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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farana786

Very nice update.
Poor riya is always hurt by arjun
rathod is worried for arjun
aww riya missing
hope arjun realises his mistakes n they trace riya.
And hunny ji do update soon.rili love reading this story.



Thx dr 4 ur luvly comment 😊
But iss bar update dene me thodi waqt lagega bcoz mujhe kuch personal kam se out of town jana padega ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

it was awesome and amazing update dear.

love ariya morning scene but what was arjun problem.

i hate this arjun.
he tells bad things to riya.
love the way riya slap him.
so arjun is heart broken.
rathore was also shocked.
omg riya is missing.
precap looks scary.
continue son.and thanx for the pm.
sorry for short comment dear



its ok
Tumne comment ki its enough 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
hope riya is safe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13

Hunny update chahiyeh...😡



shant ho jao meri behna 😆
Sry 😕
Par aj mera mood nehi hai likhneka
But kal definitely dunga
Aur ha thoda out of town jana padega
So update shayad kuch din nehi milegi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993



shant ho jao meri behna 😆
Sry 😕
Par aj mera mood nehi hai likhneka
But kal definitely dunga
Aur ha thoda out of town jana padega
So update shayad kuch din nehi milegi


Wht no update today... kal bhi nahi diya aur aaj bhi...😡
thoda...???? Matlab kitna...😆😆
Mujhayeh update chahiyeh...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13



Wht no update today... kal bhi nahi diya aur aaj bhi...😡
thoda...???? Matlab kitna...😆😆
Mujhayeh update chahiyeh...



Anku my behna try 2 understand 😕
Kal must update dunga
U know very well agar meine kaha hai update dunga then i will definitely do
Now don't keep angry or sad 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993



Anku my behna try 2 understand 😕
Kal must update dunga
U know very well agar meine kaha hai update dunga then i will definitely do
Now don't keep angry or sad 😊


hmm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Riya took care of Arjun and Arjun thought that she took advantage of his unconscious situation...!!
U r so dead,Arjun...
Continue sooonish.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

*unres*
Superb update.
OMG...
What the hell,Arjun?
Jab jee kare Riya keliye chupchup ke pyaar jatao,aur,jab mann kare usse khilona ki tarah use karke phhek dia?
Hw cud Arjun think so cheap and low abt Riya?
Arrrggghhh...
Arjun...
Will kill u.
OMG...
Riya kahaan chali gayi?
Everybody worried for her...
Please continue sooonish.



Will update it 2morrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello diares !!! back with nxt part ...thx 4 ur response in previous part .i know previous part me sab logone apni comment k jariye arjun ko dho dali 😆

U all r worried 4 riya ...right !!! so lets find out her 😉


Part -25(a)

Scene continue ...

Rathod :shree ,tum riya ki ghar me pata karo ...

Shree :sir ,mein aur chotu already riya ki ghar ho kar ayi hu .par waha land lady ne bataya riya kal sham party k liye jo ghar se nikla tha uske baad wo ghar laute he nehi 😕

Rathod :what ??? fir wo party me se gaya kaha ???? 😲

Shree :sir ,i don't know but sir ,mujhe bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hai .wo thik to hai na ... 😕

Rathod :shree ,don't speak so childishly .kuch nehi hoga .sayad wo kisi dost ka ghar me gaya hoga .

Shree :no sir .iska koi chance nehi hai bcoz riya ka iss sehar me jaan pehchan wala koi nehi hai .riya to kolkata me badi hue hai aur delhi me baki ka padai khatam ki hai .mumbai me to wo etf me join karne se 2 months pehle hi ayi hai .aur agar koi uska dost yaha rehta v to riya mujhe jarur batati .

Rathod (in tensed face): hmmm ...ek kam karo shree tum aur chotu firse guest house me jao aur waha par pata karo ki wo kal raat guest house me thehra tha ya nehi .

Shree :ok sir .

Shree & chotu again left

Sakshi :oh my god !!! ye riya kaha chali gayi .hey ganpati bappa uska raksha karna .plz hame jald hi riya ko milwa dena . 😭

Ankita (keeping her hand on her shoulder):don't wry sakshi .wo hame mil jayenge .

But this time sakshi gave her a hard glare & left the room

Ankita xcused herself & also leaving after her .

Ayesha :sir ,ye riya achanak ja kaha sakte hai ??? wo to bohot responsible ladki hai .i don't think wo aise hi gayab ho gayi ...

Rathod :u r right ayesha .aur mujhe issi baat ka tension ho rahi hai .may b something very wrong .aur sayad iss sawal ka jawab hume ek insaan hi de sakta hai ...

Ayesha :kaun ???? 😕

Rathod didn't answer .he stood up & left 4 arjun's cabin

Ayesha :ye rathod sir arjun sir ki cabin me kyu gaye ???? 😕


Ayesha was all alone in the room .so she left the room looking 4:sakshi & ankita


In arjun's cabin ...

Arjun was sitting silently thinking about morning incident .he is still unknown about the fact that riya is missing .

Rathod frustatedly entered into the cabin .

Arjun was so lost that he didn't realise rathod's presence

Rathod (barked):rawte !!!!! 😡

Arjun came out of his trance & looked at rathod .

Arjun :kya hua chilla kyu rahi ho ???

Rathod :mein tumari tarah nehi hu rawte ki bin wajah chillaungi .agar mein par chilla rahi hu to uska jarur koi wajah honge !!! 😡
Riya kaha hai ????? 😡

Arjun was totally numb 4 few seconds hearing riya's name .then he suddenly realised something is very wrong .

Arjun :riya ,kaha hai matlaab ??? kya wo avi tak office nehi ayi ???? 😕

Rathod :agar ati to mein tumse puchta kyu!!!! 😡 ab tum mujhe ye batao riya kaha hai ???

Arjun (shockingly):but rathod mujhe nehi pata riya kaha hai ??? 😲

Rathod :achsa !!! iss waqt riya kaha hai ye tumhe nehi pata par kal raat riya kaha the ye to pata hoga ...hai na ????😡

Arjun was totally shocked 2 hear that 😲

he stood silently but his mind is restless

Rathod came close 2 him

Rathod :rawte meri akho me dekho (Don't think its dostana2 😆 )
aur mujhe sach sach batao kya hua hai ???? 😡

Arjun turned his face other side but rathod pulled him by his shoulder 2 make him facing 2wards him

Rathod :just tell me damn it !!!! 😡

Arjun couldn't hold himself anymore .he shouted ...

Arjun :ha ha ha !!!! mujhe pata hai bcoz kal raat riya aur mein ek saath police headquarter ki guest house me thi !!! 😡

Rathod was shocked at his sudden out burst but he also xpecting that

Rathod :rawte ,tum aur riya ek saath the ???? 😲

Arjun now slamped on the floor & burst into tears

Arjun :rathod ,mujhse ab aur nehi hota .ab mein thak chuki hu apne apse bhagte bhagte 😭

Rathod is now totally shocked 2 c the broken arjun .after a long time he again see his frnd broken

Arjun :rathod mujhse bohot badi galti ho gayi .meine firse riya ka dil dukhaya .aur iss baar meine apni sare hade par kar di .mein kav kisiko gum k alawa aur kuch nehi de sakti ... 😭

Rathod was confused 😕

Rathod :arjun ,(after a long time calling him arjun) kya hua ?mujhe sab kuch bata ...mujhse kuch maat chupa ... 😕

Arjun told rathod every thing 4m a-z .

Hearing every thing rathod was shocked

Rathod :what !!! Tu riya ko aisab kaise keh sakta hai !!! 😡

Arjun :i know meine kitni badi paap ki hai .sam (he also call him sam) par sach to yehi hai ki mein riya se pyaar karne lagi hu .aur iss baat ko mein aur deny nehi kar sakti .

Rathod (keeping his hand on his shoulder): i know u luv her .but aj tune jo kiya usse riya ko bohot taklif hue hai .aur pata nehi wo kaha chali gayi hai ???? 😕

Arjun composed himself

Arjun :don't wry rathod mein tumse wada karta hu mein riya ko dhund kar rahungi aur tum logo k pass le aungi .galti meine ki hai to usse sudharungi v mein .

Saying this arjun left the room

scene shift ...

etf laun ...

Sakshi (shouted on ankita):ye sab tumari so called plan ki wajah se hue hai !!! 😡 arjun aur riya ki bichka duri mitane chali thi ab dekho kya ho gaya !!! ankita tumhe kya ye sab kuch mazak lagta hai .zindegi mazak kar kar nehi chalaya jata usse practically jeena sikho .

Ankita :i know sakshi mujhse galti hue hai 😭 par tumhe jitna bura lag raha hain usse kahi jyada bura mujhe lag raha hai . 😭

Sakshi :achsa agar yahi tha to us waqt kyu ye baat tumari dimag me nehi ayi .meine to tumhe mana kiya tha na arjun k drink me alcohol maat milao .but tumne meri baat nehi suni ...

but suddenly sakshi & ankita heard some one's voice .they turned 2 can the person .
they were shocked 2 c her

It was ayesha

Ayesha is looking very angry 😡

Ayesha (walking 2wards them):wah wah wah !!!! tumari himmat ki dat (praise) deni padegi ankita .tumari ek stupitidy ki wajah se riya aur arjun sir k bich darar pad gayi .i m sure arjun sir ne riya ko jarur kuch serious kaha hoga aur riya hurt ho kar pata nehi kaha chali gayi hai 😭 aur ye sabka karan tum ho ankita sirf tum .
Par ab aur nehi .mein avi jakar rathod sir ko sab sach bol dunga ...

Saying this ayesha turned 2 leave but stopped by sakshi's voice

Sakshi :ruko ayesha ...

Ayesha turned 2 sakshi

Sakshi :i know ankita ne galti ki hai .par uska irada galat nehi tha .

Ayesha :kisne kaha isse aisab karne k liye ...

Sakshi :ankita aisab arjun ko uska pyaar se milwane k liye kiya .aur ek behen apni vai k liye agar kuch kare to kya wo galat hai ... 😕

Ayesha :vai ????? 😕

2 B continue ...

Precap :how arjun will find out riya ?????

Go 2 page 93 for part b
Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago

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