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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

The strong urge to be with her. Her memories which keeping coming back to him during odd times.

The way he was looking at her was as if he's quenching his thirst.

How she becomes aware of his presence.

Him understanding that what he said has made her uncomfortable and making her feel better.

Khushi acknowledging her feelings and the reason for her nervousness.

Him liking the domesticity and normalcy.

Rushing to her rescue when she called him.

Best friends talking without a care. Ignoring how ridiculous they sound. Enjoying.

Arnav misunderstanding them like most people do while listening to 2 friends talking.

Pointless fights. Jealousy. Cute misunderstandings. Making up.

Lovely =)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ha ha ha ha

I loved it, I love the way you wrote their love and the mutual desire they feel, the way he looks at her at the car park noticing her on the phone and loved the fact that they were engaged to be married.

I loved his flair for drama, ha ha, it was cute!

I liked how the domestic scene, her cooking and him watching TV did not scare him but made him feel secure and comfortable and he longed for it!

Love the comfort and the understanding in their relationship!

I did think after that smouldering beginning that going back home and her cooking dinner is going to lead to something sexy and steamy!

But the conversation with La and his reaction and possessiveness was brilliant! I LOVE a jealous an possessive Arnav!

I did get that she was talking about a night stand and was waiting for his realisation! And you did not disappoint!

A romantic and totally feel good story and I loved it! Thanks for the PM!

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@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hahaha poor Arnav awesome os :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ha ha.. 😆 That was something.. 😆 Poor Arnav.. Sometimes most of us just jump at any situation without thinking of the other aspects.. Arnav did the same and was royally embarrassed.. 🤣