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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi guys,


Sorry in advance if this part did not match your
expectations. And please don't hate on Raj! He has good intentions, just chooses the wrong way to present them!



And please let me know if I need to continue my FFs after
PV2 ends this week...


Am so angry with Zee right now!



PART 17



Jakhotia
Mansion


Raj's bedroom:



Raj left to walk towards the mandap, as soon as his sisters
left a little earlier. He was so engrossed in his thoughts that he realized a
little late that he left his mobile in the bedroom. So he came back to locate
where he left it.



He looked around and found it lying on the side table near
his cot. He bent to pick it up when something near it caught his eye and
brought a bittersweet smile to his lips. It was a photograph of Divya and him,
taken during their first candle light dinner after graduating from college. He
picked it up and traced the outline of her face with his fingertips,
reminiscing about their time together. He fell flat for her electrifying smile;
and her intelligently crafted arguments won his heart. She was beautiful inside
out... And he did not think twice before hurting her; he was ridden with guilt
and shame every time he thought about it.



Life had a strange way of always coming between them. First
it was her familial responsibility that drove them apart and later his marriage
to SaritaJi. But their love was so strong that it did not wither in spite of
being apart from each other for 10 years. And everything went down the drain
due to a moment of foolishness on his part. How he wished he could turn back
time, he wondered.



He placed the photo frame back in its place and turned to leave his room when he heard a hesitant knock
on the door and saw SaritaJi seeking permission to enter the room. He was
surprised to see her there and smiled at her a little tentatively.



She entered the room and got right to the point. "RajJi I
have something to ask you. Is everything alright between you and Divya, RajJi?"



He took sometime to answer her question. "Everything is
perfectly alright, SaritaJi. What made you think otherwise?"


"Because I see a frown on your face and Divya is overly
joyous, which I feel she is faking." She said without hesitating.



"I think you have got it all wrong, SaritaJi. Divya and I
would not be getting married, if things were not fine between us. Please stop
worrying unnecessarily." He assured her



"I hope you are telling me the truth, RajJi. Please remember
that I am your friend and if there is something bothering you, you can always
tell me." She
said



Raj did not want Sarita to endure any more pain because of
him. So he had to take the only route he could think of; to pretend to be angry
at her. Otherwise she would not rest until she resolved his issues with Divya;
which he wanted to do on his own, without any help from SaritaJi.



Vikrant stopped when he heard Raj's raised voice coming from
his bedroom. He clenched and unclenched his fingers listening to it, anger
stamped all over his face.



Raj mustered all the courage and yelled at Sarita saying,
"How many times do I have to say that I am alright? Can't you understand that I
do not want you to interfere in my affairs anymore, SaritaJi?"



Sarita was stunned into silence and did not know what to
say. And before she could utter a word, Raj continued, "I think you have this
strange compulsion to set things right for me all the time. Please stop doing
that, I am not a child. Besides, I am getting married to Divya in a few minutes
and I do not wish a third person coming between us. I don't need you or your
help anymore SaritaJi, please understand it and leave me alone, for god's sake."



Sarita was taken aback and hurt to hear all these words come
from RajJi's mouth. Her mind stopped working and her eyes reflected the shock
and pain his outburst caused her. He looked away from her, unable to meet her
eyes anymore and said, "Need I remind you that you have a husband and a little
boy waiting for you. It's high time you paid attention to them instead of me."



This made Sarita extremely angry, "I don't have to learn
about family and priorities from you of all people, RajJi! Anyway, thank you
for your advice." She said sarcastically.



"Don't worry; I assure you that I will not get in your way
anymore. I am just deeply hurt that you think of me as a third person. Now I
know my place in your life; thank you for letting me know where I stand." She
said; unaware that Vikrant was witnessing the entire conversation.



Raj was ashamed of himself for resorting to this route and
uttered,"SaritaJi..." without knowing what to say.



Sarita raised her palm to stop him from speaking and said,
"I think you should leave now. Divya must be waiting for you."



Raj made a move to leave the room, thinking that he hurt
SaritaJi deeply with his words today; but he knew that this was something he
had to do. He did not want to be the reason for anymore misunderstandings
between Vikrant and her. He prayed that SaritaJi would not see through this act
of his when she introspected things a little later.



Sarita on the other hand needed a few minutes to comprehend
what transpired just now. She was extremely happy for RajJi and Divya; but was
awfully disheartened at the harsh words that RajJi threw at her face. She
wanted to at least be a good friend to them. But why was it that every time she
made a friend, the said person always wanted her away from their life? She
wondered sadly.



Vikrant left before either of them stepped out of the room; the
anger slowly ebbing away to be replaced by pity for his wife. He assumed that Sarita
had not gotten get over her first love; whereas Raj had no qualms throwing her
away for his first love. Love made people do crazy stuff and now he was slowly
beginning to understand what Sarita might be going through.



What Vikrant did not know was that Sarita was madly in love with
him. And that the sympathy and forgiveness that took over his anger, might
become a huge hurdle to cross later on in their life.




To be continued...


Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

beautiful part cont soon


Thank you, my dear!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another beautiful update Pallavi, though little bit short😉 Please continue with the FF even if the show is ending, we'll be still here😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfu as always pallavi
m so happy tht u give us visaholics wat evr we want lol

nicely written the plot is interesting plzz plzz conitnue
m so depressed abt not gonna hav my visa dosage ever after
so ur ff's are gonna do the job for me
awaiting the update on the other one also 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raja.rani

wonderful dear... feels nice to read this...amid the grief of parting with PV2..


Thank you, dear!😳

I write this to distract myself from the said grief, dear. 😭😭 ViSa and Ravya had so much unexplored potential. Zee tv can go to hell!😡

I really will miss PV2 and ViSa so very much. 😭

Hate Zee !😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Awesome update on RaVya , Pallavi👍🏼 So Raj has a long way to go to win his love back, which I am sure he will😉


Thank you, Anjali!😳

Yep Raj has a very long way to go and he will achieve success without any help from Sarita.
Vikrant and Sarita are gonna get closer to each other in the upcoming chapters! 😃

Hope to interact with all of you even after the show ends!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Nyc part,updt soon.
Waiting..



Thank you, alekhika!😊
Will update asap!😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey pallavi!!! Liking the way FF is progressing...
Plz do continue with FF even after PV2 ends.
This is only show am following. Gonna miss it infinite tonnes.
Little smile on our faces plt through ur writings.
Keep up
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 18


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Vikrant stepped outside for a while to ponder over the
conversation that he overheard between Raj and his wife. He realized that his
wife was extremely dejected right now, as all the plans of leading a happy life
with Raj backfired at her, since Raj chose Divya over her. But they were not at
odds with each other when they left the park the previous night; so what
happened between then and now that it completely changed the entire scenario?
He did not know; but what he did know was that Raj did not think twice to dump
Sarita; HIS Sarita!



He was disgusted with Raj; how could he just throw Sarita
away like she mattered nothing? He fumed thinking. Though he hated Sarita for
even thinking of eloping with Raj, he could finally understand what she was
going through. She was again in a loveless marriage, this time with him; and she
wanted to break free from it by grabbing onto the happiness which was just within
her reach. But Raj burst her happy bubble just now and she had nowhere else to
go; she had no one to confide in. And he wondered if he was strong enough to
provide her the shoulder she needed to cry on.



And Vikrant's love for her just came to the forefront again
when he thought how dejected Sarita must be right now. It pained him to even
think of the agony she might be going through. She might even lose her belief
in love; he thought and determined that he would not let that happen. He would
do anything to bring back that beautiful smile on her face and the never say
die' attitude of hers, he thought.



She might not love him, but he knew that she cared deeply
for Abhi. He had to set aside his love for her and remember that Abhi was his
main priority. He had to remember why he married Sarita in the first place. And
he would swallow his hurt ego and would try and forgive Sarita for her misdeeds
for his son's sake, he resolved. After all this was the first step towards
healing and mending relations, right? He knew subconsciously that he was not
forgiving her for Abhi's sake, but because he loved her; and he did not realize
that yet.



He knew deep down that Sarita would forget all her sorrows
in Abhi's presence. He might not replace Raj in her life, but he determined
that he would do his damn best to not make her life any more miserable. And he
would seek Abhi's help in making the atmosphere at home tension-free. He knew
that he was being selfish, but he had to do this for his family's sake.
Otherwise the entire reason for their re-marriage will hold no value. He had to
restore peace at home and who knew within no time Sarita might learn to love
them, he wondered hopefully.



He would make Sarita feel special, he will set her happiness
along with his son's as his main priority and show her that she did not need
Raj in her life to be happy. All of a sudden nothing mattered more to him than
her happiness; and he would do anything to make it possible. She had a
wonderful life and he would not let her waste it pining away for Raj, he
resolved. And he would do that starting now. So thinking he proceeded inside
looking for his wife.



Sarita and Vikrant made way towards the mandap from either
side. Vikrant saw that she was gloomy and distracted. He went beside her and
brought his arm around her shoulder and smiled down at her.



Sarita who was pre occupied with so many thoughts, was
startled and puzzled to find her husband embracing her sideways. She breathed a
sigh of relief when she saw him smiling and smiled back tentatively. He squeezed
her shoulder a little, exhibiting support and Sarita was grateful for the
silent strength her was providing her. She leaned into his side and closed her
eyes in contentment.



Vikrant observed her closely and was happy when she leaned
into him. This meant that she was accepting the support he was offering, he
thought thanking god silently in his mind.



Sarita opened her eyes again and Vikrant found that it was
wet with tears, which he assumed was because she was devastated. He did not
know that Sarita had tears of joy and relief, flowing down her face; Joy for
Divya and Raj and relief that her husband finally lent his support when she
needed it the most.



What Sarita and Vikrant did not know was that he was lending
his support to her for all the wrong reasons...






To be continued...

Sorry for the short chapter, guys! I am not that happy with this chapter.😕 Maybe because the reality of parting with ViSa is finally setting in.😭😭So kindly excuse me for not doing a good job!

Will strive to do better with the next one.😃



Will post a longer one tomorrow for sure!😊


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Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
no pallavi
this is really good s
a diferent perspective from vikrant i like this as well
cant wait for the next part make it as longer as possible 😆
as this will be my visa dosage everyday

continue sooon
n yeah a longer part wit mushy stuffs esp fr ppl lik me
u knw what i mean 😉

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