Hi I guess I'm extremely late reading your FF, but I've come to realise the amazing writers on the forum and have started reading them quite recently.
From the minute I started it I was so hooked I didn't want to sleep last night because I wanted to go on. The way your story flowed was impeccable. You didn't have unnecessary complications and every single detail was just so perfect. The dialogues, the descriptions, the emotions that both Virat and manvi went through were so well written.
I love how there relationship gradually grew, it was a smooth process the way they were both there for each other when they needed someone the most, the way Virat felt guilty during the weeding ceremony seeing the tear in manvi's eye, the way even after they confessed he respected her and wanted to be comfortable that he didn't make a move until he knew that she was completely ready.
You wrote in one update that you knew people wanted that romance factor, but you were so good in being true to the story and not putting any unnecessary romance just to spice things up, and it was perfect, because even without the romance it had its moments, Virman's sarcastic comments, flirty remarks was enough to spice things up. Loved it to the core, you are a brilliant writer.
Love Nush
Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago
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