Virika SS:I'll stand by you! ~Thd II|Part 24 pg 67|11 Dec - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago
Precap look so interesting plshhh continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all, this is my last note on this story. done with the exams and by gods grace I have performed well. and the good news is i will be resuming my writing. just give me time of 2 days i will post an update. also a recap of the story so that its easy for you all to continue with the story and now since its my vacation i will surely give updates every week! Love you all for the PMs and thank you very much for supporting me. Thank you. This time, i wont let you down..


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Madhu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Madhu ur bac woohoo. How was ur exams cannot for an update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Madhuuu welcome back musketeers. I'm so happy that your gonna continue your awesome story. Can not wait to read it. Take as much time us you want, we can wait to read an awesome update from you. Missed you and your story a lot. Love ya and thanks for continuing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
how on earth did i missed this story
this was one gem of a story
totallu loved how u showed virika bond
simply beautiful <3
cant wait to read further <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello my loving buddies. This is my first part, after EHHMBH fanfics are moved to fanfic forum 😛 Thank you for patiently waiting for me. I can never be thankful enough for supporting me and loving me. I am forever grateful to each and every reader of mine. heartfelt thank you everyone ❤️ Coming to special thanks, its for my closest buddy,my madam,my inspiration to start this story on the very first and to continue this after so long, Kays aka Karina and my loving madamji. If you werent there probably i would have never written this story. Friends I know this update is a bit boring, but i needed sometime to get back into writing. I promise next would be better!


The recap of the story is, starts way back with Viren getting arrested for killing riya. Vadhera's believe Viren is the murderer, Jeevika with the help of Barun, Manorama bring viren out, by proving him innocent. Though Viren-Jeevika return to Vadheras they are still stupid 😛 so Viren walks out of the house with jeevika. They continue to share a beautiful bond with Barun and Manorama. Jeevika is pregnant with twins and they have feel they got back the baby which they have sacrificed for Manvi;s life. The life of Viren-Jeevika goes on..in a small peaceful world consisting both of them with their unborn babies ❤️ The story goes on from here
Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 11 years ago
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Hey friends please read my note above 😊😊

PART-24

Next morning, Jeevika woke up. She was about to get up, but realized what happened last night and blushed hard. Unknown to her, Viren was awake and was wondering what she would do. Realizing that jeevika wont be getting up any soon, Viren pulled her into hug and spoke,"Mrs. Vadhera, what are you wondering early in the morning?" Jeevika was startled and was wondering how Viren knew, and viren could read her thoughts. He spoke, "Jeevika I was awake the moment you were awake." Jeevika blushed and Viren dropped a kiss on her forehead and viren woke up and proceeded to start the preparations for the day.

Jeevika was struggling in the kitchen wondering what to make. She was in the mood to eat jalebis, so she made a heap of jalebis. Viren got ready and was about to enter the dining room when he found jalebis on the table. He took three pieces but his loving wife hit him on his hand and took those jalebis. Viren was shocked,while jeevika said the jalebis are only for her and not him. Viren pouted but jeevika was in no mood to give in,she asked him to leave as he was getting late. Viren stood watching his wife's crazy antics while she happily started to eat. A piece of it was on the corner of her lips and a naughty thought crept into Mr.Viren's mind. He bent forward,cupped jeevika's face and ate the piece. Jeevika was utter shocked and stood up angrily. Viren replied,"I don't like wasting food..byee.." saying so he walked away. Jeevika closed the door and blushed thinking what happened just now.

After finishing the jalebis, jeevika realized that viren didn't eat anything for breakfast and also didn't take his lunch. She started to feel bad,so she dialed his number. But viren wasn't responding. She was getting angry, she tried onto his room's number and no one responded. She was getting restless. She needed him right away. Viren was struck up in a meeting and after few minutes viren checked his mobile. He found 15 missed calls from jeevika. He was terribly scared. He told that the meeting would resume in the afternoon and rushed to his house. He was getting anxious and frenzy. He couldn't think straight and that is when all negative thoughts arise. He prayed to God to keep his Jeevika safe. He reached home in 20 minutes which on any other day would take atleast 45 minutes. He started riniging the bell continuously and jeevika was afraid wondering who it was. She came running to the door and opened it only to find an anxious viren. The moment the door opened, viren rushed inside and hugged jeevika so tightly that all her anger on him just disappeared. She hugged him back and they stayed like that for a while. After few minutes viren composed himself and left jeevika and went to sit on the sofa. She knew something was wrong so she closed the door and went into kitchen to bring a glass of water for him. She sat beside him and asked him what happened him and that's when viren realized about the calls

He asked Jeevika why did she call so many times? Jeevika started looking here and there and viren pressed further. He asked what was the matter, she replied, "I was feeling bad,you left without having breakfast." Viren was shocked, "you called me 15 times for that reason", Jeevika nodded and viren's temper rose to heights. He shouted," I was in a meeting and had to come running wondering what happened?" Jeevika was afraid seeing him and her eyes welled up,she tried to hold his hand but he pulled away,she spoke"I am sorry virenji,I didn't know you were so busy.." Viren didn't let her continue,he yelled,"It was because of you I didn't have my breakfast and now I postponed my meeting and came running like a mad mad, jeevika what happened to you? Why cant you behave normally?" Jeevika couldn't stop the tears flowing,she didn't know what to answer, she was feeling very bad. Viren said,"I am leaving now, I will have my lunch in the office, don't wait for me eat something and take rest,I will be late." He rushed outside without waiting for jeevika to respond. Jeevika closed the door and sat by door. She was feeling very bad,very hurt by her behavior. She started to blame herself,she was crying badly. She was in no mood to make something,so she went to her room and started to cry. She fell asleep.

Viren went back to his work and resumed the meetings lined up and finished his lunch and continued his lunch. During the evening time Jeevika woke up, she was feeling very upset, she was in no mood to eat something. She was feeling very lonely, she decided to go to the temple as Viren mentioned he would be late. She reached the temple and was doing the pooja. She didn't notice the presence of Virat and Manvi right behind her. Manvi noticed her but was waiting for Jeevika to finish the prayer. Jeevika was feeling dizzy and she was about to collapse when virat held her.

Jeevika was in semi-conscious state when virat and manvi didn't know what to do. He carried jeevika in his arms and rushed to the hospital. They admitted her and called viren to inform him. Viren was shocked looking at the caller id,he was wondering why virat was calling. He lifted the call only to hear few of the worst words in his life. He rushed to the hospital and found virat talking to the doctor.

Jeevika gained conscious when manvi rushed into the room, jeevika was shocked seeing manvi there. Manvi went beside her and held her hand,"di kya hua? How are you now? Why did you faint?" Jeevika was wondering where she was,she asked,"Mannu, I don't know,how come I am here? And why are you here? " Manvi realized jeevika didn't know anything so she said, "di, virat and I saw you in temple. You were praying and suddenly you fainted. We brought you here" jeevika was worried for the baby, she place a hand on her stomach and manvi realized,"Di, baby is fine completely. Don't worry." Just then Viren entered the room. Manvi knew she should give them space and left the room. Jeevika tried to get up, viren rushed by her side and helped her. Viren held her hand and asked,"What happened Jeevika?" Before jeevika could answer, Manvi came inside and called Viren saying the doctor was calling him. Viren left and manvi sat beside Jeevika. Viren spoke to the doctor, who said that she fainted due to weakness and low sugar levels. And its good that his brother brought her early.

Viren found out few other details and went to Virat. Virat was curious and he spoke,"Bhai,how is bhabi? What did the doctor say?" viren held his hand,"Thank you Virat." Virat gave an uncomfortable smile and spoke,"You might have left us bhai,but she is still my bhabi." Viren gave a genuine smile and virat spoke,"Ghar chalo bhai,please.." Viren- " No Virat, till they learn the value of Jeevika I wont be coming"
Virat-"But Bhai, do you even know what happened today?"
Viren-" I understand what you are saying Virat but i have other alternatives for it"

Virat-"And what are they?"

Viren- "Let me think..."

Virat- "Ek baar, you have lost your child, for whatever reason it might be, don't lose him again only because of your ego or self respect Bhai.."

Viren-"VIRAT!"

Manvi interrupted them and asked Viren if she should inform the family,Viren replied "I don't have a family and left the place"Manvi and Virat were disappointed.

Viren entered the room and found Jeevika lost in thoughts. He realized what happened today and he was the one to be blamed completely. He went and sat beside Jeevika and today for the first time Viren was at loss of words. He didn't know from where to start and how to apologize. Jeevika too didn't know what to speak.

Precap: Jeevika behaving weirdly with Viren, Viren knows he is at fault but Jeevika blames herself. What will Viren-Jeevika do?😉


I am sooo sorry for the delay. I just hope this story helps me to get back to writing. I am very sorry if its disappointing. Please like and leave your reviews please

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Madhu 😳😳
Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Meee
sorry for not unressing yet!!!

will give my essay comment tomorrow after my lab practical ❤️

this was ab absolute delight to read ❤️
like no joke i missed this story so so sooo much!!!
it couldn't have been better written that this!

I always tell you that you're updates blow me away its because you always add these twists and turns which make it even more interesting to read!!!
My favorite part was definitely the jalebi one and Viren being him naughty self!
Just fabulousssly written 👏

And then the way you brought in Virman in this update was so interesting especially the conversation of Virat and Viren in the end... loved the tone and the pain Viren still has towards the whole family...

I'm very eager to know now how the conversation between Virika go... I actually loved seeing the angry side of Viren today.. makes him seem a little more human like because he does have flaws as well!!!

Can't wait to read more and now that you have a better schedule you have to update sooner for your readers ❤️
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Look whose back!!!!
Whoa!!!!!!It's worth the wait Madhu di!!!!
It's freaking awesome!!!!! Poor Jeevs😔
Waiting for their patch-up😉
Wow!!!! Just waiting eagerly to read the next part!!!!
Pls pls n pls update soon!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited..

Amazing update Madhu.. liking the story process.. thanks for PM
Edited by Deepzpadukone - 11 years ago

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