Taarey: Jab pyaar kisi se hota hai- COMPLETED

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Hello Readers...
i knw i knw mere ffs are pending... and i m starting a new one.. but ye mera mann kar raha tha.. and dont worry i will complete others too...

Synopsis:
It is a story about our hero (REY) and our cutely wierd heroine (TAANI)... though love is something which u can say was at first sight... but there marriage was still an arranged one... and most probably forced one from girls side...!! lets see what happens when they realise that it is the love that binds them from their first meet!!



CHARACTER SKETCH:


REYAANSH SINGHANIA: hot dude of St. Louis, GS of the college... a heat throb...all the girls drool over him... very rich as he is the son of one of the leading business tycoons of india... and a GREAT DANCER... have two bffs SHARON and SWAYAM.. and in heart likes KRIYA alot and is thinking to propose her on her birthday!!


SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT: cute and charming guy of St. Louis... ACS of the college and a great dancer... girls drool over him too.. very rich.. his father is best friend and business partner with singhanias... rey is his bff.. loves sharon and has proposed her and now waiting for her answer... has two sisters... KRIYA and TAANI... loves them alot and is very protective towards them being a elder brother.. knows rey likes kriya and is going to propose her and is nt at all uncomfortabl with it...


SHARON RAIPRAKASH: DIVA of the college... CS of St. Louis.. and a fabulous dancer... has alot of attitude as she is also very rich... her father is also a dancer.. and is the owner of the NO 1 dancing institute of india... has two bff.. rey and taani.. likes swayam alot... confused about being in a relationship with swayam...she is excited abt her bff coming to mumbai... she kind of has a ego clash with kriya...


TAANI SHEKHAWAT: she is a sweet, kind and a generous but a very beautiful girl living in delhi with her dad...at present she completed her study from delhi university.. and very soon is going to mumbai to jooin st. louis just like her siblings.. bff of sharon.. and she is her childhood friends from delhi... and still in contact with her.. sharon knows about taani coming to mumbai...


KRIYA SHEKHAWAT: she is preety, kind, and a beautiful girl... is the AGS of St. Louis... she is a great dancer.. egoo clash with sharon.. likes rey... but cannot accept it as she is hiding something big from everyone...rest to be revealed in the story...


so guys tell me whether i should continue or not...



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plz continue
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awesome ...update soon😊
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nice concept part 1update soon...
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PART :1
delhi:
a girl is sleeping on a round bed. and has a sweet smile on her face. suddenly the alarm rings...
girl wakes up..and prays to krishna ji... thats the entry of taani...

taani: gudmorning krishna ji!! thank u mujhe ek aur din dikhane k liye... aise hi hamesha meri raksha kijiyega... aur bhai aur kriya ka bhi...

then she goes to bathroom and freshens up..

in the hall...
mr shekhawat is waiting for his daughter to come down..
taani comes down with a suitcase...
mr shekhawat: gudmorning taani.. i hope tumne apni packing kar li hai...tumhare flight ka time ho raha hai...

taani: yes dad!! maine packing kar li.. baki ki requirements mumbai mein shopping kar lungi...

dad: okay... and haan maine mohan ko bol dia hai wo tumhe lene aa jayega.. so swayam n kriya ko pata nahi chalega...

taani: no dad!! mohan kaka ko mana kar dijiye.. sharon mujhe lene aa rahi hai.. usne bola hai ki wo aayegi..
dad: okay beta theek hai...chalo main tumhe airport drop kar deta hoon

taani: yes dad


both reach airport...
dad: hugs taani.. okay beta take care...
and inform me as soon as u reach mumbai...

taani: okay day.. and will miss u...
dad: will miss u too.. ab mere teeno bachche sath mein rahenge...
taani: yes dad.. okay main chalti hun.. flight ki announcement ho gayi hai... i wl call u.. bye
dad: bye

taani boards the flight.. and finally reaches mumbai...


mumbai:
as usual rey, swayam, sharon and gang are in college doing rehearsals and attending classes..

(okay guys.. here is a thing i missed in cs that sharon knows taani is swayam's sis and taani knows sharon likes swayam.. but swayam doesnt know that taani and sharon are bffs. but he knws that sharon has a bff in delhi but doesnt know the name.. and rey and taani dont knw each other... business partner waali baat sirf rey, swayam and kriya ko pata hai.. that is also a reason they are so close to each other)

RH:
sharon: okay guys i have to go to airport aaj meri best friend delhi se aa rahi hai...
swayam: delhi se??
sharon: haan.. kyu any problem...??

kriya: nahi sharon, bhai ke bolne ka matlab tha ki hamari sis bhi delhi mein reheti hain kaash wo bhi yahan aati...

sharon (thinking): kriya.. dont worry tumhari koi wish for the first main puri karungi.. coz meri bff unfortunately tumhari sis hai... bt i cant believe tum dono mein itna diffrence hai...

swayam: kya hua sharon?? where r u lost??

sharon: whatever !! nw i m getting late... bye guys.. shaam ko milte hai mere ghar pe...

gang: haan okies.. bye

sharon left and rey entered...
rey: swayam ye sharon itni jaldi mein kahan chali gayi?? rehearsals nahi karni kya?
swayam: uski delhi se bff aa rahi hai.. usey pick karne airport gayi hai...
rey: thinking.. bff?? mere alawa sharon ki jo bff hai wo aaj aa rahi .. ab toh usse milna hi padega...
okay

airport...

sharon is waiting near her car...
someone taps her on her shoulder...
sharon turns.. and hugs that person excitedly...

sharon: taaaniii!!! i m soo happy ki tum finally yahan aa hi gayi.. i missed u babes...

taani: sharon.. stop i cant breathe...
sharon: ohh sorry.. bt i missed u gal..
taani: i missed u too... and hugs her.. and i even missed bhai n kriya...

sharon: ohhh!!!
taani: common sharon lets go home.. i have to give surprise to bhai n kriya...

sharon: lets go. i wil drop u to ur house.. and btw e all r meeting at my place today.. u will come there too.. i want to introduce my bff to the gang...
taani: okay...

then sharon drops taani at taakriyam house...
taani: bye.. c u in da evening
sharon: bye.. and welcum to mumbai...

taani enters the house and sharon leaves...

aah!! finish...
i hope u all enjoy reading...


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Awesome update...taani in mumbai
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PART: 2

Taani enters the house and settles down.. as her dad has already done the arrangements and also her room is designed according to her preferences...

Its 4 pm n. and she knew that it was the time swayam n kriya wud come back...
taani: ramu kaka gate khula rehene dijiye...
ramukaka: ji bitiya.. waise ek baat bolu??
taani: jee kaka boliye naa.
ramukaka: betiya tumhare aane se is ghar mein jaan aa gayi...
hume tumhari kami bht khalti thi...
jab 5 saal pehele hum yahan aaye the.. tab se

taani: goes to kaka.. and hugs him and says.. ab toh main aa gayi hun na...
ab aapko meri yaad nahi aayegi...

suddenly taani hears some sound coming from outside...
taani: kaka... aap kitchen mein jaiye... main yahan dekh lungi...
ramukaka: jee bitiya...

swayam: arey ye gate kisne khula choda...
kriya: chodo na bhai.. kaka ne khula chodh dia hoga
swayam: hmm.. chalo...

the moment they enters.. kriya shouts
kriya: taani...??????😛
swayam: taani...

taani: rum=ns and hugs swayam...
taani: bhai...!!
swayam: twirls her around.. omg taani.. tum yahan ?? kab? kaise?? bataya kyun nahi??
taani: bhai pehele mujhe niche toh utaro...

swayam puts taani down...
taani-kriya hugs...

kriya: taani what a surprise..
taani: haan kriya.. SURPRISE...
bhai ab bolo ye surprise apko n kriya ko kaisa laga??

kriyam: awesome.. we missed u soo much!!
taani: missed u both too.. isiliye toh yahan aa gayi.. and ab main apke sath hi apke college mein padhungi..

swayam: wow.. this is a real surprise...
kriya: not onli this.. i m surprised seei ng u like this.. tumhari dressing toh bht change ho gayi hai.. u r wearing a short dress...wow...

taani: yup.. tumne kaha tha na mujhe apne liye change ho na chahiye.. toh see.. here im new taani shekhawat...

swayam hugs both his sisters...

swayam: okay chalo.. now u both go and rest...
shaam ko hum teeno dinner pe chalenge...

but before kriya cud say anything...
taani: aaj shaam ko kaise jaa sakte hain bhai... aaj toh sharon k ghar jaana hai.. aap kaise bhul sakte ho??
swayam: arey haan.. but wait tumhe kaise pata...

taani: surprise surprise!!
kriya: come on taani batao na...

taani: wo isiliye main hi sharon ki wo bff hun jo aaj delhi se aayi hai
kriyam: what???

taani: haan!!
swayam: tum?? par kaise??

taani: wo isiliye qki in school she was a year elder to me.. then we became friends.. and now we r bff.. technically from childhood onli...
and she knew u before joining st. louis as i have already shown her ur and kriya's pics and she i also know that u all study togethe

swayam: wow!! thats great... isnt it kriya??
kriya: yeah.. (thinking) it means taani ne sharon ko bataya tha ki woh yahan aa rahi hai.. but hume nahi.. kya soch rahi hai kriya.. wo isiliye kyuki wo tujhe and bhai ko surprise dena chahti thi...

taani: haan.. chalo.. ab aaplog thoda rest kar lo.. tab tak main aaplogo k liye chocolate cake banati hun...
bhai apko wo bht pasand hai na mere haath ka...

swayam: haan.. but aaj nahi.. tum wo sab kal baana.. tum bht thaki hui hogi
taani: nahi bhai main aaj hi banaungi... waise bhi maine sharon se promise kia hai.. uske liye bhi leke jana hai...

kriya: matlab tum bhi wahan chalogi??
taani: ofcourse..

swayam: okay chalo then...main jaa raha apne room mein...
kriya: main bhi...

kriyam leaves and taani goes into the kitchen...
taani makes two cakes.. one for swayam and kriya and one for sharon

its the evening 7pm...
swayam: taani.. kriya jaldi aao
hum late ho jayenge
and sharon hume maar dalegi...

kriya comes wearing...


kriya: main ready hun bhai. tani kahan hai??

taani: yahan!!!!!

taani's dress...




swayam: ow taani... tum bahot achchi lag rahi ho!!
taani: thanks bhai...
swayam: but itni choti dress...
taani: come on bhai.. ye fashion hai...
kriya: haan bhai... taani tum bahot pretty lag rahi ho...
taani: thanks kriya.. and hugs her.. and then says chale...????
warna siren baj jayega...

swayam: is shocked...
kriya is confused.. as she knws about swayam's love towards sharon but not the siren thing

swayam: taani!! how do u knw??
taani: bhai.. do u think sharon mujhse kuch bhi hide karegi... grinning widely...
swayam: ohh

kriya: matlab? tumdono kya baat kar rahe ho?
swayam: kuch nahi kriya!!
pleading with eyes to taani.. not to say anything...
taani: haan kritya.. kuch nahi chalo.. late ho rahi hai...


they all leave.. and reaches sharon's place...

swayam: girls tum dono chalo.. main car park ke aata hun...
taani: okay bhai...
taani opens the door and runs inside...

kriya: taani sambhal ke...
swayam: rehene do kriya.. wo nahi sunegi.. pagal
kriya: yeah kahin wo fir se naraz na ho jaye.. is baar naraz hogi toh pata nahi kitne saalon baad milegi.. is baar 5 saal the...
swayam: hmmm
tum chlo main aata hun...

inside:

sharon: hugs taani.. welcome taani..
taani: thanks sharon.. tumhare friends nahi aaye??
sharon: nahi sab aate hi honge!! waise swayam??
taani: haan bhai aaye hain bas aa rahe hain

kriya enters...
taani: dekho kriya bhi aa gayi
kriya: hey sharon...
sharon: hi!!
taani chalo main tumhe apna ghar dikhati hun..
taani: okay chalo...

shaani leaves...
kriya: i knw sharon tum mujhse nafrat arti ho.. qki tumhe lagta hai ki main rey k right choice nahi hun.. but mai tumhe yakeen dilaun ki main khud rey k kareeb nahi aana chahti.. wki unhe sirf takleef hi de sakti hun...

then she goes and sits on the sofa...
swayam alog with the gang...

rey: hey kriya!!
kriya: hey!!
rey: sharon kahan hai??
kriya: wo taani ko apna room dikhane gayi hai..
rey: taani? kaun taani????
kriya: wo... (but isse pehele ye kuch keh paati...)

swayam: wo meri behen hai ad sharon ki bff jo delhi se aayi hai!!
rey and gang are shocked...
rey: what? matlab teri behen sharon ki bff hai.. jiski sharon itni taareef karti hai??
swayam: haan!!
nil: waah swayam, teri toh nikal padi ab toh sharon tujhe mana nahi kar payegi... teri behen uski bff jo hai...

shaani come there...

sharon: kya baatein ho rahi hai??
vicky: kuch nahi.. waise ye taani hai na??
taani: yes i m taani. taani shekhawat bhai i mean swayam and kriya ki behen.. and apke CS ki bff...
rey is bold seeing such a beuty standing before him...


neha: hi taani. neha it is!!
taani: hi neha!! and she hugs neha..
neha is surprised with the sudden hug...

swaron: uski habbit hai jab bhi kisi se milti hai hug karti hai...
and they see each other...

rinni: hi i m rinni...
simmi: i m simmi...
amar: amar!!
bharat:: aur apun bharat
vicky: main vicky..
aashi: mera name types aashi hai
nil: mera name nilesh hai.. but my friends call me nil...

taani hugs all of them... boys as usual a little longer time taani ko hug karne main...

taani 2 rey: aur aap???
rey: i m reyaansh singhania!!
my friends call me rey...

taani: hi rey.. i m taani...
rey: i said my friends calls me rey. u r nt my frnd yet.. so i m reyansh for u...
taani doesnt want to fight...
taani: okay hi reyaansh i m taani.. swayam's and kriya's sister...

sharon: okay taani.. nw jab tum sabse mil chuki ho?? toh ye batao ki mera chocolate cake kahan hai??
taani: arey haan. wo toh car mein hi reh gaya...
sharon: theek hai chalo le ke aate hain...

taani: tum ruko,... main leke aati hun...
swayam: ye lo keys...
taani: aap chalo.. main cake laungi toh kisi ko toh car lock karna padega na...
swayam pleads...
taani: okay theek hai main le aaungi...

suddenly rey says...
rey: its okay swayam tu ruk main ja ta hun taani k sath.. winking at swayam...
swayam: thanks dude...
taarey goes to the car...

taani: hey krishna ji.. please sharon ko ye cake pasand aaye...
rey:tumne banaya hai??
taani: huh??
rey: ye cake tumne banaya hai??
taani: ohh.. yeah.. pehele sharon ko mere haath ka cake bht achcha lagta tha.. i hope usey aaj bhi achcha lage...
rey: hmmm

rey locks the door...

tarey come back...


sharon cuts the cake into pieces.. and gives evryone...
vicky: wow taani. itna achcha handmade cake maine kabhi nahi khaya yaar
nil: hmm maine bhi
girls: humne bhi
bht achcha hai

taani: thanks guys...
rey is also lost after eating the cake... he likes it alot.. bt he doesnt compliments taani.. as he thinks its taani who is more imp to sharon being his bff...

sharon: rey!!
rey: huh??
sharon: tumhe achcha nahi laga kya??
rey: nahi sharon, aisa nahi hai.. its gud...bas kuch aur soch raha tha
sharon: hmmm

kriya is not saying anything
rey notices that
rey: arey kriya!! kya hua?? y r u not saying anything...???
kriya: nahi rey aisa nahi hai??
rey: tumhe apne sis ka banaya cake pasand nahi aaya kya??
taani: excuse me. kriya ko mere hath ka cake bht pasand hai.. but wo kya hai na isne already ghar pe meri tareef kar di thi that is y she is nt saying anything...

rey: achcha???
swayam: haan wo kya hai na taani ne mere n kriya k liye ek aur cake banaya tha jo humne kha lia tha...

rey: hmm okay
(hmm lagta hai taani swayam and kriya se bht pyaar karti hai.. jitni hot dikhti hai utna achcha khana bhi bana leti hai.. hot?/ ye kya soch raha hai rey?? focus dude... kriya ko dekh she is luking hot too)

rey: okay sharon... ab hume chalna chahiye.. kal college mein milte hain...
swayam: haan chalte hain kal taani ka admission hai
gang: admission???
sharon: haan, ab wo hamare sath hi padegii!!
gang: wow.. ye toh bht achcha hoga
hume ek nayi frnd mil gayi

taani: thanks you so much guys...
then she hugs everyone.. and in that hugs rey too...
sharon is surprised seeing this.. as rey never allowed any girl except kriya to hug him...
she thinks (hmm... i think mera decision right hai.. taani and rey ek dusre ke liye perfect rahenge. my taarey)

shaani hugs..
evryone leaves...
taakriyam reaches home and goes to their room, and sleeps...


hah!! finisthis part...
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awesome update...loved it

cant wait for next part

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awesome update

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part ; 3
its morning swayam is siiting in dining hall having his breakfast..
swayam: taani... kriya. jaldi aao hum college k liye late ho rahe hain...

taani and kriya both comes down the same time...

kriya's dress...


taani's dress




kriya: wow taani.. u r luking too good
taani: thanks kri... and u too luking damn pretty.. koi bf mil gaya kya???
hmm hmmm

swayam: ab chalo tum dono... tum dono ki baatein kabhi kahatam hi nahi hongi. hum late ho jayenge,..
triya: haan chalo...

they reach college...

as usual.. kriyam gets down...
the moment taani gets down evryone stares at her..
boys are bowled seeing taani's beauty.. and girls are jealous of her...

then vicky and nil comes there...
taani: hey guys...
nicky: hey taani!!
swayam: mujhe, sharon, rey and kriya ko vp ne bulaya hai.. achcha hua ytum dono aa gaye.. kya tum taani ka admission procedure complete karwa doge??
nocky: haan okay
swayam: thanks guys

nil: thanks ki kya baat hai swayam teri behen hamari bhi frnd hai.. hum uske liye itna toh kar sakte hain na...
taani: hugs both of them and says haan mere frnds ho toh ye toh karna hi padega...

kriyam goes to office..
vicky: waise taani.. u r luking very nice...
taani: onli nice hot nahi??😉

nil: ek hi baat hai!!
taani: hmm.. thanks,,,, but bhai k samne mat bolna... wo bht possessive hai mujhe leke...
nicky: haan theek hai...

taani huks up both her hands with one of their hands.. and says...
hmm.. ab chale.. fir class main bhi chalne hai...
this whole scene was seen by rey.. who dint like it a bit...

thinking: ye taani kya hai.. woh ek hi din mein nil and vicky se itna close kaise ho sakti hain.. mujhse toh itna formally baat karti hai...
khair mujhe kya...

then he leaves,...

taani is done with her admission procedure.. and enters the class with nicky...
swayam: arey taani, tumhara admission ka kaam ho gaya..????
taani: haan bhai... nil and vicks ne sab karwa dia??

neha: vicks?
taani: haan vicky is vicks...
neha: ohh now u giving my babu nick names??
taani: wow!! she hugs neha... it means u r kagu??? tumhara babu tumhari bht baat karta hai, but usne kagu ka name nahi bataya.. and dont worry nil and vicks mere liye bhai jaise hai...

neha: then its okay
taani: it means i can call u bhabhi!! yay!!!
sharon: haan taani. tum neha ko bhabhi bula sakti ho!! she wont mind!! kyu neha???
neha blushes...

taan: oho!! someone is blushing!!
sharon: taaani..noe come and sit with me.. sir aane hi waale honge...
taani: yeah coming

taani goes and sits with sharon.. neha sits with aashi.. just behind reyam...

neha: tumhe taani kaisi lagi
aashi: achchi hai.. kafi bandaas types hai.. aisi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi...
neha: hmmm. neha too liking taani.. she is very good...

their convo is heard by rey.. as swayam was in neharofying shaani's bonding...

rey thinking: taani toh sabpe jaadu kar rahi hai.. ksiko kriya toh yaad hi nahi aa rahi... jab se aayi hai sab kriya ko jaise bhul hi gaye hain.. but its okay main hun apni kriya k liye..


taani: waise kriya kahan hai?
swayam: taani.. usse avp ne kuch kaam dia hai wo class attend nahi karegi!!
taani: ohhh.. waise its gud she is nt here...

rey: y r u saying this.. tum apni behen k barey mein aisa kaise bol sakti ho??
taani: shut up will u??
i m saying this coz tomorow is her bday.. and its gud she is nt here qki mujhe surprise plan karne k liye sabki help chahiye...
now rey feels guilty for saying soo much without listening to her.. but then his ego comes in between...


rey: whatever...
sharon: ohh taani, hum tumhari help karenge bolo kya help chahiye...
taani: sharon, first promise me u will give me what i want
sharon: promise!!
taani: kriya se friendship kar lo.. i want to c ur and kriya's dance together not seperately.. i knw u dnt like her as she is also a very good dancer and so as u.. but i want my sister and my bff to be friends.. for me will u pls do this much for mw???

sharon: okay taani.. i wil do it...

the gang is shockingly surprised...
nil: vicky mujhe pinch kar.. kya main sapna dek raha hun.. sharon kriya se dosti karne ko maan gayi hai!!
vicky: nahi tu mujhe pinch kar maine bhiu yahi sapna dekha
amar- bharat:humne bhi
girls: humne bhi


sharon gets irritated...

sharon: stop it u all. its nt at all a big deal.. maine taani ko aajtak kisi cheez k liye mana nahi kia hai... and kriya taani ki behen hai.. personally i can b friends with her.. but still professionally she was, is and will alwaz be my competitor.. and i will dance with her on friendly note just for taani...

gang: wow!! that will be awesome...

asshi: main bht khush hun apki friendship types karne ke decision types se
rinni: yeah sharon. tum kriya ko apna bff bana lena
simmi: sharon.. i neva knew har kisi ko naa kehene wali sharon mein life mein koi aisa bhi hai jisey wo kabhi mana nahi karti

neha: neha thinking the same...

sharon: whatever guys...


rey: wow taani, ne sharon ko kriya se friendship karne ko mana lia?? but usne aisa kyu kia??
although he speaks very slowly but swayam hears it...

swayam: kyuki. taani kabhi nahi dekh sakti apne friends and apne family k bich diffrences ho...
isiliye... infact taani hamesha se aisi hi hai.. koi isey naa nahi keh paata.. sabko iski baat maanni hi padti hai

rey:ohh . waise swayam.. tune kabhi taani k baarey mein zada bataya nahi yaar
aisa kyun???
swayam: wo isiliye rey kyuki i as nt sure ki kabhi taani mujhse and kriya se milne and hamare sath mumbai mein rehene ke liye reaady ho gi ki nahi??
rey: matlab? what do u mean???

swayam: taani ka ek frnd that school mein jiski maine and kriya ne mil kar bht class lagayi thi kyuki wo taani se chipka reheta tha.. and taani ko pata chal gaya.. she asked us to say sorry to him and be friends with him.. but humne aisa nahi kia..

she was so angry that she stopped to us as well as that boy.. first e thought its gud she is nt talking to that boy.. and later on she herself wil talk to us.. for last 5 years she dint talk to us even once...
that is the reason we neva talked much abt her...

rey: oh my god swayam.. teri behen ko itna gussa aata hai. so this is the reason sharon neva says no to her...
swayam: i think so!! coz taani shares evrything with her...
rey: ohh okay!!

by the time sir comes.. and class starts...
later in da day...
swayam and sharon wrere busy in college work. kriya was already busy...
taani: bhai main ghar jaa rahi hun...
swayam: but tum akeli kaise jaogi??
taani: its okay bhai main chali jaungi
sharon: no taani.. tum akele nahi jaa sakti.. hmm rey tumhe drop kar dega.. as he is free...
rey tum drop kar doge na??

taani: nooo (cut by rey)
rey: haan sharon dnt worry i wil drop her

swayam: thanks dude...
rey: chale taani??
taani: no its okay.. u dnt need to bother.. i wl go myself,.
sharon: taani.. enuf.. no excuses.. u go with him.. or i willl neva talk to u...
taani: ohh kay
chaliye rey!!

taarey leaves...
sharon thinks: i hope rey taani ki atleast dosti ho jaye so that ye dono ek dusre ke sath comfortable toh ho jayenge

taarey:
rey opens the door for taani and she sits fown
rey drives...

taani: umm.. thanks but apko koi zarurat nahi thi mujhe drop karne ki.. main khud chali jaati
rey: ye maine tumhare liye nahi kia hai.. sharon k liye kia hai... jaise wo tumhe naa nahi keheti hum sab bhi usey kabhi naa nahi kehete...

taani(kitna khadus hai)
okay... khadus...

rey: kya kaha tumne?? khadus????
taani: haan toh jab se main aayi hun aap mujhse aise hi baat karte hain...!! main toh aapse achche se baat karti hun.. but aap?/ huh!! pata nahi kya samjhate ho apne aap ko??

rey doesnt say anything and thinks kitni cute lagti hai gusse main...

taani: waise aap GS hona toh aap kuch kaam kyu nahi karte... saara kaam meri kri se karwate ho??
rey comes back to his sense...
rey: kriya tumhari nahi meri hai...then bits his tounge...
taani: stop the car... what did u just say??
kri apki hai matlb???
wow.. aap kri se pyaar karte ho??
aap dono relationship main ho??
kri ne toh mujhe kuch nahi bataya??
rey keeps his finger on her lips.. and feels something he neva felt before but shruggs it off...
rey: kitna bolti ho?? haan main kriya ko like karta hun.. but rite nw we r nt a couple.. main kal uske bday pe usey propose karunga... i think she likes me to...

taani: wow.. i m soo happy...
jab kri ka bf ban jayega toh main usey bht tease karungi.. yay!!

rey: kya tum meri help karogi?
taani: hmm.. help toh main kar deti agar aap mere frnd hote...
rey: friends??
taani: friends 😊
rey: okay then tum help karogi...
taani: but uske liye aapko meri help karni hod=gi surprise plan karne k liye...

rey: okay
anywz tumhar ghar aa gaya
taani gets down and moves towards her house!!

suddenly comes back...
rey: kya hua??
taani: aapne apna no toh dia hi nahi.. main apko call kaise karungi help k liye??

rey: ohhh ye lo
taarey exchanges their no!!

taani goes in to the house.. rey leaves...




precap:
1) kriya's bday
2) rey practicing to propose kriya with taani
3) taani feeling something diffrent with rey's touch



















































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