ViSa FF~Perfect soul mates~Part 16 updated pg 43- Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25

pallavi u r killing us all

each n evry one of us
why why oh why

this is so so hawt i so wish aleast somethin close to this happens

awesome plz plz continue soon and do give a serious thought abt a novel😆
m readin it again n again



LMAO,Meriam! 😆

If you have to blame/thank anyone, it would be...

1.Bul3 who put this idea of writing ViSa SR. Hehe 😆

2. ViSa's sizzling chemistry

3. Mills and boon and harlequin novels

Thank you wonderful comments, dear! I am truly humbled, girlie! 😳

Will update on Monday, dear! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i need to wait til monday??
hmmm ok more mushy stuff to fill my mind m ok wit it
u r too good too too good
c hw many fans u hav the gutter minded club s bec bigger 😆

long live Bul3

and i ll check those novels 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25

i need to wait til monday??

hmmm ok more mushy stuff to fill my mind m ok wit it
u r too good too too good
c hw many fans u hav the gutter minded club s bec bigger😆

long live Bul3

and i ll check those novels😉



Thank you, Meriam. 😊

Yeah, the gutter mind club is getting bigger by the day! LOL! 😆

If things go my way, I will update 2 chapters on Monday. I was planning to update today, but was busy packing dear and updating the other fic of mine.

So you have 2 ViSa stories to keep you busy over the weekend.

Oh how we r going to mis ViSa! 😭 what will we do without punar vivaah, guys? 😭 I am way too upset! 😭

Catch you on Monday, dear!
Thanks again for your wonderful comments! 😊


ETA...
Thank you bul3!

Do check out the novels. You have free online ebooks also available on their websites. 😃
Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i understand
u hav a great fam triptry not to get into visa dreamland i get shouted for this reason by my fam members even if someone takes the remote durin the break one stare n they r lik ok fine i ll not change

n i ll c those novels

don say abt the show endin
i m tryin my level best to not think abt it and jus enjoy the moments now it wil b so so hard for me to not hav a daily visa dosage

gosh these 2 are perfect soulmates lik ur ff says
m gonna download al their scenes and load it in my mob or lap so tht i can c it agn n agn
they are so dreamy and mesemerizing and above all
eijaz n srishty are so comfy wit each other tht it al looks so nomral n natural
no over dramatic dialogues or expressions everythin bang on like even the funger choosna scene hmmm one of my fav srishty expr weren exaggerated looked so natural t was able to feel the goosebumps

this is the main reason y i lik these two srijaz shd do a show tog on any channel i ll subscrube it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter rated NC-17

Sorry guys,

I was in no mood to write any serious stuff today, since I am extremely exhausted after my weekend trip. My mind is just not working. LOL!

So this is just a filler part. Kindly do not slipper me!

PART 9

"What?...How?" Asked Sarita, confusion etched all over her face. Vikrant looked at her face which looked flushed and her lips thoroughly ravished from his kisses. He was finding it difficult to concentrate on anything other than his sexy wife.

He adjusted his throat and said, "Sarita, let me just grab a quick shower and we will discuss this in detail, alright?" She nodded her head mutely. He added with a smile, "And while I do that, can you please change into your clothes? I am having trouble concentrating on anything." This brought an identical smile to her face as well.

He took the stairs two at a time and went into the bathroom. She pinned her hair up and proceeded to follow him to the bedroom. She found her clothes from the previous evening strewn all over the room. She picked them up and was about to wear them when she realized that she took her undergarments to the bathroom when she went for her bath earlier and left it there in her haste. She hesitantly knocked on the door. Since the shower was running, Vikrant could not hear it and hence she tried the knob. It was unlocked and she opened it. She was lost in thought as to what was the clue that Vikrantji uncovered. She wanted to get ready before he finished his bath, so that they could converse about everything. She was so immersed in her thoughts that she did not notice the shower curtain slide.

Vikrant was in the middle of his shower when he noticed his attractive wife entering the bathroom and searching for something. Since the robe was bigger in size, it slid from one shoulder and left the curve of her neck exposed to his view. He slid the curtain aside, collected some cold water in his palm and stepped behind her. She was engrossed in some deep thought and that gave him the element of surprise.

He poured the water on her neck and saw it dribble down her shoulder and on her front. He immediately placed his mouth on the water droplets and started licking the areas it touched without wasting any time. He heard her sudden gasp and brought his hands to her waist to hold her in place and continued sucking her neck and shoulder. His fingers began to slowly loosen the sash and part her robe. He pushed the garment down and it pooled around her legs. She was immobile and he put his palms on her flat stomach and pulled her back to him. All she could do was moan in pleasure at the contact. He gradually walked backwards with her until both of them were under the shower.

The spray of water on her breasts hardened her nipples into buds. Vikrant silently brought his hands to them and started kneading them, continuing to kiss the water droplets on her neck and shoulder. She brought her hand backwards and held on to his nape. He bit her shoulder a little and soothed it with his tongue. She had to bite down on her lower lip to stop it from trembling.

He trailed one hand down the valley between her breasts, her stomach, and her navel and brought it to the juncture between her thighs. Her moan grew louder as he pushed a finger into her and kneaded her breast with his other hand at the same time. She turned her head around and his mouth found hers. He kissed her with passion and within no time their tongues were dueling with each other for supremacy. He finally succeeded in plunging his tongue into her mouth. By now his finger was moving in the same pace as his tongue, going in and out and creating a sensuous rhythm.

She could not handle it anymore and said, "Please...I can't wait anymore"

And he immediately pulled his finger out and turned her around. He pushed her to the wall under the shower and immediately planted a kiss to her jaw. It was like his lips had a mind of their own and it gradually started moving down her neck to the top of her breast. He stopped a little to admire the perfect mound and brought his tongue to gently lap the water droplet that was on the bud. She screamed out loud and gripped his hair to hold him to her. He gently bit the nipple and immediately took it into his mouth when she cried out in pleasure; all the while tweaking the other bud with his thumb and forefinger. She was writhing in anticipation.


She pulled him up and kissed him with ferocity. He nibbled her lower lip and she granted access into her mouth again. He placed both his hands under her arms, lifted her up and brought her down onto his throbbing manhood. They both groaned at the contact and Vikrant gradually started moving in and out, creating a delicious tempo. And when they reached the heights of culmination together, they held on to each other like they were each others' lifeline.

He pulled out of her and slowly placed her on her feet. She could not stand as her knees were still wobbly and he immediately held her waist with his arm. She was breathing hard and her voice trembled a little, not due to the shower, but due to the variety of emotions she felt right then, when she asked, "Is it always going to be this intense every time we make love?"

He smirked a little and said, "I believe so, Mrs.Suryavanshi"

Sarita ran her fingers through his hair and looked at him lovingly and whispered, "I love you, Mr.Suryavanshi. Can't believe how lucky I am to have you for my husband."

"And I love you, my dear wifey! I cannot thank god enough to have brought you in my life." Vikrant said with so much conviction that her eyes brimmed with tears. He said, "Shhh.. Please don't cry. I can't see you in pain. Please!" all the while washing her tears away with water.


Sarita looked at her husband in awe and mouthed a silent 'Thank you' to god and brought her lips to plant a kiss on his mouth again...

To be continued...

Sorry guys, if this did not match anyone's expectations! And I promise the story will move forward from the next chapter onwards. You will come to know where they are, what Vikrant found etc etc...

Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
☺️☺️ Had to hide the screen when my friends walked in at the college😆 Hope you had a wonderful trip over the weekend😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
seems someone had a romantic outing...bolo bolo Pallavi😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Awesome update ...

Wow this is hot ... ☺️
Do you do pms ???
If you do can you pm me plz , thanks ...
Love this FF ..
Looking forward for the next update ...


Thank you, Anne!😳

Glad I could make you happy with my FF, dear.😃

I will definitely pm you if time permits girlie! If I forget please do not curse! LOL!😆😆

Thanks once again for reading and loving the fic. You are pushing me into the gutter even more with your comments! hehe😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: beatrice_89

Amazing story. amazing update and great writing style.
pls conf soon pm me if psbl .
p.s am new here
thanks for writing on visa am totally,madly in love with them


Awww, thank you for the flood of compliments, my dear!😳 I will pm you for sure, but if I forget please forgive me!😊

It's my pleasure to appease you guys with my visa FF. So thank you for giving my story a read and leaving a comment!😳

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