VIRIKA SS ~ Bundle Of Joy [Chapter ~ 10; Pg:23] - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Beautiful update!
Thanks for the pm! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
this was the cutest update ... ever !!!!
ahhh... I was just drooling over everything !!!
the perfect father son...
nd the captivating moment !!!!
I want more of it.. :)
loved jeevika caring nature...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
at last u updated waited for so long it was amazin
Edited by kryanvirikafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
A badaaa waalaaa hug 🤗 to your update. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
As all said, i am allso saying. The cutest update till now.
You are improving day by day. 😉


Coming to update...

I wish we cud same thing on TV too

Nothing cud be better than this. U have poytraited the emotion so well riddhu ❤️ 👍🏼

Waiting for next update ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
wow what a cute update
jeevika taking care of everyone
and all of them love jeevika also
really very very cute update
thanks for the PMS continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
absolutely brilliant totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Chapter ~ 5

It Was Evening. I And Maa Were Into The Kitchen Preparing Dinner.

J - "Maa, Why Don't You Go Rest? I'll Handle Everything Here Naa?!?"
Va - "It's Okay Beta. I'll Stay Here. Anyways You Aren't Allowing Me To Do Anything."
Jeevika Just Giggled And Quickly Quietened Down As She Heard Abhi Crying. She Was About To Go When Vanshika Made Her Stop.
Va "I'll go Take Care Of My Grandson. You Take Care Of The Dinner."
J - "Okay Maa..."

Vanshika Left. Soon Enough Virat Entered The Kitchen.

Vi - "Bhabhi? Can I Have Some Tea? Please?"
J - "Ofcourse Not. I'll Catch You Directly On The Dinning Table. Go Get Fresh. The Dinner Is Almost Ready, Your Bhai Will Be Here Now Too,..." Before She Could Say Further Viren Came In Too...
V - "What's Going On Between Devar Bhabhi? Virat? You Seem Low...Why? Jeevs Can I Get My Coffee?"
J - "NO! The Both Of You Go Get Fresh, And Be There On The Dining Table In Next 15 Mins."
Vi - "Bhai Even I Ain't Getting My Tea...Iss Liye I'm Low."
V - "And Why Ain't I Getting My Coffee Mrs. Vadhera?"
J - "You Two Are 1 Hour Late. Now It's Time For Dinner. Not For Tea Or Coffee..Now Leave..." She Said Turning Back To The Food She Was Cooking.

Vi - "I Think I'm Leaving Cause I Don't Wanna Stay Hungry."
V - "Me Too. I Remember She Did That When She Was Pregnant. Damn Her Mood Swings...She Still Has Them At Times..." :D :D
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Virika's Room

Viren Entered The Room To Find Vanshika Maa Playing With Abhi.

V - "Maaa." He Said Smiling.
Va - "I'm Sure You Already Got Busted By Jeevika For Asking Her Coffee At This Time. How Was Your Day?"
V - "Yeah. You're Right. Day Was Tiring As Always..." He Said Picking Up Abhi And Twirling Him Into The Air. Till Then Jeevs Entered.
J - "Virenji, Go Freshen Up First. Maa, The Dinner Is Ready, And I Have Told Tarun To Arrange It On The Dinning."
Va - "Okay Beta. I'll Go Call Virat Till Then. See You Two At The Table."

Vanshika Left.

J - "Hand Abhi To Me. You Can Play Later With Him. Go Change Yourself Virenji..."
V - "Why? Are You Jealous That He & Me Are Playing?"
J - "Whatever...It's Dinner Time So Go Change. And He'll Probably Start Crying Now. It's His Eating Time Also." Taking Abhi From Viren She Continued "Now Goo..."
V - "You Seem In Bad Mood Toady...!! You Didn't Even Ask Anything About My Day At Office. Nor Did You Hugged Me Or Kissed Me..." He Said Almost Pouting Like A Child.
J - "What? Stupid Observation Of You Mr. Vadhera. I'm Fine, There Isn't Anything Wrong With My Mood. Now Go Freshen Up Please? I Had Already Placed Your Clothes Inside.Till Then I'll Feed Abhi..."
V - "Thank You Mrs. Vadhera..." He Said While Kissing Her Lightly And Then Kissing His Son On His Forehead...
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Jesus Christ!! 😆
Milee, Ayushi Keany...😆 And Every Single Person Asking For An Update Soon...
I Didn't Even Think About The Next Update Yet!! 😕

So Here It Is...🥱 Total Crrap It Is!!! 😕 🤢
Sorry For The Short Update Again! 😕

Thank You Forr All Your Love...❤️
Take Care! 😛

P.S ~ Do Suggest Me Some Names For My SS!! 🤣 My Brain Ain't Working!! 😕
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
it aint crap
its amazing
just wonderful
thanx for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
it was a cute update not crap at all
thanks for the PMS
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Short, and sweet😊😊
Virenji's comment: Jeevika's mood swings👍🏼 best one in this update😊
one request,
Riddhi, can you pls give little more of virika romance and viren spending more time with Abhi??? pls!!!!

Thank You
Priya
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