Yeh ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata han chp6 pg # 58 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

niceee part👏

continue soon😊

Thamky u 😊
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Thankz 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ridzi123

really a nice update

i dont know abt this couple..

this story seems interesting !!

continue soon

thanks for the pm!!😊

Thanky u 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Mishi..

The update was awesome..
Uday is arrogent..
But woh Uday hi kya jisme arrogence na ho..
And Manyata is very sweet..
Manveer first meeting was very nice..
Update soon..
And thanx for the PM..

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Cute first meeting

n demand completed

Update Soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---



Thank you..
Lovely comment
api i will update soon

tell plz wen r u gonna update 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

tell plz wen r u gonna update 😡

today or tommorow
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waiting 😭
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Chapter Two

She stood up and and set her dress and hair uday also stood up and lost in her beauty Manyata saw him and confused she snap her fingers front him and said

"tumhe pata Han yeh Car Kiski Han?" she point her figure on uday car

Uday think to tease her he said
"nai mujhe nai pata yeh Kiski car Han Han kyu Kia hua ?"he said playfully

She said All in anger "Are bachke rehna you don't know him you know he is a khasmanukhana,halkat Veda,kamina...

First uday shocked to listen all is this because unknownly she said all is to him sudden he start laughing because of her behaviour and lean into her ear she confused and feel uncomfortable...

"okay beautiful I don't know him but you know me?" he ask her
Now she confused first then she realize what he said "u know me" she remind his words her eyes and mouth is wide open...

"hey mr. you...are you have know sense what to do how you drive if I will die then...
She complete before interrupt and shout...
"stop it shut up you nounsense don't like Say this again or else I will"...he story saying and hugged her tightly Manyata was hell shocked to his behaviour she pushes him and said...

"hey mr. Stay away from me don't touch don't you dare to touch me how dare you and this is my business I want die then I will this is not your matter or not your life and yeh please first want to know how to drive car"

She said all and run away from him but her one earring stuck in her coat when he hugged her he saw and held the earring and said to himself

"I don't know why you effect me so much miss beautiful why my heart divided into many pieces when you push me why why I don't know all this"he confused hell

After 1 hour

Manyata reached in house went to her room and throw her bag on the bed Shraddha Manyata friend she noted some changing in her behaviour she decide to ask her she came and hug her behind and ask her
"hello Manu janu what wrong why you look so dull it's everything alright janu"she ask her because she know Manyata must be angry on her because she didn't come to pic her from school or she promise her yesterday.

"what who are your jaanu what is this please leave me alone go yar"she was very angry because she didn't come to pic her and cause of her she met with uday
"Manu I m sorry please forgive me I m sorry please I didn't do this again I love you so much please don't angry on me my boyfriend or else I will die please baby forgive me"

Manyata anger melted by her funny talk and cuteuppy face she laughed and hugged her tightly and she said curly in her melody voice "it's ok"

Shraddha was hell happy because Manyata forgive her she said "wow jaanu maa. Gaye you know when my bf angry I m feeling alones"

"Oye shra my drama queen drama band kar" smile at her antics
Shraddha ask in bit serious tone
"now tell me what's wrong in before why you do dull and angry"
Then Manyata narrates whole story and shraddha laughing out of control and said joyfull mood...

"I think he must be your dream prince"shraddha laughing
"nooo way I hate him I don't want to meet him again then how can I spend my whole life with never ever he is not my dream prince"she said in irritating tone

Shraddha ask her "oh then what you know about your dream prince tell me you imagine many things about him I think"

Now Manyata start telling her
"woh jab ayega tu hawaye tees chale lagagi"when he came then air runs fastly"
In other side uday enter on Samar khurana mansion and air was very fast

Manyata...Uske muh par hamesha ek Badi si smile hogi chaye kaisa bhi major ho jaisi bhi Jagah ho

(alway he smile like a big smile chaye whenever he went)

Other side uday make irritate face to saw village things

"Manyata...woh sabse ache se baat karega sabse Pyar karega respect karega sabki .she smile on her heart

(he respect All ppl and respect them a lot)

Other side uday talking one man and angry on him

Manyata...woh sirf or sirf mera hoga only mujhse Pyar karega
(he was only mine who love me only )

Other side uday saw her mobile and many girls calling him madly sexy smirk appeared on his face

Precap-shraddha and Manyata dad ask them for help
Samar khurana went India
Manyata and shraddha going to hopping but sudden remember her dad words and said to no shraddha she didn't go with
In anger shraddha went alone
Uday come wrapped towel on his lower part
Nd both saw eachother in shocked
In canteen shraddha and his boy friend talking
In chapter 3 one more entry comming as shraddha boyfriend

Demand
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~~~Mishi~~~~

Note-girlies I caught cold I m in fever I don't know when update next sorry forgive my mistakes because I m not fine and wrote this update in high fever...!!!!!
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