YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread3*ch.52 page 141 - Page 76

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sweet_aayushi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
u really decribed each and every thing beautifully
loved it do continue soon and thanx for the PM
and we readers love to read about virika so plz dont end it so soon
love ur updates

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it ❤️
Last part :(
Anyways very cute.
The baby girl kicking hard .. Awww..
The moving and all <3
But can't wait till you write more...

*First Comment after 3 busy months in IF***
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing updates
virika move to new house woww
waiting to read next part soon
keep continuing
thanks for the pms
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
SUPERBLYYY WRITTEN...
ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT...

DON'T U DARE to EVEN THINK of ENDING IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dress 🤣

Dun feel like undressing coz u ending my zaaine :'(

*Like* (my like Button nt wrking)
Commenting frm tab so no colourful comment :D

UNDRESS
Lol jeevika locked viren ??? tht was unexpected :D mood swings i tell u ')
I just love the way how viren was begging her to let him in ..
Haha i can imagine viren sexy looks in office attire :p eeekkksss ..!! hes a killer man !!
Coming back to the update
Lol the their convo in the bed room was soo cuteee
And on the next day how viren was nt letting jeevs do anywrk .. Awww hes so caring ..!!
Well karina i TRUELY love this part especially the first part .. lol
This is my one of the fav story
And u ending it ??? NAHINNN YEH SUNNE SE PEHLEY MEIN MAR KIUN NAE GAI 🤣
Please ill kill u if u stop giving me my zaaineee
Loads of hate ❤️
Zainab
Edited by candyVirika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update...Loved it...
The cutest story written ever on virika...
Loved how Zaaine is well brought up by Virika...
Finally they have moved to a new home..
Thanks for the PM..Continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
sry keeni for commenting late...busy wud my exam na...sry
very well written...jeevs moodswing prt was vry cute
finally they moved to their new home
nice updt
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 49


Jeevika woke up almost at noon on the first day in their new home. She went downstairs to see Viren and Zaaine fixing around the small details of the house. Zaaine was putting their family pictures inside the frame as Viren was hammering them up on the wall. Jeevika walked near Viren and finally got his attention.
v - "Look whose awake!"
j - "Good morning"
v - "You mean good afternoon. You slept a full 14 hours"
j - "Viren"
v - "Yes sleeping beauty"
j - "Don't call me that"
v - "Why not"

Jeevika's face was a mix of anger and frustration, and her big eyes started swelling a little making Viren realize that she was going to cry if he didn't shut up and be nice to her.

v - "Okay okay I'm sorry. You worked so hard all week packing and doing everything unlike me so I'm glad you slept that long"
j - "Don't say it if you don't mean it" she said angrily
v - "But I do mean it"
j - "No, you don't. Don't talk to me" she said walking away.

Jeevika was walking towards to the stairs to go back up when Zaaine nagged on Viren and told him to go get Jeevika. He knew his parents to well, and knew his dad just got his mom very anger. Viren smiled at him and quickly reached the stairs and picked up Jeevika.

j - "Leave me alone"
v - "Not happening" he said carrying her to the couch.
j - "I'll just go upstair when you put me down"
v - "I won't let go of you then" he said smirking at her
j - "Don't look at me like that"
v - "Don't threaten me like that then. What do you want for breakfast? Oh wait its too late for breakfast, I mean lunch" he smiled at her putting her down on the couch
j - "Again you've started?"
v - "No... come on tell me what do you want to eat? You didn't eat last night either"
j - "I don't want anything"
v - "Not even ice cream?"
j - "No"
z - "Daa I want ice cream"
v - "No only Jeevika can have ice cream, no one else"
z - "Why not?" he said sadly
j - "You can eat all of it Zaaine, I don't want it" she said trying to get up from the couch

Viren stood right in front of her not letting her move forcing her to sit back down on the couch.

j - "What do you want from me now?"

Viren sat down on the couch then lay down in her lap.

v - "How about the three of us go out today?"
j - "I'm not in the mood to go anywhere and there's a lot of work to be done at home"
v - "We have plenty of time to finish everything. You're exhausted too so lets all just go take a break"
z - "Daa remember?"
j - "What Zaaine?"
v - "He wants us to take him for a movie"
j - "How about both of you go together and I'll stay at home"
z - "No mommy you're gonna come also"
j - "Zaaine no you go with Viren. He'll take you for lunch also"
v - "Who agreed to that?"
j - "I did"
v - "Okay lets go get ready Zaaine. I'm giving you 30 minutes Jeevika... take a nap and then you're coming with us"

Zaaine ran upstairs to his room and Viren and Jeevika went to their room. While Viren went to the bathroom Jeevika cuddled back up in her bed. She loved how cozy their new home was especially their bedroom. When Viren came out he saw Jeevika asleep again and didn't know how to wake her up. Zaaine came to his parents room all ready with his shoes on and looked at a disturbed Viren.

z - "What happened?"
v - "Jeevika's asleep again"
z - "AGAIN? Mommy sleeps a lot"
v - "I know. Let me try waking her up"
v -

v - "Jeevika"
j - "Hmm" she said waking up suddenly
v - "You want to come for the movie?"

Jeevika saw Zaaine standing on the side and saw his sad little face.

j - "Okay fine" she said getting up from her bed. She sat on the bed and looked at Viren and Zaaine who looked happy at her deciding to come with them.

v - "Go get ready fast. Both of us are waiting downstairs"
j - "Ok coming"

Viren went downstairs with Zaaine following him. When Jeevika got downstairs from showering she saw both of them checking out the movie timings on the iPad.

j - "Ready to go"
z - "Yesss" he said running out to the garage.

The three of them quickly got into the car and Viren started driving away.

j - "After the movie we have to go for shopping"
v - "What? Who agreed for shopping?"
j - "I didn't agree for a movie either did I?"
v - "You had to for Zaaine"
j - "Yeah just because he's the only child for two more months"
v - "What do you need to shop for anyways?"
j - "Then nursery"
v - "Ohhh that shopping! I don't mind that" 😛
j - "Of course you don't, but you mind if I have to go shopping"
v - "Because you take forever to decide on one thing, especially now. You take thirty minutes, then I tell you it looks great then you say forget about it. Then we are about to leave the store and you change your mind again"
j - "Okay okay well we're not going for my shopping even though I will need clothes for the reunion party"
v - "Before your outfit we need to decide where we will leave Zaaine?"
z - "Leave me? Where you guys leaving me"
v - "We both have to go to San Diego for one weekend"
z - "Why?"
v - "For our college reunion. We're going meet our old friends"
z - "Me come too. There lots of fishes and dolphins in San Diego"
v - "But we're not going to Sea World"
z - "Why not? You no take me?"

Jeevika looked back at Zaaine who suddenly seemed sad at the thought of being left alone. His face started getting red and tears started coming out from his eyes.

j - "Zaaine don't cry. If you don't want us we won't go okay"

Viren looked through the mirror and couldn't believe his son was actually crying at the thought of them leaving him.

v - "Okay we won't go okay. Don't cry though. Look we're both are taking you for a movie and you're going to keep crying?"
z - "No" he said quietly.

As soon as they reached Jeevika picked Zaaine up and the three went to watch a movie with Zaaine clinging onto his parents more than ever afraid of them leaving him.


A special update for a special person!!! Happy Birthday Marzi Parzi ❤️ I love you loads and loads... well me and Zaaine actually 😛 Hope you have the bestest birthday!!!!!!
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 😊 => unres 😊

Wow a special Zaaine (update) for me..this is the bestest gift i got on my bday.. thank you so so so so so so much keeni peeni... me love you loads n loads too😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 me so happyy..made my day awesome.
Update was like always super se upar and perfect and awesome and fab, and fantabulous and great and mind blowing and amazing and etc... 🤣 actually loved this update so much peeni..
Viren is so funny, love the way he teases Jeevika...and loving Jeevikas mood swings. its really funny...
aweee my Zaaine jiglee poo cried cuz his parent were gonna leave him and go for to SF.. haha hes the cutest kid ever. hope they dnt leave him alone or they should take him to see dolphins 😆
thanks again for updating all the stories Peeni <3 loved all of them. thanks again..

@Millee, thank u sweety, and sorry for this story i have to be first always😉😉

P.S. peeni ill unres for WFL tomorrow..need to sleep now cuz me go to work tomorrow morning.. love u babes <3
Edited by Marzii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!!! :)
me no first :(
but it's okay...
cz marzi is first... nd it's ur birthday...
happy birthday marzi !!! :) # unres..😉😛
now coming to update...
I m so so so happy tht u updated this...
u know zannie is my sweetie pie😛😃... nd don't u dare to forget tht I m his godmother...
nd he loves me alot too...😳
virika they r super adorable as a couple... they r more sweet than any sugar...
but I love them..like I love u...
nd if I will say tht u wrote marvellously... fantastic... mindblowing...amazing...thn u gonna say..tht I m just being sweet which is nt true...cz to praise ur writing skill... I need to learn whole dictenoary... thn also words will be less...
u make us live in all those virika moment again..by ur writing !!!
keep writing... nd keep updating !!!
I lve Zannie ❤️
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago

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