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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys firstly I had promised to give this OS long back but I didn't I had written it then but never posted it and I think I could have made it longer but I cudn't do that too. so finally thought to post as far as I finished... so please accept my apologies...
It's continued from the episode when suvi had decided to leave Mumbai and was going back to kathgodam..
PERFECT TWO

Suvi:I don't have anything, sab ne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Mumbai mere liye correct place hai hi nahi. Maine sab kuch peeche chod diya hai and I'm never going to turn back.

M.G: Kya hua Suvi beta? Tu thik toh haina? Beeti baton ko soch kar apne aap ko koso matt. Jo hona tha woh ho gaya. Apni zindagi nayi shuruat kar.

Suvi: Haan.

Though she nodded in a yes but still she kept looking outside the train compartment in her thoughts with only one person in it, Yuvraj. Suddenly she sees someone and is left shocked. And she rushes to the train gate.

Suvi: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Yuvi: Mujhe toh hamesha se yahin hona chahiya tha Topper.

Suvi: Kyun?

Yuvi: Tere liye, humare liye. Mujhe aisa nai karna chahiye tha. I'm sorry. Tu toh janti hai na main jab gusse mein hota hun toh mujhe sambhalna kitna mushkil hota hai. Please na Topper.

Suvi: Par...

Yuvi: Main janta hun. Maine bahut galatiyan ki hai aur tune uss har galti ko maaf kiya. Kya ye galti itni badi hai ki tu mujhe maaf nai kar sakti?

He kneels down holding her hands.

Main tujhe promise karna chahta hun ki main tera hath kabhi nai chodunga, marte dum tak tere saath rahunga.

Ms. Suvreen Baldev Guggal, kya tum in sab mein mera saath dogi? He asks her with a ring in his hand.

Suvi crying: You are not.!?

Yuvi: Yes I am. I'm proposing you.

Yuvraj is looking for his answer desperately. And Suvreen is all shocked and wondering what to answer and suddenly starts thinking of her parents.All that was roaming in her mind was "Mumma Puppa kya kahenge?" Just then Puppa G. comes and sees all this and then Suvreen watches her dad. But to her surprise puppa g signaled her by blinking his eyes in acceptance.

Suvi delighted: Yes.

Yuvi: I Love You!

They both hug, they remember all the moments they shared together from their first meet to their serious fights.. They knew whenever they used to fight there was love hidden sumwhere in their hearts.. and it was true... YuvReen The couple was Destined to be together forever... beause love has no language.. Everyone says you only fall in love once but that's not true I feel that they fall in love all over again every time they meet. Because true love does not have a happy ending. True love has no ending... YUVREEN WILL NEVER END. THEY'LL STAY IN OUR HEARTS FOREVER AND EVER!! <3 <3


It's a disaster I know please throw sum chappals and andas and stuff kyunki if i don't get same gaalis and stuff I'm sure I'm never gonna update my FF.. need some confrontation... Please Maaf kar dena..(not to my friends.. allee sab hi toh yahan mere friends hai)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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le aloo,le tamatar,le chappal,le sade hue ande,le gandhi socks...par sirf utna hi kyun le phool,le chocos,le balloons,le gifts,le hugs,le wishes...woh ande,joote n stuff is for not updating ur FF n morever for not posting this OS earlier and all the goody goody things are for ur amazing writing!!!!
Toh hua na...taaliyaan taaliyaan saath mein bahot saari gaaliyan!!! :P
Aakhir gaaliyan toh friends hi dete hai na...aur mein toh teri behena bhi hun...toh itna haq toh hai na...:P
Loved it fully...it was short but sweet!
Thanks for the pm and do keep writing more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow me first to cmmnt dhinka-chika :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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3 baar post kiya hai tune sissy ... waise gaaliyan kha kar achalaga lekin zaada acha mujhe tumhare chocolates hugs etc. lage... kya karti yaad hi nai tha i had written such a thing aaj phone go thru kiya tab dekha maine so decided to post after editing it a bit... jaankar acha laga u lykd it... tujhe sab haq hai sissy.. will never stop u.. Waise humari teacgerji is very bhulakkad... kyun?? just like me traits toh milte julte hain humare...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS choti behna...

yuvreen together...wowww... love u fr dis one...🤗

ande chappal ka to sochna padhega😉

chal chod u to meri chotti si behna hai...😛 ...

gud work sweeto
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranjas

lovely OS choti behna...

yuvreen together...wowww... love u fr dis one...🤗

ande chappal ka to sochna padhega😉

chal chod u to meri chotti si behna hai...😛 ...

gud work sweeto



shukriya shukriya.. aap logon ke pyaar ne mujhe bigaad diya hai...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: McSteamy

3 baar post kiya hai tune sissy ... waise gaaliyan kha kar achalaga lekin zaada acha mujhe tumhare chocolates hugs etc. lage... kya karti yaad hi nai tha i had written such a thing aaj phone go thru kiya tab dekha maine so decided to post after editing it a bit... jaankar acha laga u lykd it... tujhe sab haq hai sissy.. will never stop u.. Waise humari teacgerji is very bhulakkad... kyun?? just like me traits toh milte julte hain humare...


haan...chatterbox hun na😆😆
chal aur bhi bonus milenge tujhe hugs wagera ke😉...aur ek gaali bhi...mere SS mein cmmnt kar...aur apna cmmnt unres kar...res karke baithi hui hai aram se😡😡
ohh no probs...atleast u updated it now😃...chal haq toh aise hi aa jata hai...u r so close to my heart😳...haan...dono ko badam khaana padega😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: McSteamy



shukriya shukriya.. aap logon ke pyaar ne mujhe bigaad diya hai...😆😆



hehehe...didi teri behna bigaadi jaye re🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranjas



hehehe...didi teri behna bigaadi jaye re🤣

kya kare pagalon ka virus jo faila hai🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash


haan...chatterbox hun na😆😆
chal aur bhi bonus milenge tujhe hugs wagera ke😉...aur ek gaali bhi...mere SS mein cmmnt kar...aur apna cmmnt unres kar...res karke baithi hui hai aram se😡😡
ohh no probs...atleast u updated it now😃...chal haq toh aise hi aa jata hai...u r so close to my heart😳...haan...dono ko badam khaana padega😆



kab ka unres kar diya dikta nai hai..

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