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Posted: 11 years ago
I was never a fan of Anjali after that stupid didi ki saut track and her never ending pathetic intrusions in Arnav and Khushi's life and her saccharine sweet yet annoying voice and those blackmails!
God.

Even her miscarriage couldn't make me like her...it made me neutral but like? No! I always wanted Arnav and Anjali's bond to remain the way it was during the golden time of IPK..and Arnav being Arnav...should have taken stand for Khushi..when time and situations had demanded.

Anyway..in this one..I won't lie but honestly, I didn't like Anjali. She seemed the same minus her saccharine sweetness and blackmail.. I know Anjali is absolutely right and she means the best for Arnav...

But what I LOVED was the way Arnav took his own stand. He might have been harsh but he did what he should have for his love.


But this pain is killing Juhi.


When will the curse end? :/

Koi hint to de do.


I really loved the update..

Waiting for the second part now :)
vidya.sanjay thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope Khushi is not letting everything go.
Anxious for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome - i was expecting it to be Anjali due to some meddling from Arnav and it turned out right so I 'm a happy daddy on that account. So arnav and khushi are still trying to find a way and now they are getting pressured by the outside world. Will this push somehow make them reconsider things especially for Khushi - will she let go or will she fight. I think everything hinges on khushi now - let's see.
will be waiting impatiently for Friday / Saturday now - this is really one hell of a gripping story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Anjali has come on the advice of Aman... They are talking a lot through their eyes... But I think its only Aman who has feelings for Anjali... Anjali behavior never gave any sign to her feelings...

Anjali behavior is little unnerving... But I think that is because she is worried about Arnav... Loosing too much in his life, she is afraid that he might loose himself with another heartbreak and that's why she is being over protective... But the way she talked about khushi without going her angered me...

The time when Khushi is in painting is the most painful time for Arnav...

I just hope khushi won't take any hasty decision after what Anjali has said to her...

Waiting for part two...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated Chapter Nine, Part Two here:





Thanks for waiting!
Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
She is thinking dates - that can really only ever mean one thing!!

Yay!! Innocence may dare alright.

I am not saying anything else. I just sound silly blabbering and fawning all over you and your writing like a groupie. So I will Yipppeee and hope to Lucifer that the guess is correct. Because if it isn't then I am still a blundering idiot

Sigh. But wait...YAY!!!!

PS: Not aging means never reaching menopause. Of course - slaps head. Who would've thought of such practical considerations!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

The last scene reminded me of bella when she realized she was pregnant.

Did they forget that curse or no curse she is still a girl who can conceive.

The chid here will make her immortal i guess

long shot but hope its right
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Posted: 11 years ago
_/\_ I second Meera's comment
Why?
Because I'm dumb 😕
So, I am acting like I am having same thoughts as Meera !

You've left hanging us again...
Whom I was kidding?! Expel and cliff hangers are soulmates !
Loved this chapter !
And I know you are tired of listening this.
YOU ARE ONE HELL OF A WRITER. Okay ?!


PS: Not aging means never reaching menopause.

Now..I seem to get IT.

Edited by AlwyzT. - 11 years ago
arnshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update...slowly they are heading towards the solution
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Posted: 11 years ago
Children are the epitome of innocence. Innocence can dare.....Khushi's child will set Khushi free from the curse ... *in a self assuring tone*
Yes...Yes !

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