KriYaansh OS : Got You Back..!!

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Got You Back



It had been a week to taani enagement. Initial rey was unhappy but as time passed rey accepted everything. Whole gang was at the atium having chit-chat with each other. Rey was happy nd was felling something different but didnt understood why he was felling like that.

At that moment a girl enter in the college wearing a hot se*y cocktail dress. Making all the boys gawking at her and making all girls jealous of her. On other side gang was beyond shock nd rey was TOTALY numb. Gang came out of the shock nd said in union "KRIYA".This made rey also to come out of his numb mode. Rey on the either side of his and saw all boys gawking at her this made him an angry young man. He mentaly spoke "yeh baatcutter wapis aagyi nice. magar iske dressing me itna change kese..?? Kuch bhi ho she is looking HAWWT."

Kriya planly ignored the gang nd straight away went towards VP's office leaving gang hell shocked by her behaviour. Sharon was damn angry on kriya she said "heyy guyzz ye kriya thi na..?? ese kya hogya..?? How dare she behave like this with us, this typical middle class bhenji..huh.." she said all this with her diva attitude. swayam said "sharon kbhi toh uske point of view se dekha karo..kriya ki jaroor koi problem hogi nhi toh wo ese behave nhi karti."

Other side rey was thinking "what the hell rey kya soch raha hai tu..?? Magar ye baatcutter wapis kyu aayi hai..?? Ab kya chati hai mujhese..?? Nhi ab me na hi kisi se pyaar kar paonga aur na hi kiske saat koi relationship banaonga nhi toh ye relation bhi humesha ke tahara adhora rehe jaayega. Nhi kriya iss bar me firse tumhe meri life spoil karne nhi dunga. Ab me REYAANSH SINGHANIA the DAZZLAR ban ke dikhaonga tumko MISS KRIYA GHAI."

Back to SwaRon,

Sharon looked at swayam in disbeleave nd spoked "Oh realy swayam..?? do u still think that she is soo inocent who ditched rey nd felt him hurt..?? kese dost ho tum Swayam..??" Swayam looked at her nd said "No wonder Sharon hum ajj tumhare iss behavior ke bajase hi saat nhi hai" saying this swayam went away leaving a hell shock sharon behind.

vicky went towards rey nd put his one hand on reys shoulder nd spoke "rey mere bhai dekha tune..?? kriya vo..vo wapis aagyi hai.." nilesh also came nd spoke "but she is change alot dude..mujhe nhi lagta ki ye wo purani wali kriya rahi..but kuch bhi ho guyzz kriya is looking hawt" nilesh said this nd in return gained a deadly glare from rey which made him to glup. "but guyzz kriya itni kyu change hogyi..??" ask rinni. "guyzz she just ignored us as if she dont know us" said simmi.

all were blabling some or other thing which made rey iritate nd he spoke in anger "shut up guyzz and plzz leave me alone for some time" sayin this rey went from there to fire escape. he opened the door nd went inside nd closed it d sat on the starcase nd all the memory to there came floating in his mind. he smiled remembering all thier memory. but then he remember the most deadly day of his life the day of thier break up. nd the smile face was now change into hurt. the hurt was clearly visible on his face which was cause by his baatcutter. but then he get ups nd speaks "bohot hogya rey. ek ladki tujhe itna effect nhi kar sakti, remember u r not the same rey anymore, mujhe baatcutter ko asli wale reyaansh se milwana hi hoga. baatcutter u just can't effect me this much..baatcutter be ready to face the HELL" saying this he left fire escape.

kriya went to fullfill all the formalities. she was passing by the coridor when sharon saw her and call out "MISS KRIPA kya samjhti ho tum apne aap ko..?? tum ab idhar kya karne aayi ho..??" said sharon in full attitude. Kriya again ignored her nd started walking "me tumse kuch poch rahi ho kriya.." she again said. finaly kriya turned around nd spoke "i dont think that i should answer u"saying this she again started to walk "thik hai..but i think u agree that u r answerable to rey.." sharon said form behind. kriya again turned around nd said in attitude "m not answerable to rey" nd turned around "u r miss kripa u r answerable to him" said sharon in full anger. "m not sharon btw why would i be answerable to rey" kriya asked sharon for matter of fact. "u r becoz he loved u and u middle class girls err u just used him ghosh" sharon said with disgusting face. After hearing the word USE some where kriya left pain but she composed her self and spoke "oh please love huh..i dont even think so he liked me nd u r talking about love" kriya said with attitude nd by this sharons anger had reached to the pick. "kriya he realy loved u nd u just broked his heart in million pieces nd went away u just used him how cheap" sharon said her voice almost reachig to its pick kriya was getting irritate by this all so she to replied in a high tone "oh please sharon he didnt loved infact i love him from bottom of ma heart nd thats why i left him nd wht did ur bestfriend do..?? moved on with another girl is it that easy for him to move on..?? if he had loved me i think he would have never ever moved on so please keep that word love with u only" by now KriSha had reached near RH nd gang heard want all kriya just said *rey was also there* sharon nd gang was hell shock nd kriya had tears in her eyes.
Sharon again asked but in normal voice "kriya what do u mean..??" Now this was it kriya couldnt anymore was able to handle her tears it came out of that such beautiful orbs of her seening her in this state some where rey fell bad for her nd swayam was worried for his bestfriend. sharon moved closer to kriya nd kept one hand of her on kriya's shoulder nd again asked but i more clam tone "kriya what do u mean by all this..?? u loved rey..?? then why did u left him..??" After hearing sharons word kriya just hug her tightly as nothing else came to her mind in that moment sharon also hug her back nd rubbed her back in trail to clam her down. When sharon felled that kriya was fine she broked the hug nd looked in kriya's eye she can clearly see the love for rey nd pain of leaving away from love "kriya what is the realy truth" by this kriya came to her sense and understood that she have fallen weak kriya moved back wiped away her tears nd again said in attitude "sharon i have already said that m not answerable to u" this again brought anger in sharon but some where sharon now knew that kriya loved rey so she said "kriya stop this drama now itself nd out with the truth now" sharon announced "wh..which tr..truth..??" kriya was now stammering "kriya i knw that u loved rey..kriya i want to know the truth i can see in urs eyes that u did used rey infact u loved him then why did u do this..??" kriya irritatedly said "yes sharon i loved him i freaking loved him u wanted to know the truth na so listen.." kriya told whole truth to sharon from the day before elims till the pre-valentine's night. this all was heard by the gang who were standing there only *KriSha didnt knw that gang is ther* Gang nd sharon were in tears now. Sharon just went nd hug her tightly nd said "kriya m sorry m realy sorry to say all that"kriya also hug her back.
They broked the hug when they heard a voice "Kriya tumne ye sab humare liye kiya..??" they both turn round to see the owner of the voice. Kriya could only utter one word "swayam" nd went nd hug him as much tight as she can nd swayam also hug her back tightly consoling her. Rey was standing there numb he didn't new how to react after learning the realy truth. He was felling ashame of himself by not trusting his baatcutter's love for him. he just slowly went away from there slowly to fire escape.

At fire escape,

rey reached there nd went inside nd was crying badly he was crying very badly. He alway somewhere inside his heart knew that what all things she said was not the truth but he alway shurrged this felling nd convince his heart that it is the only truth nd was also sucessful till some extend. But today after knowing the realy truth he couldn't bare the guilt, the pain, everything was like hurtfull for him.

Rey quietly came out of the fire escape nd went to his house as he need some time to digest the truth. He went to his house nd open a cupbroad which was full covered with dust as it was not open from last 1 year nd few months. That cupbroad hold everything which was related to his BAATCUTTER. He open it there was the mask which kriya wored in new years eve party. Rey took the mask in his hand nd remember their first meet. He kept it back nd his eyes felled on the scraf. He remember the DIL SE RE dance. Nd saw some dance fest pics of thier.

He closed the cupbroad nd said to himself "Kriya m realy realy sorry." he again started to cry. he said said to himself "u r mine, only mine baatcutter nd i will make u soon my" he then felled asleep while crying only.

Its been a week the truth is out. Gang nd Kriya got again friend. She again started to laugh with them nd ya dance too. But in this whole week KriYaansh didn't spoke a word with each other. Rey always feeled guilty for whatever had happen. Nd kriya used to show attitude to rey only to not break down in front of him.

Rey was in fire escape nd was thinking something. "rey what the hell are u doing tu cool hunk hai college ka aur tu ek ladki se baat karne ko dar raha hai..magar wo sirf ladki nhi hai wo toh meri baatcutter hai..ghosh stop it rey nd aaj use baat kar ya thats it..!!" rey said this to himself nd got up to leave fire escape.

He saw kriya laughing with some girls. He went near them nd heasitedly said "umm kriya" kriya turned around nd saw rey nd started to move away without saying anything rey agan sai "kriya i want to talk to u" kriya turned around nd said with attitude "sorry but i dont want to" nd started moving. rey said to himself "beta ye aasan nhi hone wala hai kuch aur soch." Kriya was stoped by a random girl they were tlking nd rey got an idea.

They were in atrium. suddenly a voice came from upstairs "m sorry kriya" gang came towards kriya nd kriya was hell shock it was not rockit science for kriya to not to recognize the voice yes it was rey. rey again continue cuming down from staircase "i know this sorry word is realy small for my mistake but m realy sorry kriya..magar me sach bol raha ho jab tumne us din mujhe wo sab kaha me bohot hurt hoa tha mera dil kahi toh humesha keheta tha ki tumne joh bhi kaha wo sab jhoot kaha magar mera ye brain mane ko ready hi nhi tha..kriya magar sach me me humesha tumse hi pyaar karta tha hoo nd karunga..haan me taani ke saat relation me tha magar me humesha taani me tumhe dhon ne ki koshish karta tha..nd taani thodisi tum hari tarah hi thi..magar kriya i realy only nd only love u..i know m stupid m bad but still sorry kriya sorry" by then rey reached near kriya he bend down on his kness nd hold his ears nd said "sorry ramiara apne is pagal chabilal ko maaf kardo plzz" he said very cutely which made kriya smile a bit rey took kriyas hand in his gentlely nd said "baatcutter i know u still love me nd i love u too..plzz can we give one more chance to our incomplete lovestory..??" rey asked nd looked in her kriya removed her hand from his nd said with atitude "rey get up" rey looked at her in puzzel "rey cant u hear i said get up" said kriya in anger. Rey got up but his head felled in disappointment nd he was going to go but kriya voiced stop him "kaha jaa rahe ho..??" rey looked at her with confusion. Kriya slowly made her way towards rey nd smiled a bit nd said "answer nhi chaiye..??" rey was confussed nd said "what..??." "Aapne abhi kuch toh pocha uska answer liye bina jaarahe ho..??" kriya again spoke clearing his confusion "magar mujhe laga ki tumhara answer no hai" rey said back "mene kab esa kaha..??" kriya said cutely which made rey smile "so..??" rey said "soo..??" kriya again repeated "so whats the answer" rey said "the answer is YES" kriya said nd bit her lips rey was super happy nd in a instant he engulfed in a tight hug.

All others who were present in atrium cried out in appluase. Gang were super happy. They went nd hug them, Nd all hug each other nd shouted DIL DOSTI DANCE.

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heya guyzz new OS hope u like it..!!
spl thnx to vertika dii for helping me soo much..
nd madhu for title nd idea no thnxx..:P
do hit like nd leave ur comments..!!

note : update of 20 december will be in december..sorry for late but ma lappy is not working..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reswa...
Unreaaa...
Maine res kiya tha 21st November ko n unress karing On 22nd April 🤣🤣
achha cuming to d OS..
Haiyyee.. Yeh OS toh AT pe bana tha.. I remember.. Me u n mahika dey writtingit n giving ideas...
Ufff... Awsmmm it is..
Kriya ka cum back n truth out den confession.. Loved it...
Edited by Madhu_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres...

awwwsumm abhii..

ahm ahm muje nhi pata tha

my little one is soo telented..

ahm ahm...

coming to.. update.. it wass..

hayeee too good hai. ji...

muje mast laga K ka new AVATAR...

keep writing more...
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
beautiful os
loved kria's arrogant behaviour
krisha scene was amazingly written loved it
that scene was very emotional
nd proposal scene was nyc
hehehe kria ne rey ko confuse kar diya
loved this sweet os
Edited by Neha_KR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres
Awesome os dear
Loved it 😊
Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res res res!!!!!!!!!!
unres!!!!!
yipppeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome update!!!!!
love it!!!!!!
kria ko abhi swayam understand karta hai!!!!
niceE!!!!!
nd den krisha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haaayyyeee awesome!!!!!!!!
love it!!!!
sharon ne kria se confess karvaya!!!!
wowww!!!!!
nd rey hayeee soo cute!!!!
love him!!!!
nd den rey kria se baat karne ke liye itna hesitant
hahahahhahaaa...
and den loved his self talk in FE!!!
bahut hi cute!!! nd aur bhi cute jab he told-- par wo meri baatcutter hi!!!!
😆😆😆lol!!! so cute!!!!
kia rey ko attitude... hmmm not bad kria!!!
par rey ka confession... hayyeee mein mar jawan...
loved it!!!
so the answer is yes!!!!
loved it!!!!!

le kamini meinne unrs kar dia!!!
ab khush??
nd mein ab ki baar hansi bhi nahi...
khush?? thanku mat bol!!!! ;)
Edited by arsha_simran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one Abhi...
i luved ur imaginations...
loved the arrogant Kriya
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reserve
unreserve

this was an amazing OS
ekdum jhakkas
just loved the arrogant behviour of kriya
and krisha were wow
loved them !!
kriyaansh ❤️ 😳 finally !!
loved the proposal

waiting for kriyaansh in D3 😃
thank for the PM
superb OS 👏
well done 👍🏼
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum os..

loved it..

hope kriya's entry in show
will be sumthng like dis...

m already dreaming..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww thats such a sweet os abhi

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