A TAAREY FF TILL MY LAST BREATH CHAP 27+NOTE PAGE 84 UPDATED - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: my_angel...

awww what a beautiful ff ma

so caring and lovable taani
with each chappy it's getting better
i loved it to core
do continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD

awesome updt
loved taani and children scenes
updt soon

😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rose_taarey

wahooo awesome post...

rey stil luvs taani, taani character is too strong in ur ff. I lyked it...
ab to hospital bhi whi hei so gangs nxt plan wil again be flooped
pls update asap...

Thank you...it means a lottt...you know this appreciation for my work😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum update .. 👏

gang is so stubborn .. 😡

gang ka plan fail ho gya .. 😆

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

Thank youuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
will update fastt
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 14:

Swayam: yeh kahan le kar aayi ho...
Taani:(raising her eye brows) kyun...kya hua...'
Swayam: kuch nahi...
Taani: tho chaliye...
Taani showed them the way...Gang followed her with heavy heart...
Taani: yeh mere bhai ka institute hain...aur ek Multi speciality hospital...
Rey: your brother...
Taani: haan rey...DR. RAVI..well known surgeon of the city...patients ke queue hain mere bhai ke appointment keliye...(she said that with a pride)
What Taani told was true,the hospital was buzzing with patients...long queues in the OP counter,nurses were running here and there,medical students walking along with doctors...
to their surprise they saw Annu there...
Taani: annu...ANNU...
Annu: di...(to the person nearby) abhi aayi...(running to Taani)ji...yeh log...
Taani: tu inko bhai ke paas le chal...physician nahi hain aaj...
Annu: ok...lekin aap kahan jaa rahi ho..
Taani: mein zara Ramaya bhabhi ko mil kar aati hoon...
Annu: wo room no.304 pe...
Taani: pata hain...le jaa...
Saying so she left and the gang followed them to dr's room..
Rey: Dr Ravi Taani ke bhai hain...
Annu: aapse matlab...
Swayam: tameez se baath kar annu...
Annu: excuse me...annu sirf mein apne appno keliye...
Swayam: aur mein..
Annu: jaldi chaliye...Ravi uncle ab free hain...
They all move forward to enter
Annu: sab log andar aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain...do ya theen hi kafi hain...
Rey: amar,mein aur sharon under jaayenge..
Annu knocks the door and enters...
Annu: HELLO...
Ravi: hey Annu, what a pleasant surprise...
She goes and hugs him...Following her Rey,Sharon,Amar and Rinni enters...There they saw a handsome man around 35 near Annu..wearing neat blue shirt and black pants with sthetescope in his pocket..
His neatly set hairs and clean shave added to his charm...
Ravi: who are these young friends...
Annu: anni ke friends..aapse kaha tha na...
Ravi: ho..yeah..i remember...sirf 4..where are the rest...
Annu: waiting outside...
Ravi: are Tanu ke friends,bahar...tu bhi na...
He moves past them and opens the door..
Ravi: hey..come inside...
All of them comes inside...
Ravi: please be seated...so how can i help you...
Annu:(before nil can speak anything)Yeh Rinni hain inhe chot lagi hain...
Ravi: oh i see...
he comes near Rinni with a basin full of cotton, a pair of scissor,syringe and many other medical things...He then carefully removes the bandage and examines the wound...Rey was about say
something when Ravi asks: bullet or knife...which one..
This left them confused..does that mean...
Anni: bullet...Anni ki...
Ravi: oh...(looking at Rinni)don't be scared..it is just a minor scratch...i will dress this up...
While dressing it up...
Ravi: kaise chal raha hain aap logon ki padai...Anni class mein kaisi hain...
Aashi: hum logon ke vacation chal raha hain...
Ravi:(concentrating on dressing the wound) hmmm...that mean you all would be here for vacation...Kish aur Avi vapas aaye kya...
Annu: nahi uncle...
Ravi: lo hogaya...anything else...
Annu:(hesitating a bit) kal...wo..kal...in logon ko bhi chot laga tha...
Gang looked at her in surprise...she gave a forced smile and face all red...
Ravi: why don't you take them to...
Annu: nahi uncle...mujhe ghar jana hain...bye...
Saying this she left the place..
Ravi: isse kya hua ab...khair koi baath nahi...chalo mein le chalta hoon tum sab ko...
He collects his coats and leads them to the nursing room...
Ravi: vaise Anni kahi dikhayi nahi di...kahan hain...
Rey: wo...
Ravi: yeh lo pohanch gaye...nurse...chot lagi hain...dressing ki jaroorat hain...
Voice: DR Ravi...
Hearing the voice his eyes get widened and closes his eyes and smiles...' Anni'...turns the other side find Taani running towards him with her arms wide open..in no time she hugs him tightly
making him stagger a little...
Taani: bhai...
Ravi: hmmm...
Taani: kaise ho aap...
Ravi breaks the hug and cups her cheeks and kisses her on her forehead...Taani closes her eyes in content...enjoying her moment with her Bhai...
Taani:(pulling his arms) chalo bhai...aapse bohot saari baat karni hain...
Ravi: tumhare friends..
Taani: sorry guys...i will be back...till then you finsh with your dressing and all...ok...
Ravi: chale...
Taani puts her hand through his and walks with him keeping her cheek on his upper arms...
Nurse: ander chaliye...
Gang moves inside...soon the nurse start examining their wound...
One nurse:(comming inside) Dr Ravi cabin mein nahi hain...kahan gaye...
Nurse 2: kya hua...kuch urgent...
Nurse 1: kuch nahi...unhe kuch meeting mein jana tha...usi ki remainder dene keliye...
Nurse 2: uski zaroorat nahi padegi...unke behen aaye hain...
Nurse 1: behen...
Nurse 2: tumhe nahi pata...Tansia...Ravi dr ke behen...College mein padthi hain...
Nurse 1: nahi tho...
Nurse 3: use kaise pata hoga...abhi abhi tho aayi hain na..
Nurse 2: mein tho bhool gayi...Tansia, doctor ke behen hain...
Nurse 1: Tansia...(hesitating a bit)wo tho muslim name...
Nurse 3: (lowering her voice)doctor aur bitiya dono sage bhai behan nahi hain...dono anad hain..
Nurse 2: re chup kar...tumhari kam chali jaayegi...aur haan, sage bhai behan ke beech bhi itna pyaar nahi hoga...ek doosare keliye marne keliye bhi tayaar hain...
Nurse 3: aap logon ka ho gaya... aap jaa sakte hain...
Gang left the room dazed by the new info they got about taani...many questions were going unanswered through their mind...if Taani is orphan how can she be this rich...Why did she kill Vivek..
Doctor Ravi..does he know about her deeds...then why is he not stopping her... on the top, why is she keeping all of them here... What does she want????
Taani: finished...lets go...
They looked at her...she was standing there smiling at them..her smile faltered a little seeing them looking at her in a wierd way..
Taani: kya hua..is everything ok...
Rey: haan...
Taani: aap mujhe ese kyun dekh rahe ho...
Rey:(comming back to his senses) ab dekhne keliye alag permission lena padega kya...
Taani: this is better...so..ghar jathe hain...lunch time ho gaya...
They left for Taani's home..when they reached their the children were having their lunch...
Pari: mumma..dekho mein first aa gayi..
Taani:(ruffling her hair) very good,beta...now,go and wash your hands...
Soon everyone finished with their lunch and left the hall...Taani and gang sat down to have theirlunch...
Taani: Anjie...sab ko bhula saath mein khayenge...
Soon all the maids joined them to have lunch...
Taani: kaisa chal raha shaadi ki tayaari...
Anjie:(blushing a bit) bohot acche se...ghekhne aur dresses khareedna baki hain...
Taani: called everyone..relatives..friends..hmmm
Anjie: haan di...sab ko bhula diya...
Taani: take care...kaka jayada stress na le..pata hain na...
Like that they finished their lunch and gang went to their room and came back for dinner... They didnot want to mingle with anyone..
Shilpa: lo aa gaye,mehaman log...Hamara kamra itna pasand aaya kya aapko ki poora din wahi guzaar diya...
Tulsi: shhh...soory,uncle..yeh esa hi hain...lekin aap log ese ek kamare mein rahe toh hum ko bura lagega
Sharon:(with attitude) so...
Tulsi:(little taken aback)so...hum chahte hain ki aap hamare saath baathe kare..we can bhi friends you know...
Sharon: friends..(smirking)with you all...are you nuts...
Shilpa: madam..please apna..
Gitaanjali:(stopping her)lets have our dinner..plzz..late ho raha hain...
Rey:(looking around) Taani kahan hain...
This earned him glares from his friends..
Gita: mumma...bahar gayi hain...latha aunty..khana ban gaya kya...
Taani:(entering house)uski zaroorat nahi hain...yeh dekho kya layi hoon mein...
Jo: wow,mumma...PAANIPURI...YIiPEE...
Shouting panipuri children ran towards her...
Roshan: pata hain,mujhe na aaj panipuri khane ka bohot maan tha...i love you maa...
Taani:(beaming at them)sab log plate le kar aaoo...
Nil: excuse me,miss...hum log yeh paanipuri nahi khane wale..chalo humare liye aur kuch banaoo..
Children glared at him...
Shilpa: Annu di, aap ke bhai ke friends se kaho...agar inhe paanipuri kha kar kuch hua tho mein hospital lekar jaaoongi...
John: chood na...hum kyun takleef uttaye..(to gang)ek raat aap bukhe so jaayiye..isse hamme koi problem nahi hain...ok Good Night...
Taani:(sharpily) John...ese baat karte hain baddo se...(to gang)aap loggon keliye mein hotel se khana order kiya hain...
Giving it to Anjali...'le ke jaa...'
Gritting their teeth they left from there...After having food they went to their room...
Amar: ese bacche mene zindagi main nahi dekha.
Vishaka: haan yaar...kitne badtameez hain...
Swayam: aaj hamara plan flop ho gaya..kal kisi tarah bhi se yahan se nikalna hoga..haan aur Rey..Tum Taani ko bhool jaao wahi tumhare liye better hoga...
Vicky: he is right..tu hamara paas hain, lekin hamara saath nahi hain...you have to choose...between your ex-girlfriend who is a murderer and your friends...
They left Rey there...confused and helpless...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update
i m speechless taani s too orphan😭
dere r mny questions whivh r nt answered yet for gang as well as me.
every tym wen u update...
i think wat wil happen nxt😲
update asap
Edited by rose_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely...

loved taani and ravi bond...both are not siblings but they love each other so much...

love the kids...gang is still so rude ...

rey ...i think he love her...still...

panipuri...omg...i want it now yar...

gang kya nakhre karti hai...jaha sab panipuri ke liye marte hai unhe panipuri nai khani...
Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
I love Taani kid
Kya ans back karte h gang I love it most
I want rey pov wo kya sochta h Taani ke bare me
Taai New secret open lovely
Taani Bro Ravi nice guy
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Aww Taani has a bhai who is a doctor and an excellent one at that too
Taani kids are superb, I love them
I love the way the kids answer the gang lol
Hmm look like Rey is melting towards his Taani
I can't wait to read more
U did an awesome job

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