Akdha OS : Pyaar kiya toh darna kya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi ! Its my first attempt to write an OS n I'm just 13 so please forgive me for my mistakes 😊
Jodha was very happy as Jalal did justice with Tasneem and banned child marriage.😊 Meanwhile , Maham Anga and Adham plotted a plan against Jodha. 😡 It was evening's time and Jodha was walking in the palace,she saw Rahim playing near the balcony and went there. Jodha : Arre khan-e-khana aap aaj akele khel rahe hai .Rahim: Kya kare choti ammi jaan humare saath koi khelta hi nahi hai . Jodha : Accha ab hum aapke saath khelenge . They both started playing chidiya udd😛 Suddenly a man with his face covered with a black cloth pushed Jodha and she fell to the ground (because there was no grill). Her head was bleeding badly.The soldiers tried to catch the man but before they could catch him, the man drank poison and died.Rahim went to Jalal and said :Shehenshah woh choti Ammi jaan gir gayi hain unhe kisi ne dhakka diya aur unhe bohut chot bhi aayi hai ! Jalal rushed and saw Jodha on the ground . He went downstairs to pick Jodha . He was shocked to see Jodha in that condition and placed her head in his lap . Jodha : Humme garv hai Shehenshah ki aapne phirse ek uchit nirnaye liya hai , ab humare jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai isliye hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai , Hum huumm aapse prem kkk karte hai.With this her vision become blurred and she became unconscious . Jalal picked her in his arms and called hakim sahiba.After 2 days Jodha regained consciousness.Jalal had sleepless nights since Jodha's accident took place. Jalal came to Jodha's chambers.b aap kaisi hai Jodha begum ?Jodha : aap do din se soye nahi hai ? Jalal : aapko kaise pata ? Jodha : Aapki aankhen bata rahi hai ki aap soye nhi hai 😊 Jalal tried to change the topic and said : Jodha begum woh uss din aap kya keh rahi thi ki aap humse kya karti hai (in a naughty tone ) Jodha blushed and said : kuch nahi , humne kuch nahi kaha tha 😳 Jalal : Jhooth mat boliye humne suna tha aapne kuch aisa kaha tha ki aap humse kuch karti hai par kya karti hai yeh yaad nhi aa raha 😛 Jodha : Prem karte hai bas par humme pata hai ki aap humse prem nahi karte isliye ab iss baat ko yaha samaapt kar dete hai . (in a sad tone ) Jalal : aapse kissne kaha ki hum aapse mohabbat nahi karte ? Jodha was utter shocked 😲 Jalal : Hum aapse beintehaan mohabbat karte hai aur aapke pyaar mein pagal ho gaye hai . Jodha : kya ? sach mein aap humse prem karte hai ? 😳
Jalal : haan Jodha begum hum aapse behad mohabbat karte hai !
Jodha was very happy she hugged Jalal n both were lost i each others arms 😊
The end . please forgive me for my mistakes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful piece👏👏! You write so awesome yar..😳😳. Plz continue this na..plz..plz..make it SS or FF... aur AkDha ki prem kahani apni zubani likho.😛😛..enjoyed it to core...v nice👏👏👏

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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Short andf sweet...
Loved meri yaar...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arya75

Short andf sweet...

Loved meri yaar...

Thank you very much 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aur likhna yar...awesome piece..😳

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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

aur likhna yar...awesome piece..😳


Sorry yaar exams are coming I can't write yeh bhi badi mushkil se likhs hai 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os ... Write more 👏
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Originally posted by: Quboolhai1234

Nice os ... Write more 👏


Thanks 😊😊

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