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Virman ff ||You R Mine, I bought You|| NEW UPDT 19th Aug* ch10 pg110- Page 4

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: virman.lover
seems really interesting
continue soon

thanks for the pm

Thnxx nd I will 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Ankita1997
The prologue is nice behena and a very good concept! 😃
waiting for the 1st chapter.

Thnqq behna nd updating in few mins 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: anvyagnihotri
update soon..
awsm prologue...

Thnx 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Kicha111
New story wth Super concept
do cont soon
Plz pm me also

Thnxx 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jannat94
interesting prologue Aenna
waiting for update
😃
thanx 4 the PM

Thnxxx 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: luv_nishal
update soon
do pm me

Just updating 😊

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hey guys.. here is d first chapter... hope u all will like it... nd d next chapter will be posted tomorrow if I will get gud response... 😊

1. The Crazy Incident

Its hard for people to admit dese days , but my family is POOR

Not just poor where we cant buy high-tech phones , laptops etc.. we are poor to a point where our family can barely afford food

So everyday, I work late into the night to pay d bills . But most of the time its not gud enough.

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"Manvi, you shud go home now. Its already 11:30" Mrs. lina suggested, "Dont u hv school tomorrow? "

"But boss, I need to earn money to pay d electricity bill." I resonated.

"Don't worry about dat . You hv been working so hard , I will gv you a bonus". She smiled warmly at me.

"Alright," I sighed , "Thank you very much".

I changed back into my normal clothes, took my bag and headed home. As I was walking through the dim-street, I heard a commotion coming from a close-by-ally. I intended on ignoring it, but a women shrieked so my instinct was to go investigate.

I hide behind d wall of d ally and peeked at d scene going on.

There was a bunch of men beating and breaking into a car! Inside dere was a terrified women nd a guy with her. The guy in d car calmly stepped out of d vehicle and started beating d men.

It was like a scene from a movie. He fought so swiftly nd skillfully. The moonlight dancing on his hair as he moved around, the fierced expression on his face. This man looked gorgeous.

But I had to do something! Call d police? But I don't have a cellphone. I'll go look for help.

Suddenly, some1 tugged my hairs and pulled me back "OW!" it was d handsome guy. "Don't you dare call the police." He demanded. I glanced around me, and found all d men who were beating d car, on d ground, limp and injured.

Then, I stared at d handsome boy , I couldn't see him well through the dim light, but he had beaming brown eyes, with shining black hair. The sweat of him face seemed to sparkle too. His expression was like a hungry animal.

We were interrupted by d other women. She finally jumped out, "Hey! What about my car!? Look at it!" She yelled furiously. The boy just pulled out something from his back pocket and flung it at her. "That should be enough", the guy glared at d women "Now get d hell out."

I gasped at d sight of hundred dollar bills flattering in d air. The women's eyes widended and she dived on to d ground to pick up all the money. She was stuffing dem in her bra straight away, desperately trying to collect every single bill. When she was done, she scampered away hurriedly, holding her breast where all the money was stored.

Abruptly, I was thrust against the hood of d car, making me wince as my warm back collided wid d icy metal. The stranger boy was towering over me. Slowly nearing towards me. it was as if he was going to devour me.

"Are u some lady who works in a bar or something? You're working so late into d night..." he smirked, gently lifting my chin, "if u need money, how about I'll buy u?"

Buy me?

Before I realized , dis stranger had planted his lips onto mine, I tried to push him off, but his body was too heavy for me to move. I was stuck there his soft mouth on mine , sharing a passionate kiss. I felt his tongue sliding in between my teeth, making contact with my own.

I didn't even know it , but I was responding to his kiss. it felt so good, I guess i couldn't resist. My tongue was playing with his, our lips were moving in sync both fiercely but gently . As all this occurred, my heart thumped furiously.

Our passionate kiss came to an end though, this mysterious man separated from me and stood up straight. He grabbed something from the back of his pocket again, and dropped it all over me. $100 bills.

"From now on , you're mine." He declared before shoving his hands in his pockets and walking away.

I was left lying there on the front of d car, money scattered all over me, trying to grasp what just happened. A guy whose face I didn't see well in dim light... bought me?

I was stunned...

TO BE CONTINUED... 😉

ok so m done... tell me how was it??? nd do leave ur feedbacks nd dont forget to hit the like button... [:)

] -luv aenna 😳 😳

Edited by Aenna - 12 years ago

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Devan.monalisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Great start! Someone bought manvi that's really interesting! Waiting for next update!

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Ammu_Darling

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hi dear,
Beautiful update.
The scene was totaly an unanticipated one.
I mean a stranger appearing from somewhere and claiming her.
A lot of confusions and surprises.
Good work.
Continue soon if possible.
Take care...