ViSa FF~Perfect soul mates~Part 16 updated pg 43- Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25

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omg omg omg killer update i don mind al parts bein lik this too good too good
jus now read was busy watchin the videos visa r magical n srijaz r equally magical

wonderful writing hawt hawt thank goodness me home alone givin a read



LOL, Meriam! I missed this comment of yours, dear. Sorry! 😊

Thank you onde again for leaving a comment. I have to warn you to tune your mind to gutterland before reading this fic and better read it in private! Hehe 😆

SriJaz are just too good. Hope something happens and we see them together on our screen soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! OMG!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!
I am thanking my stars i did not read this FF earlier...
My exam would've gone outta the window...

n u said i treated u to MY OS??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!
Talk abt modesty!!!!!

Dude... I am beyond dead...

I've finally read all parts...n what do i say????????
Hail all!

Ang Laga de was resonating in my mind while i read update after update...

U r one helluva of a writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was feeling low for not having got ViSa at my usual time n u, dude u gave me way more than the usual!!!!!!!!!!!

muah <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 11

She felt Vikrant stiffen at her question and wondered if there was something wrong with what she asked. He moved away from her slowly, not just physically, but emotionally as well. And she was clueless as to why he was distancing himself from her. He covered her with her sari and handed her the discarded blouse and undergarments; and went about wearing his clothes silently, avoiding her questioning gaze all the while.

She knew now with certainty that her question indeed had triggered some unpleasant memory in him. She wondered what it was and was about to ask him when he said, "Please get dressed, Sarita. I will call Raj and Divya in the meantime to find out if the PI has handed over the toy car to them."

She tore her eyes away from his face, which was unreadable at the moment and wore her clothes hastily. She looked up when she heard his voice. "To answer your question, this is a farm house that I own, in the outskirts of Bhopal and no one knows about its existence except me." Saying so, he picked his mobile and started surfing for Raj's number.

She started worrying now; what happened all of a sudden? All the misunderstandings had been cleared and they had finally confessed their love for each other. Why was he acting so strange now? Was there something that he did not want to share with her? She wondered. She did not want to stifle him by being too inquisitive; so she just let it be for now and wanted to wait for him to open up to her, on his own.

He knew that he was being unfair to Sarita by pulling away from her; but he just could not confide in her about this secret yet. He just could not bring himself to do it and he did not know why; so he chose to avoid her question for now and hoped that she would understand his need for some breathing space.

He proceeded to call Raj, all the while avoiding Sarita's eyes. "Hello, Raj." He said and paused to hear Raj talk from the other end. "I know that the cops are looking for us everywhere. But I assure you that we are absolutely fine and in fact in a very safe place. I actually called you to say that I engaged a PI and that he would be coming to you with Abhi's toy car. Can you do me a favor and check the inbuilt video camera in the toy? I think there might be something recorded in it. Please?"

He heard Raj's reply and responded saying, "Thank you, Raj! I owe you a lot. You are taking care of Abhi, you are helping us out with the investigation in every possible manner. How do I ever repay you for all this?"

Raj asked him not to worry and just take care of themselves. Vikrant said, "I had better disconnect the call before the police track it. I will give you an alternate number to contact me as I will be switching my mobile off. Okay?" and proceeded to give him the number before ending the call. He switched off the mobile and threw it on the sofa.

Sarita looked on with a worried frown when her husband was conversing over the phone with RajJi; and placed her hand on his shoulder once he was done, silently prompting him to turn around. When he did, she embraced him and rested her head on his chest to hear its rhythmic beat.

He was surprised when she hugged him; this was the last thing he expected after what transpired between them a few minutes back. But who was he kidding? This was Sarita...HIS Sarita, who was always full of surprises. She just hugged him without any questions asked. She understood him completely and yet he was not ready to disclose everything to her. He brought his arms around her and hugged her back tightly, as if drawing strength from her. They stood this way for a long time before he spoke, "Thank you Sarita, for understanding my need for some space right now. I must have done something good in my previous lifetime, which is why god has blessed me with a bighearted person like you."

Sarita just tightened her arms around him and said, "I know that there is something troubling you and I know that you are unable to divulge right now. I just hope that you will very soon find a confidante in me and unburden your heart."

Vikrant held her arms and pulled back a little to look deep into her eyes. He brought his palms and cupped her face, saying, "Oh how I love you, Sarita! Why are you so generous towards me? I do not deserve you. I am such a bad person, yet you chose to forgive me and accept me with all my flaws. Why? Oh, why?"

She smiled at him and said, "You are my life, Mr.Suryavanshi and I would do anything for you. In fact I am not as generous as you are. You were ready to shower me with all your love when you were under the impression that I did not reciprocate it; you were ready to wait an entire lifetime for me to love you back. What more could a girl ask for? So let us forget about generosity and focus on our love."

He brushed his fingers through his hair in frustration; and interrupted her saying through clenched teeth, "But I also intended to shoot you. What part of that makes you love me?"

She smiled through her tears and this time cupped his cheeks saying, "I cannot explain it. That is why it is love; Love just happens and comes with no conditions, limitations or logic attached."; and placed a tender kiss to his mouth. He reciprocated with equal amount of love and passion. They knew that this was a moment to treasure and cherish, as they felt more close to each other than ever before.

Vikrant dragged his mouth away from her reluctantly and whispered, "I promise to disclose everything to you once I am ready."

She smiled and nodded her head saying, "You take how much ever time you want. But I need another promise from you in the meantime."

"And what would that be Mrs.Suryavanshi?" he enquired teasingly.

"Please promise me that you will never call my husband a bad person again." she said seriously.

He laughed out loud, "I promise. But can I call him naughty? Because that is how he becomes when he is in close proximity of his sexy wife." So saying he pulled her pallu down and attacked her neck with wicked kisses.

To be continued...

Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Pallavi you are setting new records in gutterness😳
Thank God finally you decided to move ahead in the story😉.

Amazing Update and what is that Mr.Suryavanshi is hiding from his wife😕. Did I miss any update

Keep Posting and Thanks Again for the wonderful story
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Meriam beat me again LOL saving my spot will come back later


Meriam is always on the prowl to appease her ViSa gutterness, Nancy! 😛😆 She might beat you every single time! HAHA😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Durresyed

Damn sure pallavi, you are blushing with kind of
Comments you are getting.
As u said u made me speechless.
Main phehle shareef bachhi thi, but VISA made me
guttermind... Kya karein...
Aur oopar se you FF made me...
Take ur own time to update dear...
Iska effect abhi bhi taaza hain... Hahahaaa 😉 😆


Hehe! I am basking in the glory of gutteriness, dear! Can't you see? 😉😆 Did not know I had this much company in this department. 😛😉

Aww, I think I need to run a school for sign/emoticon language, as so many of you are going dumb reading my FF! 😕😉😆

Yeah baby! main bhi sharif bachchi thi, but main toh 8 saal pehle hi bigad gayi...mere pehle favourite couple ko dekhne ke baad. Ab ViSa ne mujhe aur bhi bigaad diya ki FF likhne lagi!😆😆

Thank you dear for your comments and encouragement, because of which I am still able to write this FF!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Hot romantic updt,CNT soon.


Thank you for your lovely comments on every single update, dear!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai☺️

Am I supposed to have/ be a guttermind? 😕🤣 I'm hyperventilating here, I'm in the need of air!! LOOL I'm so loving how ViSa are behaving as newly wed, forget they are running away from police.. these guys are on their honeymoon- eating and *cough, cough* is all they can do!! Jhalsa hai😆

I know you wanted a proper comment but I don't know what to say, I can't comment on what they are doing can I?🤣

Let me know if you are updating tomorrow or not.. got to be vigil and be the first to comment😛😈


Nancy, tujhe ...aur sharam?🤣 Joke mat karo yaar...Kitni baar dekha hai tumne...ViSa SR? mmm? bolo bolo..😉😆


Yes, dear...This is for people who already have their mind in ViSa gutterland. And your mind, my dear has been dwelling there for a long time, if I am not wrong!😆😛
They need to have their alone time before they go back to the real world, toh jalsa karne do na...😳😃

Thank you, dear! for your exciting comments!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

What a Hawwt update, then the ViSa Hawt scene, and SriJaz Romance on sbb *Goes to dream land*


Aww...Thank you, girl!😳 And sorry for this very late reply...Been busy uploading FFs!😃

I am watching the off screen segment and ViSa SR non-stop now, for the past 2 days! 😳

There is nothing worthwhile to watch on TV!😕

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