Written Update: CID Raaz Boarding School Ka (airing 9th November 2013)

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For Part I, plz visit this thread ...



Written Update: CID Raaz Boarding School Ka, part-II(airing 9th November 2013)

Goons takes Rishab with them, Daya Sir coming out calling His Name and got the Injured Watchmen (only one watchmen without any gun in that big boarding school😲😲); who told that Good after hitting on His Head and Injured Him taking Rishab with them, He can't see the Numberplate but tell Daya Sir that they will come in Black Jerp on His Question about the Color of Vehicle and ordering Watchman to check the Principle and Staff and Evacuated the School..


He was taking out His Cell from Pockets and contact Abhijeet Sir and tell about Rishab Kidnapping, that Black Jeep and tell that Come soon as He got a Bullet shot on His Shoulder, during Conversation Someone Hit Bullet again on Daya Sir, He Screamed and turned; AbhijeetSir Yelled and telling ACP Sir who was with Him at Jeep that Daya might be Hurt as He heard Scream of Daya and a Bullet shot; in turning Daya Sir facing the Person who again Shot Him and Daya Sir fell down..

Team reached there and and rushed to Injured lying Daya Sir, Principle coming ahead (itni der tamasha dekh rahy thy, No call to Ambulance😡) and tell that some Goons entered inside Boarding and Shot Daya (Dunt want to spoil the Best Expressions of Abhijeet Sir who showed perfect blending of Emotion, Hurt, Pain and tears either He forgets to close door of Jeep, ACP Sir also in Great emotional phase⭐️⭐️⭐️), Ambulance came and took Daya Sir direct to OT..

Officers showed Cardiac Arrest giving to Daya Sir (keenly watch that frame, very less Blood sign at Daya Sir Chest although Abhijeet Sir already tell at Spot that Khoon buht nikl raha hy😉😆😆) (whose those Dr who gave Him Cardiac Arrest in bullet shot patient as first treatment😲😲) (Nurses forgets to pull the Curtain whom She reminds after Officer saw much more of their Treatments🤣), ACP Sir and all really Worried till Dr coming out from OT and tell that Daya Sir was fine (after 3 bullet shots, either they found Bullets inside His body or there was some Exit holes made by those bullets, if find bullets so gives it to team as Evidence, sub End🤢, either ACP Sir did not order any member to check that Spot again where Daya Sir shot😉😆)..

Officers met with Daya Sir (again Fabulous acting by Abhijeet Sir, lovely rubbing over Daya Sir arm to Sooth Him with nodding his head in No and wiping His tears too😳🤗), Freddie Sir and Pankaj lighter the moments by some other stuff, Daya Sir still asking about Rishab, Abhijeet Sir and ACP Sir consoling Him but He was in Great Regret (ACP Sir rubbing his palm over his Forhead and hairs to relax him😳🤗), all said that He will take car and they all get the Goon and back RISHAB Safely and leave the Hospital without engaging any Officer or Local Police to protect Daya Sir from any other attempt as still His Attacker was Mysterious..

Team discussing during leaving Hospital that Daya Sir doubt about Shekhar was Correct as His All Documentation which He submitted at time of joining as a Teacher in School was Fake and He did all in just Two months, They reached Boarding School and asked about those Shekhar to other Teachers where the Female Teacher who shot Daya Sir first at Corridor ask Forgiveness as its Goon demands and when ACP Sir asked about Shekhar, they shook Shoulders; Watchman said that He saw Shekhar as the time of Attack He rushed on His Car, ACP Sir takes His Car Number and went for further research..

Here School Kids came to visits Daya Sir and giving them Wishing Card, Daya Sir being so Humble to them on their gestures and asking about Rishab, they told some New piece of Information to Him as after Rishab Grand Father Death before two months, these all weird and Scary things happening with Him, Daya Sir discussing this and Doubting about Shekhar as He was Missing from the School as well Daya Siir said that He shot Him too; Daya Sir asking Kids about any Odd behavior found in Shehkhar Sir but they denied and added a new News as One of the Kid said that One of their Teacher talking to Raja Kaanya the famous Supari killer and News roaming about His Accident in Media now that Teacher told Someone that give money to Raja Kaanya; after hearing that Daya Sir beading good bye to Kids and leave the Hospital either Freddie Sir trying to stopping Him..

There was a Man coming and giving a One Crore brief Case checked by the Goons and taking Rishab custody from them and after a minute, the Den blast with Loud voice of Bomb..

Daya Sir came to Boarding School (in change outfits, not that which He wore during His Injury😉😆) He confronted Principle show some shock on his presence with only a sling about Rishab kidnapping as Rishab did not have any Relatives so Why so many Goons behind Him, He asked about Rishab background who told that 2 months back His Grand father came to admit Him that He and and His Grand son were in Trouble and Nobody would know about Rishab existence here with all Fake Documentation either He don't know that Rishab is the Kid real nam or Fake as His Documentation and in return He took Money from Him; He told that Did Rishab Grand father giving any number for Emergency, Principle nodded in yes and after searching give it to Daya Sir on Daya Sir Question..

Abhijeet Sir, Freddie Sir, Nikhil and Purvi went to Shekhar house and found His Car outside, After breaking Door entered inside and started searching, find so many Books on Nuclear Chemicals, Research Papers also Hazards suits as well in His Closet and when concluded that Shekhar tried to do some Explosions, Freddie Sir entered inside a Room and before Abhijeet Sir stopping Him, He comes under Nuclear Radiation..

Some people in Hazard Suits showering Freddie Sir with some specific Chemical and Solutions to wipe out every particles of that Radiation from His Body, Abhijeet Sir updated His Current condition to ACP Sir on intervals..

Here Team panikated regarding Freddie Sir health condition; Salunkhy Sir comingwith Freddie Sir Blood report that He has 50/50 % chance, ACP Sir really in Worrying phase; Salunkhy Sir also added that the papers which Abhijeet Sir and all bringing from Shekhar house showed that He made a Small Nuclear device; ACP Sir flicking pages of that File and during this Salunkhy Sir also gave Him a Picture He found from Shekhar book; ACP Sir looking at this Picture containing Shekhar and an Old Man standing in front of any Hotel (ACP Sir still saying that it's a Resturent)..

Daya Sir entered inside the House and feel someone presence there as the Door already Unlocked and found Shekhar sat on bed in mourn, Daya Sir approached Him and Threatening about Rishab Kidnapping Issue on Gun point and here Sherkhar Punched Him, Gun slipped and now Daya Sir was on Gun point of Shekhar..

Abhijeet Sir and Purvi entered inside house after investigating about that Old Man at that Picture died 2 months earlier and feeling Odd as House Main door already open and suddenly heard a Bullet shot so entered Next room and found Daya so callout His name in Shock (was Freddie Sir not tell abt Daya Sir leaving hospital😲, Dr did not in form Bureau or any team member, nobody have go to hospital to meet and updated about his health again after first meeting, principle did not inform that Daya Sir came to him and take some Clues about this case😕😕), Here Shekhar told that why He kidnapp Rishab as He was Rishab Father in Tears..

They takes Him to Bureau (Daya Sir have a work so left at middle😆😆), He told all present at Bureau that He is a Nuclear Scietist and from Five years was trying to makke a Nuclear device which giving Less expenses of Electricity and Power; Some Terrorist knew about that so they wanted that Shekhar worked with them as they only need a Formula, having Reactor with them and if they Exploded that, 3KM area was filled with Death only; They threatened Him that they killed His family; so He went to His Father (Rishab grand father) and gave him Rishab custody with ordering to change His all Documentations with Contact Information, He said that after that He Dramatise His Death as well and before Two months earlier at His Father Death, He wanted to close with Rishab to Protects him so He joint that Boarding School but Terrorist knew about His exsistence and after that they Kinapped His Son; He again come across with gang and for Rishab Recovery so gave that Device to them..

Here ACP Sir got a SMS, and ordered to turn the TV; the Breaking news of Mumbai Terror Under Attack; A Man threatened all that He explode Mumbai in 2 hours as His Face was in Shadow and He challenges CID (no other forces😉😉) to Stop Him and save Mumbai if they will have Courage..

CID Bureau got a Call, ACP Sir attented that and got that its Rishab who called after taking any Goon Cell but after few minutes, Call Disconnected..

Team tracked that Mobile through which Rishab called them and went to that Unfinished Contructed site using Goons in Vijya Nagar; Purvi after using Binocks got Rishab and Goons so they planned One man entered inside so Daya Sir presented Himself (Nobody would Presented His/her Name as it was DAYA ka Dhamaka na🤣); Daya Sir moved through Poles and Pipes and jumped on Roof (keenly watch that jump, Daya Sir in His Favorite and Famous Grey Joggers😉, yaad rakhna😛); Here Goon checked His Pocket and found that his Cell was Missing so rushed to Rishab, asking and checking Him and found Cell beneath the Carton (very nice searching scene👏), checked Dialed numbers and got CID Bureau flashing there (is 1004 is CID number like Helpline😕) (Rishab forgets to delete that Entry although He Memorise CID Bureau number with magic😆😆); Goons told this to His mans by calling and in that Daya Sir got Him with Rishab (still He did not contact to his team to give them signal to enter although He has Blue Tooth😡😡); After a Punch to that Goon; Team entered and gives Good Dose to Goons and handover Rishab to His Father Shekhar (who came again with magic either they should cleared it earlier that just cz of Bomb they engaged Shekhar with them at every spot😊), After ACP Sir slapped the Goon told that His Boss planted the Bomb at G.P road Bus stand

Here CID (without any backups, police party, bomb disposable squad🤢🤢) rushed to G. P Road bus Stand and searching Buses and roaming around Daya Sir (doing driving either team was with him) got Ajay who was trying to run through Exit and nabbed Him and He told that He activated the Device so they searched the Place where Daya Sir looked Him to coming out found that Device and after Evacuated that place, Daya Sir take it in Rush alone..

Daya Sir taking that Device, stepping out from Vehicle (in Shoes😆) and running fast, meantime Freddie Sir met Him and say to give Him that Device as due to radiation effect, Dr were not hopeful about his further life, Daya Sir tackling Him with Ease (good tactics boss😳) and sat on Speed boat and rushed it after leaving His team who was Screaming, Yelling to stop Him and after a minute all heard a Loud Blast with watching a Huge Fire and Smoke..

The yelling, Scream, Praying, Calling turned to a Teary and Mourn state till Daya Sir came out from Sea (must watchable scene, lovely emotions of Abhijeet Sir😳⭐️) (as a Shaktiman😈), All turned look at Him and a Lovely and Most Precious smiles comes over ACP Sir and ABHIJEET Sir lips after seeing Him
(with without any Bruise, Wounds, Stains, ash either His Shirt was changed under water from Dull brown to Dark Blue🤣🤣🤣)...!


NOTE: I'll did it on DREAMYDEPPZ behalf, Let Me Correct if found any Errors and Spell Mistake...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb written update dada! 👏 Very creatively written and so enjoyable to read! 😃 Thank you so much! ⭐️
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Lovely WU GD 👏
Thanks a lott 😃
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Originally posted by: pinkpearl5

Superb written update dada! 👏 Very creatively written and so enjoyable to read! 😃 Thank you so much! ⭐️



Thank You so much..😳
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Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

GD your comments always make me laugh so much. 🤣 I was inspired by you when I started writing comments on my WUs. Now I need to get back to doing WUs so I can write those comments. 🤣



Hmmm, Inspirational WU's...😉
Thank You so much..😳
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Originally posted by: Reshma.

Lovely WU GD 👏

Thanks a lott 😃



Thank You so much..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahaha.. kya boch.. Really keen observation... Whereas I was like when that principal came out and looked at Daya.. oml hahaha.. jaise itni der se becharo ne to kuch dekha ni tha..
I too loved that reaction of Abhijeet sir.. where he left the door open.
And khoon ka mamla to bht pehle se esa h bhaijaan.. 🤣 yaad h AKI.. first scene me shirt ekdm saaf n hospital me ate ate khoon ka samandr beh gaya tha.. 😆
and a big 👏 for you keen observation on Daya sir's shoes.. 😆
I always enjoy reading your WU.. tthank you bhaijaan... 🤗
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Thanks GD...you are awesome. You have done lots and lots of WUs in the last one year. I don't know if the mods will see it or not...but a big thanks to you. . 😊 🤗
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thanks for the lovely update GD 😊
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Thanks for the lovely wu GD...

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