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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Elita

Your creativity is better than cv's of PV. ⭐️ One request...continue with PV story in this forum...somehow it'll make ViSa fans a li'll less unhappy when the show ends this month.



Aww, thank you, dear! 😊 That is quite a huge compliment and I am humbled by it! 😳

I was planning to wrap up this story in the next two chapters. I will have to ponder over extending it, dear! Will definitely consider your request. 😊

Thank you once again for bearing with me and giving the story a read! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Nice update,lvd it.
Waiting...




Thank you so much, dear! Will update tomorrow! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -Nancy-

Pallavi Im trully out of words to describe your FF! From all the FFs I read (all ViSa FFs😛) this has to the bestest of all of them! Your writing is so beautiful and the way you describe emotions and the situation is just mindblowing!

I LOVE this FF because it's exactly I would have PV to go and I'm glad at least I can read about it.. You should definately consider about continuing this story with everything we want.. not only the romance bit but also all the conversations we wanted to see, about Vikrant's past, maybe mix with RaVya and so on.. seriously I was really pleased to read such a fantastic FF!

Please do continue soon👏👏👏



Nancy, what can I say? I am truly humbled and honoured by all your comments and appreciation. 😊 Thank you, for thinking so highly of my ff! 😊

I was planning to complete this fic in the next 2 chapters. Now that you have so sweetly requested, I might have to rethink my decision, I guess! But seriously, I am so glad that you think the story is worth the extension.

Thank you once again, dear! I really appreciate you taking the effort to leave a comment about the fic. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Very Nice presentation dear...I can feel the characters..
Good Job!! You are a very good writer and must be writing novels :)
Plz carry on with the PV 2 Saga, Never Mind even if the show goes off air..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you, freya! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: bismillah5985

Super lovely story plzzz continue



Thank you so much for reading and liking it, dear! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanju_g

Very Nice presentation dear...I can feel the characters..

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Good Job!! You are a very good writer and must be writing novels :)


Plz carry on with the PV 2 Saga, Never Mind even if the show goes off air..


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Thank you so much, Sanju! 😳
I am no way qualified to write novels, dear! There are many more people who are uber talented in this forum, who belong to this category. But thank you so very much for thinking that I could reach such heights! Thanks for such confidence in me. I will definitely try my best penning down this ViSa novel!

😳 😃

My goal is to keep ViSa and RaVya alive, atleast in the fics, even if the show goes off air. As long as I have readers like you who tolerate me and have the patience to wait for the chapters!😃what more could I ask for?

I am truly humbled by your words, dear! My sincere thanks to you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: wupa



Thank you so much, Sanju! 😳
I am no way qualified to write novels, dear! There are many more people who are uber talented in this forum, who belong to this category. But thank you so very much for thinking that I could reach such heights! Thanks for such confidence in me. I will definitely try my best penning down this ViSa novel!

😳 😃

My goal is to keep ViSa and RaVya alive, atleast in the fics, even if the show goes off air. As long as I have readers like you who tolerate me and have the patience to wait for the chapters!😃what more could I ask for?

I am truly humbled by your words, dear! My sincere thanks to you! 😊


My pleasure dear!! I will stick to this forum even after show goes off.air just to read fics on visa...all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This part has some adult content. So kindly do not proceed
if you have no intention to read such details. Sorry guys, if the chapter does
not match your expectations!


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PART 6



Vikrant woke early next morning to find Sarita still fast
asleep. She was looking like a goddess, radiance emitting from every inch of her
face and body. Her black tresses were spread on the pillow, exposing the
delicate nape of her neck to his view. Their position had changed unknowingly
overnight and he was spooning her from behind. He had his right hand under her
waist hugging her to his naked chest, while the other hand was on her bare
shoulder.



He was awestruck by her beauty and elegance. He never knew
what silk felt like, until he touched her skin last night. He could no longer
suppress his urge to feel its velvetiness again.



He knew that he would wake her up when he gently placed a
feather-light kiss to the base of her neck. Her eyelashes fluttered open and
her breathing which was even until now, started getting erratic. He brought his
hand that was holding her waist, to cup one of her mounds. She strained her back into
his torso and moaned in pleasure. This made the curve of her neck more
accessible to him. And he buried his face into it and started attacking it with
kisses, all the while kneading her bosom. He knew that these actions of his
were driving her crazy and was enjoying every moment of this, knowing that he
was the one to bring her this sweet pleasure. He wanted to worship her body, to
make her feel cherished and loved.



He kissed every inch of her neck and upper back. He tilted
her face a little to kiss her mouth. The kiss went on forever and when breath
became an issue, they pulled apart, only for Vikrant to turn her around to
press her naked body to his. He kissed her forehead, her eyelids, her nose,
cheeks and jaw. All the while one hand was holding her close to his body, while
the other travelled to her thigh to pull her leg over his. A gasp escaped her
mouth with this action and he immediately took her mouth into his and plunged
his tongue deep into her mouth. Gone was the tender lovemaking of the previous
night. This time it was erotic and they could not stop themselves. They were
hungry for each other and it was evident in the way they were responding to
each other. She was matching his every move with equal amount of passion.



When he knew she was ready for him, he slowly entered her.
She threw her head back and he took the opportunity to kiss her pulse point, her
collar bone and the valley between her bosoms. She grabbed onto his back, to
leave marks on it with her nails. He nipped her collarbone to leave a hickey
this time, like she was branded by him. When they reached their climax
together, he claimed her lips again, all the while viewing her face transform
from pleasure to fulfillment, through hooded eyes.



When their session of lovemaking was over, he placed a
tender kiss to her forehead. She smiled and cuddled closer to him. All of a
sudden her stomach growled in hunger. He immediately laughed and said, "You
worked up quite an appetite, huh?" Only for her to pout her mouth and ask, "Did
you not, Mr.Suryavanshi?"



He nodded his head, "I am darn hungry right now. But I can
skip breakfast and dig into dessert, if the said dessert is you", he teased
her and was immediately granted the pleasure of seeing her blush to the roots.



She hit him on the shoulder playfully. He did not want to
leave her side, hence got up reluctantly when she pushed him out of the bed and
said, "Take a bath and I will make some breakfast for us in the meantime"



She had a shocked expression on her face. "You know to cook?"
she asked.


He replied, "You forget that I spent a lot of days in an
orphanage fending for myself. Now go freshen up, before I get tempted to make
love to you again."



He grabbed his pant that was lying on the ground and pulled
it up his waist. She was admiring his lean frame all the while. He caught her
looking at him and said, "I still can skip breakfast, if you are game"



She threw a pillow at him and he laughed his way downstairs
to the kitchen.



She had a lot of questions brewing in her mind. Where were
they? This looked like a well maintained bungalow. Beds were made, food was
stocked here and that meant this place was frequently visited by him. Did
anyone else know about this place, besides him? If that was the case, then they
might be in deep trouble when the police come here looking for them.



It was like a bucket of ice water. She was brought back to reality
with that thought. OMG, they were fugitives now! She thought. What will happen if
they get caught? Where was Abhiman? She wondered. She felt extremely guilty and
ashamed when she realized that not once did she think or ask about him last
night. What kind of a mother was she? She thought. Here she was enjoying her
new found love with her husband, while their son was alone, afraid and probably
with that cunning woman who was his grandmother, unfortunately. What will happen
to him if they were put behind bars?



She hurried and went into the bathroom to take a quick
shower. All the while, she was ridden with guilt for not having thought of her
son even for a single moment. Her last thought before jumping out of the shower
and wrapping the robe around her body was that she was a very selfish person
and not a good mother at all!



With all these thoughts plaguing her, she stepped downstairs
making her way into the kitchen.




To be continued...



If I have flouted any FF rule in presenting explicit
details, kindly let me know so that I can correct it immediately!



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Edited by wupa - 12 years ago

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