MG FF- Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan/thread2 added - Page 13

all the best...👍🏼...waiting for update

ok...waiting for the update

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

issiliye maine mana kiya tha joint story ke liye jab tumne mujhse poochha tha😆😆

sab ko time milna mushkil ho jata hai

No problem you alone can carry it well

Originally posted by: priya111111

oh god yeh kya starting may hi dhamaka😲geet in hospital and yeh maan kya soch raha hai😡

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

nice start...

Originally posted by: love2_soma

vivah ka bandhan kabhi bhi adhoora nehi hosakta...woh toh pura hogahi...

awesome n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: leenukiguru

nice

Originally posted by: geetsmile

awesome super update diii

but yeh kya hogaya

hope maan marry geet

waiting for next

ll be waiting for updte 

PART 2

tyaar ho rhi thi woh

Apne sajaan ke liye

Pr ek pal mein sb tabah ho gya

Aag ne ek ghar basne se phle hi jala diya

Jiska intzaar tha usse...kya wo denga ab sath ?

Thamega uske hath ?

Ya tanha rh jaayengi woh

Adhura rh jaayenga ye vivaah ka bandhan

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Maan sit on one place from a lot of times, he lost into own thoughts, not getting what he do?

He : finally you going back to india

Another : yes buddy

He : and going to married to same girl

Another : hmm

He : why you marrying this girl

Another : what you mean

He : it's simple

Your lifestyle and her ...

Think about this

Another : you are right

But

He : but... what maan

.

Now not said you start loving him from childhood

She is your wife

Your responsibility

Like this

Maan : Zain

Nothing like that

My parents choose her for me

And my parents always choose best for me

Zain : this time his choice , if you not like her...

maan

Maan : so I changed her

Zain : means

Maan : simple

Jb mein usse firse shaadi ke liye ha kh sakta hu

Toh wo khudko mere liye badal nhi sakti kya

Zain : ydi wo na bdli toh

Maan : usse badalna honga

Maan singh khurana never compromise for anything in own life

And for life partner ...never... in any manner

Zain : good buddy

Maan : tu meri shaadi mein aa toh raha hai na

Zain : sorry buddy

It's impossible

Dad ka phone aaya tha

Mujhe directly Bhopal jaana hai

Maan : Bhopal

Par kyun

Zain : I don't know

                 **********

Ram : gautami

Gautami : aa rhi ho baba

Ram : kitna time lagta hai tumhe tyaar hone mein

Hum kissi function mein nhi jaa rhe hai

Gautami : mera beta itne waqt baad ghar aa rha hai

Ye koi choti baat hai

Ram : par

Savitri : thik toh kh rhi hai wo

Ek maa ke dil se pucho toh pata chalenga tumhe

Ram : maa aap bhi

Savitri : yes

                      ************

Maan enters in house happily and sees darkness all side...

Maan : mom

.

Dad

.

Daadi

.

Sb kaha gye

Nakul

Nakul : ji

Maan : itna andhera kyun hai

Loud voice came and he turns to see, whole mansion decorated with his favorite orchards...

Maan : dad

He hugged one by one and so happy return to family...

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All sited in hall and discussing about marriage... and maan sees all this from corridor balcony ...

Maan (think) : sb meri hi shaadi ki baat kr rhe hai

Par kissi ko koi fikr nhi hai

Ek baar bhi nhi socha

Mujhe aur geet  ko aapas mil lena chaiye

Baat kr leni chaiye

.

Kuch toh krna padenga

.

Soch maan kuch soch...

.

.

Daadi

.

                       ***********

Maan entering in daadi room and stop to hear geet name...

Daadi : geet bte

Aapko ek khush khabri dete hai

Hum parso hoshiyarpur aa rhe hai

.

.

Kya hum maan ko bhi le aaye sath mein

.

Bte marzi toh aapki chalengi

Aap chayengi toh le aayenge

Nhi toh nhi

.

Bte aapne jwab nhi diya

.

Good night

Maan (think):- geet ne ha kaha ya na

.

Daadi goes to washroom after talk with geet...

Maan enter and pick daadi phone and check last call...

Maan : yhi number honga geet  ka

He fast save her number own mobile and turn to go...but daadi voice stop him...

Daadi : maan

maan : ji daadi

daadi : aap yaha

maan : wo mein aapse hi baat krne aaya tha

daadi : aur bina baat kiye hi jaa rhe the

maan : wo aap room mein nhi dekhi

toh bs

daadi : ab toh hum aapke saamne hai

baithye

baat krte hai

maan : daadi abhi

daadi : ha

aap hi toh aaye the

maan : daadi aap thk gyi hongi

daadi : hum toh bilkul nhi thke

maan : daadi wo mujhe abhi yaad aaya

wo mujhe apne dost call krni thi

bhut hi important hai

Before daadi again stop him, he wished goodnight, and turn to go...

But daadi take geet name...

Daadi : geet se baat krni hai na aapko

Maan : daadi mein usse kaise baat kr sakta hu

Mere pass toh number tk nhi hai

Daadi : ha ye bhi hai

Pr jo number abhi aapne humare cell se liya hai na

He shocked how daadi know...

Daadi : shock hone ki koi jaroorat nhi hai

Humne aapko mirror mein phle hi dekh liya tha

Jb hum geet se baat kr rhe the

.

Maan : daadi wo mein

Daadi widely smiled own his state...

Daadi : waise ek baat aur batate hai

Jo number aapne liya hai na

Uspe geet se baat krna thoda mushkil hai

Maan : kyun

Daadi : wo number geet ke dad ka hai

Is waqt aap unhe call karenge

Ya directly geet se baat krna jyada thik rahenga

Maan (think) : ab kya karu

Daadi : aap kuch nhi kr sakte

Pr aapki daadi aapki problem solve kr sakti hai

.

Maan : daadi

.

Daadi give geet number to him...

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Maan try geet number from past 10 minutes, in this between he called her 8 times, but she not picking his call...he threw the phone on bed in frustration ...

Maan : here I am trying talk with her

And she showing attitude.

Mera phone tk nhi utha rhi

.

.

He sits on bed and think "maan usse tera number kaise pata honga...humne toh kbhi baat ki hi nhi...

He picks the phone and again dials her number...this time she picked his call at one ringtone...

She: hello

He felt her voice is so sweet like honey... he not said any word...

She again said "hello"

                       ***************

Present

Geet operation successfulled... all felt so relaxed ...

Ram : mohinder , rano bhabhi ab aapko ghar jaana chaiye

Rano : huamri bachi

Ram : abhi wo so rhi hai

Usse kuch ganto ke baad hi hosh aayenga

Tb tak aap dono bhi thoda aaram krlo

Mohinder : ram

Daadi : ram shi kh rha hai

Ram : maa aap bhi jaaiye

Daadi : par tum yaha akele

Ram : gautami aa rhi hai

Rano : mein yhi rahungi

Daadi : chliye aap humare sath

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