SANAM BEWAFA... {III}update 35, 1/3/14. on PG 143. - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago
its not a joke i mean missing ur updates buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04


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I feel Ram is making fool Priya & Neha so that Priya get agree to go back with Ram to India let's see btw awesome preview sand me sand me when ever u update...


may be ,,, they will come india but in different circumstances.. hehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

its not a joke i mean missing ur updates buddy


i know.. time please .. 15 min mein update ready .. pakka .. hehehe

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello peers

after a long time here is part 30 for u all- only those who like not fore those who dislike. one humble request from me is dont peek in and go. do let me know u read. be genuine.. good or bad do comment. but dont go compare analyse abt my ff /ss/os on others threads. anything every one is welcome. do add me in buddy list ... for PM"S not every one will read most imp and beautiful parts of my ff. so here may i expect 4o likes and comments from my readers.. i know more than 40 read this ff.. but i was asking for a normal figure. ..

NOTE : please dont call me by name i know many of u are familiar with my name.. actually last year's Bday thread appeared on google search, which is created by one of the dearest friend then . i had a good class about that.. please kindly reserve my name calling..

AM-luvbalh..





Part 30

A New morning, a new warmness around her a feeling of security she stirred in bed, being difficult for her to twist, she was wrapped in his arms sleepingpeacefully. She turned to gently brush her lips to his cheek- he caught her move who is much in his senses, his lips found the pair, turning her down he caged her between him n bed, she cherished the moment their lips mated with equal fervor closed her eyes she consumed the moment. his hands is in thier own way exposing her to his view. He kissed her neck, grabbed her waist in his hands gently pressed making her moan, she pushed him adjusted her attire being aware of the approaching kids shouting. He hugged her again ...

R: what ! now,

P; ram .. please.. u r now a father remember.

R; first let me be a husband btw my kids are in their room it s too early to wake them up..

KNOCK ... KNOCK... PAPA, Mumma...

She smiled .. showing him the time.. better luck next time romeo,

R;Yaar , they have no school today why cant they sleep a little long.

P;Usually they do but they were so exited abt their papa,, see they only need papa mumma comes later..

R: Haan .[proudly] my kids.. but yaar priya.. in all this its poor me!

P: HAAN... what ... !!!

R: Yes its me... i dont even had a proper morning, it remained in complete. Will do a thing , make them sleep and will continue the morning chores...

AWW!!! Incomplete! U mean it.. ur incorrigible ram, what u r doing is not called as morning chores. Dont know what else u would have done to me..

Arrey priya .. been so long, u forgot .. i will make u remember, u dont know even.. its my duty to teach u..

RAM... enough .. i know what u mean .. go open the door i will just come.. engage them till i come.. today! yes .. Type a resignation letter for me.. later. I hope u remember what we have to do today...

Yes . mam ... !..

GOOD MORNING MUMMA , GOOD MORNING PAPA... both jumped over ram, priya went inside thinking sure he will try his best to make them sleep. She gave laptop to him and took kids along with her. ram typed a letter and got prints of it but he is not 100% liking it. he talked to her , try to convince her not to but she has decided.. it is a test to see the change in rajath. She is feeding riya n pihu running after them he caught hold of these two little devils she feed him along with them he did the same that was a beautiful family breakfast he wish for always. Yes it was his wish since the time he saw vikram feeding neha when she is pregnant apparently he was a man in love not a husband then. He blushed thinking of the most spl day of his life.



flash back...

Neha: Vikram please yaar its enough now , two toast two omlets, two glasses of juice, steamed veggies what's wrong with u ... this is a feast kya.. plz stop it .. i cant eat anymore.. no spice nothing yuck..

Vikram : SHUT UP am not feeding for u but for my baby ok .. chup chat eat well..

Priya: Yele ... neha leave all this eat this.. am sure u will like it.. i made it..spl permission leke ... bread burji. Taste it u will feel good. Vikram let her eat what she likes, u have to take care of her mood swings... ram dont laugh u have to tell him. Priya said..

RAM:Haan ,, ur right... vikram ur wrong..

Vikram: u first get married then will see how will u let eat junk food, u r very cautious now it slef and when priya is pregnant then ..will see..

Priya and ram looked at each other, remembering the time they have been togather, for them they were a couple a married couple who literally are not married. Ram had a doubt.. opps will priya, wil she be , there is an awakward silence between them.priya excused herself and he followed her.

R: priya, ahh... i want to ask... hesitating- woh vikram.. i mean we both ...that night, pregnancy...

P; dont worry, nothing of such is going to happen..
R; but we did..

P;ram stop embarrassing me! I got my period later.. ok...

R: thank god.. that just happened and we r not yet marrried ..am relaxed now..

P: hmm willl not have any problem.. marry me!

R: priya, am the elderson in my house so as u.. our parents will have some wishes regarding our marriage so i want to give that happines to maa and dadi. Dadi is waiting for my wedding since long time.

P: i can understand but i cant come to india as am now! I dont have anyone except u. I came from home as an orphan.. and what is there to hide from u .. i cant come to INDIA..

R: just tell me priya what is bothering u. ...y cant we go to India..

P; ram i have no intentions to hide it with u, in fact u are the only one who can understand. its truth of life y am i here today. y i was reluctant to go back. who is there for me to return. i came here as priya. i decided the same day i stepped out of my house ...[ alone tear rolled down her eye...] i came out as priya, not as priya sharma every one stared at me as i walk out till my body vanished off their view... that day .. first time i spoke to maa.

Shipra: priya... Why are u spoiling ayesha's n karthik's future. I cant see my daughter unhappy.

P: mein.. Kaun hu maa!

S: u r not my daughter... I never wanted u.. u are bad luck to me. I lost my life because of u.. kaash that day u were not in my womb.

P; tha's my fault ma!

S; yes it was a biggest break to me. I fainted on the set. Doctor confirmed I am pregnant, I lost the chance to be the face of a brand..its u ur the reason.

P:that's y u hate me?

S: u r a badluck to me as well as my kidds. Ayesha loves ram...that ram is mad he found u beautiful. If u quite ram will marry ayesha for nuts karthink wil also be settled. If u want to see my family happy just back off.

P; maa, ram loves me. What if he is not a tycoon .. ayesha would never look at him.then

S: then ram should have been ur but ayesha likes him .. this is the last thing u give to me..

P: I should not have born ever. I will not come infront of u again. I am leaving for ever. I always want u be happy.

S; thank god,I wil be happy now. U will leave from my home.i will manage ur dad, i can settle my kids.. promise me u will never turn back and see ur self as priyasharma.. go away like an orphan.. never come back

P; orphan am no less than one. U should have aborted me ma.. kuch ulta seeda kaliya hota..one last question, have u fed me atleast once- shipra looked away] ok mein samaj gayi maa...

She turned to ram in tears, he cupped her face took her in his arms and patted her back to console.she clutched his shirt tight continued to say- then I packed my things papa tried to stop me, but because of the promise he gave to maa he could not say a word. Pata hai ram maa should have done my shard too. One last time I turned around and said, "papa, thanku so much,shipra ji u hate me for the thing which am not responsible, am going am not coming into ur daughter's life I always pray for u and ur familiy. Ram do not know where am I going. If ram is ok to marry ayesha he will.. can u bless me once before I leave?'" I bent to touch her feet first time ever in my life she kept her hand on my head saying don't return to us as priya sharma. U are dead for me. Am an orphan,literally if we go to india I will not be able to marry u,I cant come to india . don't force me am happy if u don't marry me! All I know is I LOVE U for me u r my man. She walked away from him wiping her eyes leaving him behind in tears.

They gathered for lunch, joe and nisha were not there, only ram priya, vikram neha. Ram is enjoying vikram's torture.neha is vexed of vikram's care.

N: ram please tell ur friend.. galti is my mom's who asked him to take care of me. mom word made priya emotional he caught her hand moved close to her.she felt consoled.

R: what is there in that neha he is being extra careful..

VI: thanku ram first time u r supporting me.

N:priya yaar u tell can I eat for two, he is feeding me double than what I can eat.

P: neha he is so sweet and u r complaining..btw I do not have experience so don't ask me..

V: haha, thanku sister..

Soon then waiter served their order. Ram served all he served double than what vikram can eat.

V: oy , what is this..

R; u look so weak , taking care of neha u r neglecting ur health.. common now u have to eat..

V; I cant that too this much...

P: arrey when neha can apparently u can. U also have to be fit and fine to look after her y neha?

N: exactly .. love u both..

R: BTW criedt is madam's not mine..

V: stopit.. am not having it that too ghasphoos .. ewww!

R: oh.. ab samjh mein aya.. neha ki problem.

V: ram u don't know lot of mood swings will be there, to avoide this am keeping her full.

N; what!

V: haan ,, aur ram u will know that when priya becomes pregnant.

R; am not like u and priya only prefers ghas phoos so I wont have problem.. I will love to feed her what ever she ask for..

P: really ..

R; haan .. let me be a father ..

N: helooo romeo ,,, first marry her then be a father.

R: nahi neha marriage is not necessary to be ...oops.. [priya blushed and stamped his feet.] ouch ...

N; kya hua..

R: nothing... haan u 3.. am inviting u to my wedding,

V: wedding,u r inviting priya too.

N: ram are u mad ..u both love each other I thought u will marry priya..n u inviting her.. u r so mean ram

P; u r inviting me to ur wedding!. Are u joking ram.

R: no y will I joke .. u r invited to MY wedding..

P: oh ...

R: what happpened to u ...

P: good luck. She was about to leave ram caught her hand.

R: where are u going. ...

She did not speak, he asked her again , u should know who is my bride? She nodded no. feeling shattered she said am not intrested..he pulled her back.. she took her hand back enough ram kapoor,marry who ever u want am a fool to trust u , am an idiot who blindly trusted u and.. offered u me.. have a great life ahead.

N; what ... priya u mean it... u and ram.. omg ram r u mad why have u done this to her and now u r talking abt ur marriage to her disguisting,. Neha is anxious vikram took her awaywhile neha was shouting curses to ram he remained smiling. Priya wiped her tears. Congrats ram... She walked off..

Priya.. invitation... tum jao I will send to the invitation card.. am sure my beautiful bride will look angelic today...

present...


He came out the thoughts, priya gathered courage.. she walked to wards dayijaan. Rajth came there, she gave the envelop to him . he saw it he was expecting it. Rajath firmly asked are u shifting to india. Ram intruded, sayingno. He want to find a big house for them as in status of RK they will stat ehere till his business in malls stabilizes. Rajath gave a meek smile. Genunly ram asked rajath's help to find a best realter,on dayijaan urges ram accepted to shift.in rajath;'s place. Rajth is helpless he felt happy to have priya in front of his eyes ram is happy that his plan worked. Next step is awaiting for rajath. Ram asked dayijan is there any extra room for his guest for whom he wanted to shift. Ram requested her to accomidate them and he is fine in priya's flat. Ram's guest who the hell r they rajath suspected.he felt sad the same time coz of the delay of priya to shift to his house.



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Edited by luvbalh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u so much for the update and the PM.Update was really nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow thnks for pm me nd its fab lovd it waiting for next one
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lekshmimukesh

Thank u so much for the update and the PM.Update was really nice.


next one is exclusive to only few.. most beautiful part i promise
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

wow thnks for pm me nd its fab lovd it waiting for next one


immediately after the count ... thanku so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally we got the update...
Thanks for the pm..
Very nice update..
Hope th count gets completed soon..
Update soon..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh yaar thnxxx so much for continuing it after along time...really really happy for raya uniting...let them get married soon...lovelyyy update...now plsss dont stop and continue soon...amd yess do pm me the next time...thnxxc

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