FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Sweety dint expect such a scene 👏 The way karthik tries to change Raji's mood and the real fact about the childrens that changes her 👏. Amazing Sweety
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update sweety... One suggestion, thought it would have been good if the kids had asked about Vishnu or smthing like that... Just to bring out their friendship and the fact that vishnu helps ppl in distress...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeppudi ungalala mattum ippadi yosika mudiyudhu. Really superb...👏👏👏👏👏Serial la karthiya pidikum ippo innum romba pidikudhu. Good keep up the good work. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful concept sweety...very neatly penned down the harsh reality ...Also you have fitted in aptly to the situation.. Good one 👏⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful concept. you are good author.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 41

Karthik and Raji enter into the house and find Lakshmi and Vishnu working seriously.

Karthik: enna panreenga rendu perum?

Lakshmi: intha kaushik project la work pannittu irundhadhule vera edhuvum gavanikkalai... german client kitta irundhu edo mail vandhirukku ... athai Viswanathan Sir forward panni irukkaaru... athaan parthittu irukken...

Raji: appadiya... (she goes and sits beside Lakshmi.)

Karthik: dei... Vishnu... nee ennadaa panre?

Vishnu: chummaa Facebook le updates parthittu irukken.

He keeps his laptop aside, looks at Karthik and asks...

Vishnu: enga daa... Vidiyalai Nokki... varaikkumaa?

Karthik: mmm...

Vishnu: naan appove nenachen... nee thaan kovilukku nnu sonne..

Karthik: kovilukku thaan daa ponom... madam onnum divert aagalai... Vera vazhi illaama thaan koottittu ponen... sari ippove varen...

He goes upstairs.

Lakshmi: enakku puriyalai... enga di poneenga?

Raji explains her entire thing. Listening to this Lakshmi gets emotional and has tears.

Raji: Vishnu... ungalukkum theriyumaa?

Vishnu: enga... first time naanum Karthiyum thaan ponom... aanaa adhukku appuram naan anga poradhillai... enna help venum naalum seyven aanaa anga mattum poga maatten...

Raji: en appadi?

Vishnu: enakku ponnunga nnaa eppavum santhoshamaa sirichikitte irukkanum... avanga azhuthaa ennaala thaanga mudiyaadhu... adhuvum first time ponappo oru 7 vayasu ponnu appadi kadhari azhuthittu irundhaa... ippo kooda enakku appadiye nyaabagam irukku.. ennaala thaanga mudiyalai.. velile vanthittu ivanukkaaga wait pannittu irundhen...

In the meantime Karthik comes back.

Lakshmi: Karthik.. enakkum antha idam parkanum pola irukku ... ennai anga koottittu poriyaa?

Karthik: kandippaa... intha Saturday varen nu solli irukken... polaam...

Vishnu: vaanga saappidalaam... pasikkudhu...

All of them have dinner and go to sleep.

Lakshmi and Raji discuss about the children and consider them to be very lucky to have parents who support them in all situations. Feeling tired, both of them sleep off.

NEXT DAY:

AT OFFICE:

Everyone gets busy with their work. Raji and Vishnu help Lakshmi with kaushik's project and Karthik gets busy Co-ordinating mails between the client and Viswanathan juggling between German and English.

After a hectic and very busy day's schedule at office, while returning home Lakshmi asks the rest whether anyone knows what's happening on Kaushik's front. All of them reply a "NO". Karthik asks her not to worry and he'll speak to David the next day and inquire about it.

Raji's phone rings...

Raji: Helloo... appaa... eppadi irukkeenga? Naan nallaa irukken... mmm... ippo thaan office mudinji veettukku poyittu irukkom... Sari paa... appadiyaa... romba santhoshamaa irukku paa... Mmm... sari... Udambu parthukkonga paa...

(she keeps quiet for a minute... and continues...)

Helloo... sollunga athai... Mmm... Sari... ok athai... Mmm... Sari vachidaren... bye... (and cuts the call.)

Karthik: enna Raji? Appa eppadi irukkaaru?

Raji: nallaa irukkaaru... naalaikku kaalaiyile discharge panraangalaam.

Lakshmi: Oh... nalla vishayam... annaikku avarai ICU le parthadhukku nee ipppo sonnadhu evvalavo relief aah irukku...

Raji: mmm...

Karthik: sari... athai enna sonnaanga?

Raji: appaavai discharge panni veetle vittuttu naanga kilambiduvom. Naalaikku kaalaile office varumbodhe Lakshmi veetle irundhu bag ellaam eduthittu vandhidu... naanga varumbodhu unnai office le irundhu pickup pannikkarom nu sonnaanga.

Everyone keeps silent. Lakshmi holds Raji's hand and presses gently.

Lakshmi: oru vaaram time ponadhe theriyalai... evvalo jolly yaa irundhadhu... ippo nee naalaikku kilambanum nu nenachaa kashtamaa irukku Raji...

Raji: mmm... enakkum...

Lakshmi: po Raji... unakku puriyalai...

Raji: Lakshmi... naan enna oorukkaa poren? Daily office le parthukkalaam illaiyaa?

Lakshmi: mmm aaamaa...

Again silence prevails. They reach home and have dinner quietly.

IN THE TERRACE:

Raji is quietly sitting and playing with her mobile. Karthik comes and stops at the entrance itself and keeps looking at her. After a while he comes near her, snatches her mobile and lies down on the floor keeping his head on her lap.

Karthik: enna pannittu irukke?

Raji: onnum illai...

Karthik: appadi enna ragasiyam enakku theriyaame...

She takes her mobile from him and keeps it aside.

Karthik: Raji...

Raji: enna?

Karthik: naalaikku kandippaa kilambanumaa?

Raji: aamaa...

Karthik: innoru rendu naal irukkalaam illai...

Raji: athai odhaippaanga... Naalaikku kilambinadhum sonnaa naan edhaavadhu saakku solluveno nnu yosichu innaikke phone panni naalaikku kaalaile Office ku varumbodhe Lakshmi veetle irundhu ellaathaiyum eduthittu vandhidu nnu sonnaanga...

Karthik: pch... ivvalo naal koodave irunthittu naalai le irundhu nee irukka maatte nnu yosikkave ennamo maathiri irukku...

Raji: enakkum appadi thaan irukku...

Karthik: ippo parthu Office le thirumbi parka kooda neram illaama avvalo velaiyaa irukku...

Raji: mmm... Kaushik oda project mudinjaa konjam free aayidalaam..

Karthik: onnum illai... innum work adhigam aagum...

Raji: eppadi solre?

Karthik: intha week full ah intha project ke time sariyaa irukkum... yennaa next Monday... presentation... Appuram 3 weeks le German client oda project ready pannanum...

Raji: ayyayyo... Adhukku time extend panna maattaangalaa?

Karthik: maattaanga...

Raji: adhu eppadi nee solre?

Karthik: next month 15th german client India varaanga... 16th illennaa 17th Project submission irukkum.

Raji: unakku eppadi theriyum?

Karthik: client Viswanathan sir ku mail anuppi irukkaanga...

Raji: Viswanathan sir ku vantha mail pathi unakku eppadi theriyum? Susan sonnangalaa?

Karthik: client anuppina mail ah German le irundhu English ku translate panni Viswanathan sir ku anuppinadhe naan dhaan...

Raji: idhu enna pudhusaa irukku...

Karthik smiles and explains how he got involved so.

Raji: mmm ... sollave illai...

Karthik: enga adhukulla intha Kaushik matter veliye vandhu complete aah disturb panniduchi...

Raji: mmm... enakku santhoshamaa irukku Karthik... Viswanathan Sir ovvorutharaiyum observe panni... namakkulla irukkara BEST ah veliya kondu varaaru...

Karthik: aamaa Raji... avar kitta work panradhu oru thani experience...

Raji: mmm... naanum nee avvalo serious aah work pannittu irundhaa Susan unakku thaniyaa work kuduthirukkaanga nnu nenachen...

Karthik: adippaavi... appove kettirukka vendiyadhu thaane...

Raji: kettaa mattum ... nee unnoda chellathai vittu koduthirukka maatte ille?

Karthik: adhu yaaru ennoda chellam?

Raji: Susan... avanga dhaane unnoda chella BOSS...

Karthik: adippaavi... avanga ennoda Project Manager... oru nalla friend ... avvalavu dhaan...

Raji: mmm... nambitten...

Karthik: ennoda chellam naa... Adhu nee mattum thaan...

He holds her hand in his, looks at her and says "I LOVE YOU RAJI..."

Raji: I LOVE YOU TOO...

She bends and kisses his forehead. He smiles and kisses her palm.


CHAPTER 42... coming soon...


CHAPTER 42


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweety next chapter is 42, you wrongly typed as 45 pa.
Everyday I am waiting for your next chapter. Nice story. I loved it.
Really you deserve for a hug 🤗
Keep up the good work👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the corrections Devi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Enna da innum raji ingaye irukale avanga athai innum oorla irunthu varliyanu last chapter la nenaichen intha chapter la sollitinga. Next chapter la raji vetuku poiduva romance konjam kammiagidum 😭

Asusual nice update Sweety. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
There is no words to express it and each character of the story is well created. I am happy that your story brings out the reality in life and how each one should have the courage to face it too but not like the show which always brings out the enmity . In addition, you have also mentioned about the bad incidents of small children, which is currently happening. Just like vishnu, i don't have the courage to see these kids, really it is very painful and i was totally in tears when i read the story. Hatts off to organizations who tried to help these victims and i pray that culprits should be punished immediately.
Once again your story is awesome...👏

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