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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Lovely People,😃

I am here again with my One shot on Rishbala. This one is again an edited version from the log of my old work. It's quite short and simple but I really found it interesting while writing. So, here it is... 😳😳😳

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***** SMS LOVE *****

"OK, I am leaving!!", Madhu heard her husband Rishabh's voice. She was busy with her 2 kids who were getting ready for school. She came running to the door but Rishabh already left for office. She was feeling very depressed but kids were calling her again, she just snapped the feeling and run to kids' room. When finally children left and she was doing her daily house chores, she remembered the morning incident once again. After 10 years of marriage, their life had become too machinery and dull. Rishabh was busy in his business and she was busy in kids, maintaining the house, making everything perfect for Rishabh and family. In their busy life, they lost their small but sweet moments with each other- the time they used to spent with each other, their sweet secret kisses in the absence of their kids, late night talks with their hand in hand and a lot more. She somehow accepted this but, Rishabh forgot even TODAY also- their marriage anniversary. She knew that he loves her a lot and for her he was the love of life, but still, their relation missed something.

When Rishabh reached his office, he had a feeling that he missed something today, but what?? He tried to remember it but then his phone started buzzing and he was busy in work for long hours.

In afternoon, he got an SMS, it read "Hi, how are you!! You are looking very handsome today, Blue colour suits you a lot!!". Rishabh was very much surprised, he checked the number but it was a private number. Soon, he was busy again and he forgot everything including the incident except his office and work.

Next day, he got another SMS, reading "Hi!! I am a great admirer of you. You achieved so much in small time; I want to be your friend...!"

Now this time, he was both surprised and happy, he wanted to reply but again it was a private number. Slowly, it became a routine. He was getting messages daily. Without knowing, he started waiting for that. He, through the messages, came to know that the sender was a lady and she knew a great deal about him, and was closely observing him daily. Slowly life was colourful again for Rishabh, he became more cheerful. The lady of private number told him through SMS, "It is good that you are a family man that is so rare now days...".

He started giving more time to his wife Madhu and kids. Madhu noticed this. One day, she even asked him, "What happened to you?? You have changed a lot!!" but he could not tell her the real reason, though he very much wanted to do that. He loved her very much- more than anything, and had been faithful to her but could not imagine hurting her by telling a lady entering in their life through SMSs.

Surprisingly, the lady of private number wanted nothing from him. She just wanted to chat with him through SMSs. She never even called, nor gave her name or address. At first, he suspected that she might demand some money or ask for some kind of favour but nothing of that sort happened. Time passed as usual - Rishabh was receiving mysterious but romantic love SMSs almost every day. Sometimes, he really wanted to talk to the lady or reply her message but she remained unknown with her private number.

Finally, after few months, the lady messaged him, "I want to meet you!" The message stunned him at first. Rishabh was both happy and worried. He was in dilemma what to do. Then he said to himself, "I never did anything wrong, so I should not worry. I will meet her to know who she is and what she wants from me."

In the evening, he finished his work early, refreshed himself and went to the restaurant where they decided to meet. She said that she would be in blue dress, his favourite colour. His heart was beating fast, he was nervous when he reached the place. He entered and searched for blue dressed lady, and there she was! He can see her side; she was looking gorgeous from side. He went in front of her and was shocked to see her. His wife, Madhu was sitting there, smiling, wearing his favourite blue colour dress and a Birthday cake, "Happy 35th Birthday Dear Rishabh- from Your SMS Love!!"

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This one is again dedicated to my dearest buddies- Uma (uma88), Akku (JsparrowJ), and Tanu (tanuja.siri)...😳😳


Hope you all would like it...😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey hey i'm first to comment
nice os dear...short but cute...sooo cute😊
in every family this may happen,busy with kids&work...here too happened but madhu made a solution too...i wish to read more...
thankz 4 pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute n sweet os
nice one kavya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thats a cute os kavya..a very sweet way to rekindle their old flame.
loved it and thanks for the dedication🤗
Edited by tanuja.siri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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☺️aww so sweet os just loved it dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS..
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet os sis, loved this madhu more, usually in all our stories rishab wil be sweetest but here madhu grabs it.. And thanks for dedication.. And rishab forgot his own birthday, thats little bad, this much workalcoholic
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute nd lovely os kavya dear... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os kavya😃thanks for pm😉
kg15 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANKS A LOT FOR APPRECIATING MY STORY...

IT MEANS A LOT TO ME...

ACTUALLY I WASN'T EXPECTING MUCH RESPONSE TO THIS SHORT OS BUT I HAD IT...
SO, THANKS TO ALL ONCE AGAIN...!

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