RaNtara OS: Bleed (13/12)

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heyy guys..here is a new OS.. i had this idea from a long time..but din't get time to write it..Please read this os...and let me know your views...

B L E E D

Hello..
can u plz come outside...
what happened?
Raghu is not well...i think you he might need you to take him to his room...he is on XYZ place..
oh! coming.. n call was hang up..

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It was 11 AM..raghu woke up..he was having a bad headache..n had some muscle pain too..
when did i came back??...he stretched out and thought..
last thing he remember was he was coming out from some party...
n he heard a knock on his door...he got up from the bed and opened the door..

heyy...
so, u're up.. i hv been checked u 3 times...
yeah!! i was sleepy..
u were drunk... what?
you don't remember...DUDE..!!
obviously..!!
last night i made so many efforts to bring you back to your room..if guard would have seen you like that..then only god knows what have happened?
you brought me here..but i was in party i think..
yes..!! Antara called me...
ANtara?? hmm..now u freshen up..we have work to do..and he left..
Antara..i was with her last night..yes we were at the party...no no..wait..we came back together...
n suddenly he reminded something... "oh no no NO NOOO..!! oh god..!! shit..!! no..."
he called Antara..but her phone was switched off... he called one of her friend...
Heyy Ambi...can i talk to Antara...her phone is switched off...
Heyy raghu..i hvn't seen her since last night.. i think u both came bk together...
oh! n he hang up the call..
he brushed his hands in his hairs and freshened up in hurry...
he went to the mess and sat there for whole 1.5 hour.. but ANtara din't come for lunch.. he asked a few of her friends..she hvn't come in morning as well..
he was getting restless..and he was trying to call her continuously...but no response..

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2 girls knocked her door..but no response..they thought she might be sleeping so they left... they came to her room in evening but it was locked..
it's been 3 days..Raghu hvn't seen Antara...
her friends saw her and talked her..but she din't talk much..now they were not worried at all..as they have already seen her...when raghu asked them again..they told him that yes she is in hostel only...

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Antara was sitting in mess for dinner...all alone...some of the girls were about to join her..when she pretended to be on a call and they sat on another table..
Raghu was sitting a little far from her and was continuously looking at her... she was eating very silently when a guy came from behind and said.. "woahh!!!..."
she got scared and was about to scream..she dropped the spoon... heyy..m sorry..i was just...and he touched on her shoulder..and she trembled...
"what's wrong.."nothing...i just got scared..he left from there..
Rgahu saw all this..and got up immediately.. a lone tear escaped from his eyes...
he walked towards antara...she saw him and a pain appeared in her eyes..he could see that.. she continued eating... he called her...but she din't reply... he sat on same table..but she avoided him...
once she was done..she left from mess...he followed her...
it was pretty dark outside and she was walking without looking at the direction she was going in..

he called her..but she kept walking...
suddenly he held her hand and pulled her in a corner...she tried to freed her hand..but he was stronger than her... he pushed her into the wall..
Antara...Raghu leave me..and she tried to freed herself..
Antara talk to me,,,he pushed her more...
Raghu let me go..he pressed his hands on her's...
he looked into her eyes...talk to me...
I SAID LEAVE ME RAGHU...YOU'RE HURTING ME...AGAIN...

a lone tear escaped from her eyes..and he too cried..
Antara I am sorry... i know i have hurt you a lot...
no you don't... you know nothing..
i do..i m sorry for everything...
raghu let me go.. n dare you ever come in front of me..i don't even want to see your face...

She walked away..and Raghu again held her hand..and she slapped him tight...
how dare you to touch me...
he din't care about her anger and pulled her again in a corner...
Antara please you want to slap me..then do it.. you want to kill me..then go ahead..but talk to me.
i m sorry for what i've done that day...

No raghu you are not..because you don't know anything...anything... she cried and slapped him again...and again...
you were my best friend..i trusted you... i loved you...and you...??
his eyes got widened hearing that from her...
you have broken me into pieces... I can never forgive you...
she got up and tried to walk away..but he din't let her...
i don't know someone mixed something in my drink..i think i was drugged..
But I am truly sorry that i misbehaved you...
Misbehaved..???
you call it misbehave...she slid her sleeve from her shoulder and showed her...he was shocked..Raghu you tried to r*** me..
do you call it misbehave...she pulled her sleeve above her elbow and lifted her lower a little..
you still call it misbehave....there were all bandages over her arm and legs..she was hurt very bad..
i was locked in my room for three days..i was shocked and couldn't believe that you did that to me..
i loved you so much..and what you did to me...you ruined me...

Antara..m sorry..i din't know all this...
stop it raghu...u knew it all the time raghu... you did knew it..when i was asking you to stop...
you din't listen a word...

- - - FLASHBACK - - -

Raghu: Today I'll propose her for sure...i think she loves me too..
Satya: But i don't think so...look...and Raghu saw in which direction satya was pointing...
she was dancing with karan..and she was enjoying...
hmm..so they are friends... but they seem to be more than that..

Satya tried to poisoned his mind..and he did it pretty well..
Raghu was angry...all his love flew away when he saw antara n karan dancing together..


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RaNtara were coming back together...Raghu was feeling dizzy...Satya drugged him in his drinks..
and now he was losing his control...
Raghu..i think you're not well...i'll one o your friend..he will take you to your room..and i think i should leave now..
she left..and he followed her again...
in a few seconds he pulled her behind a wall...it was very dark here...
they weren't even able to see each other...
Raghu what happened.. leave me..
DO you love him??who?
don't be so innocent... do you love him..
who are you talking about.. and leave me..you're hurting me..
answer me damn it...the guy you were dancing with..do you love him...
what's it up to you...
why were you dancing with him...?
Raghu you know he is my friend.. n yours too.. now leave me..
no he is not..satya is right.. you love him..
but understand one thing very well..you're only mine..
Raghu you're drunk.. let me go...we will talk tomorrow..
NO!! he shouted... did he propose you...??
No.. why would he.. he knows that i...
you what.. tell me you what.. i hated him so much when he was dancing with you...
and he threw Antara on the floor.. She was hurt..but he din't care.. dare you talked him again...
i won't spare you... he was loosing his control by now..and Antara was very scared..
she tried to get up and leave..but he held her hand and twisted her arm..she screamed in pain..he closed her mouth with his hand..
Ssshhh!!
he won't come here...
you're mine..only mine...
she tried to freed her self.. but he pushed her on floor..
blood was oozing out from her legs and ankle.. she was crying in pain..

Raghu let me go.. you're not in senses.. and you know that we are friends.. and...she was about to say that she loves him only..
but he din't let her speak and slammed his lips on hers...
she was shocked.. she always wanted to kiss him..but like this... never...
tears were rolling on her cheeks..and her eyes were all red.. you love him.. don't you..
i knew it.. that's why you danced with him but not me...
he was not in his senses at all..he kissed her again..and bit her skin..he rubbed her arms with his hand..and hit her legs with his..and pressed his body on her and snuggled into her hairs..
she tried a lot to release her self..and he did what was totally unexpected from him..yes he was drunk but that much..??.. he slapped her...and tried to tear her dress...he slid his hands in her dress and rubbed her skin..she was feeling disgusted..he pinched her skin and she cried...he bit on her neck..
she pushed him away with all her strength..and ran...
he was lying on the floor...mumbling her name...

she was in her room...crying badly..she loved him so much..and what he did...after a few minutes she called Karan..and told him that Raghu is not well..and he is on XYZ place...and she cut the call...and cried her heart out...

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Raghu was hell shocked hearing all this.. he couldn't believe his ears..he loved her..how could he do that with her...
just because he was drunk or some one poisoned his mind..
doesn't mean he won't trust Antara...
and after knowing the fact that she also loved him..he was broken..but his mistake was unforgiven... he cried..and asked antara to forgive him...
but she din't listen him...
she was about to leave...when he pulled her... he kissed her hands and kissed on her neck...
I am sorry Antara..I would never hurt you again.. I am sorry...
I don't want to lose you..

You have already lost me... and you don't deserve me..
Yes, he doesn't deserve her...he leaned on wall and sat there.. thinking about those pleading eyes of hers which haunts him now..
I wish I would have listened to you ANtara...I wish I would have believed you... I should have trusted the person i loved...You're right..i don't deserve you...
I deserve only your hatred....she pushed him away...and left from there...
Antara...love me or hate me or punish me..but please don't leave me...she heard him..but din't turn...
he kept staring her going far from him...


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woooaaahh!!! guys..don't throw tomatoes on me for writing such an os...n sorry finally i have included that sattu in my os..lol..but i hope u guys liked it..
do leave ur comments/suggestions/ questions.. do hit the like button..
thanks for reading...love u loads..

-akki

Please buddy "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs for my other OS/FF
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.Shivam. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey it was good!
Satya the big mind changer! 😡
Thnks for d PM 😊
Love reading ur works!
Edited by .Shivam. - 11 years ago
DamRyeong thumbnail
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@all readers... guys sorry for including Satya in this OS.. but i couldn't find any other name for villain...lol..
Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was nice yr...satya jahan h wahn to kuch na kuch galat hota hi hai..
Dear i must say ur are really versatile writer keep writing yr...
Thanks
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
arun-deeps thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely job dear!
keep dem coming!
DamRyeong thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@shivam, suchita..do read it fatafat and comment..😡😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amfi123

loved it but sad ending

thanks a lot.. yep!! i know..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome OS.. i am a fan of ur writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arun-deeps

Lovely job dear!
keep dem coming!

thank u gunia..
u must be thinking what kind of updates this girl is giving...lol..
she is in ramadal and giving updates like if she is in Ravandal...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetiePie25

awesome OS.. i am a fan of ur writing..

thank u sooo much...😳

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