DMG # 5 |*VIRMAN FF*| Chap 69 pg 138 (3 jan) - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE TEASER NAINA
WAITING FOR UPDATE
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C mene kaha tha na itni jaldi sort out mat karna :p but where is manvi going?...now pls updt soon...wo bhi ekdam big wala :p
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waiting,,,,, nyc teaser... 😊😊😊
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CHAPTER 60
~~ issaq tera...
manvi angrily left the room and virat failed to understand what exactly happened. he just wanted her to answer such a simple question of his but she refused... why cant she answer it and tell him that she really loves him... why cantr she confess her love to him... he just wanted to hear that manvi loves him and their marriage was not a baggage for her...
virat : wish you could understand me manvi... my life is tangled badly and i want your love and support to untangle it... i cant do it alone... dont make me believe on the things that my heart is ready to accept... tell me you cant cheat me...
virat sat near kasak and looked at kasak, kasak his only hope... somewhere in his heart, he knows that manvi would come back to him and only thing that would bring manvi back in his life is kasak... if not for him, she will come for kasak...
virat : bring mumma back kasak... woh humse door jaa rahi hai... stop her baby...
virat lightly held kasak's hand and few tears rolled down his cheek. he never felt so helpless... not even when maya passed away... that time also he had manvi who comforted him... but now... now when he needs nothi ng except manvi, she isnt there to console him... to comfort him... to love him...
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manvi entered her room and closed it behind her. she kept a hand on her mouth to control her sobs. she was crying... utterly crying... she couldnt believe that after giving her whole life to virat and kasak, virat actually did question her... he put a question mark on her love towards them without even thinking for once... she sacrificed every damn dream of her for them and now she is being doubted on... her life has been depleted to such a low level... she felt as if she has no individual identity... she is mrs. manvi virat vadera and now her only identity is also snatched by her husband... now what is her damn identity... who is she... a woman whose husband left her... who disowned her... suddenly her breath hitched... what will happen to her little baby who is growing inside her unaware of what is going on in this real world... what will HER baby go through...
manvi placed a hand on her tummy and lovingly caressed it.
manvi : i am there for you baby... mumma loves you... i will take care of you... you dont have to worry... baby ki mumma hai na... but promise me... promise me you wont leave mumma... you will never hate mumma... mumma ne kuch galat ni kia... you will never hate me... you love mumma... dont you...??

back in hospital, virat was standing in front of vanshika who was sitting beside kasak, who was still very sleepy.
vanshika : kyun virat...??? kyun...???
virat : u know mom she -
vanshika : i know...
virat : she didnt tell us about anything... she ran into maya...
vanshika : virat if... if she told us... then also what...???
would u have stopped yourself for falling in love...??

virat looked away because he knew he was being unreasonable...
vanshika : she did soo much for us...
virat : yeah too an extent that may be she married me in her guilt...
kasak : daadi mumma kab ayegi..??
vanshika : may be in the evening...

vanshika looked at virat saying him her unsaid words. her eyes told him that he was being difficult... he was spoiling things...
kasak : pakka daadi...??
vanshika : hmm...
virat went out of the room and leaned against the wall. he couldnt believe he himself destroyed his world... he himself gave away every happiness of his life... how could he doubt his feelings and most of all manvi's love for him... he saw it in her eyes every second... and now... now as a fool he believed on that cd... he in his anger threw her out of his life... but the question was - did he threw her out of his life or did he intentionally ended his own life...??? how will he be able to survive without her...??? what if she refuses to accept him n come back to him...???
virat : manvi loves me and i love her... end of the story... i dont care about anything now...
virat now exactly knew what he wants to do. he knew he got to go to bcak to manvi... he has to apologise from her and do anything she say... he just wants her back... nothing else... he wants his manvi... his love, hope, life, his everything back... back like the way it was...

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manvi was crying badly when her mobile vibrated. she didnt bother to check who it was... but after five minutes, she checked the mobile thinking what if it was about kasak. but on checking, she found out that it was rishabh. she was confused thinking why did rishabh call her now... what does he needs from her... she switched off her mobile as she wasnt in a stuation to face anyone... she wants to be alone... alone with herself...
virat got into his car and dialled manvi's number but it was switched off. it discouraged him for a second but next moment, he gathered up all the broken pieces of his hope n determination and zoomed towards manvi's place. he needs to see her and talk to her. he wants to tell her that he is apologetic for what happened.
manvi heard a knock at the door of her bedroom and cuddled more into her tweety. this tweety was manvi's favourite ever since naina brought it for her from london.
mitali : honeybun... see who is here to see you...
manvi really hoped it was virat... thinking this she got up and slowly opened the door. her face grew pale the moment she saw rishabh.
manvi : rishabh...
rishabh : i wanted to see you...
mitali : you both sit...
manvi : why rishabh...??
rishabh : manvi...
rishabh stepped close to her and manvi turned her back towards him.
manvi : i cant talk...
rishabh : i heard what happened...
manvi turned around and looked at rishabh.
rishabh : i know you can never do such a thing...

manvi : rishabh... i didnt do anything... maine kuch nahi kiya tha...
rishabh : i know... i know manvi...

manvi needed someone's trust and when rishabh gave it to her, she threw herself in his arms.
manvi : it was an accident...
rishabh : did it... i mean that day -
manvi : we had an argument... i was crying so much that my vision blurred... rishabh... rishabh main...
rishabh : i am listening...
(rubbing her back trying to soothe her...)
manvi : i was scared to lose you...
rishabh : shh... its okk...
manvi : no its not... may be its only me...
rishabh : manvi...
manvi : rishabh i hurted you the most... but still... still you are here with me now...
(she broke the hug and held his hand)
rishabh : i couldnt go away... it still hurts me...
manvi : i am sorry... sorry for what i did to you... to us... rishabh i messed up our lives...
rishabh : no... no manvi... i cant see you like this...
(saying this he softly pecked her forehead)
mitali : virat...
mitali came and saw virat standing at the door step. manvi hurriedly pushed rishabh away and before she could say a word, virat stormed out of the house. manvi ran out of the room leaving behind an angry rishabh.
manvi : virat... virat stop please... virat...

virat sat in his car and closed the door on seeing manvi came running to him.
manvi : ahh...
virat realised that he hurted manvi and her finger got struck in between the car door.
virat : i am sorry... i.. manvi i...
virat took manvi's hand in his and sucked the blood from her finger.
virat : i am really sorry...
manvi smiled seeing that virat still cares for her... how much angry he is from her but she knows that he cant see her in pain... but the next moment he left her hand.
manvi : virat...
virat : let it be...
manvi : i love you virat...

manvi held virat's hand and stopped him from going away.
manvi : there is nothing between rishabh n me...
manvi stated as she knew that virat again misunderstood everything.
manvi : i dont know what you saw... but -
virat : i saw something which i never thought i would see...
manvi : virat... listen to me...
virat : what manvi...??? what...??? you were in his arms in your house... in your bedroom..
manvi : what is wrong with you virat... you were never like this before...

rishabh : you should trust manvi...
virat : you stay out of this...
rishabh : i know its not my business... its just a piece of advice...
virat : dont force me to kill you right here right now...

manvi : virat please...

virat glared at manvi and she left his hand. the look in his eyes scared her...

rishabh : talk to me... dont glare at her...
virat : she is my wife...
rishabh : yeah you disown her once and then you get possessive over her... is she your personal property or something...???
virat punched rishabh hard and he almost lost his balance. manvi stepped back seeing this...
virat : manvi is mine... do you hear me...??
rishabh : you will pay for it...
rishabh wiped the blood from his nose and left after shooting a glare at virat.
virat : you are coming with me... come sit...

manvi didnt say a word and sat in the car. virat n his high temprament was scaring her. she couldnt afford anything happening to her little baby. she was going back to her house but she wasnt happy... was he taking her back just because he was jealous... or he really came to take her back...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg finally u updated naina ji love you❤️ for this😳and a big hug frm all we crazy readers to you🤗


net mein problem hai ...srry comments abh bhi baki hai

wow...virat realised his mistake...but i feel the trust factor is missing...he himself is presuming things abt manvi and rishab is using this weakness to seperate them...and he was somewhere successful too...manvi is right he took her just because he was jealous and he still somewhere doubts her love...very well written ...what abt the revelations yet to happen cd and pregnancy part
these two are the main turning points of your story...i am excited how u will apply in your stry wow excited loved your update as always naina
do continue soon😊
Edited by prathe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh man.! this was something unexpected!! kya scene tha naina!! *claps* yaar i totally imagine ur story like some scene is actually goin on in front of my eyes and may be that's y i never want you to stop!! amazing work again! isi khushi me kal b update chaie :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update again
poor maanvi
again virat misunderstood her
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
O god.. Is rishab ki to main.. Humesha galat time pe ata hai.. Ghatia insaan.. Update was awsum with sum actions n words.. But when will virat know of manvi's pregnancy?? Ab to bata hi do.. And my kasu, let her do her magic n make evrythng alright.. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab Update..!!!
I as so dissapointed first that Virat wanted and answer from Maanvi and he thought Kasak will bring her back dat was really sad..he seriously have given up on his relation..and Loved Vanshika...aankhe kholde...Seriously ek laga bhi dete...brains would have been in complete proper running condition..!

And then Rishab ki entry,...he knew she was emotionally unstable and taking it in to his advantage..and he did it...Now if Virat had gotten well from his mom, wouldn't speak but gotten forward and understood...(Esliyee meine kaha, agar mom lagadete tau shayad reaction acha milta)

Maanvi had right question in the end, now it important that Virat opens up his brain and puts an end to MU ! Off course with the drama..Loved it Naina,!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Poor maanvi
Plz cont soon

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