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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

it is great to know that you have re-analysed my comment... i seriously did not mean it to be mean in any way... now that i did read my actual comment again i realize that i could have come across as really harsh... in actual fact i am quite a softy... so i am sorry if you were torn to pieces... Awww , really - u don't have to apologise. I can tell that you're a softy.

And you are right that you can ask for comments and likes for your chapters... and no you haven't only impressed me on the two occasions that i commented... you have impressed me more than that and i have pressed the like button to show my appreciation... as to explain why your previous chapters don't have likes... this is because i started reading your FF late (cause i found out about it late- i am pretty sure)... so when i did start reading i had to read quite a few chapters in one go so i think at the end when i finished if i remember correctly i just wrote a comment saying that i enjoyed all the chapters so far... OK - understood. Thank God - I impressed you more than twice ... or else I would have to go into early retirement from this writing thing😆.

I am glad that you are one of the few people who are trying to keep the forum alive and i will as a reader stand by that... AWESOME 😎.

Last time i checked you were human (& i hope you still are)... I've been called a DRAGON recently , because I spit FIRE a lot😆! ( ya - I am human EVEN NOW😉) you are quite a sweet human might i add... who i feel likes to find happiness in the little things in life... You're absolutely right. again i am sorry if my comment came out wrong... Oh no ... let's forget about THAT.i was never good at expressing how i felt but i tried anyway... and i am happy you replied and understood... I'm glad I understood it also (as sometimes I GET THE WRONG END OF THE STICK 🤣)

Okay i am not going to bore you with more... oh one more thing... there wasn't going to be another comment of why you should let me read... Thank Good ness!!!!!!! 😉 it was just a way of me saying that i am not on of those people who don't comment and then promise to comment to get to read the chapter and don't comment at all in the end... I don't like those kind of people , and I'm happy that u were honest to say so. as i said, i know it was a mistake on my part and i am acceptant to any punishment... Your punishment is U HAVE TO GIVE ME YOUR LIKE AFTER EVERY CHAPTER (whether u liked it or not 😈)

That's all for now navina... and continue the creativity... Sure!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey navi!!
trying to improve!
lol
well the chapter was superb!! [as usual]
Udita the cutie pie, Uday my darling, Manyata the swingy, Jai the super sister, Jaggat the poor guy, Vijay the clumsy and Unnati the matured rocked the chapter
feeling really sad for Brij
hope things go well and nothing happens to Devgarh
i am extremely sorry for the late comment
read the chappy and commented immediately!!!
dont end it all here
:D
u make our day with these updates!!
its is the Kohinoor diamond of updates
So Perfect!!
well KISS method! still in my head...
I'll end my comment here!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

Navi I complete my promise dear😉

You get likes see once😊
If I m am forget to I've like any chapter thn tell me😳
Now don't scold me and don't cry also😡
Because I hate tears😆
Now I want update Also jaldi dena😛
Or my uday ablest give me update😃
Or else my bodyguard uday will beat you😆
Get it😉

Thank u so much for keeping your promise Ayesha. U made me very happy😃 (see ... all my teeth are showing).
I think the next update will be MIDNIGHT TOMORROW - I will scrap youEmbarrassed.
HAWWW 😲 ... Why do u have body-guards? Are u a queen ??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Res..

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no never..

i knw dis is d Forbidden word in ur dictionary Di.. Not FORBIDDEN but definitely THE MOST HATED😉!

so i wont use it... Great!😎

well den i will hve face d my punishment in ur style
as promised...

n i dnt wanna do dat..😆

so
nw firstly really sorry
for commenting so late... Awww , it's not late ... so u don't have to apologise😃.

bt as vacations r ovr
n college hectic life as taken a toll on me again.. Shame, shame!

well firstly m confused
till nw der wernt any prblems in Manyata's pregnancy..
are dis problms d aftr effects of d storm dat
dey had faced..??? BRAVO MISS SONIA👏 ... I'm so proud that u worked it out.
i mean d sea-storm..

well hope everythng will be fine..
best part of d update is
Udita-uday covo.. It always is😉😆.

jzz love her... Yep , I agree!

n d hillarious part was Manyata's cravings,,,
well i mean banana n ketchup... GROSS! right?
donno hormnal changes..

n i hve tried choclate sandwich..
its yumm
so very chocolaty...
widout vegeis.. If u add veges then it'll be awful🤢!

well hve u tried i mean Chicken pizza wid Chocolate sauce..
?????😕 No - even if someone would pay me to try it ... I WOULDN'T!

again classified under
hormonal changes.. Correct!

so finally Uday is all set to hunt
Vijay baana down...🤣
poor Vijay Bhai hope he makes it up
frm jungle trip sound n safe...🤣 But that is IF they go on the trip😉.

n my fav part was
d last part..
d three Siblings enacting Uday..My favourite part also😳.

What do u mean Jai ... I'm not conceited , Uday barked back. Yeah - you are ... you give that "I'M CUTE AND I KNOW IT" smirk! Ya , and then there's that "I'M SEXY AND I KNOW IT" smirk , Vijay chipped in. Lastly, Manyata added her 2 penny worth : Not to mention, the "I'M HOT AND I KNOW IT" smirk! Uday opened his mouth to say something but didn't have a come-back-retort after the trio had their say. Even Udita giggled, seeing her "first-time lost-for-words" father!
Dada - seems like the siblings are very obsessed with your looks ,Dey sternly r unnati..
aftrall he is d The Sexy Hot Prince Charming... Indeed !!!

Unnati whispered to Uday ... ghar jaake, hum aapki nazar uthaarenge! Zarur humari bhi toh nazar lagti hai rozz.. Mine too 🤣
lozs...😆

hope brij makes it up wid d truth to Manveer
on tym.. Hmm , gotta wait & see.

since nw i hve bored u wid my oh-so-short-comment.. Huh😲! (If THIS is "oh-so-short" ... I DON'T EVER want a LONG COMMENT FROM YOU😆)
i will take ur leave..
u knw hve to unres on Andy's thread...
orelse she will eat me up alive... Yeah - she's very dangerous (I'm also scared of her😉)
well i remembered sumthng jzz nw..
its dat i comment on ur n andy's joint work
n no one seemed to qoute it.. Sorry about that Sonia ... your comment came under Andy's quota - so , it's her turn to quote you. But she's gone VERY LAZY recently😡 ... I'll give her a good scolding for ignoring you. (We'll quote it soon - don't worry)

well nw dat i hve reminded u...
do d honours soon.. Yep ... thanks for the reminder.
will keep an eye on it..

nw enough
m goin..

bubye.. Bye Dear
tc..
luv u.. Love you too😳.
n
miss u..

p.s. i remembered one more thng..
nw do add me to ur pm list as per d deal..😉 Obviously Dear ... BUT - I'm NOT updating in PMS any more😉! (I'll scrap u when I update ON THE FORUM)

urs,
Choti.. 🤗

Sonia Darling - u are busy with college ... yet u gave me such a beautiful comment , THANK U SO MUCH 🤗 . It meant so much to me that u kept your promise😳. (BTW - this comment was HUGE 😉!)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

Amazing update navi di

Thanks Zaneb 🤗
outstanding loved it to the core
I'm glad u felt that way😃.
kash yeh parivaar aisa hi kush aur muskaurata rahain aur un ki jodiya salaamat rahain !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hmmm ... the operative word is "KASH"
and i really wish viraat comes in to this world i cant see uday and manyata shattering Aww , I wish I could grant your wish.
and loved udita's naughtiness
The Baby is becoming a brat😆.
cant wait until the next update
It's in a few hours time.

Thanks for the lovely comment Zaneb 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelina6

hey navina Hi Iqra😊. howz u Fine , and you?
glad that u gave one more chance to the readers who donot comment or likes on your update
Ya - EVERYONE deserves a second chance😉.
update was fantastic

Thank you 🤗
uday side of caring father is so nice and cute
His OTHER SIDES are "nice and cute" TOO ☺️.
udita i love her she is a complete doll
I agree.
finally uday disclouse everything to manyta
Was it EVERYTHING??
udita afraid of jaggat ohh
Yeah ... the reason WHY , would be revealed in chapter 10.
vijay bhai is now in the scene good
scary ending though
(Well I have to ensure that my readers return for the next part😆)
love the update thanx for scarp
Welcome for the scrap😛
update asap plzzz
In 5 hours time😃.

Thanks for the wonderful comment Iqra 🤗 ... loved it lots!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anju...

hello navi... Hi Anju😊. hope u r fine. Yes , I am ... how are u? (I'm so happy to see your comment - I was going to send a search-party to look for you. U seem to have disappeared for a few days😉!)
i have no words to describe how much i enjoyed this chappy. I'm glad u enjoyed it😃. sorry for short comment .Not a problem. will compensate next time. I'll be waiting😳 . thank u so much for updating in forumn. Hmmm😆. dying to read further.plz continue soon dear. In a few hours time. tc n stay safe. Same to you.


Originally posted by: Rabiya_Anam

Superb cute romantic lovely updates 😛Thank you 🤗 very nice romantic story😉 Glad u think so😳. Udita was so cute she was darling clever and ute girlEmbarrassed must say she was look like truly uday daughter😆 Indeed! chapter 8 was simply cute and niceEmbarrassed Thanks😃. please write more manveer scene😃 Yeah , will do. Briraj tensed hope everything is alright😊 I doubt it. waiting for your next update 😃 That will be LATE NIGHT (tonight). please inform me whenever you update next chapter😊keep it up cont asap😉 Sure.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

hey navi!! Hi Sanju😛

trying to improve! I can see that😉.
lol
well the chapter was superb!! [as usual] Awww , thank you 🤗
Udita the cutie pie, Uday my darling, Manyata the swingy, (U need to explain "SWINGY" to me😕) Jai the super sister, (hailla😲 ... Jai got promotion 🤣)Jaggat the poor guy, Vijay the clumsy and Unnati the matured rocked the chapter And the WRITER😕??? (Please ignore me ... I'm in a weird mood today😆)
feeling really sad for Brij He caused all the mess on his own - don't feel sorry for him.
hope things go well and nothing happens to Devgarh I hope the same too.
i am extremely sorry for the late comment But it's not late ... it was JUST IN TIME😉.
read the chappy and commented immediately!!! So , u are "improving😉!"
dont end it all here
:D
u make our day with these updates!! SNIFF! (Khushi ke aansoo)
its is the Kohinoor diamond of updates
So Perfect!! Thank u very much (and now U MADE MY DAY😃)
well KISS method! still in my head...
I'll end my comment here!! Perfect 😳.

Thanks for the awesome comment Sanju 🤗 ... u implemented the KISS method very well😉!
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Posted: 11 years ago

EEEKKKSSS - I'm so happy ... I asked for 58 LIKEs and I got 60 . Thank u so much to all that LIKEd and Commented 🤗

CHAPTER : 9.1 : LESS THAN 7 DAYS ...
Uday was gone for 3 days and Udita was very confused about his disappearance. He had explained everything to her before he left ... but there's only so much , a 55 week-old, would understand. Uday did make it a point to call her everyday - maybe 10-12 times! Ud-Veel Singh , come ome! , Udita commanded her father ... but she was just a mouth-piece for her mother - who was getting desperate to have Uday back.
Manyata Bhai - this MMS clip of Udita walking ... can I just ask why Uday banna let Udita fall there? , Vijay asked in an attempt to make light-conversation. However his little try back-fired, when Manyata "chewed him and spat him out": How would I know ... go ask your brother-in-law!
It seems Vijay was assigned by Uday to do 1 specific job ... that was - to be Manyata's shadow. He was supposed to be behind her, AT ALL TIMES! But to Manyata ... he was a "royal pain in the ass" - becoming more annoying as each second passed : Uday - you are so gonna pay for putting a tail on me! , she threatened her husband in her mind.
Manyata Bhai , she heard Vijay call for her ... quickly, she got into bed and pulled the blanket over her head, pretending to be fast asleep ... even going so far as to fake - snoring noises. But Vijay was onto her trick, and had his own method of waking her: Oho Manyata Bhai ... you're sleeping! Uday Banna wanted to surprise you - so he returned early ... he's down-stairs!
In a flash, she removed her blanket ... Uday's back? Vijay stood with his arms folded across his chest : Pretending , huh Manyata Bhai ... very bad , I tell you! Baad mein Vijay Bhai , please ... Manyata told and rushed towards the door, when Vijay was forced to burst her "happy-bubble" - Sorry Manyata Bhai - I lied! Uday Banna is still in Jaigarh. You were trying to fool me, so I called your bluff , he explained patiently ... but Manyata looked like she was ready to tear him to pieces, and refused to accept his apology.
After things cooled down a bit, Vijay began again: Manyata Bhai - do u know why Uday Banna SUDDENLY accepted ME to be a SUITOR for UNNATI? I know , I know ... , Jai jumped up and down in excitement, waiting to give the answer to Vijay's query. Great! Vijay Bhai ... Jai will give u your answer; in the mean-time , I'm going to check on my daughter , Manyata walked off, leaving the cousins behind.
As Manyata walked pass her parent's room, she noticed Brijraj struggling to grasp his ringing mobile. She quickly went to his assistance, and took the call herself. Oh Yuvraani Manyata ... THIS MUST BE MY LUCKY DAY! I don't normally get to talk to the CROWNED PRINCESS OF DEVGARH! Stanley Phillips - what do u want? Why can't u leave my father alone? I'll HAPPILY leave him alone ... as soon as he gives me what he owes me. What! What does he "owe" you? Aha ... looks like Brijraj is keeping secrets, huh ... well, my dear - your DAD owes me $25m!
The phone fell from Manyata's hand, as she stared with shock at Brijraj : Daata - u owe Mr Phillips, money? He nodded ... with tears full in his eyes. Is THAT the reason why you're in this condition now? Again he nodded. His sorry state brought tears to Manyata's eyes also. When do we have to pay it? Brijraj held up all 5 fingers on his left-hand and his thumb on his right hand. 6 ... Daata - are u saying , we have 6 months? He shook his head in a "NO". 6 weeks? , she asked slowly and again, he shook his head. 6 days? , her voice was now a whisper ... and to her horror; Brijraj nodded in a "YES". But that was only half the problem ... Manyata did not know that if they'd NOT PAY Stanley back - he'd be taking over Devgarh!
Every family member assembled in DS's study ... but there was a pin-drop silence. Brijraj had 8 months to raise the capital; but in that time - all he accumulated was $6m. The shortfall of $19m weighed heavily on their minds ... how could they possibly raise such a massive sum ... that too , in 6 days time. At this point ... climbing Mount Everest looked easier!
None had a clue what to do ... even the mighty DS , couldn't come up with any ideas. Right now, she wanted to bombard Brijraj with questions - but she knew he won't be able to answer. A loan? Would they get it this fast? No way - as they didn't have the collateral to put up!
Insurance policies, fixed-deposits ... calling in favours - were the ideas, the youngsters came up with. Unfortunately , the target of $19m was still out of their reach. Hell ... they wouldn't even make half the amount!
Jai excused herself to answer Manyata's phone, as she was too tensed to take Uday's call herself. Hey Jijusa. Hi Jai - where's Manyata, is she sleeping? No - she's with DS. Where's my Baby? TINY is sleeping. "TINY" - how did u come up with THAT name? Well , she's quite tiny for her age ... therefore I'm calling her TINY! Ummm , OK - can I speak to Manyata now? Jijusa ... actually, baat ye he ke ... ... ... , Jai began telling everything about Brijraj , his debt ... and their lack of time. Jai ... knowing Stanley Phillips - I'm certain that there's a contract somewhere, that was signed by Uncle Brij and him. U need to find THAT ; FAST!
If Stanley does not get his money on time ... we need to know , what HE'LL BE GAINING and what WE'LL BE LOSING!
Jai immediately started searching for the contract ... but only found it the next day. DS read it out : I, BRIJRAJ SINGH , co-owner of the gold-mine in Devgarh - agree to buy out the shares of my partner, STANLEY PHILLIPS ... for the sum of $25m by the 25th of September 2014. Failing to do so ... I give up my only asset ... DEVGARH - to him. DS couldn't read further, she couldn't believe that Brijraj made such a deal with Mr Phillips. He had signed away their legacy to the Devil, himself!
CHAPTER : 9.2 : TICK-TOCK, TICK-TOCK ...
Wait, wait, wait ... when we shut down the mine in Devgarh, then ..? .. I don't get it, Uday , Manyata was confused and it was difficult for Uday to explain over the phone, but he did his best ... Princess - we told Uncle Brij that we'll be shutting down the mine. However Uncle Brij was not the only owner, Stanley Phillips was the joint partner. Uncle Brij had to buy Stanley's half of the business - in order for us to do what we planned.
That means ... we're in this mess , because of us! No! We're in this mess - because Stanley Phillips took advantage of Uncle Brij. He made up this contract, whereby DS will lose Devgarh, if Uncle Brij couldn't buy out Stanley's shares by the allocated date! But that's unfair right? Of-course Princess, but I'm confused as to why Uncle Brij signed ... first of all , Devgarh IS NOT HIS , to give away! Maybe Daata thought - he could get the money ... and Devgarh would be safe! Perhaps! Uday - what are we gonna do about the money? Well , we have 5 days ... we'll think of something , he said assuringly. Uday - do u have that much? Would u lend us the money? I do have it ... but it's in the form of fixed-deposits and bonds - it'll take time to get out. As soon as I come back to Mumbai - I'll arrange something. Will we make it on time? Trust me Princess! Thanks Uday. Princess - what's mine , is YOURS! You don't have to thank me for it.
Manyata smiled in relief. You need to keep smiling like that Princess! Huh! How did u know I was smiling? Awww Princess - don't u know ... I KNOW EVERYTHING WHEN IT CONCERNS YOU! Humph! , she snickered in tandem with rolling her eyes. But , it seems Uday knew THAT also. Manyata scanned her new cell, which Uday bought her, a week ago - for a hidden camera, because it looked like Uday was secretly watching her every move. There's no hidden surveillance-system in there Princess - I JUST KNOW YOU REALLY WELL! Oh really! Hmmm , for example ... remember when we first met on the beach, I could tell; u were immediately smitten by my good looks ... and the second time we met in my restro-bar - you were charmed by my towering persona! UdayVeer Singh , u better shut-up now before YOUR GIGANTIC HEAD SWELLS EVEN MORE, AND EXPLODES! Both laughed.
Okay Princess - Vijay Banna tells me , that you refused to move into the room downstairs ... why is that? You know it's not wise for you to be climbing steps in this condition! Uday - I like my room, I'm comfortable there ... and as for climbing steps - I think it's a good form of exercise for me. Uday listened but wasn't convinced - Manyata was taking too many risks and he didn't like it 1 bit! By the way - your CHAMCHA is getting on my nerves! , Manyata complained about Vijay to Uday, who couldn't stop laughing, upon hearing Vijay's new name.
Oh God Princess - u got a name for everybody! Ya - u are my HALKAT VEDA .. Vijay Bhai is UDAY KA CHAMCHA! And that bloody Stanley is SUWAR KE AULAD! , Manyata's tone became angry. Whoa Princess - calm down. I don't want your blood-pressure to sky-rocket! Just don't think about Stanley Phillips ... when I get back - I'll sort him out!
Now promise me ... you're gonna stop worrying - you're not gonna get tensed about Stanley or ANY OTHER REASON! Hmmm. Don't "HMMM" - say the words! Fine! I promise I will not worry unnecessarily . Promise me - you are gonna take extra care of yourself. Yes Dad , I promise , she said sarcastically. Goo-gal! , Uday imitated his daughter's version of "GOOD-GIRL" , making Manyata smile.
I bet , you were wishing you were in my arms right now, isn't Princess? ,Uday teased. Oh God Uday - you're too much! Ummm - is THAT another way of saying : YES UDAY ... I WISH U WERE CUDDLING ME NOW! Shut-up Uday ... ab rakthi hoon , BYE! Bye Princess - I love you. Love you too , come fast - remember , we're relying on you! Yep , see you soon.
DS was not proud about accepting financial help from her grand-son-in-law; but she had no other choice! She did have 1 condition however ... she'd only accept the money, if Uday agreed to treat it as a loan! A verbal agreement was reached!
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O come on Jaggat - do it for me , Jai fluttered her eye-lashes and Jaggat could not refuse. Jaggat got down on all 4 limbs : But do u think it'll work? Do u think Udita will like me after this? It's worth a try ... we can't have her being frightened of you . till - FOREVER! If she remains scared of you ... then she'll never come to our house for holidays ; nor will she come to baby-sit our children!
"Children" - ummm Jai , EXACTLY how many kids are we going to have? 2 ... a boy like you and a girl like me , she answered proudly ... making Jaggat smile like a fool. OK - now I'm going to get TINY!
Jai carried Udita and brought her to where Jaggat was ... but as soon as the Baby got a glimpse of him; she started bawling! Sshh Tiny , don't cry Baby ... ssshh Sweety ... see there , that's your new horsey , Jai pointed to her husband, who was pretending to be a "human-horse". If you stop crying ... then the horsey will take you for a nice ride, Jai was bribing Udita. Pihu? Ya sure ... the horsey will take Pinkoo for a ride also. Udita smiled - she was very intrigued about the "ride" , she was going to get.
Jai walked beside Jaggat, as he paraded the Baby and her Teddy around the living room. She held Udita steady as the child waved to her mother who was watching from upstairs. The Baby smiled and blew flying-kisses as if she was doing a victory-lap after winning a horse-riding competition! Jai's little activity proved to be a resounding success as Udita became a little fonder of Jaggat ... and by the end of the day - Jaggat was her new best-friend; and she (re)christened him: Hossy!
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Early the next morning ... Hello - is that Mrs Singh? and unknown male asked Manyata from the other end of the phone-call. Yes - it is - who is this? My name is Nirmal ... I'm calling from National Bank of India. I'm unable to reach your husband, Mr UdayVeer Singh , can u please tell him that we won't be able to cash his fixed-deposits! It's a vast sum of money - we'll need the managers authorisation ... and the manager is on personal leave for 2 weeks!
OH GOD ... I updated twice IN THE SAME WEEK😲 (no wonder I'm so tired😆!) Thank u for reading ... do leave back your LIKE & comment😳.
NOW - I have some GOOD NEWS & some BAD NEWS.
The bad news is that chapter 10 is not ready, so I won't be able to give u a precap ... neither will I be able to give u a date for when I'll be updating next😕.
The good news is that I'll be updating ON THE FORUM until the END OF THIS BOOK😃.
A reminder ...
58 LIKEs necessary for next part.
All RES posts will be REPORTED for SPAMMING🤢.
Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is it midnight already? Lol. Anyway i got my place edited

Hi navi, how are you?😃

Midnight came early???😆 I was planning to wake up at 3 3o to res my place and you post it nearly 6 hours early. Not that I am complaining lol. I wasn't there when you posted the chap, had gone for supper, but then luck was my my side and I came just in time to save my place. Congratulate me navi!!!! This time too I found the update before your message found me😳

The chap was very long, and I am so happy that you decided to give us a looong chapter. Thanks baby👏👏

Just in my last comment I ask for some fire crackers and now in this update you drop a bomb. It was like asking for a flower and getting a bouquet, but what to do?😭

Part 1

Uday is away, missing him very much . he calls his baby many times, good to know that!! Udita is just like her dad, the way she calls uday his name, was so funny!!!

Vijay bhai is manyta's new bodyguard!!! God!! When I read him I imagined him wearing a safari suit and large sunshades, and a gun in his pocket, trying to look rough, totally a comical scene!!!!! I feel bad for manyta , even I wanted choke him to death he he he, he is sooo irritating.

Loved how he fooled manyata, really that was a classic joke. 🤣

So EVIL stanly is back????😡😡😡 that man needs to be cut into pieces and made into pickle and feed it to jai😡😡. So finally the news about the debt are out na!! now 6 days and 25 million !!!! god!!! How are they going to make that much money???? Who all would they have to kill to make such a huge sum?? So uday too know all the problems na and is willing to help na... good

How could brigraj make such a will??? Could that will be a fake?? I have my doubts

Part 2

What an apt heading for the chap' tick tock; each second is valuable especially with the present situation in hand

Aw!! So the closing of the mine is responsible for this large economic crisis na.😭 you really explained the how devgarh and manveer landed in this situation na, I really wish uday was there with manyta holding her hands and guiding her through this crisis. U know uday has a good heart to help his wife's family in their crisis. He is a very understanding fellow, I tell you!!!😳

Uday understands her every action though he is not physically present there. Loved that part where he correctly tells her expression. Loved their talks😳

Now, one mistake I felt about manyta's behavior is that she refused to move downstairs even when she was in her third trimester, bad, very bad. I have my doubts. Would she lose virat when she slips down the stairs?? A lot of tension and in the middle she lose her balance and stumbles down , losing virat??? So that make uday mad at her for not heeding his words??🤔

Um just something I rembered. There was a mention that hoe could brigraj give away devgarh when devgarh was not his, is this a key to their escape, I doubt if manveer would settle stanly with money, they would use some loop hole and escape???????????? ( I know its silly)

Loved the names she had for all. Good I burst into laughter reading that part, what an apt name for Stanley!! Just a doubt does the writer too give names like this to her friends??? Lol😆😆

That "yes dad" convo reminded me of our conversations a bit ( though it was yes mom, there) uday is flirting so shamelessly with manyta!! It was cute I tell you!!!😳

Finally a scene with udita, loved it. I give my niece horse rides and even put her on my shoulders, she enjoys it so much, last day , when she was in my arms she kept patting my head, and I asked her what she wanted, she pointed my head, and I placed her on my shoulder, she just loves it so much!!!! 😳

Now the call, it's a atom bomb. How are they gona mange to bring up such a huge sum in such a limited time??? God knows!!! Na the writer knows. Navi your evil brain is fully active, I tell you. 😉Better get them out of the mess soon, he he he

Finally the end. He he he hope its not so long, could manage only this much

Do update soon navi. Thanks for the pm

Love you❤️

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago

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