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Yeh kya pehli update (teaser) mein hi geet ka aisa haal...

Waiting for an update...
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Part 1

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Rano, mohinder, raaji were outside the operation theatre...

And all were praying for her and thinking about the circumstances which happening in last few days or said in minutes...

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Many girls surrounded the one girl, and asking about her would be hubby...

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Raaji : di itna kya Sharma rhi ho Hume bhi batao Jiju ne asa kya kh diya

She : chup kar .. her cheeks were red .. the shyness and the hue that crept on her rosy cheeks was adding in her beauty and charm... the girls were though teasing but everyone was so elated with the fact that she was going to be married .. ( though it will be the second time but still for all the relatives her friends.. geet toh maan ki hone ja rahi hai..)

Girl 1 : usse to chup karwa dongi Par hume toh bata sakti ho

She : Sheila tu bhi raaji ke sath mil gyi Iski badmaashiyo mein ..

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Their teasing were making her feel jittery ..the way her friends were pulling her leg , geet doesn't felt any kind of tensions but the way she would be having her life were in her eyes..

Jo jazbaat aaj tak dil me the dar tha kahin wo jubaan par na aa jaye..

Agar wo jazbaat bayaan ho gaye toh wo khwab .. wo sare sapne kahin bikar na jaye...

Kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye ...

Sheila : geet Humne kya badmaashi ki Hum toh bs aapne jiju ke baare mein puch rhe hai . Jinke naam ki mehendi tum aapne hatho mein lagwa rhi ho

Geet : mein jaa rahi hoon Apne room mein

Sheila : jiju se baat krne Humare saamne hi krlo Hum bhi kr lenge Apne jiju se baat ... issi bahane

Geet : kyun karayu

She stands for going into room, but Sheila stops her.

Sheila : mehandi mein naam toh likhwa le phle

Geet : tumne abhi tak unka naam nhi likha Kya kar rhi thi ab tak

Sheila : tune kaha hi nhi Chal naam bata

Geet : Maan

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Raaji : papa ji Di kitni khush thi . Ye sb meri galati hai

Mohinder : nhi raaji Teri koi galati nhi hai

Raaji : di ko kuch honga toh nhi

Mohinder : kuch nhi honga usse She is fighter na.. . .

Rano : apni mehendi dikha rhi thi mujhe

Kh rhi thi maa

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Wo aaj bhi waise hi honge na

Jaise bachpan mein the

.

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Rano : ha

Geet : pta nhi maa

Ek ajeeb sa darr lag rha hai

Kuch galat na ho jaaye

Rano : asa kuch nhi honga bacha

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Bs ye teri nervousness hai

Aur kuch nhi

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Chl ab soja

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Rano : meri beti shaadi ki jode mein tyaar thi Kitni pyaari lag rhi thi .

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Kitne sapne thi uski aankho mein Ek hi pal mein sb bikhar gya ji Wo khud ko kaise smbhalengi

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Rano placed her head on mohinder's shoulder...

Usne toh apni puri umar bs Maan ke baare mein hi socha hai Usse sb kuch maan liya Aur ab ye sab ho gaya

Mohinder : tum hi ase hosla kho dongi Toh geet ko kaun smbhalenga Usse hmara sath chaiye Rano

Hum kamzor nhi pad sakte

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It was just six hours , and everything was changed ..

11:00 am ( handa haveli )

There was hustle bustle everywhere , anticipation everywhere .. the baraat was just to arrive .. rano was getting panic.. geet was about to go to get ready.. she had done the gauri pujan and now geet was going to get ready ... when there was a sudden panic...

The left wing .. that is the place where place where it was geet's and rajji's room was caught with a sudden fire.. one side the mandap was set up as the pheras were going to be held at haveli only..one side the sudden fire was not seen by anyone..

It was rano who was going to see geet saw the flames... geet was not in the room..she was caught in the washroom.. she was changing when the fire broke into the room..

rano : geet... geet bacha kahan hai... koi hai...

she was not in her senses.. it was actually that the fire crackers that the ladki wale were going to use were caught in the fire and the situation that was already alarming was now getting out of control...

geet who was changing suddenly saw the flames...

geet : ma...

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her voice made rano in fear...

rano : geet

rano try to go inside the house again but neighbours held her...

geet : koi hai

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please help me

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She try to move out from room but, fire exceeding so fastly...

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The smoke and the suffocation was enough for geet to lose her consciousness.. Everything went black...she was having no one who could save her.. the door caught the fire ..but she was having no courage to help herself..

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The next moment geet just experienced a sudden pain that pierced her soul...

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The fire wood fall on her back... the physical pain that made her numb ...

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Khurana family came in hospital...

Daadi : ab geet kaisi hai Rano hugged daadimaa tightly...

Mohinder : maaji geet operation theatre mein hai

(geet admitted in khurana & handa's charitable hospital , and here all facilities presented)

Daadi : rano bte geet thik ho jaayengi Hum sb hai uske sath

Ram : mohinder Dr.khanna(burn specialist) time pet oh aa gye the na

Mohinder : ha Unke aane ke baad hi operation start huya hai

Thanks for everything

Ram : thanks khehne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai Hum jo bhi kr rhe hai Apni beti ke liye kr rhe hai..

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It was three hours when they have got the news of the horrible incident.. it was just fearful even for anyone to think about it ..but she ( geet ) had been suffering from the time... maan was numb..he doesmt know what to do.. suddenly everything was there that was made out of control..

One side he was in a trance what will happen now.. their family and her's family ..

Agar shadi nahi hui toh geet aur sabki izzat.. and now he doesn't know what was his fate.. maan doesn't know why but he was not in his senses.. he doesn't know how he is going to cope up...

Geet ko apnana..

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iss hadse ne bahut kuch badal diya hai.. maan ki soch aur uske jazbaat ...

Will this incident play again with their fate kya vivah ek adura bandhan reh jayega

... was the question . that was probably the question in each and every mind right now...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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priyanka it was so much scary part. my geet is burn. she was so much happy. she was collecting her all dreams but suddenly this accident changed every thing. geet is in hospital. i am shocked after hearing maan's thinking. waiting for next dear
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wow lovely emotioal update.. te way geet ki mehendi and te way all teasing her was lovely cute.. oh god destinty started to poke its nose on my maaneet, te way geet got in fire and te way my maan ki pov was emotional lovely..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sad update but waiting for next
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hi dear! Emotional update! All were happy n excited bt things changed! All sad after the incident n Geet critical! Maan thinking abt everythin! Wt will he decide? Feeling 4 Geet! update soon! Well written

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