||3rd Stage|| Kriyaansh And Swaron Story Update Pg 4 (PG 7 IMP!)

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4th Stage


And then the lover.

Sighing like a furnace, with a woeful ballad.

Made to his mistress' eyebrow.

As these lines were read out by the teacher , my cheeks were flushed , knowing exactly where everyone would be looking now. As the teacher explained these lines , I just wanted to dig a big hole and bury myself there. My friend nudged me.

"What!"

She nods in a no. I sighed , and looked at the teacher.

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These lines were read and I couldn't help but look at her , her cheeks were flushed , I could clearly understand what she must be thinking. Probably wanting to dig a hole and bury herself in there. I somehow controlled my laughter , when I saw her friend nudging her. She looked so adorable with that small pout.

"Reyaansh."

"Yes ma'am?"

I stood up , and she looked behind .

"Explain these lines."

"Uh , ma'am in these lines , the poet is speaking about the 4th stage of a man. Where he is a lover , and if the lady he loves rejects him , he thinks that his life has ended , and that he has no reason to live. So he starts writing awful ballads that is a poem in a story format ."

"Good. You may sit."

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As he read these lines , I stared at him , controlling my giggle . After all I have seen those awful ballads which he has written for his lady love . Just the difference is that she had not actually rejected him . just that this "phattu" does not have the guts to go and speak to her. I then shifted my eyes on kria , who was giggling . Of course who won't. Listening some explanations normally from reyaansh singhaania is surprising , but that's what happens with everyone when the teacher who has asked for an explanation is damn strict.

I shrugged the thoughts away , and looked at Sharon. She looked so pretty , as she sat timidly . afraid that kria would burst out any moment from now. I controlled by giggle. Sharon turned to me , and gave her weird "HI" , and I saw kria bursting out laughing seeing that. Why did she have to stretch the III , and give such a weird smile .

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I was busy protecting myself from the wrath of my friend kria , but then thank god to rey's explanation , she giggled. So I started speaking to her again. When she nudged me , and told me that swayam was looking here. I smiled mischievously. Oh! How much I love giving that really cheesy Hi to swayam. Come on that's my habit , I do that even to rey , when I find him staring at kria. But with swayam , I really loved the confused hi he would reply back with. So I turned and saw him.

"HIII."

Swayam looked at me confused. Kria burst out laughing , and he replied back with a hi.

"Sharon , kria and swayam seem a bit out of the class , kria come to the first bench , ria shift to her place , and Sharon sit there in the corner. Swayam come sit right in front of me."

Oh no! Not again , what is her problem with all of us , I saw rey smirk. Hass le beta , tera bhi din aayega. And I sat down. But to my luck as soon as I sat , the bell rang and I did a small dance. I pitied swayam , he was sitting right under the sadu's nose. Poor him .

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Just a random thought. If you all like it i will continue.

P.S- Rey is not the reason for kria's annoyance. The lines are from "Seven Ages" by William Shakespere. The first POV is of kria , then rey , then swayam , and then sharon.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hve also studied dis poem i think its Seven Stages...??
BTW Ausumm Update...!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reserve
unreserve

and she's back !
ishana your back with a new work 😃
yes !!

okay this was written in a really different and interesting way...
quite eye catching..
i loved the way you portrayed all the 4 characters in this poem... 😳 👍🏼
this was truly beautiful..
nice one 👍🏼 👏
well done !!

thanks for the PM 😳

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well, i firstly talking about the poem
i really love this one <3
lekin humari khadoos pagal irritating eng teacher ne ise pasaya toh hum literally sone wale the. 2 bache toh already so gaye the :P
now coming to OS
it was short, crisp, cute and beautiful !
i toally loved the way you portrayed all the 4"s emotions in a just a few lines :)
good job done (y)
lovee ya,
anjori ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome poem
i really love this one
coming to the os
its a short cute and beautiful
i totally loved how u protrayed the 4 persons in the poem
just loved ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st of all lovely poem...though jab padhi thi bhot bakwaas lagti thi...start was beautiful...do continue, i'll love to read ahead
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start 😊
continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am a big TRian and i might not even read the later parts...but i have to say this..ur an awesome writer😛

I am sure u shd continue👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was absolutely cute :)
it brought a smile on my face :)
something about friendship that touches us all!
please continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vah vah meri sherni, :P
well done

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