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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

hey Avi!!!!!!!

as usual mind blowing. i am really glad that everything is falling into place i am just waiting for geet and maans relationship to fall into place too so the story could move forward and plz one request DONT END THIS STORY THIS SOON cuz this is one of the stories i came to fall in love with. waiting eagerly to know what will happen next.

Thanks so much.
It is not so soon. This story will finish 9 months when I am done.😃
Glad you are liking it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

My updates are too long as it is.. so I can understand.
I wanted Maan to say it when it was not just a teenage dream. It had to mean something.
Geet, poor thing, Avi ne dono ko kitna sataya...😆
Some sweet romance coming..😃
Thanks for the support Aditi. I treasure it when other writers think I can write.. I still don't believe it but I do treasure it.😃


Di you are a fabulous writer...your writing inspires me to write and give better updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful chapters..

maan will not give up that easily...hope geet also does not give up...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago


ek teaser ho jaaye avi??😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ek teaser ho jaaye avi??😉

Mood off hai..
try karungi though...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago


but ur updates make it more happier
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mood off hai..
try karungi though...😕



mera bhi off hain... is liye tho maang rahi hoon

anyways ... aapka mood kaise teek karoo???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mera bhi off hain... is liye tho maang rahi hoon

anyways ... aapka mood kaise teek karoo???


Flu hai.. sniffling and coughing.. sar bhaari hai.. want to sleep par kaam itna hai ki nahi kar sakti
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Posted: 11 years ago



TEASER


"Kya kaha tum ne?"... I shake her a tiny bit because she seems to be in shock ".. Tum ne mujhe kya samjha hai?".

She moves away from me looking at me as if I was a ghost.

"Giit! Main tumse baat kar raha hu...", I step towards her.

She steps back away from me as I keep advancing forward. Her back finally hits the wall and she looks to each side to see how she can run away from me.

I put both my hands on either side of her trapping her to the wall. When she looks like she will duck in the space between us, I move closer to her not giving her space to escape.

I stare down at her angrily. Did she think I was getting married? How dare she? How dare she not trust in me?

Have I ever given her any reason to doubt me? My anger rises some more because she will not look at me.

Har baat ke liye na. Har baar dur rehti hai mujh se. I put a finger beneath her chin raising her eyes to mine forcing her to meet my gaze.


"Inn aankhon mein tumhe koi aur nazar aata hai Giit? Jawab do, mujhe".


She closes her eyes not willing to see me. "Mujhe kuch nahi dekhna. Mujhe jaane dijiye".


"Pehle jawab do Giit. Inn aankho mein tum kya dekhti ho? Tumhare siwa koi aur kabhi tha yaha?", I close the distance between us some more so that our breaths are mingling with each other now.


"Mujhe na hi kuch dekhna hai, na hi kuch samajhna hai. Mujhe jaane dijiye. Aap ki aankhen mujhe samajh nahi aati. Aur ab in pe mera koi haq bhi nahi hai. Chodiye mujhe Mr. Khurana", she squirms trying to get away from me.


Mr. Khurana. That was all the tinder needed for me to explode now.


"Kabhi nahi. Ek baat saaf saaf samajh lo Giit. Tum meri thi, tum meri ho aur tum meri humesha rahogi" I stare her down.

When she refuses to acknowledge me, I argue "Ek toh mere letter ka jawab nahi diya, na koi phone, na koi email; phir bhi maine tumhara intezaar kiya, do saal tak, aur tum mujhe tewaar dikha rahi ho? Ab wohi hoga jo munzoore Maan hoga, warna...", I squeeze her waist bringing her into contact with me.


Anyone interested? Several short updates from now on as I am really really busy. PMs will only be when each part is done. Please bookmark this thread. Thanks.
All of those who are silent, please remain so because I am putting all of Maaneet love scenes on the password protected blog only for the readers who comment.
👏 Thanks for making me do something I don't want to do.👏

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh hain mera waala fav maan... hayee... i can read this on and on...

khud tho ithna sab kuch soch daala geet ke baare main aand now when she is doing the same... he is asking trust nahi hain kya😆

mera waala maan ka lambaaa update ka wait karoongi avi...

till then u take care...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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