AnKhi SS : Just One Word LOVE (chap 5 pg 18) 22 april - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue dear thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

nice prologue dear thanks for the pm and continue soon



thank u...
Updt will b soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay so my first ever comment from this account on your story...
nainzz i have to first say it to you and admit it i have never read such appealing and deep prologues.. the right definition of love and all... really by just reading your prologue i am thinking kay how would this story progress and i am hell excited to read it further even though i dont watch the serial but i am iqbal khan fan from kaisa yeh pyar hai days...
brilliant prologue..
i am sure u gonna rock it... great start.. waiting for more... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusramazhar1

okay so my first ever comment from this account on your story...

nainzz i have to first say it to you and admit it i have never read such appealing and deep prologues.. the right definition of love and all... really by just reading your prologue i am thinking kay how would this story progress and i am hell excited to read it further even though i dont watch the serial but i am iqbal khan fan from kaisa yeh pyar hai days...
brilliant prologue..
i am sure u gonna rock it... great start.. waiting for more...👏



thank u soo much yush n now this comment is even more special for me... Your first comment from this ac na dats y... I m soo happy that u found ut that appealing... U made my day like always... Love u a lot... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start naina
continue soon
want to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue dear continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JUST ONE WORD ~ LOVE ❤️
**** Chap 1 : start of destruction ****
" the award for the best businessman of the year goes to none other than Mr. Anshuman Rathore... a big round of applause ladies and gentlemen... "
anshuman heard this announcement and got up from his chair to get congratulated by his elder sister, lavanya and his brother-in-law girish. today he had bagged this particular award for the fourth time in a row and everybody around was continuously applauding him for his great work but a smile refused to crept on his face. it was difficult for him to take further steps towards the stage. his achievements were calling him and each and every person in the hall was celebrating it. but he... but he wasnt... he paid a huge amount for this particular piece of gold and this sound of claps echoing in that big hall of the hotel.
anshuman recieved the award and unlike every year, this time he said a honest "thank you" and got off the stage and without looking at anyone went out of the hotel. he got into his car and looked at the trophy he was holding in his hands. this was what he wanted his whole life. people know him, they praise him, they applaud him for his good work, they befriend him and when their selfish motive is fulfilled they disappear like air... but did he had the right to curse the people around him, the society in which he was born, the society in which he lived till now... no he didnt because he was one of them... he was also like each and evry member belonging to that class. he was also mean, selfish, and rude at times... he also thought about himself and his dreams and aspirations...
anshuman kept the trophy on the passenger seat and moved his hand on the seat trying to feel her warmth... trying to feel her scent... he blankly stared at the seat remembering all the times she used to be with him, beside him... he missed her, he missed evry little thing about her... though some of her habits used to irritate him but today it all brought a smile on his expressionless face. he was burning... burning in the pain of separtion... but he was somewhere hopeful that she would return to him one day... in few days of her absence, he has realised how much he loves her... how much he wants her in his life... she was the air he breathed... she made him live this life... she taught him how to live and then she only left him to struggle alone... she was everything to him... everything he ever wanted from his life...
thinking about her brought tears in his eyes and for the first time anshuman rathore, the businessman shattered into pieces... for the first time he felt so prone to emotions and pain... he was emotionally shattered and so was his life...
" i lose... i lose... " he shouted while tears flowing continuously from his eyes... he has realised he wants HER... her love and nothing else... he wants his wife back... he does not want this appreciation and praise... he wants only one thing... just one word... LOVE...
" come back to me pakhi... come back please...pakhiii... "
he kept calling his lady love but alas no one could hear him and his sobs...
may be this was the start of his DESTRUCTION...
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i know this one is ultra short, but i want to see your reaction first... a good response will encourage me to give a longer update next time and that too soon... 😳
Thank you all for liking the prologue... 😃
anyone who wants pm, kindly buddy me... 😊
here is the index of my other works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a great start to a great ff...
babiejaan u r making me curious kay agay kia hoga..
my hopes for this ff is also high from you..
what can one expect from u? u can only give the best story..
waiting for the next one...
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusramazhar1

it was a great start to a great ff...

babiejaan u r making me curious kay agay kia hoga..
my hopes for this ff is also high from you..
what can one expect from u? u can only give the best story..
waiting for the next one...
👏

thank u soo much yush 😃
i am very delighted bcos u are following it now... 😃
stay tuned and hope i will reach up to ur expectations...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome chapter! 👏
Poor Anshumann!
Continue soon! 😊

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