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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Loved the updt,cont soon.



Thank you, dear! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82


LMAO! 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -Nancy-

OMG Pallavi what should I do with you? You NEVER disappoint!! It's like 10 degrees outside and I'm burning hot right now ☺️ Vikrant is also so perfect! I really hope Sarita never steps back in sharing her feelings or showing her love to Vikrant, he so deserves it.

I love how ViSa forget their worries, commitments.. the world when they are together.

Yaar why did Vik make khichdi? I hate it😆 but I guess that gave them strenght to do what followed breakfast 😉

Gutter minds suits us so well, I'm ashamed with some of the thought I have ☺️😆 but I blame it all on ViSa.

A maar daala update!!👏👏



LOL! I love and enjoy reading your comments, every single time, Nancy! I can actually picture you telling me all this with loads of excitement. 😃

This is the first time I am writing a fic and this is the first writing intimate scenes as well. I blame ViSa for all this!

I agree that its time Sarita also reciprocates without holding back, which she will. Conversations start from next chapter onwards, so pull yourself out of the gutter to concentrate! 😆 😆 😆

Do not be ashamed of the thoughts, buddy! We are all plagued by it.hehe.I forgot to add your name to the gutter buddy list! Sorry about that 😛 😆

And about khichdi...It is the most easiest to make. Saves time and energy, so that Vikrant can focus his energy where it is needed, if you know what I mean? 😉 😉

Thank you once again for your wonderful comments, dear! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
I have no words lol

Let me take some air and be back.. It's too HOT in here 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

hehe😆😆😆

I made you speechless! hahaha😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Morning after ,hmmm☺️

Sab kuch hogaya,ab bas intezar hai Ms junior suryvanshi ka😉


LOL! 😆😆

Yep, but there is still time for Ms.Junior Suryavanshi, don't you think? hehehe But that dialogue is so apt for the current situation. Thank you, dear, for reminding me and sending me back to ViSa lala land!😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Durresyed

You killed me pallavi with superb update 😉


Welcome to ViSa heaven, my dear! That is where I live of late. hehehe😆

Thank you for your wonderful comments, dear!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 8


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She laid on top of him, thoroughly spent, her face resting
sideways on his torso. He was brushing her hair repeatedly using his fingers.
It was silky and he loved the feel. His other hand was on her lower back
caressing her smooth skin in a rhythmic fashion. From her position she saw the
first aid kit that she brought last night to dress his wound, lying on the
centre table. She suddenly realized how badly he was hurt and got up with a
start. The sudden movement made Vikrant grip her waist automatically.



He noticed her looking around for something and realized
that she was searching for the bathrobe. When she made a move to get up and
look for it, Vikrant held her to him and enquired teasingly, "Why are you in a
hurry to get dressed, huh? You know that there is no use for it, because I am
going to rip the thing off you anyway"



She blushed and pushed at his chest to release his hold, but
he wouldn't budge. She then spoke, "I need to dress that wound on your forehead
soon, otherwise it might get infected severely. So please can you let me go?"



He gripped her waist tightly and pulling her closer to him,
said with a seriousness to his tone, "Don't ever ask me to let you go'; even for
fun's sake, okay? I will never be able to do that! Ever! Understood?"



She sensed the vulnerability in his voice and cupped his
cheeks and said, "I promise that I will never say that ever again." She placed
a tender kiss to his mouth and pulled back saying, "And for the record, I am
not planning to let you go either. So you are stuck with me for life! Got it?"



He ground his hips to hers and said playfully "If this is
how I am stuck with you, I am ready for it! Bring it on, baby"



Her skin turned red at his teasing and she hit him lightly on
his shoulder and got up groaning, "Oh god, you are going to be the death of
me!"



He casually placed his folded arms under his head and admired
his wife's nymph like figure moving around searching for the robe. She found it
and he groaned in displeasure when she put it on and tied the belt.



She went into the kitchen saying that she would get some
water. He took the opportunity to clothe himself and waited for her to return.
She handed him a glass of water and he gulped it down. He didn't realize how
thirsty he was. She sat beside him and tended to his wound, not realizing that
her proximity was giving him a perfectly wonderful view of her creamy globes. What
was happening to him? He wondered. He was like a man lost in a desert and she was
the only one who could quench his thirst. He wanted to exhibit some amount of
self control, as they had a lot of things to discuss. So thinking he bunched
his hands into fists to keep from touching her.



She placed some cotton on his forehead and used a plaster to
tape it. When she was done, she twisted a little to close the kit. This action
exposed her smooth thigh to his view. And all his self control snapped. He
grabbed her by the waist and neck and ravaged her mouth with animalistic
passion. She yelped in surprise at his sudden movement and did not have time to
react before he attacked her with the first of many kisses. They were kissing
each other with equal fervor and Vikrant pinned her to the sofa, entwining
their fingers together and pressing his body to hers. They were so lost in each
other that it took them a few moments to register his phone buzzing. He
considered ignoring it, but couldn't, as he was expecting an important call. He
dragged his mouth away from hers and rested his head between her breasts and cursed
at the bad timing. She smiled faintly at his short outburst. He kissed her
temple and pulled himself up and went into the kitchen to take the call.



Her breathing evened out and she heard his side of
conversation. She heard him enquire, "Did you find what I asked for?" There was
silence when the person on the other end was speaking. "Alright, please hand it
over to Raj and Divya. I will take it from here. Thank you for all your help."
She heard him say before disconnecting the call.



She sat up and adjusted the robe around her when he came
back. She looked at him with anxiety and he said, "We found the first
breakthrough in Kajal's murder case!"



<p>To be continued
Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
pallavi u r killing us all
each n evry one of us
why why oh why

this is so so hawt i so wish aleast somethin close to this happens

awesome plz plz continue soon and do give a serious thought abt a novel 😆
m readin it again n again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Will be back later, reserving my spot :-*

Uff I'm here to comment but I have a tiny winy complain, there should be a note or something highlighting *do not read in public places*! I was so embarassed after reading this update. Soo I couldn't resist and read this part at uni when I saw you updated and I was grinning so much that my mates thought I was hiding something/ someone😳😆

In your last reply you said you can almost imagine how I would say all this if I was next to you.. You bet I get really hyper after reading your FF.. Only god knows how am I going to behave when I'm in Sarita's position *blush* *cough cough* you can imagine what I'm talking about 🤣

Coming to this part.. Kitna chota tha yaar 😆 I was reading on my phone and when I realised I reached the end.. the story is getting so interesting. Wrong timing to stop, I'm curious to know who called and what it was found. Btw I so loved this since it has more of lovey dovey scenes than the rest. It should be like this in every show😉

One question, is Sarita going to wear her robe the entire day? Bechara Vikrant, LMAO.

Dhamakedaar👏



Edited by -Nancy- - 12 years ago

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