VIRIKA SS ~ Bundle Of Joy [Chapter ~ 10; Pg:23] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Grete update...
love jeevika suprise party for viren
virika romance
thanks for update...continue sooonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Never say ur update or story is bad its
Awesome
Mindblowing
Sweet
Caring
Lovy dovie
Cute
Out of the world
Virika
Abhi
New born
New happiness
New world
... Speachless
Seriously di... The update is just mindblowing superbbbv... Cant write bcoz m speachless ... Umh di ur a superb writer and the story is so good... It is so loving... Viren is so nice to jeevika as we all know he is and same goes yo jeevika and the new member of vadheras abhi... Such a cute name... Cant wait for the fishi surprise which i guess jeevika planned... I hope not something bad happens... Fonger crossed... I really wanna read more so di plsh plah update soon cant wait... Eagerly waiting for the next surprising part and virikas romanticness... Thanks once again and pming me...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
it was superb continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Loved all d 3 parts
Amazing
Fun
Too good
Waiting fr nxt part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I Have It In My Mind Just Need To Pen It Down!! 🤢 😕

Will Try Updating My This SS Soon Too!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiddhiTacker


I Have It In My Mind Just Need To Pen It Down!! 🤢 😕

Will Try Updating My This SS Soon Too!!! 😊


i m waiting😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter ~ 4

It was a beautiful morning in the winter. December had just started and you could feel the cool breeze at early mornings and late nights. For.the rest of the day, it would be as hot as in summer! The Mumbai climate!! 🥱

I just opened my eyes to find two people lying next to me cuddling with eachother. Viren and my one hand on the beautiful soul who entered our life a few months ago.
Perfect moment for the three of us. I finally decided to get up. I took off my hand from Abhi and lightly kissed onto his forehead. Getting a bit disturbed he shifted more towards Viren. Abhi was just a few months old but would turn on his own and while sleeping would put his little hands around his parents. He did exactly the same he put his hand onto Viren as if hugging him and sleeping peacefully on his fathers arms. Then I placed a kiss on viren's cheek. To which he just smiled in his sleep, placing his hand more protectively onto Abhi. I left for shower after placing some cushions on my side of the bed just as precaution so that Abhi wouldn't fall off the bed. Of course I knew he wouldn't need it as he was sleeping under his dad's protection.

After a few minutes I came out of the bathroom and saw my son wide awake, and trying to wake his father. As soon as he felt my presence he looked at me and threw his hands out indicating me to pick him up. I really wondered how fast this little boy was growing up? Behaving like a baby who has turned two!
Moving towards the bed I arranged the pillows and picked him up.
J - " Aww...my baby is up? Hmm?" She said pecking him on his little cheeks to which his smile just widened.
V - " Yes Your both the babies are up! Haina Abhi?" He said taking him from her.
Now, Abhi and dadaa will have a bath. And then go to have breakfast..hmm?"
J - " VirenJi, don't forget you have a hearing today. Don't get late. Or else you just get ready I'll make him bath later."
V - " It's okay Jeevika. I'll make him bath today." He said heading to the bathroom. Jeevs arranged the room, removed Viren's clothes and Abhi's also, placed Viren's cell, wallet, laptop bag, kerchief everything on bed and left for the kitchen.

Entering the kitchen I wished Maa Good Morning.
J - " Good Morning Maa."
V - " Good Morning beta. Is Viren up? And Abhi?"
J - " Yes Maa. Both are up. And the father son are bathing together today..." she said smiling.
V - " Good. Go wake your another baby now. And tell him to be here in 15 mins. Till then I'll place breakfast on the table."
J - " Okay Maa." She said giggling 😆 a little and then leaving the kitchen to wake up Virat.

Just as she entered Virat's room it was all in a mess. Things lying here and there. And she found Virat sleeping on his books, and his laptop. His phone was almost on the edge of the bed. She quickly picked the phone and placed it on the side table. She nudged him a bit and tried waking him up. But it vain. Then she nudged him hard finally. But with his closed eyes he said - " Bhabhi, please just let me sleep two more minutes? I'll get ready for hospital and be there on breakfast table. Pakka!!"
J - "Till then I'll clear your messy room. just 5 mins Virat, Not more and before going for shower make your bed! Today you'll do that as a fine for sleeping for five mins more."
Vi " Alright Bhabhi will do. Thank you..."
Jeevika arranged his rest of the room them woke him up again and sent him to the bathroom. She headed to the breakfast table to see Viren sitting their with Abhi on his lap playing with his father's shirt.
Just as she settled on her seat Viren asked her - " so is your third baby up by now? 😆 Or still as usual 5 mins more drama?"
J - " no he's up. He'll be here. Maa, you two have your breakfast. I'll feed Abhi till then. And then have breakfast with Virat." She said taking Abhi from Viren and heading towards her room.
After sometime she came back with Abhi to the table.
She settled on her seat with Abhi on her lap.
Vi - " Bhabhi sorry. I know you waited for me to have breakfast but I sat before."
J - " it's okay Virat. I'll have it later. Don't worry." She said smiling.
Viren and Virat were leaving for their jobs...
Vi - " Bhabhi...errmmm..."
J - " I know. I'll arrange the bed after I put Abhi to sleep. No go. You both are getting late." She said taking Abhi from Viren who gave a small peck to his son n then to his beautiful wife. 😳 😛
Vi - " wow Bhabhi!! You know me so well! Thank you...love you..."he said giving a side hug to her...
V - " oye besharam, meri biwi hain woh..." he said hitting Virat playfully on his arms. 😆
J - " VirenJi...okay enough of your thank you's and all you're getting late..."


Viren Virat hugged Maa and left for their destinations.
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So Here Is The Fourth Chapter.

Sorry For The Short Update.

Hope You'll Like This Crap Update Of Mine!! 😆

Take Care All! ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
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muahahahahaha... my evil laugh 😆

was that the cutest update or whattt?
like omfg ❤️
the way you described each and every detail in the first paragraph
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Nothing can happen to that adorable baby when his father is next to him, and he has such a caring mother like Jeevika ❤️
This update was just fabulousss!!!
Especially the way Jeevika takes care of the whole family!
Beautifully written... I think my favorites update yet...
Superb and can't wait to read more ❤️
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
lovely update riddhi😊😊😊
the perfect morning with the perfect posture😊❤️😉
abhi is just amazing he threw his hands out to pick him up awww so cute❤️🤗
jeevika has three babies 😊😊
but little one is cutest 😆
father -son taking bath together lovely😊
no one can do there work without jeevika😊
and specially loved the last part viren being possessive 😆😆😉
love viren 🤗❤️
perfect update👍🏼
continue soon thanks for the PM😊
will be waiting for next 😊😉😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Edited by Kays94 - December 05 2013 at 11:16pm ❤️

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