiling through her tears.
Shilpa also hugged Suvreen-"Thank you Suvi...mujhe sach dikhaane ke liye thank you"
Yuvraj-"Lekin topper,ab hum dono friends toh ban hi sakte hain na"
Suvreen laughed-"Haan buddhu...laddoo hai bilkul tera brain"
Everyone laughed and Shilpa hugged Yuvraj again.
Yuvraj was happy that he got his bestfriend but still he had a unusual feeling.'Maybe its a feeling of guilt for SUVREEN'he thought and shrugged it off.
Suvreen was happy seeing them together buts still she felt unusual and uneasy.
"Mujhe aise bura kyun lag raha hai...main toh Yuvraj se pyaar bhi nahi karti...hum dono kitne dino tak ek saath rahe shayad issliye" and she too shrugged off the thought without both of them knowing that FIRST LOVE CAN CAST ITS MAGIC AT TIMES!!!

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Ok so this is lil weirdo types I guess...coz you might have seen best friend sacrificing her love for another one but this is unusual that a girlfriend sacrifices her love on realising the truth that her boyfriend really loves someone else and still feelings keep wandering in her heart!...well thats because I try to try out new things and hope this is not that weird that I will get stones...so taking by a precaution I am just posting a teaser for now.If you like it then tell me I will post the main OS soon,if not then I will drop the idea...please be honest!

Love
Sahas

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sujairohit thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sahas its very good,do continue,something different from the usual story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww sahas
its amazing
im late so sorry for that
do continue
its just epic
fantastic
superb
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Sahas its very good,do continue,something different from the usual story.

sucheta jiji I'm glad dat u lykd it...lets see wat others say...yeah wantd to write sumthing different thugh its gonna be a lil hard for me😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumayyah1

awww sahas
its amazing
im late so sorry for that
do continue
its just epic
fantastic
superb
thanx for the pm

thnks sumayu😳
hey u r not at all late...2nd one to cmmnt...thts fair ri8?😉
well lemme see😕
thnku dear😳
u a welcum😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice Sahas... unique concept...
lovely teaser...

do continue... will wait fr OS main part...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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v nice concept sahas...:-D...its quite diff frm d stry
nywazzz i likd it n of corzzz u shld write d main prt:-))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept Sahas
something different.. looking forward to it
do write it soon
Linnet thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow

It was an amazing teaser

Do write more sahas.

Will be waiting

Love
Linnet
😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Grt teaser sahas...
Plz do continue soon:-)

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