OS: A new beginning..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is the next of Jaan, in my version...

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Two months later.. Antara was sitting in the entrance. She was thinking about her smiling father and how all of sudden raghu killed him. But she couldn't deny her love for him, The guy who made her believe in love, who became the most important one for her. She hadn't consummated her wedding with Satya and she would never do that. Because her soul and body belonged only to Raghu.

Antara was going into her room and suddenly heard a noise from Daya Mai's room. She quietly stepped toward her door and tried to listen what was her new plan. And she heard " Nobody know that I killed Antara's dad. Raghu was just a pawn, used by me. He even didn't know that he had committed this accident. he just discovered this before his wedding. But I will have to throw out this Antara from my son's life. She can't be a part of this house. I hope Raghu won't discover my real face. Yes! Daya mai is the terrorist, she can do everything for money and for have a big name... "

Antara was in a big shock. She was punishing Raghu for a mistake that he never did. Antara was feeling so ashamed that she married satya to make Raghu jealous. She has played with her own feelings. Why she didn't believe on her Raghu?

She quickly ran out the house, and bumped into strong arms. She rose her head to see his face. It was Satya.

" I want divorce!!" Antara said. Satya was shocked. " How can she said this?how she can leave me? How? Why she couldn't be mine? "
" I love only Raghu! "
" why? Why raghu? Always Raghu... Why? I'm nothing to you?. All that matters to everyone is Raghu " he got tears into his eyes.

Raghu was walking on the road. Satya walked toward him and look at him furiously .

"I'm not in the mood to fight! Leave me alone"
" Raghu I lose and You won!" He hugged Raghu meaning to say that we are brothers. Raghu couldn't stop his self and also joined the hug. After all he spent his childhood with that guy, today they felt that jealousy kept making distance between them
But the main thing was love. Satya stepped back and walked toward Antara. He held her hand, Raghu felt bad. Satya took Antara to Raghu and said "she is only your! "

Antara and Raghu were amazed. All of sudden there was a. Change into their attitudes which was making them bit confuse . Antara hugged Raghu, Satya went. He was suprised.

" I love only n only you Raghu! " Raghu cried and kept hugging her passionately..
" I know you are innocent " she said.
" I'm sorry Jaan! " Antara stepped back and cleaned his tears. Antara didn't wanted to tell anything to Raghu about Daya Maayi. she was fed up of all this, fights n all..
" Raghu we will leave this basti and make a new beginning. "
" Yes Antara! A new life where we will make came true our dreams... " they again hugged each other.

Satya told to her mom that he's going back to London. He signed the divorce paper and went away from their lifes. DM thinking about her new tricks.




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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amira loved it soo much
pls cont it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice...
hayai i want CV's to read this and take the show like this...
loved it...
r u continuing???
if u do please pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Grt work amira..
Nice concept..
Conti soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Liked it very much would it happen like that in the show
Continue ASAP😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely . Waiting eagerly next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a big twist so quick?? wow loved it i hope you continue it!!
PS. I really can't wait to read more of your FF's update: KHNH...plz try and update that soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow i wish they should have shown this in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear!😛 bole to jhakasss😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it amira😳😳 awesome update👏👏 pls continue soon😊😊

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