DMG # 5 |*VIRMAN FF*| Chap 69 pg 138 (3 jan) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: virman_superhit

OMG... That was a shocking and a hanging update.. U have left us hanging on a thread and waiting for more... 😭😭.. u will get the next dosage today only 😉 N I don't feel good about that CD.. 😭😭.. But I hope that Virat understands Maanvi... N m having a feeling that he won't come to know about the pregnancy... 😭😭.. Some sad updates on the way.. 😭 hmm... sad updates

But u write all the emotions so beautifully that m sure the updates will b emotional and rocking... 😊😊
thank u for encouraging me... 😊
This update had everything... Romance between Virman, Cute Maanvi Kasak, Maanvi's emotions.. Everything... Loved the entire update... Waiting for more eagerly... 😊😊

D suspense has left me waiting thou... For more and more.. Awesome... 👏👏 thanxxx again...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Syed695

Loved the Update..❤️!!


Awesome⭐️..!!! thank u sooo much


The reason is Maanvi...Se finally took the brave step of facing the truth.And it will take a lot from her...or say it will take her entire happiness that she had kept intact...but then things don't really go the way it has been planned and i guess the bang has been done by Rishab...cz one word nadani..proved it😡 arrey waaahhh 👏 👏 smarty 😉 ...ghadhe ne parcel bheja hai..n worse tumne ye suspense rakha hai..k hai kya usmei...not fair Naina..Lekin fir Pateince is always good😊...resulys are always nice..hence will wait..lekin fir jaldi batao kya hoga..! aaj hi update dungi n then will wait for ur big wala comment 😃

Lekin that doesn't mean i wouldn't guess..😃 absolutely... guess karo karo...

Separation hai..thats pakka... bingo... Virat may not find out her pregnancy...but the restlessness while leaving..her broken necklace says alot abt upcoming track..but then again..Wouldn't want Maanvi a cry baby..shez done too much of crying so far and lived her life is guilt and Rishab doing something which will ruin it..then yes do kill him soon..lekin Virat will suffer most and the worse Kasak...Eagerly waitin on how u unfold everything in one...and yes i also feel Swamini and Pragati..may also end up creating some Taunt drama😆...Waiting for next Naina n Thanks for the PM!!!😊 guessing ke liye thank u... stay tuned 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
~ ~ for the next update ~ ~
please go through this chapter once again guys...
bcos i want you guys to be clear n thorough with what actually happened... 😳
will be updating in few hours...
just about to compete the update in some more time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for late in it...
congrats...4 new thread...
Waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello di!😃

I know! I know! I'm late once again...but please maaf kardo na... I'm just bit busy! Sorry!😳

And yeah! The last update was awesome!👏👏👏 Really eager for the next update!😛

Congrats for the new thread nannu di!⭐️⭐️⭐️ I wish you go more heights and heights!😉








All the best!👍🏼 Take care!🤗

Love you loads!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
hi naina i read that part u tld to read again...i feel the comversation btw manvi and her mom will be presented in cd with whatever the blackmailer whats virat to listen i mean edited voice...i dnt knw thoughj ust a guess ...is it madhu that one or rish pata nahi kyu madhi i feel lets c ...
do continue soon dear damn excited to red this...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am done with the update...
just final preparations going on...
u will get the update within an hour for sure...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm waiting nannu di!😉 😛⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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happy birthday meera... 😃 i couldnt wish u on the thread... sorry for that...

CHAPTER 57
~~ Jo Bheji Thi Dua
manvi was getting things ready for the evening and kasak was sitting on the sofa playing with her barbie, combing her hair.
kasak : mumma...
manvi : hmmm...
kasak : pta hai wo meri friend hai na jia...
manvi : hmm...
kasak : uski mumma hai na chali gayi...
manvi : kahan...??
kasak : wo na god ke paas chali gayi...
manvi : ohh i am sorry...
kasak : aur mumma woh jia ne bola ke uski mumma star ban gayi... aisa hota hai kya mumma...??
manvi went to kasak and made her sit in her lap.
manvi : hmm... aisa hota hai... jo god ke favourite hote na, god usko apne paas bula lete hain aur fir ek sundar sa star bana dete hai... ek angel...
kasak : sachi mumma...??
manvi : hmm...
kasak : mujhe bhi angel banna hai mumma...
manvi : no baby... no... meri kasu toh already angel hai... beautiful as a princess...
kasak : wow main princess hoon...
manvi : hmm... mumma papa ki princess...
kasak kissed manvi's cheek and placed her head on her chest.
manvi : kya hua meri baby ko...?? (brushing her hair with her fingers)
kasak : kuch bhi nahi...
manvi : neeni toh nahi aa rahi...
kasak : no...
manvi : fir kya hua...?? mera baby itna low kyun hai...??
kasak : mumma aap kahin nahi jaoge na mujhe chodke... jia bahut cry kar rahi thi aaj...
manvi : never baby... mumma kasu se bahut pyaar karti hai...
kasak : i love you mumma...
manvi : love you infinte mera baccha...
kasak : infinite...??? matlab bahut se bahut jyada... hai na...???
manvi : haan... apko yaad tha... very good...
kasak : thank you...
scene shifts
" happy birthday to you... happy birthday dear manvi... happy birthday to you... "
" i know i am wishing the wrong person but this gift... i mean the cd... its exclusively for you mr. virat vadera... "
virat made a face and was about to put off the cd player...
" na... na.. naa... off mat karo... SUNO... dhyaan se suno... "
manvi : i am sorry mom... i hided something... maya.. maya ka..
mitali : maya ka kya manvi...???
manvi : mujhse maya ka accident hua tha...
mitali : w..wh..what...???
manvi : yes... thats why.. why i decided that kasak would be my only child...
mitali : oh my god... ye kya kar dia tune manvi...
manvi: i am sorry mom... i didnt do it intentionally... i was crying and upset that day and -
mitali : and you ran into that innocent soul... you destroyed a happy family manvi...
manvi : mom... woh ek haadsa tha.. aur maine -
mitali : in your guilt you got married to virat... right...???
manvi : mom... please... please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... please...
mitali : dont worry manvi... i wont honey...
" kaisa lga bday surprise...??? mja aaya hoga... haha...enjoy mr. vadera..."
virat was unable to believe what he heard... his world crashed... his hopes n dreams shattered...
" in your guilt you got married to virat... "
" please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... "
" in your guilt you got married to virat... "
" please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... "
" in your guilt you got married to virat... "
" please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... "
virat : no... no... ye jhooth hai... its a lie... manvi loves me... she didnt marry me in guilt...
virat was refusing to believe every single word recorded in that cd but his mind refrained him and forced him to think about them.
virat without thinking once, accelerated the speed and stormed to get his answer...
" rishabh singhania... "
shouted virat on the top of his voice...
rishabh descended the stairs with a wicked smile on his face.
rishabh : birthday manvi ka hai... mera nahi...
virat : what the heck is this...???
rishabh : seems like a cd to me...
virat : i can also see that... i am talking about the bullshit that is there in this cd...
rishabh : hehe... usko sach kehte hai mr. vadera... kadwa sach... ugly truth you see...
virat : you really think i would believe you... a person like you who didnt even spare your own sister... when you can play with her, what am i and manvi to you...??
rishabh : tum toh mera raaste ka kaanta ho... only because of you everything spoiled... khush the apni zindagi mein... fir kyun aaye..?? kyun aaye beech mein... tumne sab kharab kar diya manvi aur mere beech aa kar...

virat : kismat mein jinka milna likha hota hai, wo mil hi jaate hai...
rishabh : haan jaise maya ko maut mili... aur wo bhi tumhari manvi ko haathon... par was it really an accident...?? cmon... tum pagal nahi ho jo ab tak iss khel ko samajh nahi paaye...
virat : koi khel nahi chal raha yahan pe rishabh...
rishabh : shayad issi liye manvi ne sabse sach chupaya aur tumse shaadi karli... aur toh aur tumhari hi beti ko mohra banaya... apni jhoothi mamta mein phasaya uss bache ko... sirf tumhe paane ke liye...
virat : bakwaas band karo apni... (gritting his teeth)
rishabh : you wont believe me... right...??? okk go and ask you wifey then... i can assure you she wouldnt say a word... kyunki agar sach bolna hota toh kab ka keh diya tha usne... aur haan lemme tell you some more point about manvi... jo shayad tum ab tak nahi jaante hoge...
virat : shut up...
rishabh : ohh no no no... waise raaz nahi pata mujhe... dont worrry... (evil laugh) manvi... manvi chaudhary... wo ek practical, ambitious, money minded, and selfish ladki thi... kya main nahi jaanta tha ke why was she with me...??? i knew it... she wanted my name, fame and my power... par mujhe lagta tha ke mera pyaar usko ek din mujhse pyaar karne pe majboor kar dega... par afsoos... waise tumhare pyaar ne kaunsa usko jeeta... wo aaj bhi mujhse milti hai... aaj bhi apni pehle wali ki zindagi ke baare mein sochti hai... wo phas gayi hai apne hi jhooth mein... tumse shaadi ki usne guilt mein... chi chi... aisa koi karta hai kya...???
virat wanted to kill rishabh right now but somewhere his heart believed what rishabh said... virat stormed out angrily from the singhania mansion. he wanted answers... answers from manvi, his wife... the girl he loved and believed more than anyone...
he got flashes of the time when manvi met rishabh... the basement meeting on kasak's birthday... then at that restaurant... then the phone calls... it all made virat more mad on manvi...
scene shifts
mitali and mahesh were on their way and vikram was also home by now...
kasak : mumma... dad kab ayege...??
manvi : must be coming baby... aap apne clothes dirty mat karna kasu... go n watch tv
kasak : nahi... i will sit here mumma...
kasak sat on the bed and looked at manvi who was getting ready for the evening. she was really looking forward for a lovely evening...
manvi : mera baby kya dekh raha hai...??
kasak : mumma inni beautiful hai... kaise...???
manvi : hmm... pta nahi... par meri kasu toh mumma se bhi jyada beautiful hai...
kasak : nahi mumma jyada beautiful hai...
manvi : aww... mera baccha...
kasak : par main bhi beautiful hoon... hai na...???
manvi : yes jaanu...
" knock knock.. open the door... "
kasak : kaun hoga mumma...???
manvi : dad ho sakte hain... ya fir naani naanu...
kasak ran outside to open the door and saw virat standing there...
kasak : dad aa gaye... mumma...
virat ignored kasak and stormed to his room.
virat : manviii... (yelling her name)
manvi shivered on hearing virat's voice and freezed at the place where she was standing...
virat : ye kya hai...?? (showing her the cd)
manvi saw the cd and swallowed the lump that just formed in her throat.
virat : kya jo is cd mein hai, wo sach hai...???

manvi was now in tears and slowly nodded her head n positive.
" in your guilt you got married to virat... "
" please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... "
these words again rang in virat's mind and manvi's yes acted like a catalyst... it was like adding oil in fire...
virat : sach khud kehna chahti ho ya main bolun...??
manvi looked down unable to meet virat's eyes.
virat : bolo damn it...
manvi : wo... woh... woh.. m..
in the meantime, kasak came back running to the room and stood at the doorstep.
virat : tumhe maya ko maara na... you killed her manvi... you... (throwing the cd on the floor scaring manvi and kasak)
manvi : m... ma.. main...
virat : haan ya naa...??? i want to hear it from your bloody mouth...
manvi : wo... wo accident tha virat... (trying to control her sobs)
virat : theek hai... accident tha... par why didnt you tell me...?? kyunnn manvi...????? (literally shouting)
manvi : virat... v..vi
virat : tumhara khel khatam ho gya hai ms. chaudhary... ab tum aur dhokha nahi de paugi mujhe... bas ab aur nahi...

manvi fell on the floor crying... she was broken as her world collapsed... everything was on the verge of getting destroyed...
virat : kitni safai se jhooth bolti rahi tum aur main... main bevakoof... tumhari har baat ko sach maanta raha... (punching the wall in anger)
manvi : virat...
kasak was shivering with fear... she had no idea what was going on... her life was like a fairy tale and suddenly, it has turned into an ugly story...
virat : sab jhooth tha... (harshly making manvi get up from the floor) humara rishta... shaadi sab kuch... ye kaale moti uss jhooth ka saboot... (smashing the mangalsutr on the floor)
kasak : mumma...
manvi looked devastatedly at kasak with tears in her eyes and a single look at kasak's scared face made manvi feel more miserable...
virat : go out kasak...
virat turned around and looked angrily at kasak...
virat : i said go out...
manvi : kasak... virat plzz... please chup ho jao... bacche ke saamne...
virat : bache ke saamne kya huh...??? kya...?? sunne do usko...
manvi : vir-
virat : dare you say a word manvi...
vikram : virat...
virat : dad please...
vikram : why are you shouting like this...???
virat : its personal dad...
vikram : if its personal... it should be kept behind locked doors not like this... 😡
virat : dad i have listened to everything you ever said... but right now, i would appreciate if you leave...

vikram : virat calm down my son... gusse mein faisle nahi lene chahie...
kasak : daadu... (holding his finger)
manvi was continuously crying and she was dying to engulf kasak in her arms... the horrified look on the face of her baby was hurting more than everything around...
manvi : meri baat sunlo virat...
virat : kyun dhokha diya mujhe...?? kyun...???
vikram turned around and held kasak's hand protectively but she wanst ready to move from there...
kasak : mummaaa... m..mumma...
vikram left kasak's hand and kasak ran to manvi. before she could reach manvi, virat held her hand and stopped kasak...
manvi : please...
virat : kasak ye apki mumma nahi hai...
kasak looked at virat with tears rolling down her cheeks. it was unbelievable for the little kid to forget understanding it...
manvi took a step towards kasak.
virat : meri beti se door raho... suna tumne... stay away... main kasak pe tumhari parchai bhi nahi padhne dunga...
manvi was stunned to hear this... he called kasak his daughter... she did soo much for him and kasak and what is the end result she is getting... she gets to hear that the child she grew with her own hands isnt hers anymore...
manvi : i beg you virat... please... ek baar... please...
virat : we dont want you... chali jao manvi...
manvi : where will i go virat...??? main kahan jaungi tumhe chodkar... kasak ko chod kar... ye hai mera ghar... main kahan jaungi... (folding her hands in front of him)

virat : i dont care... tum kahin bhi jao... par yahan nahi rahogi...
kasak : mumma...
kasak was beging manvi to come and hug her but manvi was unable to do so... she knew virat wouldnt let her go near kasak...
manvi : meri bhi beti hai wo... mera bhi haq banta hai uspe virat... please...
virat : kasak... apnko pta hai ye... (pointing at manvi) ye apki mumma nahi... isne apki mumma ko maar diya... maya tumhari maa hai... maya...
kasak : nahi... (trying to free her hand from virat's grip)
manvi : virat its hurting her... please uska haath chod do... main... main chali jaati hoon... please kasak ka haath do... usko dard ho raha...
virat : you dont teach me anything... get out...
manvi : kasak...
virat : 5 minute hai tumhare paas... 5 whole minutes...
virat turned to leave the room with kasak looking at manvi and her right hand stretching towards manvi asking her to hold her. manvi was about to touch kasak's hand when virat jerked manvi's hand away and picked kasak in his arms...
virat : dont show me your face ever again... ab koi rishta nahi humare beech...
manvi took steps backward until she banged with the wall behind, and she fell on the ground cursing her fate and her decision... she was thinking only one thing - was she really that wrong...??? was she a fool to believe virat n his love for her...??? was his love for her a lie...??? was everything he said to her were only words...???

manvi : kasak... mera baccha...
in the meanwhile, mitali and mahesh reached and their soul wshievreed on seeing the scenario.
mitali : virat...
virat : thank god aap log aa gaye... apni beti ko le jaayie yahan se...
mahesh : kya hua hai...???
vikram : pta nahi bacchon ke beech... jhagda hai bhaisahab, sulajh jaega...
kasak : naani... mumma...

mitali hugged kasak and consoled her... tried wiping her tears... kasak was badly scared and shivering but it didnt affected virat a little bit. he himself was broken and shattered... manvi lied to him and betrayed him n his love... he was living for manvi and she only killed him today...
mitali : virat shanti se kaam lo beta...
virat : jaaanti thi na aap bhi... apni beti ki galti chupaayi na apne...
mahesh : ye kya ho raha hai...??? kahan hai meri beti...???
MAANVIII...
manvi heard mahesh calling her and she got up and came out of the room. she was numb... not in her senses... she was just aimlessly walking...
mahesh : manvi...
looking at manvi and her condition, broke mitali's heart and she was about to separate kasak from her when kasak held her more tightly, refusing to let go off her...
mahesh took manvi in his arms and supported her form.
manvi : papa... maine kuch nahi kia...
mahesh : shh...
manvi : papaji...
vikram : manvi sab theek ho jaega beta...
mahesh : thats it...
manvi : woh accident tha... maine kuch jaanke nahi kia... virat...
manvi tried taking a step towards virat but mahesh stopped her...
mahesh : stop manvi...
manvi : papa...
mahesh : meri beti aise ghar mein nahi rahegi...
mitali : suno...
mahesh : bas... main abhi jinda hoon... meri beti ke saath koi kuch bhi kare ye bardaasht nahi karunga...
vikram : bhai sahab... viat gusse mein hai...
mahesh : gusse mein hai toh matlab meri beti ki jaan le lega...
mitali : mahesh please... shant ho jao...
manvi : papa main nahi jaungi...

mahesh : maine kaha tha mitali... main kabhi nahi chahta tha ke ye shaadi ho... aur dekho...
virat looked up at mahesh, on hearing this new information... so did manvi... she never knew her father wasnt happy with her settling down with virat.
manvi : papa...
mahesh : lets go mitali... chalo manvi...
manvi : noo... kasak... papa kasak...
kasak : mumma...
mitali kissed kasak's forehead and brushed her hair.
mitali : mumma aa jaegi... aaj ke liye naani ke paas rahegi mumma...
kasak : sirf aaj... promise...??
mitali : promise...

mitali got up and looked solemnly at virat and vikram.
manvi wasnt able to move a step... how can she leave her house... her husband and most of all her baby, kasak... how will she be able to live without kasak... thinking what will happen to kasak after she leaves, gave manvi goosebumps...
manvi still had some hope and took steps towards virat and kasak. she sat on her knees in front of virat and really hoped he would let her hug kasak for once.
manvi : meri family mujhse mat cheeno... please...
virat : go manvi...
virat couldnt tolerate seeing manvi even for another second because he was going weak... he was melting seeing his love in such a condition... so he got up and went to his room... he doesnt want manvi to know that he still loves her and will love her till his last breath.
manvi was disheartened to see virat walking away but another second, her attention turned to kasak.
manvi's shivering hands slowly touched kasak's face and she kissed her forehead. kasak hugged manvi and she again started crying... but this time utterly.
kasak : mumma...
manvi : kasu... mumma loves you baby...
mahesh : chalo manvi...
kasak : nahi mumma...
manvi : mumma kahin nahi jaegi... kahin nahi...
kasak : dont leave me mumma...

" kasakkk... "
kasak shivered on listening virat screaming her name and separated herself from manvi.
this hurted manvi so badly that she wanted to burn this whole world right now...
mitali came forward and holding manvi's hand take her
outside.
manvi couldnt believe her faith... this day was supposed to be the most memorable day of her life but instead everything ruined... there was supposed to be laughter echoing but all they have was sobs... hearts crying out in pain and agony...
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ye lo... tum sabke ke liye... TISSUE BOX...
i swear to god, it was so draining for me to type this... 🤢
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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~~~~ lyrics of the song ~~~~

Kise poochu hai aisa kyu
Bejubaan saa ye jahaan hai
Khushi ke pal kahaan dhoondu?
Benishaan sa waqt bhi yahaan hai
Jaane kitne labon pe gile hai
Zindagi se kayi faasle hain
Base jitte hai sapne kyun aankhon mein
Lakeere jab chhoote in haathon se yun bewajah
Jo bheji thi duaa
Woh jaake aasmaan se yun takra gayi
Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa [x2]

Saanson ne kahaan rukh mod liya
Koi raah nazar mein naa aaye
Dhadkan ne kahaan dil chhod diya
Kahaan chhode in jismon mein saaye
Yehi baar baar main sochta tanha main yahaan
Mere saath-saath chal raha hai yaadon ka dhuaan
Jo bheji thi duaa
Woh jaake aasmaan se yun takra gayi
Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa [x2]

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