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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONGRATS ON THE NEW STORY
VERY INTERESTING
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Congrats for this new maaneet work.
Interesting prologue.
Continue soon.
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Next part

Have you ever thought why me! To god? I do every day. And so like every day today also I think the same thing as I get up. Pichle 2 salo ki tara I get up at 4 in the morning. Geet Handa, jo pehle kabhi bhi 7 se pehle morning nahi dekha karthi thi, now gets up at 4, Babaji kya planning hai aapki I tell him as I get up from my bed. This is my regular routine. Oye wait I need to introduce myself. Hello ji. Myself Geet Handa. 21 years old. Lives all alone in Hoshiyarpur, Punjab. Ab pura din bate tho nahi kar sakthi hon so I get to my work. My work includes going and sending the men who guard the fields home, keep water for the cows, buffalos, goats and the two dogs that live here. Keep food for the poultry and plan what the Maharaj will cook for the men who will come and work in the field for the day. All this work I need to finish by 6:00 as Maharaj my cook will come at that time. He and I will then sort out what will be cooked for breakfast, lunch and dinner for myself and the other staff. Aap log soch rahe honge ki yeh ladki tho kah rahi thi ki akeli rahthi hai but why the hell is she cooking for a battalion? My dear friends, I do that cos I live in a huge farm.

My family, the Handas were farmers and owned 100 acres of land around the area. The house I live in now, 2 years ago housed a whole family. My family had my darji and dadi, my tauji taiji and their 2 sons tej and brij with their wifes and one kid then came my papaji and ma who had me and my elder brother Luckwinder then came chachu and chachi with tito and raji. I was studying in Delhi. Doing my II year BSc Mathematics when Lucky veerji's marriage was fixed. My exams were due so I had decided to come to the marriage venue directly. But the marriage dint happen. My whole family died in the bus accident that carried the bharath. Only I escaped. Aaj bhi me bhagwan se phuchti hun ki mujhe hi kyu bhachaya??? Akheli rahgayi me. Then on people came and started to ask me to sell this property. But this was the only memory of my family. The family that I love so much. Who loved my so much. So I refused. We have money. I know how to use that money. My family has enough of name and I have used that name to get good workers to work in the field. With enough remuneration I have kept this field flourishing for the past 2 years. I have no plans of selling this property only a miracle could make me sell this, and I know that miracles don't exists.

Anyway, roz ki tara I finished my morning duties and then left to school. I forgot to tell you. I am a teacher in the nearby school. I have finished my B.Ed. and teach Mathematics to the kids. Aaj Saturday hai so it is half day. I know I'll come back by 1 and will spend my time alone in that big house again. Babaji what are you punishing me for. Dadi always told me everyone is born for a purpose, what is my purpose? Pls Babaji... help me. Mujhe aur yeh akelapan bardash nahi hota. I moaned silently again as I drove my scooty back home. I parked it inside the shed as I will not take her out as it is the week end. Oye shed ki phech tho clean hi nahi kiya... I hit my head... chall beta kam pe lag ja I told myself. I removed my duppata and took the broom and moved towards the back of the shed. I was about to open the door which led to the back, when I heard a sound. It was a sound of a child crying. Or more to say like cooing. I slowly opened the door, making sure not to make noise. I saw a small child of may be 10 to 12 months old sitting on the floor. I dint know if it was a girl or a boy. It was so shabby and dirty. Without thinking anything I rushed towards it and grabbed it. I don't know how to explain this, but holding this child in my arms made me feel special. At that moment I felt the luckiest person on this planet. If this is how a mother feels when she holds her baby for the first time, then I guess that is what you could explain my feelings.

Put him down. I heard a very hard and ruff voice warn me. I turned around to see a man standing there with a knife in his hand. The knife had dried blood on it.

Babaji.. I whispered. Was he going to kill this innocent soul? Did this man kill this child's parents already? I thought

Nahi.. I told him. But I couldn't hide the shiver in my voice

The man's eye's narrowed down at me. Down.. now.. he ordered me as he stepped closer to me. I held the baby closer to me. I had decided there was no way I was going to do what he was telling me to do. What if he looked scary? I was not going to do it. I shook my head saying no as I moved back.

Give me the baby. Now he said I'm warning you he threatened me as he twisted the knife in his hand coming closer to me. I hugged the baby closer and backed off. I had a plan. All I had to do was to get out through the door and lock it. Then I would run out and call for help. But this man looked insane. I needed to protect the baby. It's now or never I told myself.

1...2...3... I counted in my mind and then turned to run but by the time I even tired, the man jumped on me. He slammed me into the wall. I hurt my head but I refused to leave the baby..

Chodo.. kamine kutte.. kese admi ho tume. Bacche ko marthey ho I screamed at him as he pressed his body against me as I was struggling to get his hands off the baby. I kept shaking my head and my hands, struggling. If he had to get the baby it would be through me. I had decided that.

Choona bhi nahi use kamine Babaji tume maf nahi karenge. Kutte ki mout marrega tu. Jahanum me bh.. but then what he did made me freeze. My whole body froze.. That perverted b*****d... a**h**e pressed or more to say squeezed my b*****t. I looked up at him and that b*****d dint even have the decency to look embarrassed. He took the baby from my hand and moved away. That is when I looked at him. He was wounded. His left hand was bleeding and right hand was bruised. He looked so dirty and stunk like a skunk.

Yeh mera beta hai. He said hugging the baby.

Oh was the most intelligent reply that came out of my mouth. I was feeling embarrassed. No man had ever seen me like this, forget touching me.. and here I was standing in front of this stranger without a duppata and had just gotten my b*****s squeezed. This thought made my face heat up and I felt like running and hiding my face somewhere.

And.. that.. you were shouting like a banshee and I couldn't stop you with one hand so.. so.. he said looking a bit embarrassed.. ok that guy had some good thing in him I thought feeling a bit secure

My name is Geet I told him trying to bring back normalcy

Maan he introduced himself and this is Manan he said mentioning the baby. AS though he understood, Manan lifted his hands up as thought asking her to lift him up. Geet grinned at him and took him in her arms

Baby tho dirty hai. She told the child who was fully covered in dirt and his clothes were fully covered with mud and were damp with due. Baby ko nahaenge.. aur fir dudu denge she said in a babyish language. She took the child and walked away forgetting abt the grown man behind them.

New Maaneet ss O Sanam Bekhabar

Precap:

Geet isse sign karo he told me showing me the marriage certificates. I looked questioningly at him.

Kya hua?? He asked me

Wo ye sab but I was stopped

Kal rath ke badh tho I thought you shouldn't be having any problems. Just sign it he told me

Are you expecting something else?? He asked me. I was shocked by his question. What was he talking about? What could I ever expect from him??

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Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thats amazing

loving it too much

cant wait to read more!

loving the way the story is shaping up!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1
awesome...
poor Geet...
her life turned upside down...
and Maan has a son already?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good to hear u r getting well.

Wat happened to use precap?
Is this a story Maan is telling to make her believe?!?!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good to hear u r getting well.

Is this gonna go like movie gangster?!?
Update was nice.
Edited by snehapriya - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehapriya

Good to hear u r getting well.

Is this gonna go like movie gangster?!?
Update was nice.

no no.. maan is me ganster nahi hai.. dont worry..
aur ending bhi wo movie jaisa nahi hoga yaar... such a sad story man... bhichara..
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interesting...
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Next Part

For the next half hour, Geet spent cleaning the child and talking gibberish to him. Manan or Manu as she called him seemed to react to every sound she made. He giggled, cooed and laughed, making Geet happier by the minute. After feeding him some milk, she carried him towards her elder brother's room which had a play pen and a cradle. It was their kid's, which she would use for Manu now. She placed the kid in the play pen. In all this she completely forgot abt the child's father who had disappeared. In the next 45 minutes, she dressed Manu and hummed him a lullaby making him sleep. After he slept, was when she realised that his father was missing. She went looking for him. She was abt to pass a room when she heart groaning sound from there. She opened the door and entered it. The bathroom door was opened and she stepped into it and gasped at the sight. In the room, Maan sat inside the bathtub filled with dark brown water. He looked tired and drained.

Maan ji?? She called softly

Huh??? He looked up.. a bit surprised

What... I mean.. Do you need some help..?? she asked not knowing what else to say

Maan just kept on looking at her. Signing, she moved closer to him. She bent down and moved her hand inside the tub, searching for the outlet. Sensing the stopper, she pulled it and let all the dirty water out. She tried hard not to look at his naked self. She, at that time had not realised that he might be stark naked under the dirty water. She prayed for strength. Just like a patient. She told herself. As she opened the tap to fill it with water again. She took out the loofah and squeezed in the shower gel. She gently scrubbed him, starting from his shoulders till his toe. All the time she kept reminding herself. Just like a patient but she could feel his eyes on her, all the time, scrutinising her all over. For the next 15 minutes, Maan dint not take his eyes off her. She felt intimidated by this. But she was the one who offered help so why the hell was she complaining. She thought as she continued cleaning him.

Hmmm, she hummed as she looked at his face trying to see more than his eyes. His face was covered with thick beard, which was more than a weeks old or so she thought.

I need a shave, he said breaking her thoughts. She blushed as she realised that he had noticed her staring at him.

I'll get the required things today itself. You can take this room itself. She told him. This is my brother's. Hume lagtha hai ki unke kapde bhi aapko fit ayenge. She said trying to look elsewhere.

Devi Maiyya she prayed. This man was so.. so.. she dint know. He had such a beautiful body that did things to her. Was it her loneliness playing or her age that was drawing her to him? She dint know but what she realised till now was that she was getting attracted to Manu's father and this was not good news.

I don't use second hand goods. He told her in a ruff voice. Geet looked at him surprised. Laad Governor kahika. she murmured, earning a glare from him. She just ignored him and moved to open the cupboard.

I said I don't wear.. but he was stopped. Yeh naya hai. she said.. Tears stinging her eyes. My brother never wore them. She whispered as she placed the clothes on the bed and left the room.

It was nearly 4, when she realised she dint talk to Maan abt what he plans to do abt the future. Thought in her heart she wanted them to stay at least for Manu's sake, but how could she be vocal abt this? She thought as she made her way up to his room. She gently opened the room and smiled seeing Maan and Manu sleep cuddling each other. May be she would talk to them later. Thinking she left the place

Geet entered the kitchen of the mess she had created for cooking dinner. The Maharaj had already started making preparations. She knew if she was going to have Maan and Manan as permanent members of her household, she had to change her daily timings and get more people to work also. Maharaj smiled at her and both of them started doing their work. It was nearly 8:30 when she realised that she needed to go home as there were people now with her, giving some excuses she ran back home only to encounter a furious Maan.

Kahan thi tum?? He growled at her. With 3 quick strides he was near her. He held her arm in a vice like grip. Where the hell were you?? Whom did you tell abt us staying here?? He shouted, making Geet cringe in fear. The way his eyes grew in anger created untold fear inside her stomach. No one had ever talked to her like that before.

Wo.. hum.. she stammered not knowing how to deal with such a situation

Where were you?? What were you doing.. Answer me dammit. He yelled pulling her closer to him.

Geet was shivering like a dried leaf in his hands. Me wokers keliye khana bana rahi thi... kheth me jo kam karthey hai na.. un keliye.. She answered meekly. Tears ran down her eyes. She dint know why his behaviour was affecting her like this.

Maan's eyes suddenly calmed down. He left her arms and moved away from her. He looked down uncomfortably. Wo.. me... he tried saying but dint know how to explain his actions towards her.. Just then they heard Manu crying. Geet shot out like a bullet towards the room, leaving Maan surprised seeing her like this.

It took nearly half hour to calm an agitated Manu. His father's yelling had scared the otherwise calm Manu into crying. Geet cribbed to her Babaji and called Maan a Dusht Danav numerous times. She held the baby and rocked him and cooed to him, trying to calm him down. At last her patience was rewarded and Manu slept off. All this time, Maan's eyes dint leave her. She did realise it, but chose to ignore. That man was incorrigible. She had decided. Placing the baby in the play pen, she thought of having a bath and then preparing something to eat. But when she turned around, she found Maan looking at her in a weird manner. She dint know what to think of it. He was not looking at her face. He was looking at her, curves.. and that was embarrassing.

Maan turned around and took her duppata and gave it to her. Geet for a minute dint understand what was going on. But when she saw the wet patch on her n****e she understood. She grabbed the duppata and ran out of the room. Babaji...the son and father would be the death of me.. she said out loud as she discarded her clothes and stepped under the shower for a bath.

20 minutes later, Geet came down to find the dining table ready with dinner. She gave Maan a surprised look. Maan was sitting and reading the newspaper silently. She opened the lid to see white rice, yellow dhal and pappad. One thing she understood of this man was he was a perfectionist.

I and Manan have taken our food. He told her as he got up to leave...

Ek minute. Geet said, as she served herself..

Yadhi aapko teek lage tho, you can keep that room where you are staying now. She said getting a bit uncomfortable. Maan narrowed his eyes towards her

Wo.. You can stay there, till you want.. I mean.. you can stay in this house, till you want.. She said suddenly feeling stupid. She wanted to hit herself for saying this before he asked her anything.

Maan grunted and left. Geet dint know what that grunt meant, but took it to be a yes. She finished her food and cleaned the dishes. She retired for the night.

From the next day onwards, her routine was entirely changed. Her day started a bit early. She made sure to prepare breakfast, lunch and dinner for all three of them. She managed the other work with the help of the Maharaj properly. She came back home by 7 every day to make dinner for them. She loved this life. She felt she had a purpose now. Manu occupied most of her time at home, if not him, she spent in cooking or cleaning. The next 10 days flew like this. Geet made sure no one knew abt these two in her house. The fit he had thrown on the first day had told her enough that no one should know abt them, and she had surprisingly not asked questions also.

Winter was growing and it was really harsh on the little one. Geet was growing worried and she slept less as she held the whining baby most of the time. She just couldn't keep him away from herself when he was suffering with fever or cold. Maan was a silent observer to all this.

Sshhh Manu... she cooed as she rocked the baby for the third time that night. It was 1am, and Manu had got up with another bout of cough which had woken Geet along with him. She carried him to her room and was pacifying him, she never noticed Maan who was looking at them from the door way.

Manu wined and coughed as he yawned fluttering his baby eyes. Geet looked at him with so much love and warmth which only a mother could feel. She just wanted him to be with her. But how could she say so to Maan. How could she take a baby from her father without having any bond with the child? She cradled the child closer to her bosom as Manu suckled her over her clothes, this bought the child some peace and soon he was fast as sleep. Geet turned around and that is when she noticed Maan by the door

Wait, saying he left the room and came back carrying the play pen with him. He placed it in her room and she put Manu inside it and covered him with his baby spread. She placed a gentle kiss on his forehead.

Beautiful she heard him say. She looked up at Maan and then smiled. Yes he is beautiful she said smiling at Manu.

I know. Maan said as he walked towards her. He stopped opposite to her. But I was talking abt you. Geet looked up into his eyes. She was shocked by this. Never in these 10 days had Maan tried to make a decent conversation with her. Apart from grunts or his weird mood swings he said nothing absolutely nothing.

Geet.. he whispered. His husky voice sending shivers of pleasure down her spine, I am not good with words he told her holding her face by her chin but actions are better than words he said as he placed his lips on her, sending millions of sparks down her body. She dint know how to react to this. She stood frozen..

Geet.. he moaned.. I want you. Saying he pulled her by her waist sliding his hand under her top. When his warm hand touch her bare skin something in her erupted. Liquid fire coursed through her veins and she hugged him not knowing what to do.. Not understanding her needs. She wanted to cry.. for the past 10 days she had felt this attraction, but nothing to this magnitude. But every accidental brush with him would sent sparks flowing through her system making her crave for more. And here he was saying and making her feel things that she never imagined in her life. In his arms she was feeling whole again. It was as though her family had come back. It was like, when he came, she found herself. She hugged him, with so much passion and want, telling him without words of her needs and feelings.. She was melting like ice on a warm summer noon in his hand and she couldn't stop it. She dint want to stop it.

Cool wind blew outside the house, as two warm bodies united, wordlessly writing stories of lust, want, need, passion and desire...

The next morning was a different one from the past 2 years for Geet. It was nearly 9 but she was still in bed. She woke up stretching and yawning. Her body revolted in pain, but it was sweet pain. She searched for him but the place beside her bed was missing. She felt disheartened by this. Brushing aside the feeling, she got up to get ready. She couldn't believe she was so late. She came out of the bathroom only to find Maan sitting on the bed with Manu.

Hey.. he called with a small smile. She was surprised seeing him smile.

Good morning.. Maan ji.. She whispered feeling shy.. Very shy.. she couldn't believe how wonton she had been last night. She had slept with a stranger who she knew for the past 10 days. She knew nothing at this man before her. Only that his name was Maan and he had a son named Manan. Was it enough for her? she wondered as she troubled her duppata knot with her fingers..

Geet??? Come here and have breakfast.. Maan called.. you would be hungry.. he said looking at her face..

Geet bit her lips thinking he was teasing her. She quickly took her plate and gobbled the contents. She saw Manu playing by himself.

Geet isse sign karo he told me showing me the marriage certificates. I looked questioningly at him.

Kya hua?? He asked me

Wo ye sab but I was stopped

Kal rath ke badh tho I thought you shouldn't be having any problems. Just sign it he told me

Are you expecting something else?? He asked me.

I was surprised by his question. What could I expect from him? I have given him everything I have without asking him anything. She thought as tears welled he eyes..

Maan ji.. she started.. But Manu's cooing called to her.. she turned around and looked lovingly at him..

Don't you want to be with him Geet?? Maan asked.. You will not have any right on him if you don't have any relationship with me. He said, but I knew he was getting angry

I took the certificates from him and signed it. I dint even read it. Why should I? I have given everything that I have to him, what could he take from me which was more important that my heart!

Maan signed it and then kept it safely. Geet.. sign this also. You will be Geet Maan Singh Kurrana from now on. He told me giving me another set of papers. I signed it without a word. I dint care abt anything anymore. What more could I want. I got a husband, a son and a life which, with Babaji's blessing would work out fine.

Precap:

I don't want you to talk to him or any one understand he yelled at him holding him arms tightly..

Maan ji.. it is paining She cried unable to bear the pain

Paining.. it is paining for me also.. To see your wonton behaviour. He shouted pushing me

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