ViSa FF~Perfect soul mates~Part 16 updated pg 43- Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys!

NC17 again! I just cannot seem to write serious stuff in this fic! LOL!😆😆 Anyway I have the other one for all the angst stuff. 😉Hehe. Anyway, hope you enjoy this part!

One request though----Please don't go speechless on me, alright?😉😆

PART 10

Vikrant was seated leaning against the hand rest of the sofa, with Sarita seated between his legs that were stretched and spread apart. Sarita took his hands in hers and entwined their fingers together. She looked up to ask, "Now please tell me Mr.Suryavanshi, whom were you talking to over the phone a little earlier?"

"Sarita, that was the private eye that I engaged, to pool some evidence that would prove your innocence." He replied.

"Wow! I forgot that you were the well-renowned businessman MR. VIKRANT SURYAVANSHI' who would not sit around waiting for things to fall in place. He would take the reigns in his hands." She teased

"You are in a mood to tease, when the situation is so serious?" He enquired

"That is the effect you have on me, Mr.Suryavanshi. I feel secure when you are beside me and I know very well that you would not let anything happen to me." She said with confidence.

"I hope I can live up to your expectations, darling. Anyway, the PI called to say that he found Abhi's remote control car that I asked him to locate." He said

That brought a puzzling frown to her face and looked at him questioningly and asked, "Why did you want Abhi's car of all things? How can that be evidence?"

"It is not just a remote control car, but has an inbuilt video camera in it. I remembered that Abhi was playing with it on Karwa Chawth day. So I thought that there might be something recorded in it." He said hopefully.

She turned around to sit cross legged before him and said,"Oh my god, this is wonderful news! I feel so hopeful all of a sudden, Mr. Suryavanshi!"

"I asked the PI to do the job stealthily so that no one gets alerted and he succeeded in it. I have ordered him to hand over the car to Raj and Divya, so that they can look through the video and see if they can find something helpful. But don't get your hopes up too high, Mrs.Suryavanshi. We still don't have any proper evidence." He told her seriously.

She leaned forward, peppered his face with small kisses and said excitedly, "Thank you so much! I feel positive that they will find something in it. I can't wait to get back home, hug our little boy, kiss him and put him to bed. I miss him so much, Mr.Suryavanshi!"

"Oh, are you in a hurry to get away from me, Mrs.Suryavanshi?" he asked her teasingly tugging her arm a little and bringing her forward. "All the hugs and kisses for our son and nothing for me, huh? Now who is going to put me to bed?" He continued saying and pouted a little.

"Aww...You look so cute when you pout! I think I can solve the problem of hugs and kisses, my dear hubby." She said smiling from ear to ear.

"And how are you planning to do that?" he enquired, pulling her closer to him. "Like this" she said and planted a proper kiss to his mouth. She traced the outline of his lips with her tongue to seek entrance into his mouth which he gladly gave. She went on to kiss him deeply, moving her tongue inside his mouth. She leaned across him to get better access to his mouth and balanced herself by placing her palms on his torso. In the process, her sari slipped off her shoulder completely, to expose her creamy skin hidden beneath it.

Until now it was Sarita who was kissing him, but Vikrant could not hold back his hunger for her any longer. He slowly raised his palms and brought it behind her neck to bunch up her hair. His tongue mated with hers and they were kissing each other with frenzy.

Vikrant dragged his lips away from hers, to glide them up her jaw and to her earlobe. He spoke raggedly, while nipping and kissing the tender skin behind her ear, "What are you doing to me, Sarita? I can't seem to control myself when I am around you." ; And continued to inflict sweet torment on her senses.

She gasped in pleasure when his mouth was doing wonderful things to her lobe. His hands were still behind her neck to hold it in place, while he dragged his mouth to her throat. He licked her skin and kissed it with eagerness.

And slowly their positions changed. He started to push her back against the cushions, all the while his mouth ventured further down to settle on the upper part of her creamy mound. He removed his hands from behind her neck, rested his elbows on either side of her waist and pulled back a little to admire the sexy minx before him.

She was squirming with awareness beneath him and that brought him out of the trance that he seemed to have been in. He lifted her a little using one hand and gradually brought his other hand behind her back, to unhook her blouse and her bra. He brought his mouth to plant kisses to her eyes, while doing so he slowly removed both the garments covering her globes and threw it away for it to land carelessly on the floor.

He stared at her perfectly round breasts with its rosy buds looking tempting. He took them in his hands and murmured; "Just perfect" He held them in his hands and moved his thumbs across the rosy tips creating a wonderful feeling. She clutched his shoulders and leaned back, which made her breasts jut out invitingly at him. He held her by the waist and brought his hand to cover her creamy globes with her sari slowly. He noticed her nipples tighten as the sari grazed them and swooped down suddenly to draw her breast into his mouth, through the sari. She groaned when his teeth grazed one bud and his hand rubbed her sari up and down her other breast to create a sensuous friction.

He brought his head up to admire his handiwork and bent down once again to repeat his actions; he bit her nipple with his teeth through her sari, soothed it with his tongue, took her mound into his mouth and released it with a pop. Her sari became wet where his mouth met her breast and he could see the transparent material plastered to her bosom. He moved to her other breast now, repeating his ministrations.

Sarita was going wild with passion and thrashed her head around unable to bear the sweet assault.

He continued his actions until her breasts became raw and tender. He finally pulled his mouth away, only to trail his lips down a little further to settle on her flat stomach. This time, he pushed her sari away to expose her navel to him. He took time to pepper the area around her navel with tiny kisses. He made his way down to her juncture and planted a kiss to it through her sari.

Sarita grabbed the back of his head and held him there as his kisses helped reduce the tender ache she felt at the moment. He used both his hands, pushed her sari up from her ankles and bunched it up at her waist. He brought his mouth down again and kissed her through her panties. This time she could not help but scream at the delicious sensation that spread through her body. He was tempted to rip her panties off, but opted to pull them down using his fingers.

Sarita grabbed his shirt and started pulling it up to remove it from his body. He helped her in the task and did not bother to see where the garment landed. He shed the remainder of his clothes, settled himself between her legs and watched her eyes close as he gradually entered her. He cupped one breast and pulled the other into his mouth as they slowly rocked together to create a beautiful rhythm. It was like they were dancing to a tune only their ears could hear. He spread her legs further apart using his pelvis, to push himself deeper into her and she held his head to her bosom as sensations after sensations hit her.

He knew that he was about to reach his climax but did not want to experience it alone; he wanted her to join him in seeking the pleasure; so he tweaked her already hardened nipple a little and bit the other one in his mouth. She moaned aloud and they cried out together when they reached the peak. The rocking of their bodies gradually came to a halt and so did their erratic breathing. Sarita smiled contentedly as Vikrant planted small kisses between her breasts.

They lay together, their limbs tangled and both of them enjoying the aftermath of lovemaking, when Sarita finally spoke only to question him, "Okay this is going to sound strange and funny and of course I am asking this quite late, but where are we?"

To be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm this guys are on a marathon run☺️ 😳 and conveniently asked Raj and Divya to check the video so that they can have fun😆 . Blame ViSa for making us all gutter minded😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
pallavi
omg omg omg killer update i don mind al parts bein lik this too good too good
jus now read was busy watchin the videos visa r magical n srijaz r equally magical

wonderful writing hawt hawt thank goodness me home alone givin a read
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Posted: 12 years ago
Meriam beat me again LOL saving my spot will come back later
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Hmmm this guys are on a marathon run☺️ 😳 and conveniently asked Raj and Divya to check the video so that they can have fun😆 . Blame ViSa for making us all gutter minded😉


ditto lik in the serial looks lik as if ravya are in toruble n not visa

and ur lines rhyme act run fun awesome
started laughing instsantly
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

Meriam beat me again LOL saving my spot will come back later


anjali beat me this tym
was busy watchin the video lik aleast a zillion times now 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25


anjali beat me this tym
was busy watchin the video lik aleast a zillion times now 😆


😆 I beat you both this time😛 Does that mean I am more gutter minded?😉😳 Pallavi we are having a competition here who comments first, who is more gutter minded rather😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji



😆I beat you both this time😛Does that mean I am more gutter minded?😉😳 Pallavi we are having a competition here who comments first, who is more gutter minded rather😳



LMAO, guys!

I stepped out for a while and look what is happenning! 😆

I think we are all equally gutter minded! I think we should rephrase the saying, Great Minds Think Alike with Great GutterMinds Think Alike! 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wupa



LMAO, guys!

I stepped out for a while and look what is happenning! 😆

I think we are all equally gutter minded! I think we should rephrase the saying, Great Minds Think Alike with Great GutterMinds Think Alike! 😆 😆


so so true all great gutter minds think alike

n we r indeed havin a compedition n u had also edited the title wit the gutter thingy
hw can i not read it immed esp wen i am ho,e alone

plz conti m on vacation at home :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn sure pallavi, you are blushing with kind of
Comments you are getting.
As u said u made me speechless.
Main phehle shareef bachhi thi, but VISA made me
guttermind... Kya karein...
Aur oopar se you FF made me...
Take ur own time to update dear...
Iska effect abhi bhi taaza hain... Hahahaaa 😉 😆
Edited by Durresyed - 12 years ago

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