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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...I'm so glad i came across this today...I just love reading about asya...
This story is fantastic...What an amazing start👏
Cannot wait to read more...Although i'm not very good with hindi/urdu i'll somehow muddle my way...😃
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Its set in d old QH days so it vl hv old Ayaan, Nuzhat n Imraan😛
None of d leads r grey or villian here but its just their reacction😉

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Dilshad-Haseena scene 4m d show is modified into Zoya-Haseena scene. Don't take Zoya as a grey or negative. Its just her reaction but there vl be an exciting twist as seen in d Promo1😊.


Part 3

"Vo aapko pehle gunda samajhti thi," said Ayaan.

Asad recalls his 1st meeting wid Zoya wen she accused him of trying to kill her.

"Qki use laga tha ki main unhi gundon me se hu jo uske peechhe pade the," said Asad.

They get up to go to Zoya. They come near d hall n Zoya sitting in d hall watching Tom & Jerry while sipping coffee n eating chips. Zoya gets a call 4m Dilshad.

"Hello," said Zoya.

"Zoya, main thode der me aa rahi hu," said Dilshad n asks, "Asad kya kar raha hai?"

"Asad apna kuch office ka kaam kar raha hai," lied Zoya.

"Zoya ne to sach nahi bola humaare baare me," whispered Ayaan.

"Usne kaha tha ki vo nahi bolungi," whispered Asad.

"Aur tum kya kar rahi ho?" asks Dilshad.

"Main Tom & Jerry dekh rahi hu along wid hvng coffee n chips," replied Zoya.

"Thik hai, I vl be back soon," said Dilshad n hung up.

"Maine to ye bataaya hi nahi ki Asad actually Ayaan k saath hai. I can't do dis cuz its wrong if I tell sum1 abt it. Main itni badi kameeni nahi hu," said Zoya to herself.

AsYaan were relieved by wat she said.

"Bhaijaan, jaa kar abhi keh dijiye Zoya se ki aap uske baare me Akram ko kuch bhi nahi bataayenge taaki uska gussa khatam ho jaaye," said Ayaan.

"Haan, main abhi jaata hu use bataane," said Asad.

Before Asad cud enter d hall, d doorbell rang.

"Shayad phuphi aayi hogi," said Zoya happily.

She went to open d door. Zoya opens d door. Its Haseena. AsYaan r shocked n they remained where they were. Haseena peeps inside d hall n luks around wid a smile.

"Ye yaha q aayi hai?" whispers Ayaan.

"Pata nahi. Dekhte hai," whispered Asad.

"Ji," said Zoya.

Haseena comes inside n moves 2wards Zoya.

Zoya gets puzzled by her move n she steps backward.

"Vo main Qureshi Sahab ka ghar dhund rahi thi? Aap bata sakte hai kaha rehte hai vo?" asks Haseena wid a smile.

"Muje nahi pata. Aap kahi aur jaakar poochhiye," replied Zoya.

"Shaayad ye Asad Ahmed Khan ki biwi hogi," thinks Haseena.

"Pata to yahi ka diya tha. Khair, aap apne shauhar se pooch lijiye. Mardon ko jyaada maalumaat rehti hai. Tab tak main baithti hu ha," said Haseena wid a smile.

Zoya as well as Asad n Ayaan gets shocked by wat she said. Zoya n Asad gets embarrassed while Ayaan chuckles.

"Bhaijaan, Haseena Bi ne indirectly aapko aur Zoya ko shauhar aur biwi bana diya hai," whispers Ayaan wid a grin.

Asad gets more embarrassed n glares @ him. Ayaan keeps quiet.

"Kahi ise humaare baare me to shaq nahi ho gaya hai?" whispers Ayaan.

"Hope Zoya kuch na bole ise," whispers Asad.

Haseena goes n sits on d sofa in a relaxed way. Zoya was shocked by her weird behaviour. She goes n stands before her.

"Ye aap kya keh rahi hai?" asks Zoya raising her voice.

"Aap itna gussa q ho rahi hai? Aapke shauhar se jhagda hua hai kya? Aur tum shaadi k baad bhi jeans pehenti ho kya?" asks Haseena wid a smile, "Shauhar aur biwi k beech me jhagda to hote hi rehta hai."

"Dekhiye, meri shaadi nahi huvi hai aur shaadi k baad jeans pehenna bahot common hai, okay," said Zoya annoyingly.

Haseena stands up n says wid a smile, "Agar huvi hoti to kitna achha hota."

Zoya gets annoyed n she balls her fist. AsYaan notices dat.

"Lagta hai dhamaka honewaala hai," whispered Ayaan.

"Dekhiye, aap Qureshi Sahab k baare me jaanne aayi thi na aur maine saaf saaf keh diya ki main unke baare menahi jaanti hu. Isliye, aap kisi aur se jaakar poochhiye," said Zoya calmly showing her d door wid her hand.

"Vaise aapka naam kya hai aur ye kiska ghar hai?" asks Haseena.

"Dats none of ur business. Vaise aapka naam kya hai?" asks Zoya tilting her head sideways.

"Mera naam...," replied Haseena thinking wat to say n asks, "Chhodo na mere naam ko. Vaise ye ghar Adil Arif Khan ka hai kya?"

Zoya is getn scared on wat type of woman she is,

"Ye aurat kahi koi chor ya kidnapper to nahi hai," thinks Zoya getn tensed.

"Aap itna sawaal q kar rahi hai? Aapko inn sab se kya karna hai?" asks Zoya angrily, "Aap jaaiye yaha se."

"Tumhe tameez nahi kya apne se badon se kaise baat karna chaahiye?" asks Haseena raising her voice, "Haaye, ye aajkal ki ladkiyan."

Zoya as well as Asad n Zoya were furious.

"Oh really? Tameez kise nahi hai vo bilkul saaf dikhaayi de raha hai. Aap mere hi ghar me ghuskar out of topic baatein karke mujse itna sawaal kar rahi hai. Aap hain kaun? Y don't u say anything abt urself? Battameezi to aap kar rahi hai," replied Zoya furiously.

Zoya signaled wid her hand to go but Haseena did not moved.

"Kaisi ajeeb insaan hai aap jo itna kehne k baad bhi ab tak yahi hai. Jaaiye yaha," said Zoya.

"Lekin ye ghar kiska hai?" asks Haseena wid a smile.

"Kaha na ki dats none of ur business. Aap chaliye yaha se," replied Zoya angrily grabbing her hand tighly.

Zoya was dragging her outside d door.

"Ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe thoda bhi sharam nahi kya?" asks Haseena shockingly.

"Shut up," shouted Zoya scaring her.

Asad n Ayaan r shocked but smiles @ wat Zoya is doing.

"Ab iuse pata chalega ki doosron ki beizzati karna kaisa lagta hai," said Ayaan.

"Dekhte hai ki Zoya aage kya karegi," said Asad.

They stealthily followed Zoya dragging Haseena outside d house.

"Chhodo muje," said Haseena freaking out.

"Chhodungi jarur par gate k baahar," said Zoya wid an annoying smile.

She shoved Haseena out of d gate. AsYaan were hiding n seeing wat was going on.

"Chal fut yaha se," said Zoya angrily.

Haseena got scared n went 4m there while d securities lukd shockingly.

"Asad bhaijaan, ye Zoya khaati kya hai?" asks Ayaan in wonder, "Iss bulldozer ko kaise kheench kar le gayi aur baahar kar diya."

"Ye aurat ko dobaara andar nahi aani chaahiye," said Zoya.

"Mam, aapko kuch problem hai?" asks Security 1.

"Ye aurat muje kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai," replied Zoya n asks, "Aap sab ne iss aurat ko andar q aane diya?"

"Mam, usne muje bataaya ki use kuch poochtaach karna hai. Humne unse kaha ki hum ghar phone karke poochhte hai ki vo unhe andar aane de ya nahi par vo jabardati andar chali gayi," said Security 2.

"Aur aap sab dekhte hi reh gaye? Aapne use roka nahi? Aapko pata hai na ki kitni choriyaan aur kidnapping ho rahe hai fir aap aise kisi bhi stranger ko ghar me kaise ghusne de sakte hai?" asks Zoya annoyingly.

"Chalo, Zoya ne humaara ek problem solve kar hi diya. Ab Haseena Bi yaha kabhi nahi aa paayegi," said Ayaan wid a smile.

Dilshad comes n sees Zoya shouting @ d securitity guards.

"Zoya beta, yaha kya ho raha hai?" asks Dilshad.

Zoya tells evrythng to her abt how a woman came inside d room behaving weirdly n asking personal questions. She also tells how she kicked her 4m here n how d security guards did not stopped her.

"Muje laga tha ki aap gayi hai, phuphi. Isliye maine darwaaza khola. Main bahot darr gayi thi vo itna sawaal q kar rahi hai aur vo kuch galat na kar de," said Zoya.

"Aap sab dhyaan rakhiye ki dobaara aisa nahi hona chaahiye. Vo koi chor ya badmaash bhi ho sakti thi," said Dilshad firmly n asks Zoya, "Tum thik ho na?"

"Haan, main thik hu," replied Zoya, "Andar chalte hai."

AsYaan went inside n hid behind wall. Dilshad sat on d sofa n Zoya gave her water before sitting next to her.

"Sorry Zoya, tumhe problem huvi," apologised.

"Its okay, phuphi. Vaise bhi use maine baahar fenk diya," said Zoya.

"Usne tumse rudely baat bhi ki," said Dilshad.

"Vo mere shaadi k peechhe q padi thi? Khud k bachhon ki shaadi karaaye na. Vo aurat muje bahot psycho aur weird lag rahi thi. Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Irshad irshad," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Shuru ho gaya iska," whispered Asad.

"Best shaayar to main hi hu," whispered Ayaan, "Sunta hu ki iska shaayari kaisa hai."

"Arz kiya hai

Twenty-twenty matches me over hote hai bees

Twenty-twenty matches me over hote hai bees

Kaunsi ghadi thi vo?
Jab Allah Miya ne banaaya ye antique piece?"

Said Zoya wid a smile.

Dilshad laughed n said, "Wah wah, Zoya."

Asad rolled his eyes while Ayaan grinned.

"Ye shaayari Haseena Bi par ekdum suit karta hai," whipered Ayaan wid a grin.

Asad smiles n whispers, "Ayaan, tum ab jao yaha se."

"Zoya ko bata de ki vo aurat kaun thi?" whispers Ayaan.

"Abhi nahi qki agar use abhi pata chala to vo hum dono ka murder kar degi," whispers Asad.

Dilshad goes inside n Ayaan hides where he was. Zoya gets a call 4m Najma.

"Haan Tamatar, wassup?" asks Zoya.

"Zoya, aapko humaare college me ban kar diya hai fir aap fashion show me kaise aaogi? Ye thik nahi hua," said Najma sadly.

"How can they do dat? Jinki galti thi unka to kuch kiya hi nahi," said Zoya frustratingly.

"Ab aap kaise aaogi Zoya?" asks Najma.

"Muje kuch sochna padega," said Zoya n hung up.

"Aaj bhi poora din kharab hai. Abe k aur problem?" muttered Zoya to herself.

AsYaan enters d hall n heard wat Zoya said.

"Kaunsa problem hai aapko?" asks Asad.

"Usse aapko kya? Jo bhi hoga main khud sort out kar loongi," replied Zoya rudely.

Asad is shocked wid her reply.

"Par Zoya baat kya hai vo to batao?" asks Asad.

"As if I am really gonna tell u evrythng," replied Zoya annoyingly rolling her eyes, "Mera pehle se hi mood off hai tum dono aur uss fatso ki vajah se."

"Agar Asad bhaijaan baahar aate to uss aurat ko sachmuch lagta ki aap dono pati-patni ho," said Ayaan wid a laugh while scratching his hair in a cool way.

Asad n Zoya got embarrassed n annoyed.

"Shut up," said Asad n Zoya 2gthr annoying.

Asad n Zoya got shocked with them saying 2gthr n lukd @ each other.

"Ayaan, agar dobaara aisa kaha na to tu jis khidki se aaya hai na usi khidki se main use baahar fenk dungi," said Zoya angrily wid a sarcastic smile.

Ayaan got scared. Zoya went to her room.

"I can't believe ki Haseena Bi humaare baare me jaanne k liye yaha aa gayi. Aaj Zoya ne handle kar liya par vo kahi kuch aur na soche," said Asad in wonder.

"Zoya ne barabar samjh liya ki vo aurat thik nahi hai," said Ayaan.

In d afternoon, Najma n Zoya r in Najma's room.

"Kal aap fashion show me aap mere saath rehti to kitna achha rehta tha," said Najma sadly.

"Main aane ka koi na koi raata dhund hi loongi," said Zoya.

"Par kya?" asks Najma.

"Vo surprise hai," replied Zoya wid a smile.

Scene shifts to SM. D Zingo Hotties r in Ayaan's room.

"Kal to aapko college me aana hi padega qki humaara fashion show hai aur aapke liye ek surprise hai," said Nikhat.

"Par aap aayenge kaise?" asked Humeira.

"Vo surprise hai," replied Ayaan wid a smile.

"Humaare college me vo Najma ki friend Zoya ko ban kar diya hai," said Nuzhat.

"Kya?" asks Ayaan in shock recalling Zoya's convo wid Najma regarding a problem.

"Haan, aaj hi principal ne kaha," replied Humeira.

"Vaise hme to aaj hi pata chala ki Asad bhaijaan k ghar me vahi Zoya rehti hai isliye to vo Najma ki friend hai," said Nuzhat.

"Zoya Fir vo kal Najma k saath kaise aayegi fashion show me?" asks Ayaan in wonder.

"Pata nahi par principal ne achha nahi kiya. Galti to unn ladkon ki thi fir bhi Zoya ko pehle jail bhejvaaya aur use abhi college se ban kar diya," replied Nuzhat.
Ayaan recalls Zoya teln Najma on phone dat she vl think abt sumthn n her teln Asad dat she vl sort out her problem on her own.

"Kahi Zoya bhi yahi soch rahi hai ki vo college me kaise ghusegi," thinks Ayaan.

Precap: Zoya n Ayaan separately enters d college in burqa. They bumps into each other n fell down. Zoya n Ayaan gets shocked on seeing each other.

"Tum," said Ayaan shockingly.

"Tum," said Zoya shockingly.

"Tumhe ban kiya hai fir bhi tum yaha ghoom rahi ho," said Ayaan.

"Aur tum bina ID card k illegally college me ghuskar ladkiyon ko chhedne aaye ho kya?" asks Zoya wid a smile.

They see principal nearby n cover their faces n gets up.

"Dekho, tum mere baare me kisi se mat kehna aur main tumhaare baare me nahi kahunga. Meri behno ne muje bulaaya hai," said Ayaan.

"Aur muje Najma ne bulaaya," said Zoya, "Thik hai, main kisi se kuch nahi kahungi."

Zoya motivates Humeira to walk on d ramp. Ayaan gets amazed to see her.

Najma n Zoya hugs each other after Najma walks d ramp. D principal sees Zoya n calls police n Asad.

"Inspector, inhe ban kiya gaya tha fir bhi ye yaha aa gayi," said d principal.

"Inspector, main mere friend k liye aayi hu. Isme maine galat kya kiya hai? Vo ladke Najma ko 2 baar chhede the," said Zoya.

"Aap college me complaint kar sakti thi ya securitywaalon ko bula sakti thi," said d principal.

"Jab vo ladke 2 baar Najma ko chhed rahe the tab securitywaale kaha the?" asks Zoya, "Aap police ko isliye bulaaye the qki aapke khidki ki kaanch futi thi. Kya vo unn ladkon k issues se jyaada important tha? Kaanch galti se foota tha. Maine jaanbujhkar nahi foda tha. Galti unn ladkon ki thi to aap unhe q nahi kuch kehte hai? Aap muje criminal ki tarah q treat kar rahe hai? Kabhi kabhi aise problems me khud se handle karna padta hai. Humaare schools aur colleges me self-defence sikhaaya jaata tha aur aapko bhi vahi karne ki jarurat hai. Agar aapke ghar k kisi ladies k saath aisa hota to vahi karte kya aap?"

D principal bcums silent.

"Zoya, rehne do," said Asad.

"Asad plz, u don't interfere," said Zoya.

Asad, Ayaan n other students including Najma, Nuzhat Nikhat n Humeira got shocked.

"Zoyaji sahi keh rahi hai. Usne koi galat nahi kiya hai apni friend ko bachaakar. Self-defence ya kisi aur ko bachaane me kya buraai hai. Aapne sirf isliye muje bulaaya tha qki Zoya ne galti se aapka kaanch foda tha. Aapne 2 baar police ka waqt barbaad kiya hai. Aisa dobaara karne par aapko jail jaana pad sakta hai," said d inspector firmly.

D principal got shocked.

"Aur muje jail bhejkar meri insult ki uska kya vo bhi bina kisi galti k? Aur aaj bhi police bulaaya muje dekhte hi. Maine New York me kabhi police station nahi gayi aur yaha India aate hi muje kisine jail bhej diya. Mere self-respect ko hurt hua hai jiske liye main principal aur inspector dono ko sue kar sakti hu," said Zoya in an anger tone.

"Nahi nahi aisa mat karna. Main aapse maafi maangta hu," apologized d principal timidly.

Zoya smiled n asked, "Aur main jail gayi uska kya?"

"Uske liye bhi main aapse maafi maangta hu," replied d principal.

"Zoyaji, aapko compensation k saath saath aapka naam bhi police record se hata diya jaayega," said d inspector.

"Principal sahab, aap dobaara kisi k bhi saath aisa behave mat karna," warned d inspector firmly n went away.

Scene changes to Asad n Zoya standing outside d college gate. Najma, Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira r standing nearby.

"Zoya, main aapko ghar chhod deta hu," said Asad.

"Taaki aap firse uss din ki tarah meri insult kare na?" asks Zoya.

"Zoya, aisa nahi hoga," replied Asad.

"Don't pretend, Asad. Aapko khushi huvi jo principal ne aaj bhi police ko bulaaya mere liye. Aapko muje neecha dikhaane ka ek aur chance mil gaya hai na abhi? So, u sud be happy. Uss din aapne sirf yahi socha ki maine aapke ghar k reputation ko kharab kiya hai. Mere baare me nahi socha ki main jail jaane k vajah se already bahot upset thi. Aaj aap muje meri baat kehne se rok rahe the qki aapka reputation jo kharab ho jaata tha. Muje aapki madad ki koi jarurat nahi hai, Main khud ghar chali jaaungi," said Zoya rudely.

Zoya takes an auto n goes while Asad luks on disappointingly. Asad n others r shocked.

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Very good udapte 😃
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Originally posted by: akaswan

Very good udapte 😃


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awesome
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do pm me for next part
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Superb !!!!!
loved the scene with Haseena bi...the way zoya treats her...well done Zoya...
precap seems so interesting...
continue soon...
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SO FUNNY😆 😆 😆 😆

for a moment asad and ayaan scared of zoya🤣

Zoya and baseena 😆 😆 😆 😆
she manage to drag her out of the house... damm good

Asad and ayaan very impressed with zoya...

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So zoya is banned from entering najma's college ... what is she going to
do now...

Percap.. very interesting totally change scene... nice
zoya way...

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Zoya was dragging her outside d door.😡

"Ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe thoda bhi sharam nahi kya?" asks Haseena shockingly.😲 😳

"Shut up," shouted Zoya scaring her.😡

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