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---ButterFly---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
plz plz plz plz plz update update updatr

I will update soon when I get time😉

Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Hey dear Mishi my lil sis😊

Amazing,superb update loved your story always want to read further updates you are talented great writer I Read your story but moment do late I m really sorry dear.😳

I want your update fast I can't wait more dear you know how much love your pry and I read many few stories here you know very well so please dear update fast becuse I can't wait more😭

Hope you get well soon jaldi jaldi theek Hoja please hy fever come on meri sis ki Jaan chod kar bhag Warna I kill you chal nikal yaha se chod de meri sweet friend ka peexha😡

I loved manveer together in home koi bhi nai Akaile han I m waiting Kia hoga kaisa hoga I m imagining uday in towel room ka temperature bar raha Han OMG😆😳

Wow I like Samar and his sisters conversation much he believe Manyata very much he and shraddha loves Manyata a lot he want to keep secret but hope this secret reveal soon😉

I loved shraddha and Rakhesh awh hoof rakhesha shraddha was so stubborn not listening anyone but she want him badly I think he is yuvraj nice nice..😲

Awh I hope shraddha and Manyata become again good friends like before hope she forgive her and both again become naughty sister😆

Best of luck dear 👍🏼

Keep it up 😳

Take care yorself😃

Hugs🤗

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 11 years ago

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tiahalder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

I loved the update..but i need to go through the previous Chapters to have a better understanding..
wow princessa you write so well..😃

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---ButterFly---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: tiahalder
I loved the update..but i need to go through the previous Chapters to have a better understanding..
wow princessa you write so well..😃

Thanks😊

Yeah if you want then you can go through them😉

Awh thank you my dear😳

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---ButterFly---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

Hey dear Mishi my lil sis😊

Amazing,superb update loved your story always want to read further updates you are talented great writer I Read your story but moment do late I m really sorry dear.😳

I want your update fast I can't wait more dear you know how much love your pry and I read many few stories here you know very well so please dear update fast becuse I can't wait more😭

Hope you get well soon jaldi jaldi theek Hoja please hy fever come on meri sis ki Jaan chod kar bhag Warna I kill you chal nikal yaha se chod de meri sweet friend ka peexha😡

I loved manveer together in home koi bhi nai Akaile han I m waiting Kia hoga kaisa hoga I m imagining uday in towel room ka temperature bar raha Han OMG😆😳

Wow I like Samar and his sisters conversation much he believe Manyata very much he and shraddha loves Manyata a lot he want to keep secret but hope this secret reveal soon😉

I loved shraddha and Rakhesh awh hoof rakhesha shraddha was so stubborn not listening anyone but she want him badly I think he is yuvraj nice nice..😲

Awh I hope shraddha and Manyata become again good friends like before hope she forgive her and both again become naughty sister😆

Best of luck dear 👍🏼
Keep it up 😳
Take care yorself😃

Thank you so much API loved your comment

Superb wonderful comment

You encourage me very much always

Thank you diii

Hugs tightly 🤗

Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago

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---ButterFly---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Both shocked to saw eachother and said together "you" Manyata was hell shocked uday first shocked and then smile

Uday pov

"wow miss express house I love to live with you beautiful" he smile and only saw her body"

Manyata pov

"ohh God please not again he is dad guest OMG but Manyata please respect him as dad said control yourself"

Finally uday spoke and said to Manyata

"Milky white so this is your house or you are servant" he saw lunch tray

She shocked to listen him indirectly he said her to servant she was boil in anger and turn and cover her face with her soft palms because uday was naked and then she spoken
"I don't want to fight with you again and I m not any servant I m daughter of Samar khurana mind you own business" she try to move from his room

When she was trying to move in a second uday held her his hands place around her waist he close the door and touch her on the door he held her palm with his palm and touch her hands upwards on wall Manyata was very scared because his behaviour sudden changed he smiled and leaned towards her ear

"milky white where are you going" he flirting with her

"wo...w...woo" she was shivering cause of much closeness

"awh so sweet"

Both saw eachother eyes Manyata lost in his deep brown chocolate hazel eyes uday also lost in her beauty now both are very close look like one body uday hand carases her checks and unknownly he feel something he close his eyes tightly and remember something...

Flashback

One girl and cute boy running here and there and playing with their plastic sword sudden girls giggling and turn unknownly boy hit her back and then komal came all family members came because of girl load crying voice all shocked to saw her condition and said "Manyata"

After sometimes Manyata was sleeping peacefully all around her and crying sudden uday came and kiss her foreheads and checks due to kisses Manyata woke up and saw uday sit near her she smiled and uday crying

"Uday why are you crying"She asked him innocently

Uday crying and hugged Manyata tightly

"Manyata I m sorry I m really very sorry I m hurting you"He crying much

"it's ok uday it's totally ok koi baat ni it not you fault"

she smile

Both hugged eachother and said "I love you"

Flashback End

Uday opened his eyes and saw Manyata face he was confused why he remembered his childhood love Manyata why he feel she was Manyata but he lost her again Manyata eyes was still closed due to uday closeness now slowly both bodies are cozy with each other uday hands around her waist and Manyata hands around him neck slowly slowly both lips are met and they start kissing in French style uday sucking her mouth each and every corner and he licking her soft lips he bitten her lips again for kiss they are involved in kissed so much both lost in kiss after 10 minutes Manyata was out of breath uday realize it and stop kissing her...

Now both have solid eye contact both lost eachother eyes slowly slowly uday hands moving her neck then down cleavage area he rubbed by his hand then his hand reached on her tempting waist he squeezed her waist and belly crasses her belly and sudden Manyata think what she was doing
She try to push him but he held her more firmly and start kissing her neck both feel each other and feel something...as they wanted eachother like ages when he kissed her Manyata feel very nice as she wanted him and know him very well

He feel her and want to having her he feel she was his childhood love who uday was wanted always uday eyes get teary but he sucked her neck skin bite every and each corner Manyata mourned lightly because of pain uday sucked the her neck areas where He bitten for soothe her pain

He sucked and lick for soothe her pain now Manyata open her eyes wide and come in her sense she was shocked to saw uday kisses her she pushed him forcefully and run out of the room uday also shocked in his room

In other side

One couple walking in eachother arms both entered in village girl wear white jeans and red sHirt she look outstanding and very hot

Boy was very stylish and wore black track along white shirt combination

Girl said to boy "Arnav baby how much more time we reached on your place"

Arnav said "in 20,30 minutes maybe khushi"
Khushi put her head on his sholder and Arnav start driving the car

Precap-manveer friendship and uday flirt with her both talking in late night... They are happy...arshi romance and manveer and shraddha saw it and giggles 😆

Chapter five was long update and special update guys

We reached on chapter 4 end

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~~~Mishi~~~

Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago