Ankhi SS: Jab We Met - On Hold - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jab We Met

Teaser 3

One of the kids of the tour pouted... and she walked to the stairs of the temple.. She sat on the steps and looked towards the people of the village.. When suddenly she heard a voice...

Guide: Bapre, pyari si pari lekin itna gussa! (O God,such a cute angel but so much anger!)

She turned her eyes towards the girl who sat next to her and said...

Kid: Aur nahin to kya.. mein itna door chittorgarh mein aayi.. kyunki sabne jooth bhola ke bahut bari show hoga... lekin yahan kuch bhi to nahin hain... mein yahan nahin aana chaati thi.. Sab ke sab jhoote hain.. (Ofcourse.. I've came from so far to Chittorgarh... because everyone lied to me that there will be a big dance show here... But here there is nothing.. I never wanted to come here.. Everyone are just liars!)

Guide: Aacha to yeh baat hain, tumhe dance shows pasan hain! (Oh so that's the problem, you like dance shows!)

Kid: Bahut! ( A lot)

Guide: Aur agar mein tumhe ek show dikhate hain.. kya tumhe hamara yeh chittorgarh pasan ayegi... (And if I show you a dance show... will you like our chittorgarh...)

The kid replied in excitement...

Kid: Haaannn! (Yesss!)

Guide: Tikein, chalo mere saat... (Ok, come with me...)

Kid: Nahin.. Di ne kahan ajnabee log ke saat nahin jate.. (No, my sister said not to go with strangers..)

Guide: Aare lekin mein to ajnabee nahin hain.. mein to tumhari tour guide hain.. (But we are not strangers... I am your tour guide..)

Kid: Aur tumhara naam kya hain?? (And what's your name??)

Guide: Pakhi.. Pakhi naam hain mera.. Aur tumhara? (Pakhi.. Pakhi is my name.. And yours?)

Kid: Anshika! Kya tum mujhse dosti karogi? (Anshika! Will you be my friend?)

Pakhi: Ofcourse friends forever!! Aab chale... (Now let's go...)

The little kid held pakhi's hands and they walked towards the most beautiful architecture of chittorgarh.. And suddenly Pakhi halted and sat on her knees as she looked at the kid...

Pakhi: Tum yahin ruko mein aati hoon.. (You wait here I'll just be back..)

Anshika nodded and Pakhi ran away.. The kid's eyes followed her confusingly while Pakhi gathered a group of ladies and talked to them excitedly... Few moments later, Pakhi disappeared and Anshika's eyes kept on searching for her.. when suddenly... A music started and she saw Pakhi..


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90XznI1Wfb8[/YOUTUBE]


in a beautiful yellow and pink indian attire.. Pakhi ran to the center of the other ladies.. and she began dancing much to the excitement of the little girl!

As the music came to an end.. Anshika jumped excitedly and rushed to Pakhi.. She hugged Pakhi's waist and looked at her saying...

Anshika: Thank you Didi!

Pakhi sat on her knees smilingly and said..

Pakhi: To aab tum nahin kahoge ke tumhe chittorgarh pasan nahin.. (So now you won't say that you don't like chittorgarh..)

Anshika: Kabhi nahin kahoge.. (I will never say this..)

Pakhi: Good!

And Pakhi kissed the little kid's cheeks.. Suddenly she heard someone calling her from far and turned her gaze to the voice.. Chutki, her adorable niece and Khushi, her best friend stopped in front her, completely out of breath.. Pakhi looked at them confusingly as she said..

Pakhi: Tum dono kyun itna bhaag rahi hain.. Kya huwa? (Why are you both running.. What happened?)

Khushi: Duffer, ek important letter aayi hain, aur tum yahan nach rahi hain! Kitna dhoonda tumhe! (Duffer, an importamt letter came, and you dancing here! We searched for you for so long!)

Pakhi: Letter? Kiska? (Letter? Whose?)

Khushi: Bhool gayi na? Jo hum dono itne dhino se intezaar kar rahi thi.. tum to bhool hi gaya.. (You forgot? What we both have been waiting for so many days.. you completely forgot about it..)

Pakhi said confusingly as she went lost into her thoughts..

Pakhi: Itne dhino se... (For so many days...)

And suddenly her eyes popped out as she remembered! And she yelled out...

Pakhi: Letter! Admission! Excel College!

Please See Author's Note in below post

Edited by aicha99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Author's Note


So my arshi lovers.. yess, you've guess right, the best friend of Pakhi is Khushi Kumari Gupta.. More teasers coming soon.. A preview of the different characters maybe!

For PMs.. please see below post...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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..PMs Related Issues..

If you wish to receive pms.. Add this account.. But only if you intend to click like and a one word comment is all I asked for.. Writing sometimes gets difficult when one is out of inspiration.. and I believe that it's the words of the readers which help the writers not to give up on a story..

Edited by aicha99_pms - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Like button not working 🤔
superlike in the comment only
I am looking forward to it
please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
awesome :)
waiting for next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
interesting precap👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... that is some teaser. sounds great. and that too with arshi, couldn't have been better. do continue. im sure youll come up with a great story.

mallika
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Continue soon.. Thanx for P.M..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Sounds interesting
Can't wait for u to start
Looking forward to end Dec
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
amazing...wish 2 read more of it...

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