OS-Broken - Page 2

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Fanbulous! I really loved it. Beautiful piece of writing. I must say you are a talented writer. Plz tell me you will continue this story. I'm in love with it. Ill wait but plz update. I want to know how Jalal won Jodha's trust back.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

👏👏👍🏼Sara Dear,

My heart is sobbing...Ur story has so much intensity! I have no words how to express it! Awesome! Excellent! Talented!

Keep writing and please pm me !

THANKS

BHAVINI

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Brilliant⭐️ Amazing language and to add to it, wonderful story !👏👏 Loved it totally!⭐️⭐️ You write so well Sara! Looking forward to read many such OSs from you! Really great job! The emotions were so heart-felt! Great⭐️👏

Originally posted by: Az3003

Think you could trun this amazing piece into a FF dearie???😛 It was beyond unbelievable brilliant!!!!!🤗 You have talent and your characterisation is a pure delight to read!!👏👏👏

I know you busy with your studies... And I wish you all the best for it🤗 But plz when you have time it is my humble request that you update this piece into something more!!❤️ That's why I hate OS lol😆 Our writers are so brilliant I just can't get enough and always I read a one shot and the writing is so amazing I want it to be more😛

Originally posted by: jallu-ki-dewani

Really superb n heart touching do write more..

Originally posted by: sara5471

I feel really really happy after reading your comment! Thank-you so much for commenting on my OS

I am like really overwhelmed! Thank-you again 🤗

Originally posted by: sara5471

I'll see, honestly to tell you. Time is really hard to come by.😭

Aww, thank-you! I don't think it could be brilliant than yours though 😳

Actually I don't see much of a plot in this one. But I'll push myself whenever I get time and try to write more.

Same here. There are so many SS and OS on our forum that I long for more. Same in case of FF. I just wait for them to be updated 😛

Thanks again! Your comment means a lot to me 🤗

@ Sara - Do continue this! Its awesome!