FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 19

Hi ,
Very nice..
but give some space more for vishnu lakshmi.. like karthi and raji..
show some exchanges cute between like remembering of funny episode by vishnu in kone falls and proposal of lakshmi u had shown earlier updates..

Welcome Ramya and Ababab to IF and the Office section!! I'm Smiles, hope you have a great time with us!!

Again enjoyed reading about karthik and Vishnu's mom's convo..we haven't seen karthik talking to his own mom like this...loved their bonding here...very nice update sweety...

very interesting to read and as well enjoying it... Awesome...😊

CHAPTER 35

AT KARTHIK & LAKSHMI'S RESIDENCE:

IN THE NIGHT:

After having a quiet dinner, everyone gets busy... Lakshmi with her laptop, Vishnu & Karthik watching TV and Raji on phone.

Finishing her call when Raji comes to the living room, she finds only Vishnu & Lakshmi there.

Raji: Lakshmi... Karthik enge?

Lakshmi: theriyalai ... Inga dhaan TV parthittu irundhaan...

Raji: sari naan mele poyi parkaren...

Lakshmi: mmm... OK...

Raji goes upstairs and finds his room empty. She then goes to the terrace.

IN THE TERRACE:

Karthik is standing in the terrace leaning on the wall and he looks lost in deep thoughts as he doesn't notice Raji coming towards him. She comes and stands beside him.

Raji: karthik... enna yosanai?

Karthik: onnum illai... summa dhaan...

Raji: sari... madhiyam saappittadhum nee en maadikku varalai?

Karthik: naan Vishnu oda amma kitta pesittu irundhen...

Raji: enna pesine?

He briefly tells her the conversation between him and Vishnu's mother.

Raji: avangalukku Lakshmiya pidichirukkaa?

Karthik: theriyalai...

Raji: appadi sonna eppadi?

Karthik: adhaan sonnene ... Vishnu kitta pesinadhu kku appuram thaan decide pannuven nnu sollittaanga.

Raji: mmm... namma vishayam?

Karthik: OK nnu thaan sonnanga.

Raji: OK... nnaa?

Karthik: naalaikku prachnai nnu vandhaa kandippaa avanga support irukkum...

Raji: enakku oru doubt...

Karthik: enna?

Raji: Karthik...

Karthik: sollu...

Raji: illai...

Karthik: en izhukkare? Solla vandhadhai ozhungaa sollu...

Raji: Vishnu, Lakshmi rendu perume orutharukku oruthar commit pannaangalaa nne theriyale... adhukulle nee avanga amma kitta pesitte?

Karthik: nee irukkiye? Lakshmi enna unna maathiri nnu ninachiyaa? Naan onnum commit pannale nnu balti adikkaradhukku?

Raji: appo naan appadi nnu solriyaa?

Karthik: aamaa... KONE falls first time ponappo... kalyaanathukku appuram velaikku poganum varaikkum pesittu, oorukku poyittu vandhu naan onnum commit pannale nnu sonnave thane nee?

Raji: edhanaale appadi sonnen nnu unakku theriyaadhaa? Ennoda situation appadi irundhadhu...

Karthik: aamaa... pollaadha situation... Lakshmi entha situation le yum Vishnu vai vittu kodukkaradhu option aah vachirukka maattaanga... nee ennaikku kazhatti vittudu viyonnu innum bayamaa thane irukku...

Raji gives a serious look at him and starts to go from there...

Karthik catches her hand and draws her to himself and holds her in his arms.

Karthik: enga pore?

Raji: unakku innum en mela nambikkai varalai ... appadi thane?

Karthik: naan appadi sollalai...

Raji: appo ... nee sonnathukku enna artham? Unakku sandhegamaa irundhaa ... vaa... ippove kalyaanam pannikkalaam...

Karthik: Raajii...

Raji: evvalo naal aanaalum rendu peroda veetleyum sammatham vaangi thaan kalyaanam pannikkanum nu naan sonnaa... sari nnu sollittu ...ippo ippadi pesure? Vittuttu poradhai option aah vachirundhaa naan en inge vandhu thangi irukken?

Tears start to roll from her eyes.

Karthik: Raji... azhaadhe... please... naan unna hurt pannanum nu sollalai...

Raji: aamaa... manasule irundhadhu vaarthayaa velile vandhiduchi.

Karthik: sorry... edho oru flow le sollitten... sathyamaa unnai hurt pannum nu yosikkalai... sonnadhu thappu thaan... mannichikko

He wipes her tears and kisses on her cheek and says "Sorry daa.."

Raji: sari vidu... ippo nee Vishnu amma kitta pesinadhu Lakshmi kkum, Vishnu vukkum sollanum illaiyaa...

Karthik: aamaa... dinner mudinjadhum sollanum nu ninaichen... adhukulle amma phone panni irundhaanga ... signal sariyaa kidaikkale nnu inge vandhen...

Raji: sari vaa.. appuram avanga thoongida poraanga...

She tries to move but he holds her firmly. She looks at him and asks"enna?"

He looks into her eyes and says "sorry"...

Raji: vidu... Karthik... naan adhai appove maranthutten...

Karthik: nijamaa?

Raji: promise aah...

She smiles, kisses on his cheek and says "I LOVE YOU ...KARTHIK"...

He also smiles and says "I LOVE YOU TOO..."

Raji: sari vaa polaam...

Both of them come downstairs and they hear some soft music playing.

They look at each other and climb down the steps slowly without making noise. Raji peeps into the living room from the last step and sees Vishnu & Lakshmi holding each other and dancing. She signs Karthik to maintain silence and gives him way to come down. Seeing them dance, karthik leans back on the staircase railing and stands still. Raji stands on the next step and watches them quietly.

Not aware of being watched, Lakshmi & Vishnu keep dancing until the music stops. Even after the music, they stand still looking at each other. Karthik and Raji clap loudly. Hearing the noise both of them turn and find Karthik and Raji clapping and smiling...

Chapter 36... coming soon...

CHAPTER 36

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CHAPTER 36

Vishnu and Lakshmi go apart and blush..

Karthik and Raji go near them.

Raji: kalakkitteenga rendu perum... Ennamaa dance panreenga... Chance eh illa... Super Vishnu...

Vishnu: chumma oru fun thaan Raji..

Karthik: naanga onnum sollalai... nallaa dance panreenga nnu thane solrom...

Lakshmi: podhum Karthik... Kindal pannaadhe...

Karthik: kindal laam illai... Sari vaanga oru important vishayam pesanum...

Vishnu: enna machaan?

Karthik: solren vaa daa...

All of them sit in the living room. Karthik briefly tells the conversation between him and Vishnu's mother. Rest of them listen quietly.

Karthik: enna rendu perum onnum sollalai?

Vishnu: enna daa ippadi pattunnu pottu udaichitte? Lakshmi avanga amma kitta pesa venaamaa?

Karthik: en vishayam thaan sonnen... adhukku amma sonna badhil vachi paakkumbodhu... Lakshmi amma kitta pesi appuram avanga vandhu unga veetle pesaradhai vida, nee amma, appa oda poyi Lakshmi amma kitta pesinaa thaan correct aah irukkum nu thonuchi... Adhaan sollitten... naan solli irukka koodaadhu nnu ninaikkariyaa?

Vishnu: cha cha... appadi illai daa... Lakshmi thappaa ninaikka poraa nnu thaan...

Lakshmi: illai Karthik... nee onnum thappu pannalai... nalla vishayam thaan panni irukke...

Karthik: appo yen ellaarum ore sogamaa irukkeenga...

Lakshmi: sogam ellaam illai... yosanaiyaa irukku...

Vishnu: enna yosanai?

Lakshmi: nee unga amma kitta pesumbodhu clear aah pesanume nnu thaan...

Both Karthik and Vishnu laugh.

Lakshmi: enna sirippu?

Vishnu: Lakshmi... veetle amma kitta intha vishayam eppo, eppadi solradhu nnu oru nalla sandharbam kidaikkanume nnu yosichikitte irundhen... Karthik adhai easy aah mudichittaan... ippo amma kettaa udane amaa solla vendiyadhu thaan...

Karthik: aanaa... Vishnu... naan amma kitta... enakkum, Raji appakkum nadandha prachanai pathi edhuvum sollalai...

Vishnu: sari daa... puriyudhu...

Karthik: amma unnai kekkumbodhu... Unakku Lakshmi ya evvalavu pidichirukku... Nee ava mela evvalo anbu vachirukka appadingarathai thelivaa sollu... mathadhellaam apparamaa parthukkalaam...

Vishnu: sari daa... naan pesikaren...

Lakshmi: enna Raji.. silent aah irukke?

Karthik: Lakshmi... madam en mela bayangara kovathula irukkaanga..

Lakshmi: en? ennaachu?

Vishnu: enna daa panne?

Karthik: naan avalai onnum pannalai... unga rendu peru kitta kekkaama ... neenga orutharukku oruthar commit panneengalaa nnu therinjikkaama... Naan avasarapattu unga amma kitta pottu odachutten nnu feel panraa...

Vishnu: appadiyaa Raji?

Raji: thappa ninaikkaatheenga Vishnu... unga kitta kekkaama amma kitta solli irukka koodaadhu nnu thonuchi...

Vishnu: avvalo serious aah neenga eduthukka venaa Raji... Enga ammaa vukku ennai evvalo pidikkumo avvalave Karthi yum pidikkum... Avan edhu sonnaalum yosippaanga... So neenga kavalai padaatheenga... Karthik nalladhu thaan panni irukkaan...

Lakshmi: aamaa Raji...

Karthik: nalla eduthu sollunga rendu perum... enakku thookkam varudhu... Ellarukkum Goodnight...

He gets up and leaves to his room. Vishnu also says Goodnight and leaves. Lakshmi comes and sits beside Raji, takes her hand in hers and presses gently.

Lakshmi: enna Raji? En oru maathiri irukke?

Raji has tears.

Lakshmi: hey... en azhare ippo?

Raji: naan sonnadhu thappaa Lakshmi? Oru vaarthai ungalai kettuttu appuramaa solli irukkalaam illaiyaa nnu ketten... aanaa..

Lakshmi: nee sonnadhu thappillai Raji... Aanaa Karthik pannadhum nalladhu thaan... aanaa idhukku yen nee azhare? Vera ennamo nadandhirukku ... Ennannu sollu Raji...

Raji: nee ippadi solre aanaa adhukku Karthik enna sonnaan theriyumaa?

Lakshmi: enna sonnaan?

Raji: "Lakshmi enna unna maathiri nnu ninachiyaa? Naan onnum commit pannale nnu balti adikkaradhukku? Lakshmi entha situation le yum Vishnu vai vittu kodukkaradhu option aah vachirukka maattaanga... nee ennaikku kazhatti vittudu viyonnu enakku innum bayamaa thane irukku..." appadinnu sonnaan...

Lakshmi laughs...

Raji: enna sirippu?

Lakshmi: sirikkaame... vera enna panradhu... avan unnai nallaa kalaaichittu irukkaan... adhu puriyaama nee ippadi sogame uruvaa ukkaandhirukke...

Raji: illai Lakshmi... avan serious aah thaan sonnaan...

Lakshmi: Raji... avan ippo sollumbodhu kooda sirippai adakka mudiyaama thaan kilambi poyittaan... nee vera...

Raji: appadiyaa solre?

Lakshmi: mmm... vaa... summaa kozhaippikkaadhe... vaa padukkalaam.

Raji wipes her tears and both of them go to sleep.

MONDAY MORNING:

AT THE CUBICLES:

Karthik, Vishnu, Raji are working. Lakshmi comes and says there is some problem in the server room and Admin has asked to stop working for sometime. At the sametime someperson from admin comes and announces that there was some problem in the server and all the employees also are asked to take a break until it is rectified.

Karthik gets a call from Viswanthan. He answers and says "Sir vara solli irukkaru... naan ennannu parthuttu vandhidaren".

Lakshmi: naanga canteen le irukkom... anga vandhidu ...

Karthik says OK and leaves.

Raji, Vishnu and Lakshmi go to canteen.

VISWANATHAN'S CABIN:

Karthik knocks the door and comes in. Viswanathan asks him to sit.

Viswanthan: karthik... how fluent and familiar are you with German language?

Karthik: Sir?

Viswanathan: naan ketta kelvi purinjidaa illaiyaa?

Karthik: yes sir... college le second language German eduthirundhen... adhukku munnaadi ... school padikkumbodhu le irundhu thaniyaa German kathukitten sir...

Viswanathan: sari naan oru formal mail unakku anupparen ... adhai German la translate panni enakku forward pannu... Namma client adhukku reply panna further communication German le continue pannikkalaam... will u be able to do this?

Karthik: definitely... Sir...

Viswanthan: ippo thaan uruppadiyaa un kitta oru nalla vishayam irukku nnu theriya vandhirukku... Good...

Karthik: server problem nu admin le sonnaanga sir...

Viswanathan: yes.. adhu rectify aanadhukku appuram thaan... u may go now.

Karthik: OK sir...

He gets up to leave and Susan enters tensedly saying" Sir... oru problem aayiduchi..."

Both of them look at her.

Chapter 37... coming soon...

CHAPTER 37

What a chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! wow😛😛😛

thanks for update. This chapter is also good.The characters are well played and well co-related. your writing skills are awesome.. keep posting. i am really enjoying each of your chapters.👏😊😃

Wow... Interesting storyline without any negative characters... Great going 👏