ViSa FF~Perfect soul mates~Part 16 updated pg 43- Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wupa


Yeah I can understand, girl! 😊

I hope there is some solution to this. No other show is good..

The only other show that caught my eye was 'yeh hai mohabbatein' Let's see how it shapes up😊

Look who is back😃 I am catching up with all the ffs in the forum and good lord ,all the awesome writers have come out from hiding. Still missing ViSa like crazy😭 Saw the promo of YHM, may try that one!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful updates Pallavi👏 What is this Akdu hiding from our Sarita? Anyway guess we have to wait longer as Mr.Akdu got other plans 😳☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji


Look who is back😃I am catching up with all the ffs in the forum and good lord ,all the awesome writers have come out from hiding. Still missing ViSa like crazy😭Saw the promo of YHM, may try that one!!




Hey anjali! Welcome back my dear! 🤗 Missed you and your comments loads! 😊 How are you? Hope you did well in your exams! Lovely to see you back in action!

Thank you, dear for your comments. Yes, you need to wait to see what Viktant is hidong from Sarita, since he has taken a major detour right now! Hehe 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Elita

Impressive trailer...and fervently looking for more updates from you ⭐️


Aww..Thank you so much, dear! I wrote this in all of 10 minutes, as I was running out of time. 😉hehee😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Right on time😃

Wohooo I'm glad that our 'requests' has effect on you.. It will be useful in the future 😈

Now, now I agree with Mr. Suryavanshi teasing with actions is so much better and fun (to read of course😛) and he needs to teach Sarita. I liked that pallu trick, Vikrant is so smexy ☺️

Waiting for the full picture


Yep! As I said, I posted it and had to rush to the kitchen to make dinner. LOL!😆

Now I'm scared as to what your next request might be! 😕😕

Hehe...Yeah I agree...I would not mind seeing it too! hehe😉😛 and I agree Vikrant is smexy as hell!😳☺️

Will try to post tonight, doll!😃
Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25

haaa

awesome awesome

"goes to dreamland"

Love u pallavi ::)


Meriam, are you back from your dreamworld, yet? I have posted an OS, which might not be your cup of tea...But still please do give it a try. Wrote it because I wanted a change. hehe😃


Thank you, ma cherie!

Love you too!❤️ muah!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wupa


Meriam, are you back from your dreamworld, yet? I have posted an OS, which might not be your cup of tea...But still please do give it a try. Wrote it because I wanted a change. hehe😃


Thank you, ma cherie!

Love you too!❤️ muah!



yeah yeah i saw it and read the imp parts agn n agn 😆😆
had paper valuation so off from the dreamland long back gal
the OS was awesome n u plz better update this one sooon 😆😆😆

did u watch the SA videos of Kashty more quest for me
M fallin more in love wit srishty everyday she s too cute n adorable
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25



yeah yeah i saw it and read the imp parts agn n agn 😆😆
had paper valuation so off from the dreamland long back gal
the OS was awesome n u plz better update this one sooon 😆😆😆

did u watch the SA videos of Kashty more quest for me
M fallin more in love wit srishty everyday she s too cute n adorable


Hehe...Knowing you, i am sure you would have read it multiple times. hehe😆😆😛

Thank you, dear!🤗 and I updated the other FF...check it out!😃

I know, dear! she is just too adorable! And lovable! ❤️😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 12

Sarita tried to focus on the task at hand and that was to break free from her husband's tight embrace; as she needed to place some amount of physical distance between them, to discuss anything with him. Because being in close quarters was only adding to the sexual tension they felt for each other and the issue at hand that actually needed attention, was taking a back seat.

She writhed under the onslaught of the sensuous kisses and nibbling that her husband seemed to unleash on her. She gasped when he found her sensitive spot behind her ear and unknowingly squeezed his shoulders tight. She took a deep breath and brought her hands down in the pretext of hugging him tight; which she was really tempted to do, what with the way he was nipping her jaw line.

Vikrant did not release Sarita's sari even when she tried to tug it from his hold cleverly and this made her think extra hard to plan her next move, which was proving to be very difficult, because of the way her husband was kissing her. She beamed when she realized that he was busy devouring her; and she used this distraction to gradually remove her sari which was tucked into her petticoat around the waist, all the while getting lost in the sea of passion that her husband seemed to drag her into. He was driving her crazy...a good kind of crazy, she thought to herself.

She had to force herself to re-focus on the job and decided to add the finishing touches to it. She smirked as she moved her palms up his torso and shoved him back a little taking his diversion to her advantage; and sprinted her way across the hall to stand behind the couch, with her fists on her waist and sporting a mischievous smile while she said breathlessly, "Like this...I escaped, didn't I?"

Vikrant was caught unawares when Sarita thrust him away from her and ran to the other end of the living room. She looked flushed and out of breath when he heard her speak. She did not realize that she looked ravishing in her current state; she was panting heavily which made her chest rise up and down and she looked like a sexy vixen in her attire or what was left of it; and he had to force himself to pay attention to what she was uttering.

When he heard what she said, he protested in a pleading tone, "Sarita that was not fair!"

Sarita bent a little to catch her breath and unknowingly brought attention to every inch of skin uncovered by the deep neckline of her blouse. How can anyone look this beautiful? He wondered. And she was clueless as to how tempting she looked right now. She looked up to see him and he found mischief written all across her face.

"All's fair in love and war, isn't it, Mr.Suryavanshi?" she drawled, her tone laced with amusement.

"Oh is it? This means war then" he said, charging towards her instantly like a lion chasing its prey. Sarita was well prepared for this and dodged away from him.

Sarita pleaded Vikrant to listen to her, "Mr.Suryavanshi, we have loads to talk. Let's get serious now, shall we?"

"Alright!" He sighed dramatically. "But can you please tie your sari? I am getting distracted by your alluring figure and finding it hard to focus on anything right now." So saying, he bundled up her sari which was lying on the floor and threw it at her.

She caught it with both hands and said teasingly, "Ah, finally my husband seems to have come back to his senses. Thank you my darling husband!" She turned around and made her way to the kitchen, unaware that Vikrant followed her closely behind.

She called out over her shoulder saying," I will see what I can prepare for lunch first and then we will sit and talk through things. What say?" She was so busy tucking her sari around her waist that she failed to notice her husband pull something out from the fridge and place it on the kitchen counter.

Her distraction proved useful to him and he grabbed an ice cube from the tray; he took the opportunity to come to a halt right behind her and used one hand to push her tresses to the front and placed the ice cube at the base of her neck.

When she did not get any response from her husband, she raised her voice a few octaves more to say, "Can you hear me, Mr.Suryavanshi? I want answers, starting with why you felt the necessity to help me escape pol..." She gasped and stopped mid sentence when she felt her husband push her hair away to place something cool against her skin.

The ice melted and Vikrant swooped down to lap at the liquid, simultaneously placing open mouthed kisses along her neck and murmuring his question, "You were saying?" He smirked when he heard her breath hitch a little. He brought the ice cube down, to trace unknown patterns across her upper back; his mouth automatically followed the route that his hands took.

She closed her eyes and tried to form some coherent thought, but to no avail. She was slowly drowning in the sensuous pool of passion that her husband seemed to stir up. She lost the grip on her sari and it ended up landing on the floor without any noise.

"This... Is... So... not...fair, Mr.Suryavanshi!" She exclaimed through panted breath. Only for her husband to pause before saying, "All's fair in love and war, isn't it, Mrs. Suryavanshi?" in a mocking tone. But not before his teeth found the ends of her dori, to pull the knot free gradually. He grasped her bare waist using one hand to steady her, when he felt her tremble with anticipation.

His other hand continued drawing lazy patterns across her back, while his mouth was busy nipping her bared skin. She let out a loud moan when she felt him inch his way down to her lower back. He turned her around, while his mouth placed wet kisses across her waist to settle on her plane belly, while her hands gripped the back of his head. He pulled back to admire the dip in her navel and was about to stick his tongue into it, when the distant ring of the telephone broke the passionate spell.

He groaned aloud and cursed at the disturbance. He touched his forehead to her abdomen to catch his breath and grunted while promising her, "We will surely continue this later! This is so not done!"

Vikrant left to answer the call, while Sarita shook her head to bring herself out of the mesmerizing spell.

To be continued...

Don't kill me now, guys!😛😆

Hope you liked the update!😳

Love you all!❤️❤️❤️ Muah🤗

ETA: I just wanted to say that there might be spelling and grammatical mistakes, as I did not go through the content before posting. So sorry!😃

Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ME!

This story is my happy place at the moment.. it's so dreamy
Edited by -Srishty- - 12 years ago

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